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Midnight Visitor
Ravensblood28 Reviews | 7.07/10 (28 Ratings, 0 Likes, 29 Favorites )
Set in a fictional seventh year. "The familiar weight is on the bed, and I am powerless to stop it. It's Harry. He's sleepwalking, twitching from the dreams he shares with Voldemort. Voldemort is in his head, controlling him like he's been able to do since Harry's failed attempts at learning Occlumency."
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I have had a long absence, but there are new chapters up and more on the way. New Midnight Visitor (trying desperately to finish) and another short fic (Touch).
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I read this story a number of years ago and under a forgotten username, but I, have never forgotten this story. Please do update it. I'm dying to find out the rest.
Poor Harry. Can't wait to see how he gets tormented w/ what his body's been up to under Voldy's control. =)
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Heeeheeeheee. Oop.I shouldn't giggle so.One would hope it would renew his determination to destroy 'ol Snake Face.
Response from mewtynt (Reviewer)
Hmm, motivation to destroy arch enemy: To quit having sex with 2 different women with only flashbacks to find out if it was good and stop leaving our intrepid hero to sort out these heretofore unknown physical relationships in real life. Plausible. But to me the real question is which female to keep? ;)
The passion, needing and wanting, and love between Harry and Hermione is truly beautiful!I absolutely LOVE this story! It is so excellently sexy, steamy, raunchy, titillating, pulse pounding... it makes my... EVERYTHING tingle and ache (in a good way, of course), you know?THANK YOU!!!Now then, who is this mystery person that had observed Hermione catch her voyeur, to be followed by her accidentially groping said voyeur too? A classic example of "catch and release" used by many sportsmen(women) & players too. Brilliant, lovely... I LOVE IT!!!
I eagerly await future updates!
The passion, needing and wanting, and love between Harry and Hermione is truly beautiful!I absolutely LOVE this story! It is so excellently sexy, steamy, raunchy, titillating, pulse pounding... it makes my... EVERYTHING tingle and ache (in a good way, of course), you know?THANK YOU!!!Now then, who is this mystery person that had observed Hermione catch her voyeur, to be followed by her accidentially groping said voyeur too? A classic example of "catch and release" used by many sportsmen(women) & players too. LOLBrilliant, lovely, can't get enough of it... I LOVE IT!!!
I eagerly await future updates!
I absolutely LOVE Harry and Hermione being together as a couple.I have always DESPISED/HATED the pairings of R/Hr, and H/G.I love how passionate and loving they are together!Well done--keep up the good work!
Thank goodness Harry knows now... together they might come up with something to stop Voldemort.*SQUEE*
Ok, so I'm a sick puppy, but I find that it is so HOT that they both WANT each other.
;~D
Oh man, poor Hermione to be tormented and brought to pleasure by Voldemort via Harry's unaware bodyThe realization that if she were to seek out the naughty thrills that she receives from his night time visits, she would never find them with a conscious Harry, but would have to go to Voldemort himself is devastating.Well written!
Oh man, poor Hermione to be tormented and brought to pleasure by Voldemort via Harry's unaware body.The realization that if she were to seek out the naughty thrills that she receives from his night time visits, she would never find them with a conscious Harry, but would have to go to Voldemort himself is devastating.Well written!
Please don't abandon this fic...I really like it!
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Not abandoned! I promise! I just had my life hijacked by wedding plans. I hope to update the story as soon as I get the next chapter hammered out. (I do appreciate the encouragement! Makes me smile.) Thank you.
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Not abandoned! I promise! I just had my life hijacked by wedding plans. I hope to update the story as soon as I get the next chapter hammered out. (I do appreciate the encouragement! Makes me smile.) Thank you.
Anonymous
You write some excellent smut. I love the "carried away and just can't stop" feeling of it. It's always great to see someone with so much control--normally--lose it. And now, it's like she enjoys losing it. Very, very interesting...
Ginny? Holy smokes, woman! Do I hear "menage a trois"?
