Verse 4
Chapter 4 of 5
Gardengrrl13The morning after...
ReviewedConsciousness returned to me easy and slow. I opened my eyes and stretched languorously, mindful of the pleasant warmth snug against my side. I stole a glance and bit back a laugh. Her hair was sticking out all over, matted behind her head and looking, all in all, like a particularly creative rat's nest. Her face was peaceful and angelic, with her dark lashes creating perfect half moons on her cheeks. My stirring must have awakened her, because those soft, dark petals fluttered and opened. Sleep-drugged amaretto orbs gazed at me and I was treated to a soft smile. It completely melted the hard cauldron of my heart. What I should've realized is that an explosion always accompanies a melted cauldron.
My sweet-tempered Hermione sprung upwards. I had no idea she was capable of such athleticism, or what magnificent set of lungs she possessed.
“Oh My God! It's morning! Oh shite! Oh shite! I'm still here! Oh God... what are we going to do? I can't very well sneak back into my room now! I'll be expelled... you'll be sacked... Oh God... this is all my fault!!”
Truthfully, I was slightly disappointed when she finally ceased her ranting and slid to the floor with a sob. All that jumping around nude had my tadger trying to bore a hole through the duvet... She had wonderfully pert breasts. Tasty, if I remember correctly, but I was getting side-tracked. I narrowed my eyes and sat up as authoritatively as I could while hiding my arousal; she really had hurt my feelings.
“So, Miss Granger,” I intoned coldly, “regretting your decision already? Can't wait to leave the greasy bat, can you...”
“Don't be ridiculous.” She had the nerve to interrupt me in an irritable tone. “The only thing I'll regret is us getting caught.” Her amaretto eyes flashed as she stood defiantly and jutted her stubborn little chin out.
Oh. I had to pause and collect my wits and make sure I didn't look the part of the surprised idiot.
“My apologies then, Hermione, but you have no need to worry. I will ensure no one finds out.” Very good, Severus. Calm her down, she can be hasty with hexes.
She sank into the soft mattress next to me and drew her knees up, wrapping her arms around them. “Prof- Severus, you don't regret anything do you?” Her quiet voice cut through my thoughts.
“No, I make it a point to regret very little lately.” Her small hand intertwined itself in mine. “I have some questions, though, as we were a might hasty last night...” She nodded. “Are you taking any contraceptives?” Her sharp intake of breath answered the question for me before she shook her head. “If something should happen, Hermione, you'd tell me, wouldn't you?” The thought of children put a damper on my amorous feelings, and the tented sheet smoothed out once more.
“Of course, Severus!” She seemed surprised I'd even ask. “Besides, I get the feeling you have a kind of fatalistic attitude about the war,” her voice cracked. “It would be an honor to... to...”
“Shush, Hermione,” I pulled her into my arms and kissed the top of her head. “Looking to carry on the Snape line are you? Plan on taking after Mrs. Weasley?” At that she sat up and glared at me. “Then let's not repeat this until after everything is over. If you still feel the same, and I survive the war to torment future generations, we can try again,” I murmured all this quietly, baring more of my soul than I intended. Her eyes were sparkling through her tears as she nodded and leaned forward to kiss me.
“However, I will put a provision in my will to care for you if you wind up with my child.” She looked surprised when I said that. I brushed her tears with my thumb and tried to smile in a way that wouldn't frighten her.
On the not so dark side... she no longer had the fear of death haunting her eyes.
My beautiful Gryffindor.
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The Foggy Dew vs. 4
"Supposing you should have a child
It would make you laugh and smile
And suppose you had another one
It would make you think a while
And suppose you have another one
And another one or two
It would make you leave off them foolish young tricks
And think on the foggy dew, dew, dew
And think on the foggy dew."
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Foggy Dew
20 Reviews | 9.45/10 Average
not quite sure what to say to this one other than Poor Severus... never gets the girl, does he? Well, he does usually on this site, but alas, not in this tale. But with the pirate patch.... drool...
Damn that's sad. Epsecially if he has to teach any kids she moght have ith Weasley. Dude. Total bummer. Great story though!
