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Potter Place's Summer 2007 Prompt Challenge Becoming Whole
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Becoming Whole

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Epilogue

Becoming Whole

Southern_Witch_69

377 Reviews   |   377 Ratings, 0 Likes, 294 Favorites )

Romance Alternate Universe post-HBP/HBP compliant Potter Place's Summer 2007 Prompt Challenge 34,832 Words 11 Chapters Complete
Arthur Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Augustus Rookwood Kingsley Shacklebolt Rufus Scrimgeour Daphne Greengrass Pansy Parkinson

Hermione requests to sponsor Snape after the war when the Ministry feels most Death Eaters should be given the chance to integrate into soceity again, depending on their crimes. He moves in with Hermione, and life as they know it forever changes. DH not recognized.

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Chapters (11)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Epilogue


About Southern_Witch_69

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Southern_Witch_69

Member Since 2005  |  144 Stories  |  Favorited by 1,103  |  2,209 Reviews Written  |  5,450 Review Responses

I adore the world of HP.



Thanks for stopping by. I'm off to stir my cauldron.

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Reviews for Becoming Whole

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10/10

sinbad

Ohhhh angry sex!  Sounds like Severus needed that slap to see reason.  Boy, men are so blind!  Great chapter as usual.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thank you very much. Good ol' angry sex... Good ol' make-up sex... Hope you like what's next.

10/10

karelia

You never cease to amaze me. This was absolutely the bestest smut scene I've read in a very long time.

I keep telling myself to stay away from WIPs, but I continue to fail when it comes to your WIPs. LOL 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

That's such a good compliment. Thanks, friend! :)

0/10

nightshift

Nothing quite like physical escalation. Looking forward to seeing what the buzz is on Knockturn Alley.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Bwahahaha. That will come up soon (the buzz). :)

0/10

Mint Stick

I'm so glad she caught him before he'd actually got to doing anything with the hooker. Go Hermione! She certainly made sure she got her man. *grins*

Hopefully this will get through to Snape too now - that he doesn't actually need to go elsewhere when he'd rather have Hermione!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Yeah, glad he didn't do anything with the slag. :) More up now. Hope you like.

10/10

Maddie

Well Granger was pissed! Your up against the wall was great. The whole chapter was great.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)

10/10

purelush

AHHHHHH!

Excellent chapter. I enjoyed how they skipped the fighting and went straight to the hot make up sex. More people should do that!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

~grin~ I'm in total agreement! :) Glad you liked it.

10/10

Althea Grey

well, that's one way to go get your man. though, personally, I would've enjoyed some dragging-out-by-the-ear... :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

yeah! That would have been just as effective. Bwahahaha

10/10

irishredlass

Ahh your back! This must mean your challenge piece is done.  I look forward to how you will tangle poor Severus' mind in the chapters to come.  You have such a way of twisting him inside out before he figures out what is best for him. Irish

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Somewhat. Teehee. glad you enjoyed this, and I hope you like the next one. :) Thank you very much.

10/10

sheri22

Great chapter!! Update soon!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thank you! More up now! :)

10/10

blue artemis

Better than the hooker, anyway.  No, really, that was hot.  And sweet, and really, I hope they find a way to make that work for a long time.  Oh, and Go, Harry!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Glad you liked it! More up now! :)

10/10

mia madwyn

Well, you certainly caught me by surprise!  I did NOT expect this to happen -- and I'm so glad it did!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks! I try to be sneaky at times. :) bwahahaha

Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)

I was just relieved that he didn't go through with the prostitute.  I've been gut-kicked too many times lately by stories where something similar happened, and I don't think I could take the angst.  Sex with Hermione is much better.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Yeah, those aren't my cups of tea either! Blah.

10/10

livvy6

That's what I call "sexual healing!" I don't know if I like the roughrider Snape or the gentle Snape more. Wow, I got a 2 for 1!

Great story!

Livvy 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

~grin~ Thank you. :)

10/10

amygdalaj

nice chapter!  I noticed you skipped some scenes other authors may have added (like the ice cream flirtation?  Only mentioned in passing) I think it works nicely here.  Can't wait for the next installment (I was so excited to see this one)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks! I'm glad you noticed that and enjoyed it. More up now. Hope you like it! :)

10/10

Elanesse

I this fic.

“It appears that I’m thinking with the wrong head.” is going to be one of the most remembered fandom quotes of all time. I'm sure of it.

I read this and know exactly why I love the HG/SS pairing! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

LOL Glad yo uliked it! Grin. More up now. Enjoy!!

