Romantic Hideaway
Chapter 28 of 31
ClayPotterSienna tells Severus a secret that makes him very happy. Then Severus tells Sienna a secret that upsets her deeply.
ReviewedA/N:This chapter is for all of you who love erotic scenes... I really used my imagination on this one. Please let me know if it sparks yours.
As always, my heartfelt thanks go out to NervousAboutAngels and JENGEORGE for all of their great suggestions. I must also include the staff here at The Petulant Poetess for their hard work. They have been instrumental in making me a better writer.
I make no money, I take no credit. The great J. K. Rowling invented everything here that you find familiar.
Chapter 28
"Romantic Hideaway Out of Sight,
Plans for the Future Looking Bright"
Winky took the news of Dobby's death rather hard but found comfort in knowing that he had died saving the life of his favorite wizard, Harry Potter. Her pride in his noble death helped her to recover quickly, and in an attempt to emulate him, she became a bit more enamored with the idea of being a free elf herself.
As the days turned into weeks, Severus and Sienna realized that Harry wasn't going anywhere any time soon. So Sienna began checking in once or twice a day for updates, but she no longer kept up a constant vigil reading Harry's mind.
And although the trouble makers had started out with a bang, the former DA members soon learned to keep a much lower profile since the Carrows were taking great pleasure in harsh punishments following the Dark Lord's new mandate.
Spring semester blew by with much less excitement than the fall had afforded them. Sienna rarely made clandestine visits to the hospital wing any more. She and Severus had both finally concluded that her help eased their pain and sped up the healing process too much. It had ultimately lulled the trouble makers into a false sense of security that no real harm could come to them. So Sienna reserved her visits only for cases where life or limb was threatened. After Michael Corner was almost killed for setting free a first year in chains, Sienna saved him and checked him over thoroughly to be sure he was out of any real danger, but his pain and disfigurement were so great that the misbehaving came almost completely to a halt. After watching Michael suffer horribly, the other DA members must have finally gotten the message.
Severus began to wonder if Sienna was going stir crazy in the secret room. He would have suggested she go to the ashram for a week or two just for a change of scenery, but he also felt an urgent desire to get her pregnant which he acted upon almost nightly. He was determined to keep that pace up until his goal was reached. Sienna certainly didn't seem to mind his increased amorous desire. Quite the contrary -- her youthful exuberance and raging hormones made every night a new adventure. Severus never knew life could be this much fun.
April arrived, and with it a new rash of graffiti on the walls and dung bombs in the corridors. The Carrows could prove nothing, but took great pleasure in torturing the usual DA members for information. Severus knew Neville must have been behind it and began to fear for the boy's life and the life of his grandmother. So after due consideration, Severus finally called the boy into his office. Neville had only just been released from detention and struggled up the spiral staircase after uttering the password Severus had included in his summons. Severus made a mental note to change the password as soon as Neville left.
Severus motioned for Neville to sit in the waiting wooden chair. He regarded the boy for a few moments, studying the bruises and cuts on his face. He could have healed the fresh cuts with a few waves of his wand, but he restrained himself. It saddened Severus to think his face would be scarred for life, but if the pain of those cuts could serve as a reminder that would perhaps save his life, it would be a small price to pay. Curiously, Neville didn't seem nervous, as he would have in years passed. No, this young man had grown and matured considerably over the past few months.
"Longbottom..." Severus' eyes narrowed with intimidation. He kept his voice silky smooth and quiet as he chose his words carefully. "I have no doubt that you are behind these latest flair-ups of rampant insolence."
Neville glared at him defiantly. "You got nothing on me, sir."
"The Carrows have been given permission to use more drastic measures on chronic cases."
"They wouldn't kill me. I'm a pure blood."
"I'm afraid your bloodlines will no longer guarantee your safety," Severus replied coldly.
Neville shifted uncomfortably in his hard chair. "What sort of drastic measures are we talking about... sir?"
Severus raised an eyebrow. Perhaps the boy was finally taking him seriously. "I'll leave the details for your overactive imagination to fill in. Suffice it to say, you will long for the days of the Cruciatus Curse and Sectum Sempra."
