Points, Plots, and Plans
Chapter 5 of 7
RavensbloodThe mystery watcher revealed, Harry goes missing, and Voldemort returns to meddle with Harry's life once again.
ReviewedOf course, I make no money off of this fictional story; it is a labor of love and sleep-deprivation. JK owns the characters and the settings, but the twisted things I make them do are all my brainchildren.
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The tow-headed bane of my existence emerges from behind one of the dusty stacks. His clapping hands are immaculate, as are his half-open robes and tailored clothing. Whatever he'd been doing, it wasn't reading. Spying, more like. The Slytherin Prince's face is expressionless but for the slight tilt to his lips: a far cry from his full-blown smirk. It is as if he's trying to convey that he finds my situation only slightly more amusing than a snail crawling over the dusty ground.
It's obvious to me that his perfectly tailored pants are tented. Why hasn't he figured it out? If he had, he never would have emerged from his hiding place. "Enjoying the show?" I raise an eyebrow and nod to his erection.
Tension takes him over as he looks where I indicated. For a moment, I think I might hear him lose his tight rein on his emotions and swear aloud. In a blink, he schools his expression, although he cannot hide the creeping blush on his so-pale-as-to-be-transparent skin. He recovers from embarrassment as best he can by ignoring it. "I don't know what you're talking about. You must be mad. I found the absence of the sight of you groping the Weaslette to be mildly amusing at best." Ah, so he chose to bluff his way around it.
"Don't worry, Malfoy. I'll keep your secret." My cooing voice drips with gleeful sarcasm.
"There's nothing to keep. I repeat: you must be mad. Insane, Mudblood, as well as daft. I wouldn't come near you to save my life."
"Of course you would," I scoff. "You value your life far above your pureblood proclivities--how very Slytherin of you, by the way--so don't give me that tripe. But beyond threat of death, I wouldn't put it past you to turn up your nose, so I won't bother offering to help you with your... situation."
He's speechless as I walk out of the library, laughing at his thunderstruck expression.
"Mudblood!" His parting insult catches me at the door.
"That's Head Girl to you, Ferret! Five points from Slytherin." I shoot back without breaking stride. It feels good to ruffle that boy's feathers for a change. I really should do it more often. Muggleborns 1, Malfoys 0.
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Well, that was too close. I storm back to Gryffindor Tower to tell my idiot brother he can bloody well spy on Hermione himself. As far as I can see, she doesn't have a boyfriend. She's just spending the usual amount of time in the library, revising, not canoodling with some boy in the stacks. If he wasn't so dead set against stepping foot in the library if he didn't absolutely have to, he would have seen that she was alone long before now.
Before now. Now she's revising and groping invisible witches, is all. Heat creeps up in my cheeks as I think about the feel of her cupping me and I know exactly why. I've loved Harry forever, saved my virginity for him, but girls get me hot, too. I never got beyond a few kisses with any of the guys I bided my time with to make Harry jealous because anything more would have been dangerous and disastrous for my reputation. My experiments and experiences with the fairer sex have gone quite a bit further, though, which is fine. It's all part and parcel to the feminine mysteries, practically pureblood tradition. No one likes a cold fish in bed so it's our duty as future pureblood wives to instruct each other gently while maintaining our purity. Or some such rot. To me, it just feels good. It's a handy excuse, though. Once I get married, I'm expected to stop that sort of behavior.
I don't know how I feel about that.
Anger fills me again as I give the Fat Lady the password. I'd been caught after one day on the job of spying! My ego is seriously bruised. Maybe that's why I feel like smacking the back of my brother's head as it's bowed over the chessboard. So I do.
"Ow! What was that for?" he grumbles, rubbing the back of his head and scowling at me as I come around to glare at him over his stupid game.
"She caught me. Do your own dirty work."
"But what did you find out? Is she seeing anybody?" His stupid face takes all the anger out of me as hope shines brightly in his eyes.