0/10

kittylefish

yay!  another chapter - and such a meaty one, full of interesting developments.  i like that they are getting friendlier, although i can only imagine what might happen to that if/when hermione realizes the nature of severus's meeting.  looking forward to the next one!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Glad you liked this one. Things really take a twist soon. :) LOL (as you probably already know from the next one).~grin~

10/10

harrypotterwanter

Hmm . . . I wonder what Hermione will think if she learns what Severus's appointment really is about. She will probably be hurt, even though nothing is really going on between the two of them. Maybe he will back out before he finishes his appointment.I'm glad that Ron has Pansy, so that maybe Hermione will feel like she can find someone else. I hope that Severus doesn't get his freedom too soon, because then he may plan to never see Hermione again before something more develops. I look forward to reading more chapters! Lovely story so far.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Sorry I didn't answer this one sooner, but I wanted to say thank you! :) I hope you like the way things are going.

10/10

Maddie

Oh my this is not going to go well. Hermione will figure out where he is going, I just know it. I feel very ambivalent about the situation. On one hand, I hate unfaithfulness in the stories I like to read. Real life can be happening to others, but not Hermione or Snape. To be a total hypocrite I don't mind stories where Hermione and Snape are in miserable marriages with other people and they find each other before they are properly divorced. On the other hand, Snape is her friend and is constrained by his probation that if he wants to travel Hermione must take him. Snape is single and obviously is used to visiting a brothel to take care of his release. There is no established relationship or hint of a relationship between Hermione and Snape. Like he said at the table, yesterday Hermione was in love with Ron.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

You were right, as you know. She did find out. LOL Things seem to be taking different turns for them, thankfully.And I'm with you about the Snape or Hermione / other people thing. Not my cup of tea! :)

9/10

sempra

Yay another chapter! Very nice but too short, much too short. Update soon.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thank you! More up now! :)

10/10

hogwartsgirl007

oh my god..... Severus.. you need to tell Hermione that you gotta get laid... Hermione you will agree happily and yes... if not Sev is always welcome to come to my house... i will not charge him. lmfao that was amazing as always hun! you seriously need to consider writing a book to publish....... yes mam! great work hun!!!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Hehehe... had he known he only needed to mention it... bwahahhaah. Thank you so much for the support.

0/10

snarkysiren

Yay! Another chapter!! “It appears that I’m thinking with the wrong head.” Hilariously genius!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

~grin~ thanks

0/10

Guinnevere

Gosh, I know he has needs, and he's trying to be considerate of Hermione, but...  Has he really thought this through?  With the head he keeps on his shoulders?

Well, the next chapter promises to be interesting!  Looking forward to it.

Good job, Southern.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

We know now that he didn't. :) Hope you like what's next.

9/10

kimjo2

you are always forgiven as long as you keep writing!  love love kiss kiss.  i am dying to find out how this old friend works out!  and will hermione find out??  duh duh DUH!!  can't wait for the next episode.  thanks so much! 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks so much for reading! :)

10/10

aura

They're getting more comfortable together. I liked the scene at the restraunt.  Am slightly jealous of Hermione though for getting to hear Severus' laugh and hug *ahem* apperate with him...

Well, at least they're both interested, on friendly terms, and he knows she's available now.  To bad they're both so sure nothing will happen... Have a bad feeing about Severus' visiting his 'friend', but not sure which direction you'll be spinning it. 

I think the denial and conflicts are going to last a few more chapters, at least.  

Looking forward to where you go from here.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Things will be progressing from here, even though he's got that funky little "appointment" planned. I have a good chapter coming up (so I'd like to think). Looking forward to seeing how you like it. :) More up soon.

0/10

Mint Stick

Oh dear... I'm almost worried about what will happen in the next chapter! Severus really should get over himself and focus on Hermione. :-D

Loved the update!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thank you! More up now! :)

10/10

Sniv

Ohhhh! Your apology is accepted. I wonder how Hermione will react if she finds out who Snape is meeting...that might not be a good thing...I'm also very interested in finding out what Harry is up to! And what will Snape do when/if he's free soon - will he be a man and realise that Hermione is not just ...well... that he might want more than just a quick shag? Because that's what Hermione has to offer... And I wonder what will happen if or when Ron and Pansy hook up - will Hermione really be okay with it if she can't get Snape? Hmmm...many questions are still unanswered - so keep it coming! =) Great update!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks, my dear. :) She will indeed figure it out in the very next chapter. I've a good one planned. Hope you like it. :)~keeps quiet so I don't spoil it~

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