Neville met his scrutinizing gaze with anger. "And I suppose I have you to thank for these drastic measures, sir?"
"No, actually, the orders come from a source... over my head." Severus knew the young man would understand that to mean Voldemort. It was never spelled out for the student body that the Dark Lord had the last word for everything that went on at Hogwarts, but everyone knew it to be so.
Neville swallowed hard but remained combative. "I'm not afraid," he replied spitefully.
"Ah, yes. That's very noble and brave of you, to be sure... A true Gryffindor to the last," Severus droned sarcastically. "But there are others to be considered. You see," he continued, "you are not the only person they may take their wrath out on."
He stopped to let his words sink in.
Concern and resentment spread slowly across Neville's face as he put the pieces together.
"I suggest you modify your behavior. I wouldn't want to be responsible for someone else's pain... incarceration... or death... Would you?" He could almost see a shiver go down Neville's spine. But a hint of defiance remained in his eyes.
"Will that be all, sir?"
"For now."
Neville rose and started for the door.
"Watch yourself, Longbottom," he added with a tone that mixed fatherly advice with a menacing air.
When Severus could no longer hear Neville's footsteps down the corridor, he closed the door and spoke to it. "This is Headmaster Snape. The password will now change from Wulfric to Brian. I repeat: the password will now change from Wulfric to Brian."
*****
Two weeks later, Severus heard a rumor that Death Eaters had failed in their attempt to capture Neville's grandmother. A short time later, Neville himself disappeared, but the dung bombs and graffiti did not. Other troublemakers stopped coming to class and meals one by one, and no one could shed any light as to their whereabouts. But the clandestine disruptions became more frequent. Aberforth would only tell Severus that he didn't want to know what was going on, so at least Severus could be confident that Aberforth was helping them and that they wouldn't starve.
With Sienna's help, he finally discovered that they were hiding in the Room of Requirement. But as long as one of them stayed in there, he couldn't get the door to open. It was maddening in a way, but when he finally resolved himself to their predicament, he found their psychological torture of the Carrows quite entertaining. He inwardly cheered them on and had to force himself to react with anger when the Carrows came to him with complaints of their latest disruption.
*****
Spring was in full swing and with it much more pleasant weather. Winky began to take Sienna up to the cliffs on the far side of the Lake to meditate, and Severus could immediately see a change for the better in her attitude.
On the very first night of May, Severus came back to the secret room after dinner in the Great Hall. Instead of finding Sienna getting ready for bed, she met him fully dressed with a mischievous gleam in her sparkling blue-gray eyes. She grabbed both of his hands in hers and pulled him close as she gazed lovingly up into his smiling face. "Can we go for a walk by the lake...please?" she added as he began to object. "It's dark, no one will see us. Perhaps we could find a little cove that's not visible from the castle."
Severus furrowed his brow. But she was beaming at him and radiating a joyous energy that began to dissolve his objections. She so seldom asked for anything. He couldn't bring himself to refuse her. "Oh, alright," he conceded. "For a little while."
They asked Winky to transport them to the water's edge and promised to call her when they were ready to return. As the two walked hand in hand with the castle rising up behind them, he couldn't help but wonder if they were finally living Sienna's vision. They walked in silence for a few minutes, enjoying the cool crisp night air and the pleasant absence of insects that would undoubtedly descend upon the area in the days to come.
"I brought you here for a reason," Sienna finally broke the silence.
"Oh?" Severus waited with baited breath.
"I have news... I think you'll be pleased, but under our current circumstances I can't be sure."
He had a feeling he knew what she was about to say. With hope swelling his heart to a monstrous size, he waited impatiently for her to continue.
"We're going to be parents," she said softly and with great apprehension.
Severus cocked his head back with relief. He let out a faint cry of joy and started laughing. "I knew it." This time it was his turn to beam at her. They both began to laugh as he pulled her close. He gazed into her inviting eyes. "You have made me unimaginably happy," he admitted as a joyous tear meandered down his cheek. "Thank you," he added softly. Then they kissed like there was no tomorrow, a long, wet, passionate kiss that left them both giddy.
