Changing of the Guard
Chapter 10 of 18
livvy6Alissa and Minerva meet for a conversation. Bill and Fleur's wedding is ruined by the presence of Death Eaters. Alissa interrogates the Weasleys and helps Arthur to get word to Harry. Unfortunately, they have no idea that she is helping them.
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Alissa met with Minerva two days before Harry Potter's transfer to the Burrow. They had much to discuss, but mostly, Minerva wanted to expound on her vitriol against Severus Snape.
"How do you live with it, Alissa?" she seethed. "You worked with him, even were lovers once...rumor has it. How can you live with such a betrayal? Aren't you afraid of Severus revealing your true loyalties to him?"
Alissa rubbed her forehead. "Minerva, I've seen things that were so horrible in my thirty years on this earth, honestly, nothing can truly shock me anymore. I've seen too much death, too much backstabbing amongst friends and comrades...all the worst of humanity. But I want to urge you to remember what Dumbledore always said, 'Not everything is what it seems.'"
The old witch looked exhausted. There was so much to do, and the Order had fallen into shambles. Grief and pain were so strong and palpable that it all seemed unreal. But the courageous Scottish lady would not let it overcome her. There were decisions to be made.
Alissa hated breaking the news to her, but she had no other alternative. "I can't be a part of the transfer, Minerva. There are more than enough Order members to do this. And besides, my just showing up, not being known by anyone, will only throw around suspicion and doubt, not to mention risking my cover! Focusing on the overall mission is paramount. At any rate, I don't know how I can be protecting Potter and trying to help Tom kill him at the same time!"
"I understand," the other woman answered stiffly. "What are we going to do now?" Her huge eyes were so lost, so full of questions, Alissa wished she could just blurt out everything, but she would never believe it, even if she did tell her.
"I have Gregorovitch to find, and unfortunately I will have to execute him." Alissa shook her head. "It's all such waste. I must kill a man just because he once owned that thrice damned wand! And he isn't even the one who has it now!" she exclaimed and then damned herself for spilling that piece of information.
"Why all the running around then?" Minerva asked suspiciously.
"Because I have to wait for Potter to understand. I must wait for all the Horcruxes to be found and then lure the snake here. Here, Minerva! Here is where the Final Battle shall be. I don't know how much contact I will have with you. You may not hear from me often, but know that I do understand what is happening and what shall happen." She reached over and grasped the older witch's hand in a gesture of comfort.
She almost stopped herself, but she needed at least one person in the Order to be aware and prepared.
"Minerva, the ministry will fall and this school..." she looked around the office as she said the words, "will fall to Tom. The school shall go on, although restrictions will be enforced. The Muggleborns will be forced out and must be hidden. They will all be made to register with the new regime. They will not be coming back to Hogwarts. Dark times, my friend. Dark times are coming. But we will prevail. We will!" she said adamantly.
"You are positive the ministry will fall?" the older witch asked incredulously.
"A coup d'état, Minerva. The wheels are in motion and have been for a while. But don't lose heart. I am still working for the Order and shall do my best to help you."
She embraced the older witch and stood to depart. "Minerva, there will be things you will hear; there will be things I must do, but please always remember my allegiance will always be to Dumbledore and this school."
"Goodbye."
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Alissa was at the Manor when the Dark Lord and the Death Eaters returned from the attack on Potter. The Dark Lord was enraged, and he quickly raced down to the dungeons. Alissa closed her eyes. Ollivander. Of course the bloody wand would not work! When would Potter get the damn Horcruxes and end this madness?
Severus was slumped in a chair, his face exhausted and grim. The ear-piercing screams started to emanate from the dungeons. He was dirty from the battle and exhausted. Alissa approached him and opened the connection between them.
What happened, Severus?
Potter is safe, for now. Moody is dead. I tried to stop George Weasley from being killed, but I failed. I hit him in the head and blew his ear off. I don't know if he's alive or dead. Mundungus Fletcher disappeared, that bloody coward!
Come, let me clean you up. Perhaps the Dark Lord will let us have the month before the term begins.
No, Alissa, remember, the attack on the ministry. One week and Tom will own the ministry and Hogwarts, just as he has always wanted. Besides, you have to go get that blasted wand-maker. He had better stop torturing Ollivander or there shall be no one to make the caliber of wands witches and wizards need. That bastard is completely psychotic!