Author's Response: Do I hear "I request a menage a trois"? Ha ha, I think I do. Sorry I had to put the writing on hiatus as I just got married! So wedding plans took over my life. It will be a little bit before I can really get back into the zone again, but when I do I will keep your *excellent* idea in mind.
Mwahahahahaha!
lulabelle72's response: You mean you're not married to your fanfic writing? Aw, geez. Don't you know writers aren't supposed to have a life?
JK. Big congratulations! And we will be here, patiently waiting for our menage a trois, when you two stop having non-stop newlywed sex and you can actually leave your bedroom and sit at the computer.
An interesting premise for a story. I like it, but wonder which direction it's headed?!!?
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Straight to the gutter. (teehee). Seriously, though. I have a plot in mind but like a horny teenager, I keep getting sidetracked by hormones. I hope you don't mind the abundance of smutty smuttness. Thank you for your review.
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Straight to the gutter. (teehee). Seriously, though. I have a plot in mind but like a horny teenager, I keep getting sidetracked by hormones. I hope you don't mind the abundance of smutty smuttness. Thank you for your review.
It's a very intriguing concept. Twisted, but...deliciously dark?? I will keep reading, as you have me interested! I think be putting Hermione in the first person narrative view makes it more personal, I guess.
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
I wrote the beginning chapter on AFF.net on a whim. They had all these 'ship categories that didn't get very many stories, and one of them was Voldemort/Hermione. While I didn't exactly wish the snake-faced freak on our dear Gryffindor Princess, the thought did intrigue me. How would the Dark Lord act in the bedroom? What would his hatred of all things Muggle or Muggleborn cause him to do to Hermione? Why would he even do such a thing? While I've run out of chapters that were already written, I actually have a rough outline. Rest assured, there will be more plot and many more explorations of different 'ships. I had hoped that first-person present would be something new and exciting for the readers, as opposed to the third-person past which most narratives are written in. This entire thing started as a "mix-it-up" concept and I'm really glad it's caught the attention that it has. I just hope I can complete the thing and not let anyone down! Thanks for your interest!
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
I wrote the beginning chapter on AFF.net on a whim. They had all these 'ship categories that didn't get very many stories, and one of them was Voldemort/Hermione. While I didn't exactly wish the snake-faced freak on our dear Gryffindor Princess, the thought did intrigue me. How would the Dark Lord act in the bedroom? What would his hatred of all things Muggle or Muggleborn cause him to do to Hermione? Why would he even do such a thing? While I've run out of chapters that were already written, I actually have a rough outline. Rest assured, there will be more plot and many more explorations of different 'ships. I had hoped that first-person present would be something new and exciting for the readers, as opposed to the third-person past which most narratives are written in. This entire thing started as a "mix-it-up" concept and I'm really glad it's caught the attention that it has. I just hope I can complete the thing and not let anyone down! Thanks for your interest!
I am hooked on this story. More, please!
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
I still have to write the next chapter, but I will try to be quick about it.Thanks for the feedback, it makes me happy!
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
I still have to write the next chapter, but I will try to be quick about it.Thanks for the feedback, it makes me happy!
Absolutely fantastic. I'm completely hooked and in awe of the utter beauty you put in your writing. Very, very good.
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Thank you so much! You're one of my favorite authors on the site, so that means a lot to me.
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Thank you so much! You're one of my favorite authors on the site, so that means a lot to me.
Anonymous
This is a really intriguing idea. Rape is sadly often a weapon of war in the real world, but this is an interesting take on how it could function in the really unique canon situation. It's an unusual plot.
Some of the wording here left me confused/thrown, though. Like this: with the sheer naughtiness. After everything else, the word 'naughtiness' just struck me as totally different in tone.
I can't help thinking that this might have been more powerful if it had been in a shared dorm room, without all the 'screaming into the pillow', etc. There would be something more powerful and potentially damaging about her having to keep all of it completely inside, the pleasure and the pain...
Dude!!! Just who is Ginny playing with in the library, unless she's got a thing for Hermione too heehee, groping in the library and keeping her busy so she can't complain-- GENIUS!! Love it, and want more of it!! ou rock!
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Heehee. Thank you!
