Gregorovitch
Chapter 11 of 18
livvy6Alissa and Severus spend time together after her mission to find the elusive Gregorovitch comes to its conclusion.
ReviewedA/N: So you know, the later part of this chapter contains SEXUALLY EXPLICIT MATERIAL. It is all consensual, so no worries of abuse! However, if this bothers you, you may want to not read it. It is at the end of this chapter.
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What an unmitigated disaster! She could have throttled Jugson for his ineptitude! Not only did his information lead them to the wrong house, but then she had to watch as the Dark Lord killed the nice German family who had claimed they didn't know where Gregorovitch was. Alissa would have just let them go, but unfortunately, she wasn't in charge! Nevertheless, when they did finally catch up to the retired wand maker, Alissa levitated him upside down with magical ropes as the Dark Lord interrogated him about the Elder Wand.
He looked every bit the part of Father Christmas with his white beard and plump belly. He begged fearsomely for his life and swore he no longer had the Elder Wand, claiming that it had been stolen years ago.
"Who was the thief? Do not lie to Lord Voldemort!" the Dark Lord said coldly.
"PLEASE...I beg you, I don't know...he was young...he stole it from me!" he cried out in terror.
Then the Dark Lord, skilled in the art of Legilimency, easily entered his mind and saw all he needed. He nodded to Alissa, and she stepped up and performed the Killing Curse on him. They Apparated back to the manor, and the Dark Lord gathered his inner circle of trusted servants and relayed to them what he had seen in Gregorovitch's mind.
Alissa was dismissed as the Dark Lord summoned his inner circle. It would have bothered anyone else to have been shunned from the inner circle after all the hard work she had done, but Alissa had no such aspirations. She didn't want to experience him rooting around in her mind ever again!
Severus came back to her bedroom late and relayed what the Dark Lord had told him. It had been the infamous Grindelwald that the Dark Lord had seen in Gregorovitch's mind. He did not tell Alissa all of the conversation. It was just as well. Her Occlumency skills were weak at best, and it did nothing to aid her cause to know things that could only get her killed. Or himself, for that matter. He decided to go for a walk to organize his thoughts and replay the conversation in his mind as Alissa took a long hot bath after her lengthy journey. It had been a disturbing conversation...
"I saw the young Grindelwald. All this time, he was safely tucked away in that prison! I shall be taking my leave again. Severus will be in charge of Hogwarts. Yaxley, Rebastan, Rodolphus, Bellatrix, I will need you to stay on top of the Ministry, to make sure they are taking care of the Mudbloods. I shall be taking our Miss Devon with me. I must say, Severus, she was very well trained by Igor. It was probably the only capable assignment he ever carried out."
"My Lord?" Severus asked, feigning confusion.
"Igor worked tirelessly after his release from Azkaban to ingratiate himself back into the good graces of my followers. He told Macnair of a young woman who was extremely skilled in Defense and had a pull towards the Dark. Igor, imbecile that he was, couldn't get past what his dick wanted...not that he ever succeeded, the stupid fool! She was, from what I had been told, a very impressive warrior. Her skill, finesse, fluid of motion... all exquisite. Once I gained my human form and met the woman, I watched a sampling of her work before torturing her for her mentor's treachery. I had to make sure she was not going to turn on me as her master had."
"But what I found to be interesting was that she reminded me of you, Severus. Her style of dueling, her demeanor, she was very cold and detached. She had nothing, no one to turn to, so she swore her life to mine...to serve me without question and she has done an acceptable job for as young as she is, and being a sane female, she lacks bloodlust. She unfortunately will never be a Bellatrix, but she is efficient, where Bella tends to draw out matters. It does become a bit tiresome after a while. I did some simple calculations when Pettigrew told me of your relationship with her when she was but a child. I knew you must have bedded her, as well, as Pettigrew deduced from his inept brain that she had imprinted herself upon you. I, of course, entered her mind and found that I was right."