I warned you!
Severus wrapped his arm around Alissa, and together they walked up to his room.
"Let's both have a bath. I think I deserve some extra special attention," he said slyly.
"Always, my love," she replied. "Always."
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They sat relaxing in the tub. In no time, Alissa was straddling Severus after giving him a thorough scrubbing. They kissed and enjoyed the nearness of each other. Finally, Severus spoke of the latest news.
"Thicknesse has been placed under the Imperius Curse. He will be replacing Scrimgeour once the Dark Lord makes his move," he informed her.
Alissa closed her eyes, "Thicknesse! Damn, I can't keep track of all these people!"
Severus smirked as he tickled her pert nose with his own. "Well, my dear, after you disposed of Madame Bones, Pius Thicknesse became the Head of the Magical Law Enforcement Squad. Now, he has been chosen to be the new Minister of Magic when we...oh, my apologies...you assassinate Scrimgeour," he said with dripping sarcasm.
"Such cheek!" Alissa teased as she smacked him on the chest. "I shall have to punish you for that, Headmaster Snape. Now that you are the Headmaster, I shall be the only one to dispense punishments upon you," she said huskily as she went to capture his mouth with her own. "Well, at least punishments that you will enjoy," she added darkly.
"Mmmm," he replied. He broke the kiss and said wistfully, "If it were not for the fact Scimgeour is the most odious wretch in the Wizarding world, I'd actually feel bad for his death."
"Who placed Thicknesse under the Imperius?"
"Yaxley."
Alissa snorted in derision. Then she flashed her perfect smile and changed the subject. "Are you ready, Headmaster, to take your post?"
He raised an eyebrow. "No, I am not! I am not looking forward to all the happy horseshit that comes with the job, although it does have its rewards and honors. I am not looking forward to having the majority of my staff wishing for my death. As it is, I shall have to employ a house-elf to taste all my food before I eat it! But, what is worse is being parted from you. Promise me you will be cautious!" he demanded.
"I promise," she whispered as she began to move seductively around his semi-erect penis. Soon he was groaning and she felt the hot stiffness against her core. She sighed as she slid over him and welcomed him inside. Soon the war was lost to them again. All the roles and deceptions, the fears and the potential losses, all was forgotten...
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A week later, when all the good and noble were celebrating the wedding of a young and brave Wizarding couple, Minister Scrimgeour sat in seclusion, awaiting the moment for Lord Voldemort to make his move. When the fighting outside his office began, he was prepared. He was faced with a black-haired witch who was obviously the leader of the group. He braced himself for the torture to come, but she refused to allow it. Before the others could disobey her, he was dead.
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Immediately after Scrimgeour's death, Alissa and her band of Death Eaters Apparated to the Burrow. She took the time to hold the group back far enough and cast a Disillusionment spell around them. She called Draco forward and had him point out the people he knew. She only knew the Order members by name, but not by face. She needed to know who was who so she could stave off any deaths. She wished she could have had longer. Draco had only gotten as far as Granger, the Weasley twins, his parents, Molly and Arthur, Tonks, Lupin (whom she already knew)...but just then a Patronus came bounding into the middle of the reception and announced the ministry had fallen, and Scrimgeour had been assassinated. There was no time to lose. They pounced upon the crowd, and the Death Eaters were furious to find Potter nowhere among the number. The Aurors put up a good fight, and Alissa made sure the Granger girl escaped. She was, according to Severus, the cleverest witch Hogwarts had seen in decades and was the brains behind all of Potter's success, even if she was, in his opinion, an insufferable-know-it-all! She was also the youngest Order member. So Granger was priority number one, after Potter, of course.
After the wedding party was sequestered and most of the guests had escaped, Alissa had the family taken inside the house, and she gave her orders to the others before going to face the Weasleys.
"Right then, we are here to search the house so leave nothing unexamined. The blood traitors are to be questioned, but NO TORTURE! Try to use persuasion. Remember that these are the people closest to Potter."