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Heehee. Thank you!
Quite good, up to a point. But it’s one thing for Harry to be controlled by Voldemort and go after Hermione; quite another for him to do it of his own free will. Can imagine how Ginny and Ron are going to react once they find out … and I’m assuming they will soon, possibly during the holidays at the Burrow.
It’ll be interesting to see what excuse Harry hands her and whether or not Ron manages to keep from wanting to throttle him. I also think it’ll be pretty hard for the new lovebirds to keep it to themselves—and sooner or later they’re going to be caught. And I’ve always heard in situations like that, they often do it purposely so they will be found. But even if they aren’t discovered by the ones in question, what about if one of the other Weasleys finds them—Molly, Fred, George et al … then tells the ones in question?
I can also imagine how Ginny is likely to react, not to mention Ron, once they find out. She’ll probably either want to hex Harry into the middle of next week, want nothing further to do with him or else be stiffly formal and not allow herself to be alone with him at any time—if not all three. Of course, if what has happened is any indication, he might not want to be alone with her, because it might not matter to him anymore. Can’t be sure, just speculating … but if he cares anything about her at all, he won’t lead her to expect something he can no longer give.
And how long will feeling guilty last, even with Hermione? And I don’t see Harry losing any sleep over his cheating on Ginny … I don’t generally go for H/Hr fics (and I’m assuming that this will end up such), but I want to see how this one turns out, if nothing else. Both of them deserve to be confronted, though, if you ask me … At the very least, if that’s what you intend, I hope you do it as gently as possible so Ginny and Ron aren’t ruined for life.
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Oh, if only it were only the mundane sort of things that they'll have to deal with! If only it was their friends' feelings that was their only conflict.I won't give it away! I won't! No spoilers!I thank you for the quite lengthy review! I'm glad to have sparked your interest so far. The next chapter is a long one. As for me, I never could deal with too much angst at once, but the silly teenagers in my brain must have their drama!Again, thank you for your time and attention. It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Oh, if only it were only the mundane sort of things that they'll have to deal with! If only it was their friends' feelings that was their only conflict.I won't give it away! I won't! No spoilers!I thank you for the quite lengthy review! I'm glad to have sparked your interest so far. The next chapter is a long one. As for me, I never could deal with too much angst at once, but the silly teenagers in my brain must have their drama!Again, thank you for your time and attention. It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.
Very intriguing premise - can't wait to see where this goes!
Yep, you hurt my head. Love it, lots!!
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Heehee glad to be able to hurt you from afar
Oh, that's evil... but yet, also Voldemort's downfall, I hope. Hmm... not sure what I feel about the Ginny-H/Hr threesome, but it has been a very fascinating read so far. HHr is great! Thanks and looking forward to more.
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Oh, he has no idea what he just set in motion! Hell hath no fury like Hermione with a cause.Thank you so much for the review!
ut oh. great chapter.
This is pretty fantastic. So very intense. Very good work. I'm curious to see where this is going.
Uh, looks like Harry's going to need some more Occlumency lessons! Interesting chapter.Livvy
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
I agree, but who the hell's gonna teach him? Snape's gone like the wind! Hehe. Thank you for the review. Next one's in the qeue. (Like my little poem?)Erg, need sleep.-Ravensblood
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
I agree, but who the hell's gonna teach him? Snape's gone like the wind! Hehe. Thank you for the review. Next one's in the qeue. (Like my little poem?)Erg, need sleep.-Ravensblood
I wonder if Voldimort meant for harry to remember or if it just happened on its own.
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Much like repressed memories, they emerged on their own when he was in a receptive frame of mind. Voldy-butt was counting on it, though. Not that it matters, now he knows!
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Much like repressed memories, they emerged on their own when he was in a receptive frame of mind. Voldy-butt was counting on it, though. Not that it matters, now he knows!
wow. Dangerous stuff, that. wow. wow. Great Job!!
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Thanks.Hope you like the next chapter. It's waiting for the headmisstress's approval.
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Thanks.Hope you like the next chapter. It's waiting for the headmisstress's approval.