"Severus, she is dedicated to you, and that makes her extremely valuable to me. She will kill for you, and I am most pleased that she has such singleness of mind. You are my most trusted ally, and that makes her my slave. She did not let me down with Gregorovitch. She deserves a boon before she accompanies me to Nurmangard. It would be nice if you would give her some comfort and pleasure before she accompanies me again. So, take a day from your duties. Have that old harridan, McGonagall, take over for a day or two."
Severus was elated. "As you wish, my Lord. After all, she deserves an ample reward for her faithfulness. I shall endeavor to continue to make her most agreeable to your will, my Lord."
The gift of a boon usually was for the one granted to ask, but the Dark Lord had already calculated a plan in his mind for Alissa, Snape was sure. The Dark Lord was by nature not a giving master. He was not kind for the sake of kindness...no, he had a plan. He just wondered if he would find out in time. He also prayed Alissa would be kept safe.
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So, it was only after the death of one of the greatest wand makers of Europe that Alissa could finally relax and consider the Dark Lord's next move. She could only hope Potter and his little band were moving along with their hunt for the Horcruxes. It was just coming down to a race, and not a fair race at that! She had to keep her horses back and urge Potter's along. Sometimes she just wanted to scream at Dumbledore. He had not explained his mission thoroughly enough to the young boy.
She was deep in thought in her silk robe after a nice soak going over her thoughts when Severus finally came in. She sighed deeply with contentment. He was the only person to whom she could confide her fears, the only one who would understand. She liked to think he felt the same way.
She was terrified to go to Nurmengard with the Dark Lord to interrogate Grindelwald. She didn't even know when it would be, only that she would be going when the Dark Lord summoned her. She climbed into his lap, and they wrapped their arms around each other, remaining silent about her fears while Severus told her of the goings on at the school.
"The school has become a shell of what it once was!" he fumed. "Hogwarts could boast its superior standing to the whole of the Wizarding world. Now, it has become a castle of horrors," he finished with a whisper.
She opened their connection, afraid of being overheard.
What is really going on there?
The bloody Carrows! Brother and sister...they teach Dark Arts and Muggle Studies. The class used to be "Defense Against the Dark Arts," now it's just "Dark Arts."
Sounds like Durmstrang.
I'm sure! But what is the most disturbing is that the students are forced to use the Unforgiveables upon one another. Also, the Cruciatus Curse has become the standard punishment for rule-breakers. I detest it! I detest child torture; at least an adult has a fully developed brain to psychologically withstand the consequences and process what has happened to them. But a child, who has yet to grow into their magic, it can only serve to disrupt and permanently harm the magic growing and changing within them!
There must be a great deal of it going around.
You have no idea! His eyes grew hollow and deadened as he continued. There is a small faction of "rebels" at the school. Neville Longbottom, a boy I never in my wildest dreams thought would be a leader, has led this ragtag group to subvert and hinder the Carrows at every turn. They had beaten him and the other sixth and seventh year Gryffindor students, plus a couple of Ravenclaws and a group of Hufflepuffs that have joined the rebellion. They kept the name they used under Umbridge's regime..."Dumbledore's Army"...damn fools! They make my job harder, but at least they keep some hope alive.
What exactly have they done?
Longbottom, Ginny Weasley, and Luna Lovegood, the daughter of that idiot, Xeno Lovegood, the owner of the Quibbler, lead the group of dissenters. Weasley and Longbottom broke into my office in an attempt to steal Godric Gryffindor's Sword! They were caught, and it quickly became a precarious situation as to how to go about punishing them. It was very difficult to handle their punishment, but I got them detention with our Gamekeeper, Hagrid, who loves Potter like he were his own, so I knew they would be in good hands. It was considered "soft", but I have a promise to keep to Dumbledore that I would watch over the children. To do that and keep my cover as a true Death Eater is extremely trying. I only hope they realize that it was only because of their blood status as pure-bloods that kept them from further harm. If they had been half-bloods, I shudder to even think!
