Paying the Fiddler
Chapter 12 of 18
livvy6Alissa leads the mission to abduct Luna Lovegood from the Hogwarts Express. Severus tells Alissa important information about the "Golden Trio" that may be of use in the future.
ReviewedChristmas, 1997
As winter approached, Alissa heard more news about the problems Hogwarts was having with their new Headmaster. All unofficial gatherings of students were disbanded; certain students were even forbidden to go to Hogsmeade. Nevertheless, the mutiny hummed along quietly, never fully dying out. The group known as "Dumbledore's Army", or the D.A., was still gathering secretly.
Severus came back to the manor to get away from the school for a few days. He was brought before the Dark Lord and reported on the activities of the dissenters. The Dark Lord was not happy. He had control over the Ministry and The Daily Prophet, but this moronic bumbler, Xeno Lovegood, who for years ran a rag of a magazine called The Quibbler, was printing out information the Dark Lord wanted kept quiet. Something was going to have to be done. Severus knew what that meant: Alissa.
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The Hogwarts Express went along its journey as it had for so many years, bringing Hogwarts students back and forth from London to the highlands of Scotland. There had been few incidences over the years, the worst most likely being when the Dementors of Azkaban halted the train to search for Sirius Black at the start of Harry Potter's third year. Well, all that changed when the Express took its journey back to London for the Christmas hols.
Alissa Apparated onto the train, wearing her Death Eater weeds, with the Lestrange brothers directly behind her.
She immediately saw a group of first-years who started screaming and scrambling into the various cars to get out of their way. The din caught the attention of the older students, and Alissa immediately recognized Ginny Weasley and Neville Longbottom in the group running down the walkway opposite them.
Ginny yelled, "Stupefy!"
Alissa was already prepared with a nonverbal "Protego."
The rebound from Alissa's Shield Charm knocked many students backward. Another group came forward, trying to defend their territory. But they were no match for Alissa or the Lestrange brothers.
She let the Lestranges loose on them and grabbed the Weasley girl from off the floor. She was bleeding heavily from her head. She grabbed her handkerchief and held it to the girl's wound.
"Where is Luna Lovegood?" she demanded harshly.
"Nowhere. I won't tell you anything!" Ginny growled back at her.
"Fine," Alissa snapped. "I shall find her myself." She grabbed the girl by the hair and yanked her up. She dragged Ginny from car to car as she screamed and students shrunk back in terror from the sight. The youngest Weasley tried to wrench out of her grasp, but Alissa only gripped harder. She finally came to the correct car and threw Ginny onto the floor, sealing the room shut. Luna sat still and serenely in her seat. She was not going to fight. Alissa had a great deal of respect for her steady head. Ginny tried to attack her again, and Alissa performed a Petrificus Totallis Hex on her, grabbed the Lovegood girl, and Apparated back to Malfoy Manor.
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Alissa and Severus spent a couple of days together in the warm seclusion of her bed, rarely leaving the room, and just enjoying the warmth of each other's arms. It was all happening so fast now. He had not been pleased with how the Lovegood abduction played out. They had a horrible row over it, and Alissa told him he should have been grateful she had not performed the Cruciatus Curse on the Weasley girl.
Severus looked at her in disgust. "What has happened to you? Now you are condoning Unforgiveables against children!"
She stood up to him and said, "Firstly, that girl is no child. She is a woman and, if you haven't forgotten, she was Harry Potter's girlfriend. A woman faced with a potential threat towards the man she loves will do anything she must to protect him! Secondly, if she had the ability, she would have killed me. It was in her eyes. So, I think I demonstrated a great deal of restraint by not hurting her anymore than I had to!"
Severus sat down at his desk, wearily, unable to process the things she was telling him. This was an area with which he was not familiar. This was the type of primitive magic that was very powerful amongst only witches. It was the kind of ancient magic that saved Potter from the Dark Lord...the desire to protect the one a person loved most that led Lily to conjure such powerful magic that she had shattered the Dark Lord with its intensity. For such a powerful force to be directed to protect him was scary, but somewhat humbling. He knew Alissa loved him, but until this moment, he had not realized the depths to which she would go in order to protect him.
