Verse 3
Chapter 3 of 5
Gardengrrl13The love scene...
ReviewedI was determined that we wouldn't consummate our passionate yearnings on my sofa, so when we came up for air, sometime later, I wrapped my arms around her bum and lifted her from my lap and our comfortable repose in front of the fireplace. Instinctively, she wrapped her arms around my neck. Rather impishly, she began nibbling around my earlobe and down my neck.
“Dammit, girl! Do you want me to drop you?” I snapped playfully. I felt her smile against my throat before she blatantly disregarded my warning. Wench.
Shifting her weight slightly, I gave her a playful swat on her arse cheek. She started and then giggled against my skin. Her fingers resumed their explorations of my scalp and neck, and her lips and tongue mapped my throat and jaw. A pleasant chill stole up my spine and much to her delight, I'm sure, I shivered. Her fingers stilled themselves and she laid her cheek on my shoulder as we stepped through the door to my bed chamber.
“I must say, Severus,” she intoned as she slid from my arms, “I'm glad I caught you without your frock coat on... If I'd had to undo all those buttons, we'd never get anywhere!”
“Hmmm... I've got a better use for that mouth than smart comments,” I growled at her. It had the desired effect. Her soft cheeks were stained pink, and I reached out and traced her jawline. Her eyelids closed halfway and she swayed towards me. I drew my fingers down her neck and then reached to push her dressing gown to the floor. She inhaled sharply and with daring hands reached for the ties on my smoking jacket... Slytherin-green, of course. To my utter humiliation, I jerked and convulsed as she drew her fingertips up my ribcage.
“You're ticklish!! I can't believe you're ticklish!” she chortled and covered her mouth with her hand, but not really making an effort to hide her mirth. Menacingly, I crossed my arms over my chest and gave her my best Potions Master glare. It did NOT have the desired effect. She laughed even harder and then reached out to grab onto my shoulder because she could no longer hold herself upright. I waited for her to catch her breath, and to my surprise, once she wiped the tears from her eyes, she threw her arms around me.
“You've just not been touched enough, that's why you're so ticklish. You're not used to the contact. Come closer and we'll remedy that.” I let her draw me into her arms as she worked my jacket off and kissed my chest.
“I still don't see what's so funny,” I mumbled. She smiled against my skin and began licking her way down, her wicked little tongue wandering down my stomach.
“Whose leading this dance anyway?” I wondered aloud.
She smiled again and stood back from me, flushed and beautiful, with rosy lips and dancing eyes. I studied her for a moment, and then reached for the buttons on her woolen night rail. She laughed nervously and explained that we were in an old castle in Scotland.
“Do tell, Hermione," her name rolled off my tongue like dark chocolate. "I am very aware of where we currently reside,” a bit of snark helped reset my equilibrium. She had the cheek to roll her eyes and smile back at me. Perfect sarcasm, perfectly wasted.
The thick wool parted down to her enticing belly. Slightly concave beneath her ribs with smooth pale skin... utter perfection. I pushed her gown from her shoulders and it slid heavily to the floor. As my gaze raked her body, it got stuck on her knickers.
“White cotton... waisties?!” I had at least expected something with satin... or a bit of lace.
Blushing furiously she attempted to explain comfortable sleeping attire and the different degrees of knickers... I'll never understand women. “I prefer to sleep nude, Hermione. Care to join me?” Miraculously, her mouth closed, although she still leveled a glare at me. Her arms crossed enticingly under her breasts as she gestured for me to undress first. Wench!
I gave her an artfully arched brow and smirk and divested myself of clothes. She visibly swallowed and seemed to devour me with her eyes. Yet another ego trip courtesy of my tricksy Gryffindor. She crossed the few steps to me and folded herself into my arms. I returned the embrace long enough to be considered affectionate and then set about ridding her of those damn offending knickers.
The eroticism of our bare skin caressing before our lips met raised the temperature in the room exponentially. How we wound up on the bed is beyond me, but I think it had something to do with her knees giving way out of sheer passion. I knew I couldn't tell her that I loved her, or at least suspected that I did, but I did intend to show her.
There wasn't a safe or off-limits centimeter anywhere on her body. By the time I made it back up to her lips she was beyond speech, and if I say so myself, coherent thought. She tasted of the sweetest ambrosia, no matter where I kissed, and by the time I found my way to her heated core, I hung on to my control by hook and by crook. I needn't have worried for my lovely vixen; she matched me stroke for stroke and when I finally let go and spilled into her, she followed me into passion's throes soon after.
I covered her in kisses, pressed her head into my chest and covered our sweat chilled bodies with the sheet and coverlet. Wrapped in my arms, she sighed into sleep. I watched her for a bit, and like that bloody Grinch, my heart seemed to grow 'till it wouldn't fit in my chest anymore. Soon after I joined my Hermione in slumber.