His lover watched silently as he tried to relax. He was overtaxed and weary. So many times Alissa had wished she could be there with him, to comfort him, to make love to him. She missed his touch so badly it hurt. The bond they had created over the summer had truly knitted their souls together. She could feel his longing for her, and she was positive he could feel her need for him. Every night, she prayed that the next day would be one more that brought her closer to being with her love without the Dark Lord looming over their shoulder.
Now he was here, and she went limp in his arms as he carried her to his bed and made love to her. She was so exhausted, but could not stop her body from responding to his kisses and touches. He caressed her body with his, letting all his fears, doubts, and anger wash away as he lost himself in the sensations only this one woman could provide, and they gently came together.
She let exhaustion overtake her soon afterward. He watched her sleep, and when she awoke, he had dinner waiting for her. She sat naked in their bed and devoured her food. She then confided to Severus her fears about the upcoming trip to Nurmengard.
"I'm so scared he will try Legilimency on me...I have tried and tried, Severus. But I cannot master Occlumency. I just can't!"
"Well, you had better start creating some false memories, for if he invades your mind, all will be for naught!" he said coldly.
She suddenly lost her appetite. She pushed the tray away, and her face fell into a dark look of dread.
Severus took the tray from her and joined her on the bed, wrapping them both in his robes. He held her and spoke quietly. "You keep doing what he asks, and you will have nothing to fear. Absolute obedience. Without question, without hesitation. He has more on his mind than wondering what is rattling around in yours. He knows how much you love me, how dedicated you are. He feels secure. So, keep your head down, your pretty mouth shut, and do not fear. All will be well. After this, there will be no more of these ridiculous jaunts around Europe," he said reassuringly.
She smiled that perfect smile up at him and said seductively, "I know of one sure fire way to keep my mouth occupied,"
He raised an eyebrow, and she drew up on her hands and knees, backing down towards his cock. His eyes followed her red-tipped nipples, now brushing against the rough fabric of his trousers. She moaned in pleasure and quickly released his erection from his pants. He watched as she took him into her sweet mouth, and he could not stop himself from pumping his hips up into her. She tried to use her hands, but he grabbed them and held them firmly down.
"No, my sweet, you use that lovely mouth of yours, like the good little slut you are," he growled lustfully.
She complied and teased him mercilessly as he groaned out his pleasure.
"I want to come on your face," he said darkly. He flipped her over and knelt over her chest, his cock jaunting heavily in front of her face. He held her head and fucked her perfect mouth.
"Sweet Merlin, you are better than any whore I've ever had! My God, you are amazing. I want to fill you with my cum until you choke on it!"
She loved it when he went wild and spoke filthy words to her. He finally climaxed and spurted his seed over her face and neck. He fell backwards, and she turned over and cast a simple "Tergeo" cleansing charm on her face and neck. As she did, she flashed her arse to him, and he grabbed her hips and dragged her towards him, her legs spread above his lap. He tested the wetness between her legs and found her dripping with need. He plunged his fingers deep inside and found that heavenly spot that made her lose all decorum and control. He stroked her sensuously as she bucked and screamed. He rose up and wrapped his arm around her waist, pinning her back to his chest. He slid his hand upwards to capture one hardened nipple between his thumb and forefinger as he pumped his fingers into her core. She shrieked and convulsed over and over. He wasn't going to let her rest until he was hard again, and then he would take her how he had always wanted. She loves the dark? Well, by God, she will have it! he thought evilly.
When he finally become hard again, he flipped her over and pounded into her as she screamed and cried. He was hurting her, but there was pleasure in the pain as he grabbed her thighs, lifted her up, and began pounding into her cervix. She gushed a torrent of juices around him, and she began to whimper his name. He finally released into her with a mighty roar that surely reverberated throughout the entire manor. He collapsed onto her, and they slept hard, sated, and in complete peace.
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A/N: Continued thanks to my beta, MadBrilliant, and to all who review! Parts of this chapter were taken from JKR's Deathly Hallows. Many thanks to Ms. Rowling for her work!