The orders were to then to splinter off into groups of twos and threes and interrogate anyone they knew now to be a part of the Order who could bring Potter to the Dark Lord. The first thing was to get Draco out of the area, so she dispatched his group of three immediately. Alissa stayed to oversee the search and interrogation of the Burrow and its residents. She had the family rounded up, and they all sat cramped in their main room while Alissa stood in the background. She kept her mask and hood on at all times and did not speak to the family, only in whispered tones to the Death Eaters when it was absolutely imperative. Lupin was staying with the Weasleys as well, and she could not risk being seen by him. She got a good look at the Weasley clan and knew they were in the Order. She hated that she had to do this to them but it could not be helped.
As the house was torn apart upstairs and down, Avery and Rodolphus took care of the interrogations. Alissa leaned over and whispered in Avery's ear that she wanted the interrogations to be done separately, in different rooms, so they might be able to catch someone in a lie. She would stay with the others as they took turns interrogating. In truth, though, she wanted to make sure one of them was able to make sure a message was sent to the Granger girl to find Potter and stay put.
A young new recruit, Madison, came down with Pearson, another green recruit, to report to Alissa.
"We saw the Weasley boy in bed. He looks really bad off. Didn't want to get too close, but he's definitely ill," said Madison.
Alissa nodded and told them in mumbled tones to go Apparate to Grimmauld Place and keep watch over the comings and goings there. Can't have anyone who has any wits about them taking that post. The Granger girl may be hiding out there this minute! she thought.
Once they Disapparated, Avery took Lupin into one room and Rodolphus took Ginny into another. As he walked past with the young woman, Alissa pointed her wand at him and whispered "Legilimens." She easily saw his intent to torture Potter's girlfriend into submission, and if she did not comply, he would rape her. She used a very dark and ancient spell on him that translated into his mind what she would do to him if he harmed the girl. His eyes grew wide with fear, and she released him when she felt he had understood her point. Verbal threats against men like Rodolphus Lestrange did nothing to deter them. Force of skill and displays of power worked best.
Finally, when she was alone with the remainder of the family, she averted her eyes, turned away from them, and allowed them to whisper and send covert signals nonverbally to each other. She watched them without their knowing. Once, she stepped into the adjoining room while she watched secretly through a mirror. She saw as quick as lightening, Arthur Weasley send his Patronus. Good, she thought. Perhaps the Potter boy can get a head start!
She walked back into the sitting room and sat in a chair in the farthest corner possible. One by one, each member of the family and few remaining guests were interrogated. It was a long and weary night.
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She had been ordered by the Dark Lord before they left the manor to dispatch other groups to Order members' homes once the Burrow had been secured. Later, she would learn that Diggle's house had been set on fire, and the Tonks family was put through the Cruciatus Curse. It was all beyond her. There was no choice for her any more. The Dark Lord and all his Death Eaters (which was now not a huge difference between ministry workers and those who bore the Dark Mark!) had the entire ministry's wealth of information at their disposal. Protective charms were breached and all the Order members outed. Lists of pure-bloods, half-bloods, and Mudbloods were made. Nothing was sacred. She was not even privy to all the orders the Dark Lord was handing out. That frustrated her to no end, for now she could not help those who might be saved!
After an exhausting night that proved to be a waste, Alissa and her band were brought before the Dark Lord again. She was given praise for her execution of Scrimgeour, but he was very displeased with Dolohov and Rowle, as they had let Potter, the Mudblood Granger, and the Blood Traitor, Weasley, escape. Apparently, there had been a skirmish at a café on Tottencourt Road. Potter had been there at the wedding, just in a Polyjuiced form. Also, the Weasley boy was with them. Potter had started to regain his natural form, the fighting ensued, and they had been bested by the Trio. Again, Alissa had evaded punishment for not discovering Potter at the wedding, nor discovering the fake Ronald Weasley at the Burrow. She felt a huge wave of relief wash over her. She felt she had endured enough for a lifetime already. Yet, she had to watch the two Death Eaters meet their fates.
The Dark Lord put Dolohov through his punishment himself, as he had years of faithfulness behind him. But unfortunately, Rowle did not. Alissa was stone-faced as she watched as the young Draco Malfoy was placed under the Imperius Curse and then tortured Rowle with the Cruciatus Curse for what seemed like forever. Finally, after an eternity, Draco ended it by killing him. Nagini slithered towards the body, and Alissa felt her mind disassociate from the scene.
