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Potter Place's Summer 2007 Prompt Challenge Becoming Whole
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Becoming Whole

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Epilogue

Becoming Whole

Southern_Witch_69

377 Reviews   |   377 Ratings, 0 Likes, 294 Favorites )

Romance Alternate Universe post-HBP/HBP compliant Potter Place's Summer 2007 Prompt Challenge 34,832 Words 11 Chapters Complete
Arthur Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Augustus Rookwood Kingsley Shacklebolt Rufus Scrimgeour Daphne Greengrass Pansy Parkinson

Hermione requests to sponsor Snape after the war when the Ministry feels most Death Eaters should be given the chance to integrate into soceity again, depending on their crimes. He moves in with Hermione, and life as they know it forever changes. DH not recognized.

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Chapters (11)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Epilogue


About Southern_Witch_69

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Southern_Witch_69

Member Since 2005  |  144 Stories  |  Favorited by 1,103  |  2,209 Reviews Written  |  5,450 Review Responses

I adore the world of HP.



Thanks for stopping by. I'm off to stir my cauldron.

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Reviews for Becoming Whole

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10/10

Sampdoria

Thank you so much for the update!!! I am so happy for you haveing Severus returning to Hermione, I was expecting the more usual him hiding away while they both feel sorry for them selves and longing for the other. For you making Severus making a claim to the woman he wants (only when said woman is Hermione of course) and to want to face the world together with her, you have my eternal gratitude!!! I love that someone gives me a Severus like this!!!!!! Update again soon

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Haha. I'd hoped to "trick" people with the hide away Snape plot, but I couldn't really do it. :) Glad you are enjoying it and hope you like the last chapter.

10/10

SS Lupin

Yay new chapter!

Took me a second to follow the different way of story-telling, but I liked it much more than another Ministry scene. >_<

Am eagerly awaiting the rest.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks!!! Looking forward to more of your writing as well.

~hint hint~ :)

10/10

Merlinsbeard

Yay, another chapter!  So happy for the update.

Loved the flashback scene, very well placed. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

cool! Thank you!! :)

9/10

potionmistress60

Arg!  Scrimgeour is nothing but bat scat!  I sure didn't see that courtroom humiliation coming.  Thankyou for bringing "the man" back home to loving arms.  You had me in a bit of a panic for a moment.  However, I knew you would only want the best for our snarky guy.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

He sucks, ScrimJob! :) Glad you liked it. Whoot

0/10

Mazzy

Real glad Sev came back. :) awww

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

~grin~ Thanks

0/10

hgelman

Yeah!  An update!  And a worthwhile wait at that!  I knew Severus had come back with the second dream.  Nicely written!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

~grin~

Glad you enjoyed!

10/10

Sniv

I thought you did a good job with the flashbacks...=) Great job!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks, mate

10/10

irishredlass

Well done as always.  I only wish that real life would quit messing with things...ours and Hermione and Severus' Hopefully things will start to look up.  Cheers Irish

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

I agree, big time! Thanks, mate, for the support. :)

9/10

Shadow

I really enjoyed the way you did the flashbacks. It gave us enough of the story without going into too much detail of the entire trial. very nice chapter!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

cool. Thank you! I was worried for a bit. :) Cheers

10/10

amsev

Yeah! Yeah! Yeah!  Thank you!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

~grins broadly~ thanks

10/10

harrypotterwanter

I am glad that Severus was released from probation. I was just as worried as Hermione that he would be too upset with her to talk about their relationship once he was released. At least she won't be alone when facing everybody. Hopefully the press doesn't bother her too much.It would be quite disappointing if Hermione lost her job. However, I am sure that she could find another way to employ herself; she is very intelligent and resourceful.I am so glad you updated again! I cannot wait until the next installment. You did a great job with the flashbacks.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

I've read so many stories where he goes off in a little tantrum, so thought I'd pull that "trick" here. Ahahaha! I couldn't actually make him do it of course. I think Hermione doesn't want her job or to be around people like that, so she'll be the one to finish it. :) Thanks! HOpe you like the next

10/10

Maddie

Oh, blasting the door off Severus's "friend's" place just had to come back to haunt Hermione--but in Court, Oi. [I really, really loved that particular scene--blasting the door, I mean.Evil] Then every little thing is blown up to sound so sordid. I was so sad when I thought Severus walked away from any relationship they might have had. However, he came back and is frisky to boot.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

I'm bad, too. Teh blasting door part reminds me of me and something I might do in a jealous fit. hahaha! :) Glad you liked it,

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

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10/10

pookah

Nice way to scare your audience!  You have her showering and thinking what a mess it all is and how she'll never see him in her place again, and I figured Scrimgeour had slapped him back into Azkaban.  Nicely written.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Teehee!!

