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Potter Place's Summer 2007 Prompt Challenge Becoming Whole
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Becoming Whole

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Epilogue

Becoming Whole

Southern_Witch_69

377 Reviews   |   377 Ratings, 0 Likes, 294 Favorites )

Romance Alternate Universe post-HBP/HBP compliant Potter Place's Summer 2007 Prompt Challenge 34,832 Words 11 Chapters Complete
Arthur Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Augustus Rookwood Kingsley Shacklebolt Rufus Scrimgeour Daphne Greengrass Pansy Parkinson

Hermione requests to sponsor Snape after the war when the Ministry feels most Death Eaters should be given the chance to integrate into soceity again, depending on their crimes. He moves in with Hermione, and life as they know it forever changes. DH not recognized.

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Chapters (11)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Epilogue


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Southern_Witch_69

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I adore the world of HP.



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Reviews for Becoming Whole

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faula_tara

i love it keep it comming lady this is great stuff

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks! More up soon. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks! More up soon. :)

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septentrion

Hermione thinks too much! Sometimes, it's better to take things one day at a time. Thanks for the chappie!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

I agree. :)

10/10

beaweasley2

I think the normalcy of this chapter is great, and a bit of a surprise. Well done – again!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thank you. I'm happy you liked it. :)

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

I wonder what the M.O.M. is up to!  I hope Ginny is going to be ok, for Harry's sake.  And I love how you have Hermione's and Severus's relationship progressing.  You are really an awesome author. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thank you very much for reading. I'll have more on Ginny in the next chapter. :) The M.O.M. will try what it can to save face. :)

10/10

blue artemis

I actually like the morning after.  I'm glad they are making it work.  And I'm happy for Ginny.  But what is up with the Ministry? 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks! The Ministry... ~shakes fist~

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JoKK2

Good choice on the morning after scene.  It did feel normal and right.  I love the way this story is moving along, but I really am perplexed by the court summons.  I look forward to finding out about all that too.  Thanks for sharing, JoAnne

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thank you. The summons... ah, let's say the Ministry is going to be pesky. :)

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cattyll

I simply love this story and was happy to see an update.  I enjoy all the plots in this story.  Simply wonderful.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it. I'll have more up soon. :)

10/10

sinbad

Happy Holidays to you as well!  Great chapter as usual!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thank you so much. :)

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Maddie

I enjoyed your morning and day after chapter. Not many authors I have read, that I recall, write a scene where the characters are just behaving normally instead of one of them wanting to discuss either "what happened last night" or "where do we go from here." It was refreshing for a change. I am not sure how many couples are mature enough to actually behave this way. Myself included.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

LOL I hear ya! I'll have more up soon, and the discussion will show up eventually. :)

10/10

Selene

Yes, this a was good morning after.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

~grin~ Thanks! :)

9/10

irishredlass

Something normal in the morning?  What is "normal" about Severus cooking breakfast?  Personally if I were Hermione I would have been checking the food for poison (just kidding).  I think that the norm would have been stilted conversation.....so I think we should call this surreal but, hey I like it! I like it! Irish

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

LOL Yeah, I guess it could be surreal to some. :)  Thank you for reaidng. :)

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WriterMerrin

That is definitely one of the most brilliant 'morning after' chapters ever! There is enough drama in the plot, and it suits these two to ease into the 'after' since there was such an explosive 'before.' Your Severus is so smooth.  Although I hope there will be some kind of discussion, it's obvious that their lives are about to get complicated in several ways. (What can I say, I'm a fan of external angst, not internal.)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks for reading! I'm gad it worked as I'd wanted. They will have a discussion, most definitely. :)

10/10

hogwartsgirl007

what is it with writers that they feel they have to stop writing as soon as they get to the good parts? i can just picture you all laughing at us poor saps who read this story eagerly... lol concedering i write like that as well i dont blame you. great work as usual hun. i did find snapes casual invitation to go to "bed" a little too out of his character for this story though... but still i loved it and i cannot wait for more!!!!!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