"Not that I can tell. Why don't you just ask her, you idiot? You were sorted into Gryffindor for a reason!"
"After Lavender? I can't just... she'd laugh at me."
"Now I'm laughing at you. Idiot."
"Hey!"
"Just. Tell. Her. Before somebody else decides to. Remember the Triwizard Tournament. Remember the Yule Ball? You waited too long to ask her then. Just do it. Idiot."
"Will you quit calling me an idiot?"
"When you quit acting like one. Or do you prefer 'Coward'?"
"Okay, okay, I get it. I'll talk to her."
"Great," I smile brightly. "Where's Harry?"
"Dunno," he says, scratching his head. "I haven't seen him this morning. He was gone when I woke up."
"You think he's out on the Quiddich pitch?"
"Maybe. He has been talking about implementing some of the tougher moves and plays from the book Professor McGonagall got him for his birthday, although I think that was more for her own benefit than his," Ron's gaze looked off into the middle distance. I don't know anybody else who can pull off that look of thoughtfulness while maintaining the air of slack-jawed stupidity, but he manages. Maybe it's just that I'm his sister and hate his dumb guts half the time. I think so, but I can't ever remember thinking of Bill or Charlie like that. Percy, yes. The twins got my grudging admiration for their ability to cause chaos and avoid the fallout, but I've always had this feeling that I was the older sibling between me and Ron even though he's a year before me.
And Percy's just a self-absorbed, stuck-up prick.
"Fine. I'm going to find Harry. Good luck finding Hermione. I'm sure she's left the library by now and is back in her room where she can read without getting spied on."
"Thanks, Gin."
"No thanks necessary. Just pay me."
I wander the castle for hours, unable to find my lovely boyfriend. I'm starting to worry. "Oh, Harry. What have you gotten yourself into this time? And why haven't you taken one of us with you?" Even my ill-gained Chocolate Frogs fail to make me feel better. I sure hope I see him at dinner.
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I can't say when the novelty of loyal Death Eaters being reduced to their baser components wore off, perhaps some time before that fateful Halloween when I lost my body to my own rebounding curse due to an invocation of Old Magic so arcane that it had never been translated into the modern tongues. The evening's revels have once again failed to sate my appetite for good-old-fashioned mayhem, and the inevitable outpouring of sexual deviancy by my followers has left me... uninspired. Still, I must keep up appearances for them by watching all of it from my throne, tossing Crucios into the milieu every now and again to reassure them that they have my attention. Bella always comes so much harder when she knows I'm watching. She has the spirit of a true exhibitionist. She's always happiest when she can glance my way, covered in various bodily fluids, and find that my eyes are on her. Always on her.
Some of my followers might think that I envy them their positions, filling Bella's every available hole with the fruits of their efforts, but the truth is that the show is not for me. It hasn't been for quite some time, nor would I go anywhere near any of Bella's thoroughly used orifices had I been in possession of a working sexual organ. She may be my most loyal and fanatical follower, but she's also more like a daughter to me. It was through my tutelage that she evolved into the powerful, cruel, and terrifying witch she is today. I planted the seeds that the womb of Azkaban nurtured. She is a child of hopelessness, darkness, madness, and heartlessness. I wouldn't have her any other way. No, the show is truly for her, as I am the only audience that in the depths of her twisted soul matters. The floor before my throne is her stage. Sometimes, I think that when she is the only one standing after the orgy and the curses that she would like to take a bow. Some day I think I might let her, just for the shock value of it.
I order the lot of them out of the room, wanting to be alone. They can think whatever it is they wish about what I will do after they leave, not a single one of them would guess how I spend these hours. I think the mechanics and the irony would break their minds in twain were they ever to guess my guilty pleasure.
