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HP Chapter Challenge Aftermath
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Aftermath

1: 1. Grimmauld Place

2: 2. Settling In

3: 3. Beginnings and Endings

4: 4. An Evening With Professor Snape

5: 5. Courting Hermione Granger

6: 6. The Green-eyed Monster

7: 7. Making Up Is Hard To Do

8: 8. You Can Count On Me

Aftermath

cocoachristy

67 Reviews   |   67 Ratings, 0 Likes, 103 Favorites )

Romance HP Chapter Challenge 17,391 Words 8 Chapters Complete
Hannah Abbott Hermione Granger Severus Snape

While Severus copes with feelings and learning to live again, Hermione is determined to build a new life for herself--with or without Harry's approval. This is my response to SW69's Harry Potter challenge.

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Chapters (8)

Chapter 1: 1. Grimmauld Place

Chapter 2: 2. Settling In

Chapter 3: 3. Beginnings and Endings

Chapter 4: 4. An Evening With Professor Snape

Chapter 5: 5. Courting Hermione Granger

Chapter 6: 6. The Green-eyed Monster

Chapter 7: 7. Making Up Is Hard To Do

Chapter 8: 8. You Can Count On Me


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Severus49

 I still don't think she was acting childish! Jealousy is not an exclusively childish emotion.  Expecting him to have the maturity to tell Rosemerta straight off the bat, as soon as she went to kiss him is not expecting too much.  If anything, it is showing more concern for Hermione's feelings than the way Rosemerta was perceiving his outing with Hermione.  She may have been acting childish by avoiding him, but that is all.  He could have rationally taken her aside and reassured her that yes, he would make it a point to go back down to Rosemerta's at his earliest convenience and explain matters to her, but he didn't.  Severus just threw up his hands and said 'I didn't do anything wrong.' Well, what would he have expected her to do, if the situations were reversed? That is the true test to know if a person's feelings are childish or not, and believe me, Severus wouldn't have let her get off that easily - especially not if he caught another man kissing her even casually!  Southern is totally wrong in her judgement.  Both with the last chapter and this one.  Severus did NOT just say hello to Rosemerta, he accepted a kiss from another woman IN FRONT OF HIS DATE! That is NOT ACCEPTABLE, that is NOT JUST SAYING HELLO! "Hello" is constituted by receiving a peck on the cheek, or both cheeks, and perhaps a hug at the word "Hello." Not receiving a kiss to seal something at the word "Goodbye." Childish? I think not.

Response from Severus49 (Reviewer)

I just wanted to add, I know I sound really harsh because I feel so strongly about what happened, but I don't want to sound like I'm flaming Southern. I'm really not.  I just took this a little too personally and I wanted to apologize if it sounds too nasty.  Sorry again.

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Severus49

No, no.....

I'm very close to Snape's real age, and let me tell you, "shag buddies" at our age are NOT COMMON!  Our generation was brought up to believe friendships were friendships, and casual sex was casual sex, but you don't have friends you just use for sex! You might get it with 20 or early 30 year olds, but not with the older crowd. 

That's why there's such a thing as a 'guy slut'.  A guy slut is a guy who has sex with women just to have sex.

10/10

mimmom

I'm so glad Harry showed up!

9/10

lucyferr

His problem with Severus is just that, his problem, and I am not going to let his opinions sway me. I have opinions of my own, thanks...For once, this is something that has absolutely nothing to do with Harry Potter! This is about Hermione Granger! 

hear hear! i wish all those sycophantic potter fans like bobmin would get this rather basic point!

0/10

EverMystique

Ah, yes, jealousy... the enemy of trust. Interesting story line. Rushed in some places, but overall, not bad. Of course, anything that compromises Severus is good. LOL. But then, I may be biased.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

LOL! Thanks! Glad you liked it.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

You are a truly remarkable author.  This was a great story and I look forward to reading more of your stories in the near future.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

Thank you so much, Arabella! You've made my day!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

Thank you so much, Arabella! You've made my day!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

What she can't have male friends?  And it was only dinner, Rosmerta wants to shag his brains out.  Though a week of silence does show her immaturity and lack of relationship experience.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

Thanks! Well, I think he doesn't mind the male friends so much as the reason she didn't tell him since they have a standing date. Yes, she should have talked to him about it!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

Thanks! Well, I think he doesn't mind the male friends so much as the reason she didn't tell him since they have a standing date. Yes, she should have talked to him about it!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

