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Aftermath
cocoachristy67 Reviews | 7.75/10 (67 Ratings, 0 Likes, 103 Favorites )
While Severus copes with feelings and learning to live again, Hermione is determined to build a new life for herself--with or without Harry's approval. This is my response to SW69's Harry Potter challenge.
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I have really enjoyed this story. You gave it a little drama mixed in with the romance. Perfect. I really look forward to your next fiction. -- B
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
Thanks Magicmistress! Got about three chapters written so far...It's also drama and romance (and just a tad of humor, I think!) Shouldn't be too long!
bravo! excellent story. thank you so much. i started sniffling when the phoenix appeared.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
Thanks P! Glad you enjoyed it, even with the sniffle!
Nicely done, Chrsity. Glad to see another happy ending... though, I expect nothing less. ;-)
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Thanks Gin...That's right, you know me! Same as you :)
Geez, Harry sure took his time. But I'm glad he was there in the end. Great story.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
LOL He did makes us sweat, huh? Glad you liked it!
Congrats, doll! Glad you finished your tale and had an answer to the challenge! xoxooxox
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
It was a fun and challenging challenge with the short chapters...but I loved it! Now, you go answer my challenge!
I have to say that I am glad that Hermione is living her own life, and not trying to be who her friends want her to be. I can only hope that Ginny realizes that she is allowed to like and/or love anyone she wants and helps Ron and Harry get over themselves. Great chapter. -- B
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Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
! I believe in happy endings...but bumps on the road to happiness! ;-)
I'm reading these reviews and laughing. Oh, Shiloh! Just grab her from behind and forget about dragging her anywhere! (Of course, I think my mind is a permanent gutter fixture.) Yes, Christy, great chapter.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
Tee Hee! I know that's right! Glad you liked it T!
I don't think that anyone, not even close friends have any write to tell you who you should or should not go out with. I'm so glad that she told Ron and Ginny that and turned the tables on them. They wouldn't be happy about being told who to like or date, and it is the same thing.
I think they are just letting their former predjudices cloud their judgement. But that's normal for anyone to do.
I'm looking forward to more and wonder if Harry will ever get that stick out from up his ass to realize he's not the last word on everything.
Great chapter.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
LOL!! Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
! I know, they all think they can dictate to Hermione, eh? I am glad she told them too!
Hmmm.... I like that he was affected by seeing her on the floor, scantily dressed. But, I wish, instead of fussing at her, he would have gathered her in his arms, and dragged her to her chambers to pick out something more appropriate... (Smiles evilly) Perhaps he would even help her change into it? LOL... No, seriously... great chapter!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
LOL Thanks Shiloh! Hmmm Now, there's an idea! ;-)
Ok... Now I am hooked on yet another one of your stories! I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope there is an update soon as I am really enjoying it. Poor Harry needs to learn to let the past go... you can't hold onto the dirt of the past, and expect to walk across clean floors in your future! Anyway... Update soon... PLEASE???
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
Thanks so much Shiloh! It shouldn't be too long, Sun has the next chapter!
Ginny is the only one that seems acceptable of things as they are. Let's hope she can talk Harry into being a good lad. lol
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
Yep, Gin is kind of a live and let live, especially now that she has her Harry. But she does hate the tension! ;-)
I have a comment about Southern's notes, it is easier for Harry to blame the person that is around, that he does not like, for the pain in his life. In this case, Snape killed Dumbledore right in front of him and he has a hard time getting over it. Personally I hope that Hermione hexes him and set his a** straight. He is getting a little high and mighty if he thinks he can dictate who she sees and what type of relationship they have. She doesn't do that to him. -- B
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
Thanks Magicmistress! I agree, so I think you will like the next chapter! It is written, but my modem messed up and Best Buy has my computer. Hopefully, I will get it back this weekend, then I will update!!