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YAY! That rotten bastard is dead!!! Oh I hope Alissa and Snape can get together soon!!!!Yeah, I'm gettin' into this story big time. :)
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks! I hope you enjoy the ending:)Livvy
I think you've done an amazing job of working Alissa into canon. I am amazed again and again by the details you've included. I'm enjoying the story immensely. I'm glad Sev and Alissa have each other.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thank you so much for reviewing! I really appreciate it when an older story gets a review. I am actually doing a sequel based on Hermione and Remus in this alternative universe of this story. It was talked about at the end, but not indetail about Hermione and Remus getting together. I don't know if you are a HG/RL shipper, but if you are, watch out for it!Thanks,Livvy
Okay, so I cheated and came over here to finish the story I started reading on Occlumency. I could say it is because I prefer reading on the blue background, but really it that I wanted to read the rest of the story. Instant gratification takes too long and all that. I've had the best time reading this fic. I even liked the battle scenes, and that almost never happens. I like Remus and Hermione, I never could see her making a go of things with Ron. Hell, I liked everything about this story. It also gives me hope that your current WIP might turn out okay for Hermione and Snape.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Hey, thanks! I appreciate that. keep your mind open, and I hope you like the sharp turn I'm going to take the story in.Thanks for rviewing!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Hey, thanks! I appreciate that. keep your mind open, and I hope you like the sharp turn I'm going to take the story in.Thanks for rviewing!Livvy
WOW, Alissa is undoubtedly suitable for Severus, but oh uh, I don't want to cross this woman -- not even if I was Severus Snape! Will he be grateful that she saved him at all?
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Well, you'll have to read the story ;)Yes, she's pretty scary when she needs to be!Thanks for reviewing!
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Well, you'll have to read the story ;)Yes, she's pretty scary when she needs to be!Thanks for reviewing!
Wonderful work.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks you very much!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks you very much!Livvy
Oh, wonderful! And I look forward to reading about the Hermione/Remus romance!
Well done!
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thank you so much!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thank you so much!Livvy
Beautiful ending to a wonderful story. I especially like the Remus/Hermoine ending, it seemed fitting as she has always (in cannon) been very responsible and mature in her actions.Cant wait to read more of your stories.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks! I'll be starting the HG/RL story later this summer. I've got "Bookends" warming up in the queue now, and I'm working on another HG/SS fic right now. Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks! I'll be starting the HG/RL story later this summer. I've got "Bookends" warming up in the queue now, and I'm working on another HG/SS fic right now. Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
lovely story...........it was so different and interesting!!!!! in fact it was one of your story's that i enjoyed the most!!!!!! alissa was such an arrestin character!!!!!!!! am really looking forward to remus and hermione's story!!!!
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Excellent! I know people mostly go for HG/SS and Lord knows, I do like them best, however, I can't resist doing a HG/RL ship!Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Excellent! I know people mostly go for HG/SS and Lord knows, I do like them best, however, I can't resist doing a HG/RL ship!Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
I love the end, it was everything I asked for. I never read the GWTWsequel, but I watched miniseries, that must be why the line is so familiar to me.I've always preferred that 'beautiful friendship' line Bogart says to Claude Rains to the 'We'll always have Paris' line he says to Ingrid Bergman.I hope you will continue with your OFC stories. You create such wonderful OFCs and I always find an OFC much more interesting than Hermione.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks so much! For a while I will be working on my HG/SS fics, I do have in the back of my mind to make a one-shot I did for the DH Prompt Challenge into a multi-chapter. That has an OC named Laura in it. If you read it, any ideas on how to build on the story would be much appreicated!Thanks so much for staying through and reviewing so consistantly. It really touches my heart.Thanks!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks so much! For a while I will be working on my HG/SS fics, I do have in the back of my mind to make a one-shot I did for the DH Prompt Challenge into a multi-chapter. That has an OC named Laura in it. If you read it, any ideas on how to build on the story would be much appreicated!Thanks so much for staying through and reviewing so consistantly. It really touches my heart.Thanks!Livvy
Nice wrap up Livvy! :)