Alissa saw the conflict behind his black eyes, and she interrupted his thoughts softly, "I do not condone what the Carrows are doing at the school. I do not believe in taking unfair advantage against an opponent who is no match. These children had no ability to harness the magic needed to cast nonverbals in a time of crisis. But that Weasley girl, she has been saved by my hand more times than I can count. If it had not been for me, she would have been tortured, beaten, raped, and murdered. That is the depth of her willingness to fight for Potter. I, for one, cannot wait to fight with her, not against her."
Severus let out a breath. "Well, at least I know you are not completely insane. Just enough for this job," he said sarcastically, now in control of his emotions.
"The job of loving you and keeping you safe," Alissa said saucily as she exited his office through the Floo.
"Cheeky witch!" he snarled.
***
On New Years' Eve, word reached Severus that the Dark Lord, as Nagini, had failed to obtain Potter through the husk of Bathilda Babcock, a Godric's Hollow resident and author. Apparently, the Granger girl blew apart a great deal of the house in attempts to save Potter from Nagini's death grip. Severus spoke incessantly about the Trio he had once taught over the past year so much, Alissa felt as though she knew them intimately. That New Years', she and Severus sat curled up in his bedroom at Hogwarts, wrapped up in a warm blanket, in front of a toasty fire. All had been going well, and the evening was perfect for romance and making love. Then, suddenly, his Mark burned, and they hurriedly dressed and Flooed directly into Malfoy Manor.
She was going to wait outside when the Dark Lord caught sight of her and told her to come and join them. The news was shocking to Severus and Alissa but for different reasons.
"What now, my Lord, can I do to serve you?" Alissa said after a minute of silence.
"My dear child, you have been such a faithful servant. I will soon let you know of my plans. Until then, stay close. You may stay here or spend time with Severus as you wish, just know I may be calling you at a moment's notice."
They left the Dark Lord and went back to Hogwarts. As they went through the Floo into the Headmaster's office, Alissa felt a tremendous feeling of guilt. Was she doing enough? She had not contacted the Order in weeks. But she did not want to upset anyone with false hopes and shaky information. If only he would get on with things!
She slipped back into her nightgown and whined to Severus, "Why is he taking so damned long to go to Nurmengard?"
"Because Nurmengard is in a country that is not under the power of the Dark Lord. He has to find a way to infiltrate. I wouldn't worry about it, honestly. I don't think you will be joining him on that particular mission. The Dark Lord does not give boons on a whim, nor does he allow his henchmen freedom to roam about for no apparent reason. There is a reason he wants you here, Alissa. It just so happens we get to enjoy one another during the wait. But know this: he knows we are lovers and are taking the time you are here to pleasure ourselves. However, one day, Alissa, you will have to pay the fiddler. We dance so very well together," he whispered as he took her into his arms and kissed her.
The next days were again full of talk about the latest development on the progress, or lack thereof, on the Potter mission.
"Weasley is a strategist. From what I've been told, there is no one who can best him in Wizards's Chess. He is very loyal, but academically, as smart as a rock. However, he is a true soldier, the kind I would not mind by my side in battle. He is brave and fearless, but reckless. He takes incredible risks and does not care for the cost to himself. If he lives to see the end of the war, I shall be shocked," Severus said cruelly.
"Obviously, you have no use for Gryffindor courage?" she asked haughtily.
"Only if it is tempered with a bit of Slytherin. You used to be such a little cub, but then you went into the Serpent's nest and have become more of an anomaly than I first took you for. You are now definitely a cross-breed!" He smirked at his own comment.
Alissa shook her head at the smug bastard in bed with her. If she were a cross-breed, then so was he...for no true Slytherin would ever, ever do the work he did, or place their life in mortal peril for someone else, especially for someone not of their own.
Severus became uncomfortable with her gaze upon him. He started to feel uncovered and vulnerable, so he continued, "Miss Hermione Granger is the brains of the outfit. She is a powerful witch whose intellect has only been matched or surpassed by perhaps three or five witches and wizards in the last one hundred years. She is truly the most clever and intelligent witch of her generation. Now, that being said, she is the most annoying little chit I have ever met! She is an insufferable know-it-all that cannot stop from trying to prove herself over and over for her teachers. She is an insecure girl, I believe, because she is so bookish. Nevertheless, she has a fascinating mind. If you ever find yourself in dire straits and need a solution, she would be the one to go to. Insufferable, but she has the brains to back it up."