It has been far too long since I've allowed myself this distraction. This is the only time I am vulnerable. I do not eat, have no need of sleep, and am never in such an ignominious position as to be caught with my robes hiked up on a porcelain bowl. All my body's needs are taken care of with the transference of energy through the Dark Mark. I take a little from each of my branded followers, so little that none would be able to feel it. Their lives sustain the life of their Lord, as the mark was intended. It is only when I allow my consciousness to leave my body through the strange bond with Potter and enter him, using his body as my puppet, feeling everything through his sensory organs, that I am open to attack.
Giddy with the thought of experiencing the world through an 18-year-old's body once again, I set my wards on every opening to the room and summon my familiar to me, to watch over me while I'm away. Nagini twines herself about me, her smooth scales glinting in the low light cast by the fire, ready to hold vigil and kill any who enter here should they manage to get past the wards.
"Ssslleeep well, my masssster," she hisses softly to me, scenting the air before my face in her way of showing affection. "I ssshall guard."
I stroke her head with a single finger, scratching above her eye ridges in the way she likes best and settle deeper into the cushions of the throne. A few deep breaths later and I am speeding away on the wings of thought, deeper in and yet without, gauging Potter's state of mind as I near the surface of his thoughts.
He is awake, but tired. He is alone in his scarlet-draped dorm room. He is... conflicted, but overall, happy. That gives me pause. Why is he happy? I search further than his surface emotions, acclimating myself to the shadows of his thoughts, slipping beneath and around his feeble barriers undetected. As his memories of the time between my last visit and the present play out for me, I feel my ire rise.
She is MY Mudblood. MINE! How dare he touch her? I force myself not to pace like a caged panther in his head as he winces and puts a hand over his scar. He feels my anger so much more because the source of it is right there in his head, but all he knows is that I am angry. He looks into the mirror, and I can hear him thinking: "Voldemort's pissed. That's good," and he smiles a little, despite the pain in his scar. I lurk around behind his thoughts, fuming. Potter, you insolent brat, why won't you just DIE?
He changes into his sleep wear figuring that a nap wouldn't go amiss after the night he had. Memories play out anew and I simply watch, biding my time, waiting for his consciousness to go into REM so I can grab the reins and pay him restitution for trespassing where he never ought to have trespassed. There is groundwork to be laid and plots to plan. First, a conversation with his little red-head Blood Traitor girlfriend--a rendezvous at Midnight in the Head Girl's room before the Christmas hols. Second, the retrieval of a potion I'd had laid away by my dear Potions master before he'd killed that meddlesome old man while the original taking of Granger was still in the planning stages. She'd bowed to my seduction so easily it hadn't been necessary at the outset, but could prove quite amusing for me, now. This can be done in the space of a couple of hours and no one the wiser, least of all the insolent little shit I'll be impersonating.
Why don't I just make him walk out of the castle grounds where he could easily be snatched up by my minions, you might ask. He has his part to play in the grand scheme, make no mistake. Now that he is aware of what I can do with his body, he will be taking precautions against such a move, but that will put him right where I want him: powerless to act while I take the world around him and shape it to my liking. As long as he remains at Hogwarts, he is exactly where I want him to be. I will take the Ministry, I will take the school, and I will take his friends, one by one, away from him. In the end, he will crawl to me and beg me to take his miserable life away. It will be all too easy. And by coming to me willingly, head bowed, the last bit of hope for Dumbledore's 'Greater Good' will be crushed. I will not martyr the idiot child. I will take his will from him and crush any following or rebellion that might otherwise rise up in his name. I might keep him as a pet. Wouldn't that just be sweet?
Ah, he's out. And I'm in control. Time to make the boy pay by ruining what he values most. I'm really going to enjoy this!
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A/N: I'm resurrecting the story, prying it out of the ashes of neglect and abandonment. I have to finish. I have all my old computerized notes and composition notebooks filled with insane scribblings somewhere. I'm sorry for the delay, but life got in the way of things. I WILL FINISH if it kills me. I owe everyone that much. I only hope that the admins will treat me gently and forgive my spelling errors. I never was an English major; I went to school for Graphic Design. Now I'm back. I hope you'll be pleased with the outcome.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Midnight Visitor
28 Reviews | 7.07/10 Average
I read this story a number of years ago and under a forgotten username, but I, have never forgotten this story. Please do update it. I'm dying to find out the rest.
