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Captivation and Obsession
_Levicorpus_255 Reviews | 6.53/10 (255 Ratings, 0 Likes, 247 Favorites )
Years after the Final Battle, a new professor strolls into Hogwarts only to captivate Severus to the point of obsession.
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Captivation and Obsession: All done! The story has been reccomended at The_New_Library on livejournal.com, a great resource for finding lesser-known fics!
Stay tuned for “To Be Or Not To Be”, a chaptered Sev/Hermione fic.
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Glad your back with us!!Lovely chapter seeing Severus all weak hehe.Look forward to his decision!! x.x.x
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
I'm so glad to be back! Thanks for the review.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
I'm so glad to be back! Thanks for the review.
Ah HA! Hermione calls him on his shy boy looking away. Whatever will he do? Fess up I hope!!!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
She's exactly the kind of woman he needs!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
She's exactly the kind of woman he needs!
I laughed out loud when Severus' reflection agreed with him and couldnt beleive Hermione either! Poor man was like a deer in headlights for awhile there.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Aw, thanks so much. I had a little giggle when the image walked into my mind as well. Thank you for the lovely review.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Aw, thanks so much. I had a little giggle when the image walked into my mind as well. Thank you for the lovely review.
I just found this story and totally caught up - great tale. I just can't believe that whan I find it, it is at this cliffie! Oh well, my luck... I am really looking forward to an update - I am also really enjoying Snape's POV. It's very interesting.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Wow, thank you! I do love the new-comers. I hope I see you on the next chapter.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Wow, thank you! I do love the new-comers. I hope I see you on the next chapter.
Brat! Thats just mean leaving us here. Hmm RL must be very involving. good for you!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Ooohh, you have no idea. I can barely remember to eat or get any writing done. But although RL continues in all its cruel rapidity, I shall stay committed to my readers. Thanks for your great review! 5 stars just looks like so many to an eye blinded by the strain of real life.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Ooohh, you have no idea. I can barely remember to eat or get any writing done. But although RL continues in all its cruel rapidity, I shall stay committed to my readers. Thanks for your great review! 5 stars just looks like so many to an eye blinded by the strain of real life.
He better chooses the right path or ... I don't know what but still.
And I don't mind waiting for updates when they're as good as this chapter is. It's the second good surprise of that sort this week and I'm in Heaven for the reminder.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Why, thank you. Also, to drop a little bit of a teasing hint, I do believe you'll be pleased with his choice. I was.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Why, thank you. Also, to drop a little bit of a teasing hint, I do believe you'll be pleased with his choice. I was.
Go for it, Sev! Hehe. I don't mind the time between updates; it just ensures I reread everything. :)
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Rereading! How flattering!Thank you for your review.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Rereading! How flattering!Thank you for your review.
The weak moments of Severus Snape - brilliant! I hope he has more of those...
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Don't we all? =)
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Don't we all? =)
oh good grief.... Please be quick with chapter 10! I have been waiting so long for this story I have cobwebs covering my keyboard! I love it so much, the build up and the intensity - I almost feel Severus's angst!!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
I'm so sorry to have left you waiting! You'll have chapter ten as soon as possible.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
I'm so sorry to have left you waiting! You'll have chapter ten as soon as possible.
Thankyou for updating again. I have enjoyed catching up with your story again - he's got it baaad! I do love the imagery you use. Just a minor point - The last two sentences of the last two paragraphs. It seems with the first of these he has already made his mind up/ there is a shift, but then you say that he has to make a decision seems to be contradictory. The "he had to make a decision" line could insert between 'A tentative hand rested on his back. He looked up.' and the 'He looked up. He didn’t realize that the time in which he turned his head would be the last seconds of his previous life.' could be moved to the end? But this then removes a bit of the ambiguity too....hmmm. Notwithstanding as I have said before this it's a great read and I look forward to reading more.Cheers.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Thank you so much for your meticulous review! I did kind of crank out the editing of this chapter a little more quickly than I'd have liked. I promise you I will be more careful with the next one.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Thank you so much for your meticulous review! I did kind of crank out the editing of this chapter a little more quickly than I'd have liked. I promise you I will be more careful with the next one.
