Loved it!! 😍

You mentioned in your notes that this was an early story with lots of cliches, and sometimes that can be off putting, but sometimes in a story such as this, it allows me to just sit back and enjoy the sex without having to worry about anything else.  It is kind of refreshing, to tell the truth.

Wow, that went easier than expected.  Harry must really have a sex-addled brain to just let her go, lol.

My, she is a bold little thing.  Can't wait to see what happens tonight, and who will break and mention this first.

Oh, I love shared dream stories!  Wonder how well that's going to go over?  Off to find out ...

And they all lived happily (very happily) ever after.

Wow, they have some stamina, lol.  Still ... *fans self wildly*

Now that REALLY is Potions under DURESS. 

WHEW, is it me ,or is it hot in here.

There is something fun about Harry getting off from watching Hermione climax in class. I for one, would be embarrassed if I were Hermione. Apparently she likes being watched. Who knew she was this kinky? You would think this would be an incentive for Harry to brush up on his legilimency skills so he could try it on Ginny in the Great Hall at dinner. That was Snape's problem. He didn't give Harry the right motivation. Never mind that Voldemort could read his thoughts. He should have said, "Look what I can do! ... Now, wouldn't you like to learn how to make women cum from across the room?" Or at the very least, "Too bad you cocked up your legilimency lessons, you little pussy. Watch and weep, Potter! Because now you will never be able to do THIS!" 

That's right! Dumbledore can F-ing sod off! By the way, doesn't it hurt to have one's penis slapped or is it so flexible that it doesn't bear much of the impact? Sorry, I've never had the opportunity to slap a penis. But you never know. 

As I'm reading this storying I'm thinking that maybe proper distain for sterotypes and cliches is somewhat over rated in certain situations. I'm liking it a lot! What does that say about me? I've been reading your fanfiction for years and I still enjoy this one very much in spite of all of the gazing longingly into each other's blazing eyes and seeing themselve's in the reflection! I only wish I could have orgasms from just having erotic day dreams like Snape can or from suddenly feeling a dude's naked body against mine like Hermione. What the hell is my problem? Is it because he's magic? Am I the only one who lacks this super power? Are the other readers and writers on TPP in posession of this gift?

Oh my, that was just an amazingly naughty, erotic story. Oh how I do love the two of them together.  But, honestly only  15 points?  :-)

Oh if Hermione only knew he had actually came in his trousers. heh he.  I can't wait to see what Severus does to her now that he realises she knows it is just not a dream.

Uhn, that was some first chapter.  You have left me as breathless as Hermione.  

:D This was quite a fun read!

This was great!! I couldnt stop reading it. Thanks for sharing. Kelly :)

This was hot!!!  Loved you descriptions!  I can only wait to read more of what you have written!


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Lovely and sexy, thank you.

This was a really really good story. Is definately a story I can read again and again. It was very well written. The descriptions were great but not overbearing and some grade A hot scenes :) Loved it!

Very hot...when did it get so warm in here, I know its 105 outside but whewwww. LOL

Wowzers.

Oh, the cliches, the cliches! Fanon Snape, a touch of ho!Mione... but still yummy lemons :) And your writing has improved so much, too, dearie. And look, its the inspiration for the title of this category! Potion under duress!

really good story, I love the way it started and the way it ended, i was surprised at hermione's boldness at domineering, never would have thought she could be so bold amd I deffinately admire her because there aint no way i could have finished that potion, this is one story i will read again and again and i will ask my husband to read as well... thank you for some very interesting yet HOT reading.

Yummy!  What fun.