Poor Harry. Can't wait to see how he gets tormented w/ what his body's been up to under Voldy's control. =)
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Heeeheeeheee. Oop.I shouldn't giggle so.One would hope it would renew his determination to destroy 'ol Snake Face.
Response from mewtynt (Reviewer)
Hmm, motivation to destroy arch enemy: To quit having sex with 2 different women with only flashbacks to find out if it was good and stop leaving our intrepid hero to sort out these heretofore unknown physical relationships in real life. Plausible. But to me the real question is which female to keep? ;)
The passion, needing and wanting, and love between Harry and Hermione is truly beautiful!I absolutely LOVE this story! It is so excellently sexy, steamy, raunchy, titillating, pulse pounding... it makes my... EVERYTHING tingle and ache (in a good way, of course), you know?THANK YOU!!!Now then, who is this mystery person that had observed Hermione catch her voyeur, to be followed by her accidentially groping said voyeur too? A classic example of "catch and release" used by many sportsmen(women) & players too. Brilliant, lovely... I LOVE IT!!!
I eagerly await future updates!
The passion, needing and wanting, and love between Harry and Hermione is truly beautiful!I absolutely LOVE this story! It is so excellently sexy, steamy, raunchy, titillating, pulse pounding... it makes my... EVERYTHING tingle and ache (in a good way, of course), you know?THANK YOU!!!Now then, who is this mystery person that had observed Hermione catch her voyeur, to be followed by her accidentially groping said voyeur too? A classic example of "catch and release" used by many sportsmen(women) & players too. LOLBrilliant, lovely, can't get enough of it... I LOVE IT!!!
I eagerly await future updates!
I absolutely LOVE Harry and Hermione being together as a couple.I have always DESPISED/HATED the pairings of R/Hr, and H/G.I love how passionate and loving they are together!Well done--keep up the good work!
Thank goodness Harry knows now... together they might come up with something to stop Voldemort.*SQUEE*
Ok, so I'm a sick puppy, but I find that it is so HOT that they both WANT each other.
;~D
Oh man, poor Hermione to be tormented and brought to pleasure by Voldemort via Harry's unaware bodyThe realization that if she were to seek out the naughty thrills that she receives from his night time visits, she would never find them with a conscious Harry, but would have to go to Voldemort himself is devastating.Well written!
Oh man, poor Hermione to be tormented and brought to pleasure by Voldemort via Harry's unaware body.The realization that if she were to seek out the naughty thrills that she receives from his night time visits, she would never find them with a conscious Harry, but would have to go to Voldemort himself is devastating.Well written!
Please don't abandon this fic...I really like it!
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Not abandoned! I promise! I just had my life hijacked by wedding plans. I hope to update the story as soon as I get the next chapter hammered out. (I do appreciate the encouragement! Makes me smile.) Thank you.
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Not abandoned! I promise! I just had my life hijacked by wedding plans. I hope to update the story as soon as I get the next chapter hammered out. (I do appreciate the encouragement! Makes me smile.) Thank you.
Anonymous
You write some excellent smut. I love the "carried away and just can't stop" feeling of it. It's always great to see someone with so much control--normally--lose it. And now, it's like she enjoys losing it. Very, very interesting...
Ginny? Holy smokes, woman! Do I hear "menage a trois"?
Author's Response: Do I hear "I request a menage a trois"? Ha ha, I think I do. Sorry I had to put the writing on hiatus as I just got married! So wedding plans took over my life. It will be a little bit before I can really get back into the zone again, but when I do I will keep your *excellent* idea in mind.
Mwahahahahaha!
lulabelle72's response: You mean you're not married to your fanfic writing? Aw, geez. Don't you know writers aren't supposed to have a life?