"Now, Potter, he is the most fortunate child in creation for having these two friends. They have saved his worthless hide time and again...as have I. The boy is fool-hardy, reactionary, and average at best. One thing I will say, although grudgingly, is that he is brave. Very brave and has proved it time and again over the years."
"So, our Miss Granger blew up Bathilda's house to save Potter? Well, this just makes a person want to rejoice!" he spat venomously. "What in the name of all that is holy was he doing out there? This is no time for a family reunion, or to cry over graves of people long dead!" he stopped talking at that point, his fury almost overtaking him.
Alissa watched as he paced up and down, running his hands through his hair. He was mumbling something about fools who wear their hearts on their sleeves. He was becoming increasingly stressed as the months slowly moved along. Alissa hated what it was doing to Severus. When was the nightmare to end?
A/N: Thanks again to my wonderful beta, MadBrilliant! Please review!
Up Next: The Death Eaters face Voldemort's wrath for allowing his prisoners to escape. Severus and Alissa are separated for a time and have an argument once they are together again.
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YAY! That rotten bastard is dead!!! Oh I hope Alissa and Snape can get together soon!!!!Yeah, I'm gettin' into this story big time. :)
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks! I hope you enjoy the ending:)Livvy
I think you've done an amazing job of working Alissa into canon. I am amazed again and again by the details you've included. I'm enjoying the story immensely. I'm glad Sev and Alissa have each other.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thank you so much for reviewing! I really appreciate it when an older story gets a review. I am actually doing a sequel based on Hermione and Remus in this alternative universe of this story. It was talked about at the end, but not indetail about Hermione and Remus getting together. I don't know if you are a HG/RL shipper, but if you are, watch out for it!Thanks,Livvy
Okay, so I cheated and came over here to finish the story I started reading on Occlumency. I could say it is because I prefer reading on the blue background, but really it that I wanted to read the rest of the story. Instant gratification takes too long and all that. I've had the best time reading this fic. I even liked the battle scenes, and that almost never happens. I like Remus and Hermione, I never could see her making a go of things with Ron. Hell, I liked everything about this story. It also gives me hope that your current WIP might turn out okay for Hermione and Snape.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Hey, thanks! I appreciate that. keep your mind open, and I hope you like the sharp turn I'm going to take the story in.Thanks for rviewing!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Hey, thanks! I appreciate that. keep your mind open, and I hope you like the sharp turn I'm going to take the story in.Thanks for rviewing!Livvy
WOW, Alissa is undoubtedly suitable for Severus, but oh uh, I don't want to cross this woman -- not even if I was Severus Snape! Will he be grateful that she saved him at all?
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Well, you'll have to read the story ;)Yes, she's pretty scary when she needs to be!Thanks for reviewing!
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Well, you'll have to read the story ;)Yes, she's pretty scary when she needs to be!Thanks for reviewing!
Wonderful work.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks you very much!Livvy
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Thanks you very much!Livvy
Oh, wonderful! And I look forward to reading about the Hermione/Remus romance!
Well done!
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thank you so much!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thank you so much!Livvy
Beautiful ending to a wonderful story. I especially like the Remus/Hermoine ending, it seemed fitting as she has always (in cannon) been very responsible and mature in her actions.Cant wait to read more of your stories.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks! I'll be starting the HG/RL story later this summer. I've got "Bookends" warming up in the queue now, and I'm working on another HG/SS fic right now. Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks! I'll be starting the HG/RL story later this summer. I've got "Bookends" warming up in the queue now, and I'm working on another HG/SS fic right now. Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
lovely story...........it was so different and interesting!!!!! in fact it was one of your story's that i enjoyed the most!!!!!! alissa was such an arrestin character!!!!!!!! am really looking forward to remus and hermione's story!!!!
