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Potter Place's Summer 2007 Prompt Challenge Becoming Whole
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Becoming Whole

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Epilogue

Becoming Whole

Southern_Witch_69

377 Reviews   |   377 Ratings, 0 Likes, 294 Favorites )

Romance Alternate Universe post-HBP/HBP compliant Potter Place's Summer 2007 Prompt Challenge 34,832 Words 11 Chapters Complete
Arthur Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Augustus Rookwood Kingsley Shacklebolt Rufus Scrimgeour Daphne Greengrass Pansy Parkinson

Hermione requests to sponsor Snape after the war when the Ministry feels most Death Eaters should be given the chance to integrate into soceity again, depending on their crimes. He moves in with Hermione, and life as they know it forever changes. DH not recognized.

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Chapters (11)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Epilogue


About Southern_Witch_69

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Southern_Witch_69

Member Since 2005  |  144 Stories  |  Favorited by 1,103  |  2,209 Reviews Written  |  5,450 Review Responses

I adore the world of HP.



Thanks for stopping by. I'm off to stir my cauldron.

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Reviews for Becoming Whole

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Atrylindin

“I wonder if you would like to be married.” He stilled as he gazed at her hopefully. “To me,” he added unnecessarily.That is one of the most enchanting and endearing proposals I have ever heard.


Thank you so much for this story -- I really enjoyed it.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

thanks so much for reading! Glad you liked it!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

thanks so much for reading! Glad you liked it!

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MollysSister

AWWWWWWW I just loved the school they run for muggleborns and their parents. That suits Hermione perfectly.


Thank you Sunshine for another great HG/SS story. You have my eternal fangirl love and devotion.


PS: Excellent idea on listing the top reviewers each month. That certainly motives a non-writer like myself to go the extra distance. I am plowing through the post DH prompt challenge stuff. My fingers are crossed I will make the list!!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

You are so sweet.

Yes! I love that more people seem to be trying to review now. Whooot!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

You are so sweet.

Yes! I love that more people seem to be trying to review now. Whooot!

9/10

helshez

Aw! That was sooooo sweet. Fluff overload, but a few hours dealing with the idiots should cure that. Thank you so much for entertaining me!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

LOL Cheers! :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

LOL Cheers! :)

0/10

JunoMagic

A really lovely ending for a really lovely story. Thank you for sharing!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks for reading. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks for reading. :)

0/10

WriterMerrin

Aww, the epilog was a perfect little nugget.  I love the idea of them starting an institute like that.  Thanks for tying up all of the loose ends.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks, Merrin! :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks, Merrin! :)

10/10

sinbad

Aww, what a sweet ending.  Too funny the way the dance was interupted!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks! :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks! :)

10/10

irishredlass

Ahh I loved the ending read it last night and then had to start at the beginning so I could read it all in one go.  Well done as always.  Irish

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

lol Well, thank you very much. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

lol Well, thank you very much. :)

10/10

aura

Lovely as always.  ^_^


A very sweet ending.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thank you very much.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thank you very much.

0/10

Cloud72

Wow, I love it I really do.


Thank you so much.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Cool! Thanks! :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Cool! Thanks! :)

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lipa

It was a pleasant read. The Epilogue is simply beautiful. I don't think I've read a better one in this fandom. Quite enough development and pointing to the future, not too many years passed and no children personalities to invent to torture the reader of the previous childless chapters.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thank you very much. I'm pleased you enjoyed it.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thank you very much. I'm pleased you enjoyed it.

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Saracen77

"Of course I said yes, you berk."Got to be one of my favourite lines!


Thank you for a wonderful story.  I really loved Severus' proposal, so like the man to almost incidentally do the deed.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

LOL! Thanks. :) Happy you enjoyed.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

LOL! Thanks. :) Happy you enjoyed.

10/10

sunny33

Beautiful ending

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks!

10/10

sunny33

Hi, I have been enjoying your stories on Ashwinder and only just figured out they could be found elsewhereDuh


Your stories are terrific and so well written! Thank you for taking the time to entertain us.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks so much. :) Glad you found it. Teehee! I appreciate the comments

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks so much. :) Glad you found it. Teehee! I appreciate the comments

9/10

Shadow

What a typically Snape-like proposal! No sweet words and sentiments, although, after he told Hemione she made him whole.... Sigh.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

LOL Thanks! :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

LOL Thanks! :)

10/10

Sampdoria

This has been one amazing story to read, I have really enjoyed it! I look forward to read more stories written by you:-)


PS: The idea of Hermiones school was brilliant.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks. I like the school thing as well. Seems like the Muggle parents should be a little more informed. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks. I like the school thing as well. Seems like the Muggle parents should be a little more informed. :)

10/10

Sniv

*Sniff* The last scene with them dancing was beautiful! Wonderful story! You still got it (not that I ever doubted that, of course!) I'm off to read Flight of the Prince then!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks, doll :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks, doll :)

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Mint Stick

Such a sweet ending. And Severus's proposal was so Snape! Made me giggle.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks! Grin

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks! Grin

10/10

kittylefish

well, that was lovely. you had me tearing up when he talked of "becoming whole," then laughing with the proposal, then tearing up again with the last two lines. a perfectly satisfying ending to a perfectly lovely story. thanks!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Aww, thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Heeeheee

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Aww, thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Heeeheee

9/10

JoKK2

Lovely story.  Thanks for sharing, JoAnne

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks!

10/10

ladyluv

Liked the ending - I guess it is expecting much of Severus to propose down on one knee - but alas you wrote him very much like I see him - just slip it into the conversation

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Uhhuh. Sneaky. Teehee thank you

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Uhhuh. Sneaky. Teehee thank you

10/10

amsev

What a lovely epilogue (unlike a certain, more notorious one). It provided a graceful sense of closure to the story, and I enjoyed it very much!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks!

10/10

mia madwyn

“Excellent. We’ll have to plan for it then,” he said nonchalantly, almost as if discussing a casual agreement, his sweaty palms belying his calm demeanor.
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Squeeee!

What a lovely ending! Thank you for writing such a wonderful fic!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.

0/10

potionmistress60

Sweet!


HeartU


That was a fun read.  Granger-Snape does have a nice ring to it.  Sounds like Ginger-Snap.  Heh!


Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks! LOL yeah, it does hahaha

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks! LOL yeah, it does hahaha

9/10

CharmedForce

A lovely epilogue. I am glad everything worked out for all of the couples. I still love the thought of Hermione's school. Such a smart idea!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks! I like the school, too. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks! I like the school, too. :)

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DanaPAH

That was a wonderful story.  I liked it very much.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks!

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