I have a comment about Southern's notes, it is easier for Harry to blame the person that is around, that he does not like, for the pain in his life. In this case, Snape killed Dumbledore right in front of him and he has a hard time getting over it. Personally I hope that Hermione hexes him and set his a** straight. He is getting a little high and mighty if he thinks he can dictate who she sees and what type of relationship they have. She doesn't do that to him. -- B
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
Thanks Magicmistress! I agree, so I think you will like the next chapter! It is written, but my modem messed up and Best Buy has my computer. Hopefully, I will get it back this weekend, then I will update!!
cant wait for the date! woohooo
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
I can't wait to have my computer back!! ;-)
I liked the chapter. I think that you did an admirable job of keeping Draco in character. I do have to agree with Southern in my hope that the Defese professor/Head of Slytherin teaches that boy a lesson in respect. However, I think that Hermione reaction to Harry was spot on, she cannot let him get away with things that she would not allow anyone else to get away with. I hope that was not too reduntant. Look forwards to seeing what comes next. -- B
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
Thanks so much
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
! Your kind review made my day!!! ;-) Glad you are enjoying it!
first review... ahhahaha... I would like to kick malfoy's arse. doesn't have the bollocks to fight with everyone yet he's bully enough to pick on hermione, eh?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
Heck yeah, the whimpering little ferret! LOL
Very nice. I am interested to see things change between Hermione and Severus. I also think it would be interesting to see Harry grow up a bit. You cannot hang on to anger forever, it will eventually hurt the people you love. -- B
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
Thanks macicmistress. Harry is going to be stubborn, he feels betrayed by Hermione. Poor Harry! LOL! Glad you are enjoying!
Excellent start on this challenge. Thanks, doll. You did well to come up with all of this from a "Who's there?" quote! Cheers.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
Thanks, Sun! I am liking this challenge as it is a challenge to work some of the sentences in. Tee Hee! XOXOX
I really enjoy how stories are being created around the events that unfolded in HBP. I look forward to the next chapter. Excellent job!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
Thanks NSS! It's your turn to write another...;-)
Oh, I think Severus handled the situation with Rosmerta badly...he should have elaborated a bit, rather than just saying 'I have plans'. And he should not have let her kiss him on the lips - that is a personal, intimate thing, at least to me it is...especially when you have a date sitting across the table from you when something like that happens.
And I don't blame Hermione for her reaction - knowing that your...lover, boyfriend?...has a past is one thing, but having it thrust in your face and handled badly by said lover is a whole other thing. Taking some time to think alone probably isn't a bad idea.
Anyway, I'm loving this story!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
! I agree. I think kissing is very intimate too! I would have been upset...
Oh, I think Severus handled the situation with Rosmerta badly...he should have elaborated a bit, rather than just saying 'I have plans'.
And I don't blame Hermione for her reaction - knowing that your...lover, boyfriend?...has a past is one thing, but having it thrust in your face and handled badly by said lover is a whole other thing. Taking some time to think alone probably isn't a bad idea.
Anyway, I'm loving this story!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
Thanks! I agree, he did!Right, she was very hurt and unsure!So happy you liked it!
Find you over here hiding another chapter. That's so mean Christy... Great chapter. Yep agree with you but Sun did setup the guidelines so its all her fault...
Thank you Sweets.. Have a great weekend.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
LOL Thanks Patti! I actually submitted to both sites at the same time... ;-) Glad you liked it, the next one is the last. Then on to my YLC challenge by lotm!
:-) Good job, Christy! I'm curious to see the conclusion of this story. ~Gin
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
Thanks Gin!! ;-)
Well I would have to say that that was one of the few confrontations between Hermione and Severus, as lovers, that they cleared up everything in one meeting. And leave it to Southern to think that Severus was getting soft. Too funny. But I loved it none the less.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
THanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)
. I wanted to clear it up and move on. Sun hated the whole Hermione jealously thing to begin with...
;-) Glad you enjoyed it!