After they all were dismissed, she climbed wearily to her room, and when she opened the door, she burst into tears to find Severus waiting for her there. He reached out for her, and she collapsed into his arms, losing herself in his voluminous robes. She felt so safe with him that she never wanted to leave his embrace! They held onto each other for as long as they could. For tomorrow, she would be gone to finally face Gregorovitch, and Snape would be returning back to Hogwarts to settle in as the new Headmaster of the Wizarding school.
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A/N: I know according to canon that Rowle is not killed here, but I took the liberty of changing it anyway.
Up Next: Gregorovitch is found and executed. Voldemort and Severus have an enlightening conversation and some lemons for y'all!:) Please review!
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YAY! That rotten bastard is dead!!! Oh I hope Alissa and Snape can get together soon!!!!Yeah, I'm gettin' into this story big time. :)
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks! I hope you enjoy the ending:)Livvy
I think you've done an amazing job of working Alissa into canon. I am amazed again and again by the details you've included. I'm enjoying the story immensely. I'm glad Sev and Alissa have each other.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thank you so much for reviewing! I really appreciate it when an older story gets a review. I am actually doing a sequel based on Hermione and Remus in this alternative universe of this story. It was talked about at the end, but not indetail about Hermione and Remus getting together. I don't know if you are a HG/RL shipper, but if you are, watch out for it!Thanks,Livvy
Okay, so I cheated and came over here to finish the story I started reading on Occlumency. I could say it is because I prefer reading on the blue background, but really it that I wanted to read the rest of the story. Instant gratification takes too long and all that. I've had the best time reading this fic. I even liked the battle scenes, and that almost never happens. I like Remus and Hermione, I never could see her making a go of things with Ron. Hell, I liked everything about this story. It also gives me hope that your current WIP might turn out okay for Hermione and Snape.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Hey, thanks! I appreciate that. keep your mind open, and I hope you like the sharp turn I'm going to take the story in.Thanks for rviewing!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Hey, thanks! I appreciate that. keep your mind open, and I hope you like the sharp turn I'm going to take the story in.Thanks for rviewing!Livvy
WOW, Alissa is undoubtedly suitable for Severus, but oh uh, I don't want to cross this woman -- not even if I was Severus Snape! Will he be grateful that she saved him at all?
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Well, you'll have to read the story ;)Yes, she's pretty scary when she needs to be!Thanks for reviewing!
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Well, you'll have to read the story ;)Yes, she's pretty scary when she needs to be!Thanks for reviewing!
Wonderful work.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks you very much!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks you very much!Livvy
Oh, wonderful! And I look forward to reading about the Hermione/Remus romance!
Well done!
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thank you so much!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thank you so much!Livvy
Beautiful ending to a wonderful story. I especially like the Remus/Hermoine ending, it seemed fitting as she has always (in cannon) been very responsible and mature in her actions.Cant wait to read more of your stories.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks! I'll be starting the HG/RL story later this summer. I've got "Bookends" warming up in the queue now, and I'm working on another HG/SS fic right now. Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks! I'll be starting the HG/RL story later this summer. I've got "Bookends" warming up in the queue now, and I'm working on another HG/SS fic right now. Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
lovely story...........it was so different and interesting!!!!! in fact it was one of your story's that i enjoyed the most!!!!!! alissa was such an arrestin character!!!!!!!! am really looking forward to remus and hermione's story!!!!