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Wow that was fast getting up ......... awesome and the story as expected a wonder pleasure. Thank You for sharing your talent with everyone who is fortunate enough to read your stories
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks so much! I hope you continue to like my fics. I have two more that I'll be posting so far and one that is swimming in my head! :)Thanks for continuing to review!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks so much! I hope you continue to like my fics. I have two more that I'll be posting so far and one that is swimming in my head! :)Thanks for continuing to review!Livvy
I didn't get a chance to read until tonight, I had surgery on my left hand two days ago and I've finally recovered from the anesthetic. They told me it would be done with a local, but they used a general so I've really been out of it for the past two days. They had both better survive and have a happy ever after, I've invested too much in them emotionally for them to die. Harry could have died and I would have been indifferent, but she let Snape die with disrespect. I want him to live respected by all. This is short, but I can only use one hand for typing right now.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Ouch! Hope you are feeling a little better. I hated the idsrespectful way she let Snape die. He deserved so much more.I do hope you like the ending! It will be posted as soon as it gets through the queue!Thanks,Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Ouch! Hope you are feeling a little better. I hated the idsrespectful way she let Snape die. He deserved so much more.I do hope you like the ending! It will be posted as soon as it gets through the queue!Thanks,Livvy
Zing! She got him at the end, didn't she?
Good girl, Alissa!
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
LOL! He'll be pondering that for a bitThanks,Livvy
anwser the danm question Severus!
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
LOL! He is the king of getting out of things, isn't he?Thanks,Livvy
I really like the point she made at the end, which was more difficult being the adorer or the adored. For Severus I think it's actually being the adored one. As she said, he was in control when he was the adorer but he has no control of her adoration of him.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Yes, that is going to really bother him and cause a rift between them. He's going to have to deal with it.Thanks!Livvy
I have a corection for you to make. Bathilda's last name is Bagshot, not Babcock.
Things are moving slowly and I can see that it's putting a lot of stress on them both. Fortunately, you are giving me information about what happened at Hogwarts and what happened when Luna was abducted, that's a lot more than JKR did during that period in the book.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks for pointing out the mistake! I'm glad you're still liking the story!Livvy
I've been trying to place the time frame of this chapter so I went to HPL and looked at the timeline for DH but the date Gregorovitch was murdered wasn't there. I figure that it must be late Autumn in this chapter. I can really understand now why Alissafeels so impatient with the trio and their search. I've always thought they went way offtrack when they decided to search for the Deathly Hallows.If they had concentrated on the Horcruxes first and then looked for the Hallows the battle would probably have been fought sooner and 'He Who I Found Most Tiresome' have been permanently vanquished sooner. I've often wondered why Dumbledore never told Harry about the Elder wand, that was the most important thing he kept secret from Harry and i don't know why.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Well, Dumbledore knew from experience that the Hallows could get a person bogged down in getting them and keeping them for one's own power. To think you could bring your loved one's from the dead with the resurrection stone alone! It's like the Mirror of Erised. The Hallows can suck the life out of you with it's promise of glory and all of what you desire most.I thought Dumbledore was really stupid in not preparing Harry for his quest. Either that or JKRowling really screwed the pooch (which I think she did anyway by killing off Snape) but anyway- I can see why it would be important for Harry to know of the Hallows existence, because that was what Voldemort was trying to get. Harry already possessed two out of three and the Elder Wand was supossed to go to Snape- he REALLY screwed the pooch on that one.DH was a huge disappointment for me. I literally thought someone was playing an evil joke when I started reading it. Halfway through I was like, "This is just stupid!" I want to know what's going on at Hogwarts!Anyway, I hope you keep liking the story!Livvy
Response from Trickie Woo (Reviewer)
I agree with you, DH was a big disappointment. I found most of the trio's adventures to be very secondary to what was going on at Hogwarts. Heck, I never cared much about those three anyway. Neville was the kid I cared most about, and then Luna. Snape was the crux of the whole series, the entire saga turned on whether he was good or bad and she not only killed him off, she did it in the most disrespectful and ridiculous way. She couldn't even be bothered to have 'HW' throw and Avade Kedavra at him. She has him killed by a giant snake in a bubble.BTW, am I right in my guess about the timeframe of the chapter?