"Let's see if we can find that cove you mentioned," Severus suggested with an impish grin.
As they continued to walk hand in hand, Sienna reached up and touched his hair. "Are you getting gray?"
"I should hope not! I'm only 39."
"Ah, don't worry," she said as she ran her fingers through his hair. "I think it's just the moonlight reflecting off of it."
"Oh, that's good to know." He smiled down on her. Perhaps this was her vision after all.
"I'm so relieved that you're pleased by my bit of news."
"How long have you known?"
"I had my suspicions last month, but I didn't want to say anything until I knew for sure."
"So when do you think she'll be born?"
Sienna looked at him curiously, "December ninth, if my calculations are correct. But what makes you think it's going to be a girl?"
Severus finally admitted his last dream with Lily and why he had suddenly become so amorous. Sienna's mood immediately became melancholy and she was deathly quiet as they continued along the shore.
An outcropping of rock put an abrupt end to the shore line, but Severus remembered that if they swerved inland, they could find a path that led to the other side. He had made a point of exploring the shore line during the many lonely hours he had spent here in his youth, so he knew it well. As they emerged on the other side, a secluded cove presented itself, just as Severus had remembered. A wide sandy beach lay before them, and gentle waves quietly lapped against the surrounding rocks. With the quarter moon rising over the opposite shore, Severus couldn't have dreamt of a more romantic spot.
He conjured a fluffy down comforter for them to sit on, took Sienna's hand in his, and they sat down. "Now please tell me what is troubling you," he insisted.
She stared at the water as it shimmered in the moonlight. Words escaped her for some time, but she finally found the courage to speak. "I'm just afraid you'll forget about me once you have Lily back in your life."
Severus sat in shocked silence for a moment. Then he reached up gently and took her face in his hands. "Look at me," he coaxed. When her eyes finally met his, he realized she was crying. "How could you ever think that? Look into my mind my heart. Can't you tell how much I love you?"
"But she's your soul mate. What chance do I have?"
"She'll be my daughter. And you will still be my wife." His eyes bore into hers as he willed her to read his mind. When her tears did not subside, he let go of her face and looked out at the sparkling water in frustration. "Perhaps this is just some hormonal thing you're going through because of the pregnancy," he suggested with annoyance.
"But what if you spend all of your affections on her? I need to feel your arms around me, Severus. I need you in my life, not just as a bread winner. I need your heart, your love and devotion."
"And you will always have it," he reassured her. "When Lily expressed a desire to return to me, I was only willing after she assured me that I would love her strictly in a fatherly fashion. I will reserve all of my romantic desires for you and you alone." Sienna still looked skeptical. Then Severus remembered Dumbledore's advice from before they were married, and he wrapped his arms around her. He rocked her back and forth for a long time. "I will love you and seek your affections to my dying day and beyond," he whispered. "Please believe me. You have nothing to worry about."
Much to Severus' dismay, she was totally unresponsive. "Can't you read my mind right now?"
"No, actually, I guess my emotions are so strong that they have clouded my view. Or perhaps I'm just being selfish."
Severus decided that a more persuasive tactic was in order. "Well," he mused as his eyes sparkled seductively, "if you could read my mind, you'd know that I am currently salivating at the mere thought of tasting you."
Sienna's face became hopeful.
"For instance..." Severus leaned down and began to nibble on her ear. "Mmmm... delicious. But your ear pales in comparison to your neck." His lips slowly progressed to said area, where they gently sucked as his tongue caressed her skin. "Ahh. Just a hint of salt. Did our short walk overexert you?" he asked with true concern.
"No, I think I was just nervous because I didn't know how you would take the news of my pregnancy, and then also what you said about Lily."
Severus shook his head slowly. "As I said, nothing to worry about. Now, where was I?"
"I believe you were giving me a hickey."
"You don't mind if I leave that job unfinished, do you? I feel that there are other, more effective, ways of marking my territory." He raised his eyebrows, awaiting her consent.
"By all means, carry on as you wish." She finally bestowed a smile on him.
With great relief, he returned her smile, but he knew he still had some convincing to do.