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Excellent! I know people mostly go for HG/SS and Lord knows, I do like them best, however, I can't resist doing a HG/RL ship!Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Excellent! I know people mostly go for HG/SS and Lord knows, I do like them best, however, I can't resist doing a HG/RL ship!Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
I love the end, it was everything I asked for. I never read the GWTWsequel, but I watched miniseries, that must be why the line is so familiar to me.I've always preferred that 'beautiful friendship' line Bogart says to Claude Rains to the 'We'll always have Paris' line he says to Ingrid Bergman.I hope you will continue with your OFC stories. You create such wonderful OFCs and I always find an OFC much more interesting than Hermione.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks so much! For a while I will be working on my HG/SS fics, I do have in the back of my mind to make a one-shot I did for the DH Prompt Challenge into a multi-chapter. That has an OC named Laura in it. If you read it, any ideas on how to build on the story would be much appreicated!Thanks so much for staying through and reviewing so consistantly. It really touches my heart.Thanks!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks so much! For a while I will be working on my HG/SS fics, I do have in the back of my mind to make a one-shot I did for the DH Prompt Challenge into a multi-chapter. That has an OC named Laura in it. If you read it, any ideas on how to build on the story would be much appreicated!Thanks so much for staying through and reviewing so consistantly. It really touches my heart.Thanks!Livvy
Nice wrap up Livvy! :)
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Wow that was fast getting up ......... awesome and the story as expected a wonder pleasure. Thank You for sharing your talent with everyone who is fortunate enough to read your stories
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks so much! I hope you continue to like my fics. I have two more that I'll be posting so far and one that is swimming in my head! :)Thanks for continuing to review!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks so much! I hope you continue to like my fics. I have two more that I'll be posting so far and one that is swimming in my head! :)Thanks for continuing to review!Livvy
I didn't get a chance to read until tonight, I had surgery on my left hand two days ago and I've finally recovered from the anesthetic. They told me it would be done with a local, but they used a general so I've really been out of it for the past two days. They had both better survive and have a happy ever after, I've invested too much in them emotionally for them to die. Harry could have died and I would have been indifferent, but she let Snape die with disrespect. I want him to live respected by all. This is short, but I can only use one hand for typing right now.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Ouch! Hope you are feeling a little better. I hated the idsrespectful way she let Snape die. He deserved so much more.I do hope you like the ending! It will be posted as soon as it gets through the queue!Thanks,Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Ouch! Hope you are feeling a little better. I hated the idsrespectful way she let Snape die. He deserved so much more.I do hope you like the ending! It will be posted as soon as it gets through the queue!Thanks,Livvy
Zing! She got him at the end, didn't she?
Good girl, Alissa!
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
LOL! He'll be pondering that for a bitThanks,Livvy
anwser the danm question Severus!
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
LOL! He is the king of getting out of things, isn't he?Thanks,Livvy
I really like the point she made at the end, which was more difficult being the adorer or the adored. For Severus I think it's actually being the adored one. As she said, he was in control when he was the adorer but he has no control of her adoration of him.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Yes, that is going to really bother him and cause a rift between them. He's going to have to deal with it.Thanks!Livvy
I have a corection for you to make. Bathilda's last name is Bagshot, not Babcock.
Things are moving slowly and I can see that it's putting a lot of stress on them both. Fortunately, you are giving me information about what happened at Hogwarts and what happened when Luna was abducted, that's a lot more than JKR did during that period in the book.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks for pointing out the mistake! I'm glad you're still liking the story!Livvy
I've been trying to place the time frame of this chapter so I went to HPL and looked at the timeline for DH but the date Gregorovitch was murdered wasn't there. I figure that it must be late Autumn in this chapter. I can really understand now why Alissafeels so impatient with the trio and their search. I've always thought they went way offtrack when they decided to search for the Deathly Hallows.If they had concentrated on the Horcruxes first and then looked for the Hallows the battle would probably have been fought sooner and 'He Who I Found Most Tiresome' have been permanently vanquished sooner. I've often wondered why Dumbledore never told Harry about the Elder wand, that was the most important thing he kept secret from Harry and i don't know why.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Well, Dumbledore knew from experience that the Hallows could get a person bogged down in getting them and keeping them for one's own power. To think you could bring your loved one's from the dead with the resurrection stone alone! It's like the Mirror of Erised. The Hallows can suck the life out of you with it's promise of glory and all of what you desire most.I thought Dumbledore was really stupid in not preparing Harry for his quest. Either that or JKRowling really screwed the pooch (which I think she did anyway by killing off Snape) but anyway- I can see why it would be important for Harry to know of the Hallows existence, because that was what Voldemort was trying to get. Harry already possessed two out of three and the Elder Wand was supossed to go to Snape- he REALLY screwed the pooch on that one.DH was a huge disappointment for me. I literally thought someone was playing an evil joke when I started reading it. Halfway through I was like, "This is just stupid!" I want to know what's going on at Hogwarts!Anyway, I hope you keep liking the story!Livvy
Response from Trickie Woo (Reviewer)
I agree with you, DH was a big disappointment. I found most of the trio's adventures to be very secondary to what was going on at Hogwarts. Heck, I never cared much about those three anyway. Neville was the kid I cared most about, and then Luna. Snape was the crux of the whole series, the entire saga turned on whether he was good or bad and she not only killed him off, she did it in the most disrespectful and ridiculous way. She couldn't even be bothered to have 'HW' throw and Avade Kedavra at him. She has him killed by a giant snake in a bubble.BTW, am I right in my guess about the timeframe of the chapter?
