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Schrödinger's Snake

1: The Hidden Chambers

2: Words, Words, Words

3: A Curious Turn of Time

4: A Slippery Situation

Schrödinger's Snake

Heisenberg

125 Reviews   |   125 Ratings, 0 Likes, 17 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Romance Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 15,612 Words 4 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Salazar Slytherin Severus Snape

Hermione Granger, new Hogwarts librarian, has inherited the unenviable task of archiving parts of Hogwarts' neglected archives. There, she uncovers a manuscript by Salazar Sytherin and finds that his injunctions against Muggles aren't exactly what everyone has always assumed them to be. Unable to quite believe it herself, no one else believes her until, in a bizarre set of circumstances, the author himself appears and begins to meddle in Hermione's life.

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Chapters (4)

Chapter 1: The Hidden Chambers

Chapter 2: Words, Words, Words

Chapter 3: A Curious Turn of Time

Chapter 4: A Slippery Situation


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rhiannonofthemoon

You have an excellent grip on Hermione's character!  I wonder how this story will play out?

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phoenix

Poor Hermione. She should have known better dealing with a Slytherin, especially the Slytherin. Poor girl.

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phoenix

What a fun twist. I love the fact the object of their research has landed in their laps. LOL I can't wait to see how they get this sorted out.

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phoenix

Love Severus' reaction to this and how his mind is working to use his experience in the wizarding world to help him understand the manuscript better. hopefully he and Hermione can come to some sort of collaboration.

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phoenix

Very intriguing. I really look forward to learning more about Slytherin's manuscript and whether or not Hermione does seek help in her translation. :)

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CharmedForce

ROFL...poor Hermione!

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CharmedForce

Oh, Sal seems so charming when it serves him to be...

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CharmedForce

Oh, yay for a Slytherin that may not be so Slytherin!

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CharmedForce

Oh, lovely start!

10/10

keske

oh dear! lol can't wait to see what happens next!

10/10

poisonivy1976

Wonderfull story. i love it. please keep it on and write more soon......

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elsolel

I love the part where Salazar looses his cool and drops his goblet!

I'm sure she'll get him back, somehow. 

10/10

pookah

but the existence of a Snape, however false, who was not an ill-tempered bastard was just as surprising to Hermione as his comfortable sitting room had been.delightful“I know spells you could only dream of. I would not wish to use them on you.” The look of grim anticipation on his face suggested that this last statement, at least, was a complete lie.Brilliant!What a good chapter!  very clever and interesting.

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Arabella Bloodgood

Two Slytherins and A Lioness brilliant.  good old Sal is really giving Sev a run for his money.  lol

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Arabella Bloodgood

Enthralling.  This keeps getting better and better and it was awesome from the start.

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Arabella Bloodgood

that's right Sev don't help Hermi can have all the honor  you never liked that anyway   I'm sure you'll come around

9/10

Shadow

Hmm will be interesting to see what "Sal" Makes of the future Hogwarts, especially if Hermione and Severus' translations are true.I love that Sal has Hermione pegged as a ninny. That would be the first time in her life she has been called one!

Response from Heisenberg (Author of Schrödinger's Snake)

She was acting like a bit of a div, bless her! Hopefully she'll sharpen up soon enough! ;-)

Response from Heisenberg (Author of Schrödinger's Snake)

She was acting like a bit of a div, bless her! Hopefully she'll sharpen up soon enough! ;-)

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MoreThanSirius

Salazar, was not about to sever, tangle, or otherwise damage that thread. Merely… tinker. Embroider. Knot, perhaps, if he was very unlucky. Now why does that attitude scare the hell out of me? Not the least bit surprising that things didn't go exactly as planned for Slytherin. Well, at least he won't have to worry about coming face to face with himself in this time zone! It does present the perfect opportunity for Severus and Hermione to get some answers to their questions. I wonder how long it will take Slytherin to change his opinion of Hermione, although he does have Severus pretty much pegged!