JK. Big congratulations! And we will be here, patiently waiting for our menage a trois, when you two stop having non-stop newlywed sex and you can actually leave your bedroom and sit at the computer.
An interesting premise for a story. I like it, but wonder which direction it's headed?!!?
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Straight to the gutter. (teehee). Seriously, though. I have a plot in mind but like a horny teenager, I keep getting sidetracked by hormones. I hope you don't mind the abundance of smutty smuttness. Thank you for your review.
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Straight to the gutter. (teehee). Seriously, though. I have a plot in mind but like a horny teenager, I keep getting sidetracked by hormones. I hope you don't mind the abundance of smutty smuttness. Thank you for your review.
It's a very intriguing concept. Twisted, but...deliciously dark?? I will keep reading, as you have me interested! I think be putting Hermione in the first person narrative view makes it more personal, I guess.
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
I wrote the beginning chapter on AFF.net on a whim. They had all these 'ship categories that didn't get very many stories, and one of them was Voldemort/Hermione. While I didn't exactly wish the snake-faced freak on our dear Gryffindor Princess, the thought did intrigue me. How would the Dark Lord act in the bedroom? What would his hatred of all things Muggle or Muggleborn cause him to do to Hermione? Why would he even do such a thing? While I've run out of chapters that were already written, I actually have a rough outline. Rest assured, there will be more plot and many more explorations of different 'ships. I had hoped that first-person present would be something new and exciting for the readers, as opposed to the third-person past which most narratives are written in. This entire thing started as a "mix-it-up" concept and I'm really glad it's caught the attention that it has. I just hope I can complete the thing and not let anyone down! Thanks for your interest!
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
I wrote the beginning chapter on AFF.net on a whim. They had all these 'ship categories that didn't get very many stories, and one of them was Voldemort/Hermione. While I didn't exactly wish the snake-faced freak on our dear Gryffindor Princess, the thought did intrigue me. How would the Dark Lord act in the bedroom? What would his hatred of all things Muggle or Muggleborn cause him to do to Hermione? Why would he even do such a thing? While I've run out of chapters that were already written, I actually have a rough outline. Rest assured, there will be more plot and many more explorations of different 'ships. I had hoped that first-person present would be something new and exciting for the readers, as opposed to the third-person past which most narratives are written in. This entire thing started as a "mix-it-up" concept and I'm really glad it's caught the attention that it has. I just hope I can complete the thing and not let anyone down! Thanks for your interest!
I am hooked on this story. More, please!
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
I still have to write the next chapter, but I will try to be quick about it.Thanks for the feedback, it makes me happy!
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
I still have to write the next chapter, but I will try to be quick about it.Thanks for the feedback, it makes me happy!
Absolutely fantastic. I'm completely hooked and in awe of the utter beauty you put in your writing. Very, very good.
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Thank you so much! You're one of my favorite authors on the site, so that means a lot to me.
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Thank you so much! You're one of my favorite authors on the site, so that means a lot to me.
Anonymous
This is a really intriguing idea. Rape is sadly often a weapon of war in the real world, but this is an interesting take on how it could function in the really unique canon situation. It's an unusual plot.
Some of the wording here left me confused/thrown, though. Like this: with the sheer naughtiness. After everything else, the word 'naughtiness' just struck me as totally different in tone.
I can't help thinking that this might have been more powerful if it had been in a shared dorm room, without all the 'screaming into the pillow', etc. There would be something more powerful and potentially damaging about her having to keep all of it completely inside, the pleasure and the pain...
Dude!!! Just who is Ginny playing with in the library, unless she's got a thing for Hermione too heehee, groping in the library and keeping her busy so she can't complain-- GENIUS!! Love it, and want more of it!! ou rock!
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Heehee. Thank you!
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Heehee. Thank you!
Quite good, up to a point. But it’s one thing for Harry to be controlled by Voldemort and go after Hermione; quite another for him to do it of his own free will. Can imagine how Ginny and Ron are going to react once they find out … and I’m assuming they will soon, possibly during the holidays at the Burrow.