And the decision is...? Wonderful chapter, but that was a cruel spot to end things.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Haha, I know! I will get to editing chapter 10 right away. Thanks for your review.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Haha, I know! I will get to editing chapter 10 right away. Thanks for your review.
great chapter. i can't wait to read more!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Thanks so much!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Thanks so much!
What happens to the grouchy professor? Is Hermione still seeing Draco? Whatever happened between those two? What's wrong with Severus Snape?
Way to keep a girl guessing! Thanks for writing. :)
OMG! It has just occurred to me that this news that Severus has received about his "need for a new course of medication" may have been what Hermione had been told that made her unresponsive and unable to talk to him after she had returned to bed after talking to whomever it was that knocked on her door in the middle of the night. (Whew! That was probably one of the longest and worse sentences I've ever written).If she had learned of this resurgence of the effects of his near death at Voldemort's hand, I can imagine that she would not have been able to face a discussion of what had upset her so much. It took her three days to be able to speak to him again, and then it was the weekend before she came to him with passion for him intact and her love for him evident once again. Even though he was tired and weary when she came into his quarters, her hot kiss knocked the "antiquated tiredness right out of him."
In Chapter Nine, you wrote: "The healers said that while in his coma, Snape’s passions had lessened. He believed them, since he had found an especial lackluster in all that he saw. He’d had to read potions journals for days on end while recuperating to be able to teach again. He took advantage of the situation to let his unhealthy obsession for Lily recede into the sands of time. It was time to let go."
I can't help but wonder if the passion he has begun to feel again with Hermione has triggered a relapse. While he was waiting in her bathroom for her to see who was banging on her door that night, the stress had made "his old aches and pains from the early Saint Mungo’s days' flare up. And now he finds out that even though Voldemort is dead, he is still able to make Severus' life miserable.
I hope Severus and the healers are able to find a way to cure him once and for all. Perhaps Hermione and Draco will be able to offer some insights from their respective disciplines.Beth
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Another wow!! Well, all I can really say is keep reading. I love how closely you're paying attention.
Hi! Welcome back! This chapter hasn't missed a beat, and I'm thrilled to see you posting again. I'm so happy Severus and Hermione have gotten to this point in their relationship, but with this midnight interruption and the sound of her mug shattering on the floor, I'm afraid of what might have happened.This chapter has taken me from the heights of hope to fearing for the future. Well done! Beth
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Wow!! What an excellent review. Thank you so much. I can't wait to see what you think of my next update.
I loved all the shenanigans at the staff party, especially the game. Spin the bottle coupled with "Truth or Dare" can make for lots of fun, or in the case of Severus' dare for Lucius, it can lead to lots of cat-fighting. It was pure Snape for him to have told Lucius to kiss Septima and then beg off to go to bed. If Lucius follows through, Camille is going to have a fit.
I hope Hermione will beg off, too. She can say she's ready for bed... and then she and Severus can go to bed together.
You know, I can see how Legilimancy could be a handy thing.
Beth
LOL
oh MAN that is so unfair. Stupid moldybutt.
oh no. Poor Severus. Just when he was getting to enjoy life this dark lord crap has to creep in again. Ooh, I hate that Moldywart.
ooh, what's happening now?!
oh come on, Severus! Make the right decision you silly man!
Just makes me smile.
Too funny with the game of spin the bottle! I hope we get to see Hermione find out about his condition soon! He obviously feels more for Hermione than he wants to believe he does. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
I know! I couldn't help but slip ever so briefly into the PWP genre.
Too funny with the game of spin the bottle! I hope we get to see Hermione find out about his condition soon! He obviously feels more for Hermione than he wants to believe he does. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
That was funny.