"Now, your mouth," he continued, "is another matter entirely. More than a vault full of flavors, such wonderful textures await to tantalize my tongue. Did you know that the tongue is one of the most sensitive parts of the body?"
"No."
He thought he noticed a sparkle returning to her eyes, thank Merlin. Sensing an opportunity, he leaned in gently and began to kiss her, his lips slightly parted. It felt as if his sense of touch had been magnified somehow. Her delicately trembling lips felt softer and hotter than ever before. As his tongue coaxed her mouth open, he felt the hard smooth surface of her teeth, the ridges in the roof of her mouth, and the roughness of her tongue as it began to stroke his. His heart filled with joy as she began to take an active part in the kiss. She must have regained the ability to read his thoughts again because she began to respond to his desires as only Sienna could. He had begun this overture with the tasting theme, and she could tell that he wished to continue the encounter along those lines. But apparently, she could also tell that he wanted to work for his rewards.
"Ahh," he murmured upon releasing her mouth, "delicious." His eyes followed her neckline down to her cleavage. "I believe this lovely dress is about to get in my way. After all, my taste buds have only begun their adventure." He reached behind her and lowered her zipper, then pulled the sleeves off her arms. His lips found her collarbone and worked their way to the newly exposed cleavage. His fingers pushed one of the bra cups to the side, but it wasn't enough. He stopped long enough to penetrate her soul with his intense black eyes. "More pesky clothing."
Sienna smirked at him and began to reach behind her back to unclasp the bra, but he stopped her.
"Allow me." In a flash, it had fallen to the down comforter that they were sitting on, and her bosom burst forth, young, firm, and swollen from the onslaught of pregnancy. His penis twitched inside his pants. "Merlin, you are more beautiful now than ever."
"Perhaps, but will you still think so six months from now when I'm waddling and swelled up like a balloon?"
He beamed at her with a joy that he had never felt before. "There's a life growing inside of you that is the product of our love for each other. You will become more beautiful, and I will want you more, with each passing day.
"Now, where was I? Oh, yes." He dove for her nipples, already firm and rock hard, just as his erection was fast becoming. He caressed and sucked gently, just as she had taught him to do. He knew that this was one of her favorite pastimes.
She gasped with delight and let the breath out through her teeth in a long, soft hiss. Another gasp produced his favorite phrase: "Yessss, Severusss." She began to blindly grope for the buttons on his frock coat, but his hands intercepted hers.
"Relax," he cooed. "Your radar must still be in a state of disrepair, or you would surely know that I want to drive you completely wild before I give you any access to me whatsoever. I have always wanted to make love to you while I am fully clothed and you are completely naked. In fact, I have an idea that may enhance the experience for us both. Do you trust me?"
"What a silly question. Of course I do."
Severus smirked impishly and raised his eyebrows. "I want to try something new. We've been experimenting quite a bit lately, but with the less than soft landscape, and my knees being what they are, I thought this might be the perfect opportunity to try a new spell that I've been working on."
"And what spell is that?" She looked a bit apprehensive.
"It's a surprise." His impish look grew into devilishness. "Could you lie back, please?"
Her apprehension morphed into suspicion.
"I thought you said that you trust me!"
"Can you give me a hint at least?"
"Lie back," he insisted. "You'll be glad you did. I promise."
Reluctantly, Sienna stretched her legs out straight in front of her. Then she slowly and cautiously leaned back until her body was completely horizontal, but her eyes never left his. "I'm all yours."
"Yes, you are, aren't you?" he purred. He lay down beside her and propped his head up on one hand as the other hand caressed her face. Then he worked his way down the center of her chest and back up again. "But what you seem to forget sometimes is that I am yours as well, from the top of my greasy git head..."
"You head is not greasy and you are not a git!"
"... to the bottom of my gnarly toes..."
"Albus had gnarly toes. Yours are beautiful."
"... and every fiber of my heart, soul and spirit in between."
Finally, Sienna began to beam back at him. "I can see what you have in mind. This should prove interesting."