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
I'm glad you like the story, even though it's sad. I tried to match the mood of the story to the song, and I think I succeeded. Believe me I tried to work out a way for them to stay together, it just never seemed to fit. I'm still holding out hope that her red-head dies young... *wicked grin* Thanks for taking the time to review! GG
awwww, man. ( i wish i hadn't read the end first b/c I have such hope for the lovely couple--great convo and all that) teehee... good writing
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
Yeah... such hope, bravely rising through the cold soil of winter only to be wrenched viciously from its life cycle by a late frost... I mean... um... glad you liked it? *naughty grin* Although the last chapter was the hardest to write. Thank you, Southern for all your comments, I squee as we speak! GG
oh great! I enjoyed this chapter.... cotton waisties.. teehee!!
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
This one was my favorite, too. Our Hermione's such a sensible little thing, no? *grin* GG
lurvely kisses... I do love the style of this story!
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
Why thank you! *blushes* What a lovely thing to say! *wiggles happily in chair*
GG
lol tricksy little gryffindor.. i love it
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
*grin* glad you like it!
Well, this goes to show how much I pay attention to things (snicker!!). I haven't read the first few chapters. I was thinking this was just a quick little one-shot, and then I saw the note. lol... Duh on my part. Yes, bummer. I hate when they don't end up together, but right now, I'm seriously imagining that Ron divorce or he accidentally falls off his broom and... eek... Divorcee! or Widow!Hermione enters... A year or so later, Snape and Hermione wed... lol.. (silly me.... ) Thanks so much for posting, dear!
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
You hit, Southern. I prefer to think he pops off in some bizzare Quidditch accident myself, and years later they meet by chance... *sigh*
Thank you for the review! GG
I am completely enjoying this story. It is lite and sweet and just what I have needed in the past two days. I look forward to what comes next. -- B
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
I'm glad I could be your temporary Rx!! Thank you for taking the time to review, it makes my day! GG
Tricksy, eh? Is that a wand he's got in his pocketssesssss? Hmmm...
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
While he may not be the prettiest color in the crayon box, the Snape I envision isn't quite as ugly as all that. *grin*
However... about that wand...you'll see. Thanks for reviewing, you make my little heart squee with joy! GG
I love how you've written this story. It is truly amazing. I can't wait for your next chapter!!! Please post again soon.
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
Thank you Jane!! I'm so glad you like it. *blushes* I hope you like the next chapter as well. GG
The chapter was lovely, and I love how she does not take any grief from Severus. But the verse was scary, that if five children in that verse, I only have one and she is enough to make me go prematurely gray. -- B
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
I can't imagine Hermione ever taking grief from anyone... unless she deserved it and was feeling guilty. *grin* I'm glad you liked the chapter... And as for going prematurely grey, don't feel bad... I know exactly what you're talking about!
I was laughing at "wench" (sort of a personal thing) and then you had to go and write, ?White cotton... waisties?!? ... I nearly died. I said this was the best verse yet, and I meant it. The humor is just my style. (Oh, and those steamy parts too. *wink*)
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
Yeah... I know what you mean about wench... *grin* I wanted to show that Hermione and Snape were a little more human... hence the tickling and the 'waisties.' I hope you like the next verse, as well. *beaming*
Very nice parallel, GG, very nice.
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
*blushes* Thank you! I've held on to this for a while, rereading and reworking it. I'm still working on the last chapter, though... it's the toughest one.
I've just stumbled upon this, GG. I've only tried one 'song fic' and I thought it wasn't terribly easy to capture the essence of the lyrics into prose, but I've enjoyed this so far.
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Author of The Foggy Dew)
This idea tormented me everytime I listened to it, and I finally wrote it down. As far as songfics go, I think it depends on the song. *smile* thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying it! GG
Oh man why did not get the girl. He deserved the girl more than Weasel did. Great song and Great story.
Ohh I love this chapter. How sweet.
Oh very hot. Tastefully done.
This keeps getting better and better.
This so went with the song. Great work.
I like the way you stay true to the song without making the story seem contrived or forced.