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Yes, it was important to show how dragging the time was, the inactivity of the three of them in that damn forest! I was told it was to be compared to the wandering in the desert in the Old Testement by the Israelites. Now, I understand Jewish Numerology and there are many references to the 40 days and 40 nights, four days, also 40 years signifying a time of "probabtion" for the kinks in the personality of the person or persons involved to be worked out. I could see the point. I couldn't say if they were out in the Forest of Dean for 40 bleeding days or what-not, but I just thought it was a real waste of time. I agree totally on Snape being the crux of the books. He was the most important person next to Harry Potter. So, he got the shaft in life and he got the shaft in death. Pretty rubbish death!I would have LOVED to have seen Neville's metamorphasis from ne'er-do-well to a brave leader of a radical underground movement. Luna is always a riot! Anything with Luna is awesome and I LOVED the girl they got to play her in the movie.
Wow. That was intense!
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
I really wanted to show a side to thier relationship that wasn't just sweetness and light. Their encounters have been so tame thus far, and that is just not in character for Snape, at least not all the time. So, I wanted to show he had a partner that could indulge him in his darker side and not be put off by it.Thanks!Livvy
Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)
Well, and she's pretty dark, too. I think it's a valid point and you did a great job.
nice on the Rowle twist......and having Draco do it under the imperius Curse ... just goes to show that Draco (pain that he may be at times) is not his father....again impressive and awaiting more.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thank you! I thought it was important to point that side of Draco out, that it was canon that he was forced to do things under the Imperius Curse.I also wanted to show how Alissa dealt with the carnage around her. She isn't a machine that is unfeeling. Unfortunately, dissociating isn't the healthiest thing either!Livvy
I appreciate that the chapter was so fast paced, I never like to read death, gore, and violence. I hope you keep the pace up and get past all of that much more quickly than JKR did so we get to the really important part and find out if Snape and Alissa survive and can make a future together..When I read DH last July I found that for me tha climax took place in the Shrieking Shack and the denouement was in 'The Prince's Tale'. After that I was indifferent to what happened to the other characters and only read the last few chapters out of habit.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
The Prince's tale was really the chapter that made all the other books make sense. It was the glue to everything that was supporting Harry. THere will be a very dramatic and climactic later with the battle and what happens in the shack. I hope you like I do that.Thanks,Livvy
This was a well-written chapter. You really made me feel for Alissa. Very original premise! Looking forward to more!
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thank you! BTW, I'm enjoying 'Anthem'!Livvy
Response from emmeline33 (Reviewer)
Thanks, Livvy! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
I tried to review this chapter after i read it last night but I couldn't get it posted. TPP must have been doing some more work on the system.This was such a sad chapter to read. I always wondered why Rowling had to put anything more in DH except that Charity Burbage was killed by Death Eaters.I do hope that things will be better for them by the end and that they survive to have a future together.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
I thought it was important to see how it is on the flipside, where Snape thinks he can't be loved because of the horrible things he has had to do, so I wanted him to be the one to accept the insecurities of another instead of being the one accepted or rejected because of his own insecurities
It was an interesting insight on our characters.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks!
Even to this point, he still thought of Lily first, and Alissa still loved him. So powerful. And of course, at the end, he finally loves her.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Yes, from now on it is a new story, major turning point. However, memories of Lily will still linger and cause difficulties.Livvy
I'm happy that he finally has accepted her love and allowed himself to love her. I've never followed the cult of St. Lily. If she had really been a good person she would have accepted his apology and remained his friend. Anybody would have realized that he would lash out at the first person who came near and said things he didn't mean at all. She didn't have to fall in love with him, but she ceratinly should have remained his friend.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Preach it sister! I agree. I'm glad you are liking how the story is turning out.Livvy