"Finally!" He rolled his eyes in mock irritation. "You really have me spoiled, you know. It's high time I returned the favor." He whipped out his wand in a flash and touched it to Sienna's abdomen. "Leviosa Longitudina." Sienna's body rose up off the ground just a few inches. "How does that feel?" he asked tentatively.
"Like I'm floating on a cloud," she admitted with amazement.
"Try to move for me," he commanded.
She could speak and move her face, she could turn and lift her head slightly, and she could wiggle her hands and feet from the wrists and ankles down to her fingers and toes. But her arms and legs wouldn't move. "This is a bit frustrating. Almost like a Full Body Bind Curse."
"I'll have to work on the amount of dexterity the spell affords its victim. But this will do for now." He got to his feet and bent down, grabbing her waist with both hands. He pulled her floating form up to workbench height and discovered with delight that she remained there after he released her.
"Perfect!" He slid the dress down just enough to give him open and easy access to her swollen breasts; then he continued to taste them each in turn, tickling and laving them one by one. He found that he could wrap his arms around her back without encumbrances, and she delighted in his every touch.
Like a kid with a long wished for new toy, Severus explored the endless possibilities that presented themselves with her floating in mid air. When he wanted to kiss her back, he raised her up for easy access. When his lips hungered for hers, he would pull her back down again. After thoroughly tasting the top half of her body, he began to work on the bottom half. He slipped her shoes off one by one and watched her squirm and giggle as he sucked each toe. For the sake of keeping her warm, Severus pushed Sienna's lose dress up over her waist. Then he dispensed with her knickers and kissed and nipped his way up her inner thighs after prying her legs apart. His touch lightly tantalized her senses as he caressed her legs, over, under, inside and out... and her buttocks, so round, so firm, so soft.
Her crotch now stared him in the face. But he wanted to be able to view her reactions while tasting her core. So he gently pushed her down slightly and gazed into her eyes with curiosity. "Can you bend your knees?"
"I don't think so. I think you have to do it."
He grabbed her leg where it met her hip with one hand, and wrapped his other hand around her ankle. Then he pushed her foot towards the rest of her body. When the task was repeated with the other leg, he angled her butt up slightly. Perfect! Now he could dive face first into her core while still gazing into her eyes. But he found that the dastardly dress now obstructed his view of her impeccable breasts. He could cast a spell to keep her warm if need be, but that dress would have to go. With one graceful sweep of his arm, Severus pulled the dress the length of her body and tossed it aside. Now she floated before him, completely naked. Merlin, what a turn-on!
"Are you enjoying yourself?"
Severus snorted incredulously. "You have no idea!"
"Actually, I do. I have full access to your thoughts and emotions again."
"I suspected as much." He ran his fingers lightly around her labia and just barely touched her clit. Then he licked and laved his fingers and coaxed open her dripping wet entrance. Before tasting her, he blew on the spot gently.
"God, you know just how to drive me wild." Her brow furrowed. She almost seemed stressed.
Severus chuckled as his tongue entered her and began to caress and tickle as only his tongue could do. All the while his hands massaged her behind, and his fingers lightly ran down her crack to tickle her anus. His penis felt so hard in his pants that he took a moment to unbutton his frock coat and unzip his fly, so he could free the stifled member. It popped out of its own accord and stood straight out perpendicular from his body. He could feel the tip already weeping as he went back to tickling her clit with his tongue and entered her heat with two fingers.
"Severus, God, Severus, please!"
Just her words almost sent him over the edge. He took a deep breath and tried to hold on to his composure. He was determined to send her to the brink of insanity, and he knew that in order to do that, he would need to give her breasts just a bit more attention. He withdrew his fingers and pushed her down gently to crotch level. Then he walked around her leg to her right side, relocated her right arm up over her head, and placed her left arm at her crotch. "Can you stimulate yourself like this?"
"Yes, but I would much rather..."
"Good." He proceeded to lean into her side and tickle her nipple with the head of his still-weeping, rock-hard cock. He used his other hand to stimulate her other nipple.
She began to quiver and moan. "Severus, please. Be merciful!"