LOL Sorry about that. :) I didn't want to delve into the lemons again so quickly, but they shall return. Glad you liked it.About Snape's casual invitation, there's a method to my madness. I'd hoped to portray him as being uncertain in this chapter--obviously wanting something, but we just don't know what exactly. I think this was his way of asking for a shag politely, and he'd been uncertain how to go about it and just snatched the first opening available. However corny it was. Teehee

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hermionestargazer

well done. I liked your version of the morning after. I suppose they will eventually have to talk about it. I love that you show us what is going on in Hermione's head, and you balance that with subtle behaviour from Snape, which gives us a clue as to what he is thinking, as well. Nice form.I think your Harry is particularly well done. He is how I picture him to be per canon. I do hope the hearing goes well. The Ministry can be so difficult!Thanks for continuing with this story. I look forward to reading more.Blessings,E.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thank you. I'm trying to keep people wondering about what Snape thinks, but I feel that the hints I'm giving is enough to form the right conclusion.The Ministry = a bunch of arseholes sometimes. :) More up soon! Cheers

10/10

mia madwyn

I hope Ginny really is going to recover.

And can't wait to find out what is up with the Ministry NOW.

Thaks for updating before Christmas! 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

It's my pleasure! Thanks for reading. ~mumbles about the pesky Ministry~

10/10

cocoachristy

I Loved it! It was great, and I did like the easiness between the two of them. Can't wait to see what will happen at the ministry and with Ginny!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks. :) I'm so glad you liked it. I have some plans for the Ministry, and what happens there will help shape things nicely for our couple. ~grin~

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WriterMerrin

I might confess that after just having finished reading a long, unsatisfying story, I needed something to cheer me up.  I was still leery about half way through this chapter, but once Severus begun his sweet seduction, I felt quite cheered.  He let his guard down.

All that and plot development, too ;)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

~grin~ Glad I didn't "let you down"  bwahahahaha

10/10

harrypotterwanter

Yay! I'm glad that Severus did not actually have sex with Rain. Even though he's had sex with her before, it's different now that he has a relationship with Hermione. How will they deal tomorrow? They seemed to have quite a good shag. Will Hermione rest with him or will she just leave the bed and start the day? I look forward to reading more!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

I hope you like the "tomorrow" for them. :)

10/10

Eva_Snape

Bad girl Southern!  I cannot wait for the conversation I'm sure will follow.  That was a bit of heaven, this slice of lemon.  I loved her reaction to his action.  Brilliant.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Let's hope you like the next chapter. :)

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Guinnevere

All's well that ends well - and this chapter ended VERY well.  But I hope Rain is a competent enough witch to have repaired the door that Hermione shattered.

Lucky Severus!  First, because Hermione sincerely wants him (well, who could blame her?), and second because she didn't hex his silly arse to kingdom-come, in her jealous rage.

And, finally, lucky Hermione.  He's a honey, and she deserves him.  Good chapter, Southern. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thank you very much! :)There was such a storm at dear Rain's house. LOL  Hope you like what's next! ~grin~

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lilyginny27

Oh, I was roflmao when she blasted out that door.  I would have loved to have seen the looks on their faces...

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Hehehe. She was quite angry. Bwahahahha

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Terab

About time!!!  Great chapter :-)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

LOL Thanks!

10/10

Merlinsbeard

Loved it!  Hot sex with Snape...................................what more could a girl want.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

I agree! :)

10/10

Sniv

Mmmmm! *melts* I like an angry Hermione - and so good to see that Snape seemed to like it too ;-) Then again I'm looking forward to seeing how they'll both react in the morning... Great chapter!!!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

He did enjoy it. Teehee. More up now. HOpe you like! :)

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septentrion

There was a lot of action in this chapter... of good action.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Becoming Whole)

Thanks! :)

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