He was wrong.   She wasn't acting like a child.  I'm very soon to be 36 and I would have been the same way.  And slap and tickle has always made me lol.  I don't know why but it does and shag buddies will too.  Prefect chapter.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

Thank you! I agree. I think that even though he felt uncomfortable, and perhaps didn't know exactly what to say, he should have said SOMETHING to her. Teehee slap and tickle is funny!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

Thank you! I agree. I think that even though he felt uncomfortable, and perhaps didn't know exactly what to say, he should have said SOMETHING to her. Teehee slap and tickle is funny!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Thats right tell them where they can stick there opinions.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

LOL! Thanks! My sentiments exactly!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

LOL! Thanks! My sentiments exactly!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

I doubt Harry stays a brat forever.  He can't be happy without Hermione as a friend.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

Thank you! Too right you are!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

Thank you! Too right you are!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Harry really needs to grow up. 

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

Thanks! Uh huh, I thought that a lot durning the books, but then I would think all that he had to endure during his life and I could see his point too. LOL! But in this fic, he really does!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

Thanks! Uh huh, I thought that a lot durning the books, but then I would think all that he had to endure during his life and I could see his point too. LOL! But in this fic, he really does!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Draco is Draco.  I'm surprised that Harry came to her defense but still will probably act harsh towards her later.  As for the way she treats Harry in class,  she is a teacher now and can't show favoritism.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

Thanks! That's exactly right. And though Harry is aggravated at her, he does still love her. Couldn't you just see Draco acting that way?

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

Thanks! That's exactly right. And though Harry is aggravated at her, he does still love her. Couldn't you just see Draco acting that way?

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

After reading the rules to this challenge,  this chapter is even better then I thought and I thought very highly of it already.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

Wow! Thank you so much!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

Wow! Thank you so much!

10/10

sinbad

I adore happy endings!  Great story, well thought out (especially making the canon sentances work for your story) and great flow.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

Thanks so much! I have to have happy endings! ;D So happy you enjoyed it!

10/10

sinbad

I'm glad Hermione is starting to act like an adult.  I know she has little practical experiance, but she chose to go out with a much older man not just in years but experiance as well.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

Thanks! Yes, that's true, but that doesn't automatically mean she will always know how to act until she gets a bit more experience.

10/10

sinbad

Oh Hermione! *smacks her in the head Hopefully she'll straighten out now, although really that's your job author. LOL

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

LOL! Just keep this in mind... She's 19 years younger than he is, and this is her first real--and adult--relationship.

10/10

sinbad

I can't wait to see their next date, an opera no less....

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

Thanks! I could definitely see Severus at an opera!

10/10

sinbad

Hmmm I detect a slight whiff of citrus.....lovely.Personaly, I think it's difficult to set aside her friendships with Harry, Ginny and of course, Ron, but she really has to stop worrying about their reactions.  She is now their teacher, not just their friend.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

I've always loved lemons! ;D Exactly.

10/10

sinbad

Borrowing a British phrase whose meaning I can guess, what a wanker!  Let's hope Harry grows up a bit, maybe Ginney can hit him with a Bludger to speed him along.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

LOL! Yep, he needs to.

10/10

sinbad

I loved the way Hermione took care of the challange to her authority.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

Thanks! Yes, she needed to estlabish that early on...

10/10

sinbad

Cute start, I wonder if Minerva realizes she set up a perfect post war romance!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed. Nope, not a clue!

10/10

Soul Bound

I agree with Sun.  He was too easy on her.  Talk about childish. lol

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

Thanks SB. Not me, see this is her first "adult" relationship, and she is 20 years younger. Her emotions are not as controlled as his, and he should have elaborated to Rosemerta--at least a little. :) As far as Viktor, I can see both sides on that one.

10/10

pickles

thank you for a wonderful story.  i've enjoyed it very much.  what else to you have up your sleeve christy.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

Thanks! I am happy you liked it, Patty! I have a plot bunny running around...

10/10

Antagonist Len

But what did Severus teach then if Bill got DADA?

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

He is not going to teach. He will just be Deputy Headmaster.

10/10

snapesoulmate

I really liked this story.  I live for happy endings.  I will be waiting for your new story!!!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Aftermath)

Thanks! I Love happy endings too! (But I do like my angst thrown in!) 

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