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Excellent! I know people mostly go for HG/SS and Lord knows, I do like them best, however, I can't resist doing a HG/RL ship!Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Excellent! I know people mostly go for HG/SS and Lord knows, I do like them best, however, I can't resist doing a HG/RL ship!Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
I love the end, it was everything I asked for. I never read the GWTWsequel, but I watched miniseries, that must be why the line is so familiar to me.I've always preferred that 'beautiful friendship' line Bogart says to Claude Rains to the 'We'll always have Paris' line he says to Ingrid Bergman.I hope you will continue with your OFC stories. You create such wonderful OFCs and I always find an OFC much more interesting than Hermione.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks so much! For a while I will be working on my HG/SS fics, I do have in the back of my mind to make a one-shot I did for the DH Prompt Challenge into a multi-chapter. That has an OC named Laura in it. If you read it, any ideas on how to build on the story would be much appreicated!Thanks so much for staying through and reviewing so consistantly. It really touches my heart.Thanks!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks so much! For a while I will be working on my HG/SS fics, I do have in the back of my mind to make a one-shot I did for the DH Prompt Challenge into a multi-chapter. That has an OC named Laura in it. If you read it, any ideas on how to build on the story would be much appreicated!Thanks so much for staying through and reviewing so consistantly. It really touches my heart.Thanks!Livvy
Nice wrap up Livvy! :)
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Wow that was fast getting up ......... awesome and the story as expected a wonder pleasure. Thank You for sharing your talent with everyone who is fortunate enough to read your stories
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks so much! I hope you continue to like my fics. I have two more that I'll be posting so far and one that is swimming in my head! :)Thanks for continuing to review!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks so much! I hope you continue to like my fics. I have two more that I'll be posting so far and one that is swimming in my head! :)Thanks for continuing to review!Livvy
I didn't get a chance to read until tonight, I had surgery on my left hand two days ago and I've finally recovered from the anesthetic. They told me it would be done with a local, but they used a general so I've really been out of it for the past two days. They had both better survive and have a happy ever after, I've invested too much in them emotionally for them to die. Harry could have died and I would have been indifferent, but she let Snape die with disrespect. I want him to live respected by all. This is short, but I can only use one hand for typing right now.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Ouch! Hope you are feeling a little better. I hated the idsrespectful way she let Snape die. He deserved so much more.I do hope you like the ending! It will be posted as soon as it gets through the queue!Thanks,Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Ouch! Hope you are feeling a little better. I hated the idsrespectful way she let Snape die. He deserved so much more.I do hope you like the ending! It will be posted as soon as it gets through the queue!Thanks,Livvy
Zing! She got him at the end, didn't she?
Good girl, Alissa!
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
LOL! He'll be pondering that for a bitThanks,Livvy
anwser the danm question Severus!
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
LOL! He is the king of getting out of things, isn't he?Thanks,Livvy
I really like the point she made at the end, which was more difficult being the adorer or the adored. For Severus I think it's actually being the adored one. As she said, he was in control when he was the adorer but he has no control of her adoration of him.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Yes, that is going to really bother him and cause a rift between them. He's going to have to deal with it.Thanks!Livvy
I have a corection for you to make. Bathilda's last name is Bagshot, not Babcock.
Things are moving slowly and I can see that it's putting a lot of stress on them both. Fortunately, you are giving me information about what happened at Hogwarts and what happened when Luna was abducted, that's a lot more than JKR did during that period in the book.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks for pointing out the mistake! I'm glad you're still liking the story!Livvy
I've been trying to place the time frame of this chapter so I went to HPL and looked at the timeline for DH but the date Gregorovitch was murdered wasn't there. I figure that it must be late Autumn in this chapter. I can really understand now why Alissafeels so impatient with the trio and their search. I've always thought they went way offtrack when they decided to search for the Deathly Hallows.If they had concentrated on the Horcruxes first and then looked for the Hallows the battle would probably have been fought sooner and 'He Who I Found Most Tiresome' have been permanently vanquished sooner. I've often wondered why Dumbledore never told Harry about the Elder wand, that was the most important thing he kept secret from Harry and i don't know why.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Well, Dumbledore knew from experience that the Hallows could get a person bogged down in getting them and keeping them for one's own power. To think you could bring your loved one's from the dead with the resurrection stone alone! It's like the Mirror of Erised. The Hallows can suck the life out of you with it's promise of glory and all of what you desire most.I thought Dumbledore was really stupid in not preparing Harry for his quest. Either that or JKRowling really screwed the pooch (which I think she did anyway by killing off Snape) but anyway- I can see why it would be important for Harry to know of the Hallows existence, because that was what Voldemort was trying to get. Harry already possessed two out of three and the Elder Wand was supossed to go to Snape- he REALLY screwed the pooch on that one.DH was a huge disappointment for me. I literally thought someone was playing an evil joke when I started reading it. Halfway through I was like, "This is just stupid!" I want to know what's going on at Hogwarts!Anyway, I hope you keep liking the story!Livvy
Response from Trickie Woo (Reviewer)
I agree with you, DH was a big disappointment. I found most of the trio's adventures to be very secondary to what was going on at Hogwarts. Heck, I never cared much about those three anyway. Neville was the kid I cared most about, and then Luna. Snape was the crux of the whole series, the entire saga turned on whether he was good or bad and she not only killed him off, she did it in the most disrespectful and ridiculous way. She couldn't even be bothered to have 'HW' throw and Avade Kedavra at him. She has him killed by a giant snake in a bubble.BTW, am I right in my guess about the timeframe of the chapter?