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The Foggy Dew vs. 3
All in the first part of that night
We rolled in sport and play
And in the latter part of that night
She in my arms did lay
And when broad daylight did appear
She cried: "I am undone"
"Oh, hold your tongue, you silly young girl
For the foggy dew is gone, gone, gone
For the foggy dew is gone."
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Foggy Dew
20 Reviews | 9.45/10 Average
not quite sure what to say to this one other than Poor Severus... never gets the girl, does he? Well, he does usually on this site, but alas, not in this tale. But with the pirate patch.... drool...
Damn that's sad. Epsecially if he has to teach any kids she moght have ith Weasley. Dude. Total bummer. Great story though!
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
I'm glad you like the story, even though it's sad. I tried to match the mood of the story to the song, and I think I succeeded. Believe me I tried to work out a way for them to stay together, it just never seemed to fit. I'm still holding out hope that her red-head dies young... *wicked grin* Thanks for taking the time to review! GG
awwww, man. ( i wish i hadn't read the end first b/c I have such hope for the lovely couple--great convo and all that) teehee... good writing
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
Yeah... such hope, bravely rising through the cold soil of winter only to be wrenched viciously from its life cycle by a late frost... I mean... um... glad you liked it? *naughty grin* Although the last chapter was the hardest to write. Thank you, Southern for all your comments, I squee as we speak! GG
oh great! I enjoyed this chapter.... cotton waisties.. teehee!!
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
This one was my favorite, too. Our Hermione's such a sensible little thing, no? *grin* GG
lurvely kisses... I do love the style of this story!
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
Why thank you! *blushes* What a lovely thing to say! *wiggles happily in chair*
GG
lol tricksy little gryffindor.. i love it
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
*grin* glad you like it!
Well, this goes to show how much I pay attention to things (snicker!!). I haven't read the first few chapters. I was thinking this was just a quick little one-shot, and then I saw the note. lol... Duh on my part. Yes, bummer. I hate when they don't end up together, but right now, I'm seriously imagining that Ron divorce or he accidentally falls off his broom and... eek... Divorcee! or Widow!Hermione enters... A year or so later, Snape and Hermione wed... lol.. (silly me.... ) Thanks so much for posting, dear!
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
You hit, Southern. I prefer to think he pops off in some bizzare Quidditch accident myself, and years later they meet by chance... *sigh*
Thank you for the review! GG
I am completely enjoying this story. It is lite and sweet and just what I have needed in the past two days. I look forward to what comes next. -- B
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
I'm glad I could be your temporary Rx!! Thank you for taking the time to review, it makes my day! GG
Tricksy, eh? Is that a wand he's got in his pocketssesssss? Hmmm...
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
While he may not be the prettiest color in the crayon box, the Snape I envision isn't quite as ugly as all that. *grin*
However... about that wand...you'll see. Thanks for reviewing, you make my little heart squee with joy! GG
I love how you've written this story. It is truly amazing. I can't wait for your next chapter!!! Please post again soon.
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
Thank you Jane!! I'm so glad you like it. *blushes* I hope you like the next chapter as well. GG
The chapter was lovely, and I love how she does not take any grief from Severus. But the verse was scary, that if five children in that verse, I only have one and she is enough to make me go prematurely gray. -- B
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
I can't imagine Hermione ever taking grief from anyone... unless she deserved it and was feeling guilty. *grin* I'm glad you liked the chapter... And as for going prematurely grey, don't feel bad... I know exactly what you're talking about!
I was laughing at "wench" (sort of a personal thing) and then you had to go and write, ?White cotton... waisties?!? ... I nearly died. I said this was the best verse yet, and I meant it. The humor is just my style. (Oh, and those steamy parts too. *wink*)
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
Yeah... I know what you mean about wench... *grin* I wanted to show that Hermione and Snape were a little more human... hence the tickling and the 'waisties.' I hope you like the next verse, as well. *beaming*
Very nice parallel, GG, very nice.
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
*blushes* Thank you! I've held on to this for a while, rereading and reworking it. I'm still working on the last chapter, though... it's the toughest one.
I've just stumbled upon this, GG. I've only tried one 'song fic' and I thought it wasn't terribly easy to capture the essence of the lyrics into prose, but I've enjoyed this so far.
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
This idea tormented me everytime I listened to it, and I finally wrote it down. As far as songfics go, I think it depends on the song. *smile* thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying it! GG
Oh man why did not get the girl. He deserved the girl more than Weasel did. Great song and Great story.
Ohh I love this chapter. How sweet.
Oh very hot. Tastefully done.
This keeps getting better and better.
This so went with the song. Great work.
I like the way you stay true to the song without making the story seem contrived or forced.