He knew that he couldn't take much more himself, so he quickly, almost frantically, repositioned himself at her crotch and let the head of his cock lubricate her fingers, her clit and her entrance, before sinking into her core. He took it slowly, knowing that she preferred to be teased. Only his dark glistening head at first. Then just a small part of his shaft. He could hear her gasp and moan as he grabbed both of her butt cheeks and pulled her towards him. With her floating like this, her body felt weightless in his hands and he could move her at will, an infinitesimal amount, or several inches, almost with no effort at all. Up, down, side to side, the direction made no difference.
Oh, Merlin, she felt good. And she was wet, so very, very wet. He slid in only a couple of inches, then moved her body in a circular motion as his cock slid in and out, a little deeper with each stroke. He could feel her muscles tightening around him.
"Severusss. Yessss, Severusss."
Deeper. Faster. Her muscles began to spasm as they tightened around his granite-hard cock.
"Severus...God...Severus!"
Her wet heat and primal moans coaxed him onward. An unmistakable sensation started in his loins and shot through the head of his cock as he heard himself half groan, half scream in ecstasy. He could hold back no longer and spilled his seed into her welcoming body.
Then he ripped his own clothes off while still inside of her and scooped her up, silently releasing her from the levitation spell. He longed for skin on skin contact. Her legs wrapped around his waist, her arms around his neck, their bodies pressed together in the afterglow of the most incredible sex either of them had ever experienced.
Severus lowered himself to the ground and they lay together in a warm embrace as the moon drifted overhead. He conjured another blanket for their comfort, and they fell fast asleep.
*****
When Severus awoke the next morning, the sky above him shone so brightly it hurt his eyes. He gasped with anxiety as he fumbled for his pocket watch in the pile of clothes by his side. "Sienna, wake up it's already 7:30! I've missed breakfast and you've missed Potter!"
Sienna sat up suddenly with the news. "I'm so sorry. I had read that pregnant women need a lot of extra sleep during their first trimester, but I had no idea it would be this bad."
They hastily slipped back into their clothes and called Winky, who popped them back to the secret room. As soon as she was gone, Severus halted his rush to freshen up and touched Sienna's face gently. "Thank you for last night. I shall treasure the memory always."
"Me, too," she admitted as she caressed his hand. He bent down to give her a quick kiss and then it was back to business.
"I'm going to shower and change into some fresh clothes. Why don't you see if you can find Potter? Gringotts always has guards at the front door. Find out if either of them has seen Bellatrix Lestrange this morning."
"But the Bank doesn't open until 8:00, right? So they won't be able to get in until then."
Severus glanced again at his watch. "It's almost 8:00 now."
"Well, go on then. I'll let you know when I find out something."
Severus showered and changed in his quarters so as to not distract her. Then he headed to his office to tackle the usual morning paperwork. A few moments later, Sienna called to him from the archway. "They're in. I'll try to keep tabs on them."
"Does anyone suspect anything?"
"I'm not sure; Harry Confunded the two at the front door. I think he was forced to Imperio a Death Eater who decided to tag along."
"Potter casting Unforgivables... truly an act of desperation." Severus began to worry. How could they possibly pull this off? And what could he do about it if they were caught? "What's happening now?"
She didn't answer right away. She had to find them again. "I don't know. I don't think they're in the lobby any more. Perhaps they are headed down to the vault already. This may be difficult."
Severus returned to the secret room and sat beside Sienna on the love seat as she closed her eyes to concentrate. Several minutes passed before she opened her eyes with a look of frustration. "I can't find them. The underground tunnels are like a maze, going in many different directions. It's like trying to find a needle in a haystack. I'm afraid they'll come back out while I'm searching the tunnels, and I won't even know if they succeeded or not!"
"Perhaps you should concentrate on one of the goblins in the lobby. He will surely notice if Bellatrix comes back through. Make sure you chose someone who has not been Imperiused or Confunded."
"Right."
Babaji had been correct, as always. Severus really felt grateful for her mind-reading ability as he made his way back into the office and continued to work at his desk.
About an hour passed before she came running in. "They did it! They escaped!"
"Where are they now?"