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Yes, it was important to show how dragging the time was, the inactivity of the three of them in that damn forest! I was told it was to be compared to the wandering in the desert in the Old Testement by the Israelites. Now, I understand Jewish Numerology and there are many references to the 40 days and 40 nights, four days, also 40 years signifying a time of "probabtion" for the kinks in the personality of the person or persons involved to be worked out. I could see the point. I couldn't say if they were out in the Forest of Dean for 40 bleeding days or what-not, but I just thought it was a real waste of time. I agree totally on Snape being the crux of the books. He was the most important person next to Harry Potter. So, he got the shaft in life and he got the shaft in death. Pretty rubbish death!I would have LOVED to have seen Neville's metamorphasis from ne'er-do-well to a brave leader of a radical underground movement. Luna is always a riot! Anything with Luna is awesome and I LOVED the girl they got to play her in the movie.
Wow. That was intense!
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
I really wanted to show a side to thier relationship that wasn't just sweetness and light. Their encounters have been so tame thus far, and that is just not in character for Snape, at least not all the time. So, I wanted to show he had a partner that could indulge him in his darker side and not be put off by it.Thanks!Livvy
Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)
Well, and she's pretty dark, too. I think it's a valid point and you did a great job.
nice on the Rowle twist......and having Draco do it under the imperius Curse ... just goes to show that Draco (pain that he may be at times) is not his father....again impressive and awaiting more.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thank you! I thought it was important to point that side of Draco out, that it was canon that he was forced to do things under the Imperius Curse.I also wanted to show how Alissa dealt with the carnage around her. She isn't a machine that is unfeeling. Unfortunately, dissociating isn't the healthiest thing either!Livvy
I appreciate that the chapter was so fast paced, I never like to read death, gore, and violence. I hope you keep the pace up and get past all of that much more quickly than JKR did so we get to the really important part and find out if Snape and Alissa survive and can make a future together..When I read DH last July I found that for me tha climax took place in the Shrieking Shack and the denouement was in 'The Prince's Tale'. After that I was indifferent to what happened to the other characters and only read the last few chapters out of habit.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
The Prince's tale was really the chapter that made all the other books make sense. It was the glue to everything that was supporting Harry. THere will be a very dramatic and climactic later with the battle and what happens in the shack. I hope you like I do that.Thanks,Livvy
This was a well-written chapter. You really made me feel for Alissa. Very original premise! Looking forward to more!
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thank you! BTW, I'm enjoying 'Anthem'!Livvy
Response from emmeline33 (Reviewer)
Thanks, Livvy! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
I tried to review this chapter after i read it last night but I couldn't get it posted. TPP must have been doing some more work on the system.This was such a sad chapter to read. I always wondered why Rowling had to put anything more in DH except that Charity Burbage was killed by Death Eaters.I do hope that things will be better for them by the end and that they survive to have a future together.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
I thought it was important to see how it is on the flipside, where Snape thinks he can't be loved because of the horrible things he has had to do, so I wanted him to be the one to accept the insecurities of another instead of being the one accepted or rejected because of his own insecurities
It was an interesting insight on our characters.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Thanks!
Even to this point, he still thought of Lily first, and Alissa still loved him. So powerful. And of course, at the end, he finally loves her.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Yes, from now on it is a new story, major turning point. However, memories of Lily will still linger and cause difficulties.Livvy
I'm happy that he finally has accepted her love and allowed himself to love her. I've never followed the cult of St. Lily. If she had really been a good person she would have accepted his apology and remained his friend. Anybody would have realized that he would lash out at the first person who came near and said things he didn't mean at all. She didn't have to fall in love with him, but she ceratinly should have remained his friend.
Response from livvy6 (Author of I'll Be There)
Preach it sister! I agree. I'm glad you are liking how the story is turning out.Livvy