Thanks! :)

10/10

pookah

I'm glad Hermione realized that she was wrong and had treated Severus badly.  Really, I dislike jealousy, it never helps anything.  (even if, as this story goes, it ends well,  jealousy is still bad.)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks. :) Yeah, jealousy isn't one of my better qualities. I can't help it sometimes. I just can't stand the thought of some other woman too close to my man. :-)

10/10

pookah

Severus found out that with Hermione, honesty is the best policy. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Yep. Always!

10/10

beaweasley2

Good job. The flash backs gave us enough of the trial to know what happened with our having to read it all.  I still would have loved for Scrimgeour to have gotten egg in his face – but can’t have everything can we.  I love the fact that Severus came back to the flat and climbed into bed with her. Ah, if only dreams did come true like that…

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks, my fiend. I'll leave the egging of ScrimJob up to your imagination. Bwahahahaha :)

10/10

cocoachristy

Ha ha! I love that the Minister tried to discredit them and he was the one who had to step down! Hermione and Severus may have been embarrassed, but in the end, they got what they wanted. Now, what is Minerva up to?

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

I think it was pretty dirty of the Minister. Arsehole. :) SS/HG worked out just fine though. Teehee

10/10

pookah

I put this story in my favourites some time ago, but I kept waiting for it to be finished.  However tonight I thought I'd catch up on this wonderful tale.  I hope Severus doesn't get in trouble for being in Knockturn Alley.  I wonder if he'll get in trouble with Hermione for visiting a sporting lady.I guess I'll find out soon, after I type, "thank you for this delightful story."

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

I'm glad you finally got around to reading the story. :) Thank you so much

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

I'm glad you finally got around to reading the story. :) Thank you so much

9/10

CharmedForce

Scrimgeour's plot unravels! I am glad that the SOB had to resign. However can Hermione be blamed if it was Scrimgeour who insisted on male "prisoners" staying with female sponsors and female prisoners with male sponsors? After all, when people are stuck together like that they have to find some way to release energy. Just look at all those "blizzard babies" that are born every September and October!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

I didn't like Scrimgeour all that much in the books either. Kind of didn't have much faith in him after Fudge's dumbarse, so I painted him as a prick here. (Though in canon I appreciated he didn't give Harry away even when facing death.) Teehee...

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

I didn't like Scrimgeour all that much in the books either. Kind of didn't have much faith in him after Fudge's dumbarse, so I painted him as a prick here. (Though in canon I appreciated he didn't give Harry away even when facing death.) Teehee...

10/10

blue artemis

Poor Hermione.  But I'm so glad that he came back to her. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Me too! :) Thank you very much for reading. I truly appreciate it.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Me too! :) Thank you very much for reading. I truly appreciate it.

10/10

emmeline33

I like the way you interspersed the flashbacks and reflections.  I am also very glad that it ended on such a positive note!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thank you very much. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thank you very much. :)

10/10

emmeline33

I love the morning-after coziness!  This is great!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks!

0/10

emmeline33

This is so HOT!  "Master of so much more..." swoon!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

:) Thanks! whoot

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

:) Thanks! whoot

10/10

livvy6

I like it when they play nice together! A lot of nonsense going on , but they seem to be holding it together. Good job!Livvy

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Me too! :) Thanks so much for reading. Hope you like the last.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Me too! :) Thanks so much for reading. Hope you like the last.

10/10

FanGirlBabe1987

Thank you so much for such a lovely story! I really loved it! Everyone seemed within character lines (within reason) and I enjoyed the dynamic of Snape and Hermione! Going to check out your others :)

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