Response from Heisenberg (Author of Schrödinger's Snake)

If Severus and Hermione's translation is correct, it'll be very interesting indeed to see what Sal makes of Hermione in later chapters. And he and Snape are definitely up against each other now!

Response from Heisenberg (Author of Schrödinger's Snake)

If Severus and Hermione's translation is correct, it'll be very interesting indeed to see what Sal makes of Hermione in later chapters. And he and Snape are definitely up against each other now!

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LoveFenrir

oooh, anticipation!!

Response from Heisenberg (Author of Schrödinger's Snake)

Hehe. More to come soon enough!

Response from Heisenberg (Author of Schrödinger's Snake)

Hehe. More to come soon enough!

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MoreThanSirius

Well, now. That certainly is an interesting interpretation! If this statement was lost to the ages, one has to wonder how much of Slytherin's work was misinterpreted. Wars can be started by one incorrect word. No wonder Snape is fascinated and doesn't want to share the glory of this discovery. Methinks he'd best learn to share, though. Especially if a certain virgin witch has increased powers.

Response from Heisenberg (Author of Schrödinger's Snake)

We shall see! ;-) He's going to have much more than that to worry about soon... Thanks for reviewing!

Response from Heisenberg (Author of Schrödinger's Snake)

We shall see! ;-) He's going to have much more than that to worry about soon... Thanks for reviewing!

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MoreThanSirius

Joy of joys! Research geeks are writing this! I adore research geeks and fascinating little historical details. I imagine Hermione is very glad she didn't call Snape now. I can't imagine her wanting to translate that out in front of him! I wonder how much interest he will show at her discovery.

Response from Heisenberg (Author of Schrödinger's Snake)

The research geeks couldn't really resist this one! Glad you're enjoying it so far. Hermioen and Severus have something of a fraught relationship right now, so who can blame her for being cagy?!

Response from Heisenberg (Author of Schrödinger's Snake)

The research geeks couldn't really resist this one! Glad you're enjoying it so far. Hermioen and Severus have something of a fraught relationship right now, so who can blame her for being cagy?!

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beaweasley2

Oh I kike the introducton of Salazar Slytherin. Very original. Took him long enough to figure things out!

Response from Heisenberg (Author of Schrödinger's Snake)

Considering the experiment he was trying to do, he did seem a little slow, didn't he? Hehe... maybe he didn't really believe he could manage it!

Response from Heisenberg (Author of Schrödinger's Snake)

Considering the experiment he was trying to do, he did seem a little slow, didn't he? Hehe... maybe he didn't really believe he could manage it!

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Southern_Witch_69

Haha. I enjoyed this chapter. I rather like Salazar here to be honest. Snerk. And then him and Snape squaring off. Bwahahahaha :) Welcome to Hogwarts as we know it, Sal. :)

Response from Heisenberg (Author of Schrödinger's Snake)

I feel like there might be something of a pissing contest to come between these two to see who's the real 'king' of Slytherin, as Snape has been used to being Slytherin par-excellence for a long while! That'll be co-author's job, at least in the next chapter, though.

Response from Heisenberg (Author of Schrödinger's Snake)

I feel like there might be something of a pissing contest to come between these two to see who's the real 'king' of Slytherin, as Snape has been used to being Slytherin par-excellence for a long while! That'll be co-author's job, at least in the next chapter, though.

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kimjo2

oh man o man!  this has got to be unique!  i await impatiently to see how this is going to progress.  you're off to a spiffing start.  thanks so much

Response from Heisenberg (Author of Schrödinger's Snake)

So glad you like it. This was a great concept from my co-author, and I'm so glad I got to jump on board with it!

Response from Heisenberg (Author of Schrödinger's Snake)

So glad you like it. This was a great concept from my co-author, and I'm so glad I got to jump on board with it!

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septentrion

Another twist? I can't wait to read more.

Response from Heisenberg (Author of Schrödinger's Snake)

Twisty like snakes, we are!

Response from Heisenberg (Author of Schrödinger's Snake)

Twisty like snakes, we are!

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