It’ll be interesting to see what excuse Harry hands her and whether or not Ron manages to keep from wanting to throttle him. I also think it’ll be pretty hard for the new lovebirds to keep it to themselves—and sooner or later they’re going to be caught. And I’ve always heard in situations like that, they often do it purposely so they will be found. But even if they aren’t discovered by the ones in question, what about if one of the other Weasleys finds them—Molly, Fred, George et al … then tells the ones in question?
I can also imagine how Ginny is likely to react, not to mention Ron, once they find out. She’ll probably either want to hex Harry into the middle of next week, want nothing further to do with him or else be stiffly formal and not allow herself to be alone with him at any time—if not all three. Of course, if what has happened is any indication, he might not want to be alone with her, because it might not matter to him anymore. Can’t be sure, just speculating … but if he cares anything about her at all, he won’t lead her to expect something he can no longer give.
And how long will feeling guilty last, even with Hermione? And I don’t see Harry losing any sleep over his cheating on Ginny … I don’t generally go for H/Hr fics (and I’m assuming that this will end up such), but I want to see how this one turns out, if nothing else. Both of them deserve to be confronted, though, if you ask me … At the very least, if that’s what you intend, I hope you do it as gently as possible so Ginny and Ron aren’t ruined for life.
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Oh, if only it were only the mundane sort of things that they'll have to deal with! If only it was their friends' feelings that was their only conflict.I won't give it away! I won't! No spoilers!I thank you for the quite lengthy review! I'm glad to have sparked your interest so far. The next chapter is a long one. As for me, I never could deal with too much angst at once, but the silly teenagers in my brain must have their drama!Again, thank you for your time and attention. It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Oh, if only it were only the mundane sort of things that they'll have to deal with! If only it was their friends' feelings that was their only conflict.I won't give it away! I won't! No spoilers!I thank you for the quite lengthy review! I'm glad to have sparked your interest so far. The next chapter is a long one. As for me, I never could deal with too much angst at once, but the silly teenagers in my brain must have their drama!Again, thank you for your time and attention. It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.
Very intriguing premise - can't wait to see where this goes!
Yep, you hurt my head. Love it, lots!!
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Heehee glad to be able to hurt you from afar
Oh, that's evil... but yet, also Voldemort's downfall, I hope. Hmm... not sure what I feel about the Ginny-H/Hr threesome, but it has been a very fascinating read so far. HHr is great! Thanks and looking forward to more.
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Oh, he has no idea what he just set in motion! Hell hath no fury like Hermione with a cause.Thank you so much for the review!
ut oh. great chapter.
This is pretty fantastic. So very intense. Very good work. I'm curious to see where this is going.
Uh, looks like Harry's going to need some more Occlumency lessons! Interesting chapter.Livvy
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
I agree, but who the hell's gonna teach him? Snape's gone like the wind! Hehe. Thank you for the review. Next one's in the qeue. (Like my little poem?)Erg, need sleep.-Ravensblood
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
I agree, but who the hell's gonna teach him? Snape's gone like the wind! Hehe. Thank you for the review. Next one's in the qeue. (Like my little poem?)Erg, need sleep.-Ravensblood
I wonder if Voldimort meant for harry to remember or if it just happened on its own.
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Much like repressed memories, they emerged on their own when he was in a receptive frame of mind. Voldy-butt was counting on it, though. Not that it matters, now he knows!
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Much like repressed memories, they emerged on their own when he was in a receptive frame of mind. Voldy-butt was counting on it, though. Not that it matters, now he knows!
wow. Dangerous stuff, that. wow. wow. Great Job!!
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Thanks.Hope you like the next chapter. It's waiting for the headmisstress's approval.
Response from Ravensblood (Author of Midnight Visitor)
Thanks.Hope you like the next chapter. It's waiting for the headmisstress's approval.