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Potter Place's Summer 2007 Prompt Challenge Becoming Whole
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Becoming Whole

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Epilogue

Becoming Whole

Southern_Witch_69

377 Reviews   |   377 Ratings, 0 Likes, 294 Favorites )

Romance Alternate Universe post-HBP/HBP compliant Potter Place's Summer 2007 Prompt Challenge 34,832 Words 11 Chapters Complete
Arthur Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Augustus Rookwood Kingsley Shacklebolt Rufus Scrimgeour Daphne Greengrass Pansy Parkinson

Hermione requests to sponsor Snape after the war when the Ministry feels most Death Eaters should be given the chance to integrate into soceity again, depending on their crimes. He moves in with Hermione, and life as they know it forever changes. DH not recognized.

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Chapters (11)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Epilogue


About Southern_Witch_69

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Southern_Witch_69

Member Since 2005  |  144 Stories  |  Favorited by 1,103  |  2,209 Reviews Written  |  5,450 Review Responses

I adore the world of HP.



Thanks for stopping by. I'm off to stir my cauldron.

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Reviews for Becoming Whole

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10/10

tangerineextreme

AHHHH I can't wait to read the rest of this. Perfect characterization and dialogue. You've even managed to make me like Ron - and I'm conflicted because as of right now I want her to be with Ron instead of Severus and that just isn't supposed to happen lol

10/10

tangerineextreme

AHHHH I can't wait to read the rest of this. Perfect characterization and dialogue. You've even managed to make me like Ron - and I'm conflicted because as of right now I want her to be with Ron instead of Severus and that just isn't supposed to happen lol

0/10

moor

LOVED rampage!Hermione. XD
Also, liked that they worked through their issues and acted like adults (which they are but which is often overlooked in 'fic). XD

0/10

cottontail

I just finished reading this story from beginning to end in one shot.  Sorry I didn't review each chapter as I was too eager to go on to the next.  I really enjoyed your take on Serverus's and Hermione's relationship.  Though I would love to have actually see the scene when she knocks down the door.  Thanks for letting me escape the world around me to enjoy a little story with a very happy ending.

10/10

ElectricLimeGreen

This is such a lovely story.  I especially loved the little details of Crookshanks - he doesn't get enough attention usually!  Thanks for sharing!

10/10

pearl city princess

What a wonderful ending.   I enjoyed this story so much, thank you for sharing it.

10/10

pearl city princess

Oh, thank goodness everything turned out for the best, I was worried for a minute.

10/10

pearl city princess

Nice morning after, I'm so glad they didn't talk what happened to death.

10/10

pearl city princess

They are so hot together, I can't wait to see how they are with each other the morning after. 

10/10

pearl city princess

Finally they are beginning to notice each other, well it's about time. 

10/10

pearl city princess

Hermione is so sweet to give Ron his freedom, now maybe she can move on, hopefully with Snape.

10/10

pearl city princess

Well the situation seems to have gone from bad to worse, I was hoping that Harry would be able to help get Snape his freedom.  The only problem with Snape getting his freedom is, how will he and Hermione ever see how perfect they are for each other if they are not forced to be together.

10/10

pearl city princess

I just love that Snape had all thoes notes about a cure for Ginny, it showes that he is not as bad as Harry thinks he is.

10/10

pearl city princess

Oh my what a mess, can't wait to see how she resolves it.

10/10

pearl city princess

I can't wait to see how Snape is going to take Hermione being his sponsor. 

10/10

pearl city princess

Wonderful start, I can't wait to see how this works out for everyone.

10/10

breastlady

Yeh! (standing ovation)
I loved your story and your ending. All the characters showed their best colors without being stereo typed. I liked a story for once where Ron and Harry behaved as rational and mature young men I didn't feel the need to slap. I enjoyed a story line that was about the way Harry, Ron, Hermione, Severus, etc. worked together to bring good and solve a problem with a minimal amount of angst amongst themselves. And as always, Long live the half blood prince!

I confess I never finished DH even half the way through. I hated it. When I saw what was coming and how many people she would kill off, I went into the world of denial and AU fan-fiction indefinitely. (No one should ever have to watch a beloved house elf die for mercy's sake!! You may as well just kill the pet owl while you're at it . Oh, that's right, she did!) Yes, I am one of those people who skip to the end of a book before I decide if I want to read it. I also make people tell me the ending to movies before I go see them. I work with sad people all day. I don't need sadness in my leisure time.

It may have been worked out in the end but I always felt puzzled about the way Harry could blame Snape for Dumbledore's death more than he blamed himself for forcing Dumbledore to drink poison, and in such a horrible way! Harry would have killed Dumbledore whether or not Snape had done anything. Harry not only poisoned Dumbledore but tortured him in the process. Avada Kadavera is much less painful and messy.

Even if Harry had never learned the truth that Snape was acting on Dumbledore's orders in DH, Snape's actions could still have been considered a "mercy killing". He ended Dumbledore's suffering when there was nothing else that could have been done for him. I actually like your Harry in this story than I did the cannon Harry in HBP and the part of the DH I actually read.

10/10

MollysSister

I know I have read this, I remember the story, yet its not marked as read, no reviews left at Ashwinder either. GASP perhaps I was a bad fangirl and didnt leave reviews? I will make amends now. ((nods))

I am here looking for stories to use in an upcoming quiz "Snape is on probation" I think this will work nicely. There is going to be lots of cap locks harry next chapter isnt there? I will wear my ear plugs

10/10

violet_snape

Someone was asking about this story on AFF and their description was so intriguing that I had to come and check it out. Am I ever glad that I did! This was a beautiful story! I love that you managed to create a romance that was very sweet without being overdone. I've never really been a fan of a Severus that is too romantic or fluffy...it takes away from the dour potions master we have all grown to love. Job well done! PS. That was probably the best, most realistic lemon I have ever read :-D

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks so much. I'm very flattered and happy that you enjoyed the story.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks so much. I'm very flattered and happy that you enjoyed the story.

0/10

therese

What a wonderful story. Couldn't stop reading.It was great.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

thank you!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

thank you!

0/10

elsolel

I'd do it! 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

~grin~

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

~grin~

0/10

elsolel

At least it's two steps forward and one back, since they are making some progress.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

somewhat. haha

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

somewhat. haha

0/10

elsolel

It would only take the three of them saying that he had reformed, right?  That's how I understood the terms of the parole from earlier. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Right. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Right. :)

0/10

elsolel

I wonder if he was only trying to make her stand up to him.  (Always looking for the happy motivation)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

LOL I'm the same way

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

LOL I'm the same way

0/10

elsolel

I like that you 'gave' Pansy to Harry and Daphne to Ron.  Are those pairings that you like?

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

I do like Pansy and Harry (even Pansy/Ron), but alas, I'll let Harry stay the course with his canon girl. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

I do like Pansy and Harry (even Pansy/Ron), but alas, I'll let Harry stay the course with his canon girl. :)

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