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Yes, it was important to show how dragging the time was, the inactivity of the three of them in that damn forest! I was told it was to be compared to the wandering in the desert in the Old Testement by the Israelites. Now, I understand Jewish Numerology and there are many references to the 40 days and 40 nights, four days, also 40 years signifying a time of "probabtion" for the kinks in the personality of the person or persons involved to be worked out. I could see the point. I couldn't say if they were out in the Forest of Dean for 40 bleeding days or what-not, but I just thought it was a real waste of time. I agree totally on Snape being the crux of the books. He was the most important person next to Harry Potter. So, he got the shaft in life and he got the shaft in death. Pretty rubbish death!I would have LOVED to have seen Neville's metamorphasis from ne'er-do-well to a brave leader of a radical underground movement. Luna is always a riot! Anything with Luna is awesome and I LOVED the girl they got to play her in the movie.
Wow. That was intense!
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
I really wanted to show a side to thier relationship that wasn't just sweetness and light. Their encounters have been so tame thus far, and that is just not in character for Snape, at least not all the time. So, I wanted to show he had a partner that could indulge him in his darker side and not be put off by it.Thanks!Livvy
Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)
Well, and she's pretty dark, too. I think it's a valid point and you did a great job.
nice on the Rowle twist......and having Draco do it under the imperius Curse ... just goes to show that Draco (pain that he may be at times) is not his father....again impressive and awaiting more.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thank you! I thought it was important to point that side of Draco out, that it was canon that he was forced to do things under the Imperius Curse.I also wanted to show how Alissa dealt with the carnage around her. She isn't a machine that is unfeeling. Unfortunately, dissociating isn't the healthiest thing either!Livvy
I appreciate that the chapter was so fast paced, I never like to read death, gore, and violence. I hope you keep the pace up and get past all of that much more quickly than JKR did so we get to the really important part and find out if Snape and Alissa survive and can make a future together..When I read DH last July I found that for me tha climax took place in the Shrieking Shack and the denouement was in 'The Prince's Tale'. After that I was indifferent to what happened to the other characters and only read the last few chapters out of habit.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
The Prince's tale was really the chapter that made all the other books make sense. It was the glue to everything that was supporting Harry. THere will be a very dramatic and climactic later with the battle and what happens in the shack. I hope you like I do that.Thanks,Livvy
This was a well-written chapter. You really made me feel for Alissa. Very original premise! Looking forward to more!
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thank you! BTW, I'm enjoying 'Anthem'!Livvy
Response from emmeline33 (Reviewer)
Thanks, Livvy! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
I tried to review this chapter after i read it last night but I couldn't get it posted. TPP must have been doing some more work on the system.This was such a sad chapter to read. I always wondered why Rowling had to put anything more in DH except that Charity Burbage was killed by Death Eaters.I do hope that things will be better for them by the end and that they survive to have a future together.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
I thought it was important to see how it is on the flipside, where Snape thinks he can't be loved because of the horrible things he has had to do, so I wanted him to be the one to accept the insecurities of another instead of being the one accepted or rejected because of his own insecurities
It was an interesting insight on our characters.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks!
Even to this point, he still thought of Lily first, and Alissa still loved him. So powerful. And of course, at the end, he finally loves her.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Yes, from now on it is a new story, major turning point. However, memories of Lily will still linger and cause difficulties.Livvy
I'm happy that he finally has accepted her love and allowed himself to love her. I've never followed the cult of St. Lily. If she had really been a good person she would have accepted his apology and remained his friend. Anybody would have realized that he would lash out at the first person who came near and said things he didn't mean at all. She didn't have to fall in love with him, but she ceratinly should have remained his friend.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Preach it sister! I agree. I'm glad you are liking how the story is turning out.Livvy