"I still don't have their location. They came bursting out of the tunnels on a DRAGON! It all happened so fast that the goblin whose mind I was reading didn't know what was going on until they were already out the door. He ran and hid behind the counter. So by the time his mind could tell me about it, they were airborne and too far away for me to find. They could have gone in an infinite number of directions."
"Did they retrieve Hufflepuff's Cup?" asked Dumbledore's portrait."
"Not sure. I need to find someone of authority to focus in on and find out what they took."
"Well, at least we know they're still alive and still free," added Severus.
"Thank Merlin's wand," commented Phineas Nigellus.
Sienna smiled at Severus and headed back to the secret room, where they sat together again on the loveseat as she closed her eyes. "Griphook is among the Goblins... He's got the sword of Gryffindor. I was afraid of that, the double-crossing little..."
"Sienna, I'm surprised at you. I thought you were taught not to judge people," Severus taunted her. He was actually relieved to see that she was not so "perfect" after all.
"A little golden cup, yes, the cup, that must be it. That's the only thing that's missing from the vault."
"Good. They got it. But without the sword, how will they destroy it, I wonder?"
"I don't know." She opened her locket and called Dumbledore's name. He appeared obligingly, with a slight bow.
"How may I be of service, my love?"
"Albus, they have Hufflepuff's cup, but Griphook managed to steal the Sword of Gryffindor from them. What other ways are there to destroy a Horcrux?"
"A Horcrux can only be destroyed by a magical object or spell of great destructive power, but it also must be able to protect itself from the Horcrux, since the bit of soul inside will no doubt attempt to defend itself. Harry used a Basilisk fang in his second year here to destroy the diary. I suppose any Goblin-made knife, sword or hammer that was soaked in Basilisk venom would do the trick. It wouldn't necessarily have to be the Sword of Gryffindor."
"And none easy to come by, even under the best of circumstances," Severus observed. "Well, there's not much else we can do except wait. Sienna, I know it will probably prove a waste of your time, but keep looking for them. You might get lucky."
"Yes, love," she sighed, looking down at the locket. "Thanks, Albus. See you later."
"You know, it's lunch time. I should go down to the Great Hall, since I didn't make it to breakfast. Why don't you take a break and eat something. Pregnant women are always hungry."
She smiled. "Good idea."
Severus disappeared down the spiral staircase.
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Ok, I'm going to give it another chapter, but I see some issues. I know how how badly it impacts a writer when they get a bad review. So, I'm going to try to be helpful and not just talk down you to about not liking the story. You have a good start, but it's just too coincidental. The description of this girl is even odd. Try for subtelty. I can see where you are going a mile away. You don't have to be so blatant about things. There is no lead up to her appearing in his room and offering to be his assistant.The Lilly interlude was also strangely done. For a moment I wasn't sure that you were inferring he was dreaming or if she was a ghost... or if she was real. THat being said, you have a great idea, but the execution just lacks some. I'm going to continue to read because I think the idea is interesting and I hope you keep writing.
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Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
. Thanks for taking the time to review. I understand your concerns about the beginning of this story. I don take offense at all at your gentle constructive criticism. It was my first attempt at creative writing since high school, and by my own admission, it wasn't very good. If you can suffer through the first few chapters, it does actually get better, though. I got to know the characters and got a better feel for writing in general. If you look at the posting date for the first chapter, you'll see that it was several years ago. If you don't wish to continue, I certainly understand. Someday I would like to re-write the first 10 chapters, but right now, I am working on the last 6 chapters of my only other story, "Secret Recipe". If I ever get that done, I will go back and tweak this one.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Hi
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
. Thanks for taking the time to review. I understand your concerns about the beginning of this story. I don take offense at all at your gentle constructive criticism. It was my first attempt at creative writing since high school, and by my own admission, it wasn't very good. If you can suffer through the first few chapters, it does actually get better, though. I got to know the characters and got a better feel for writing in general. If you look at the posting date for the first chapter, you'll see that it was several years ago. If you don't wish to continue, I certainly understand. Someday I would like to re-write the first 10 chapters, but right now, I am working on the last 6 chapters of my only other story, "Secret Recipe". If I ever get that done, I will go back and tweak this one.
I have sat and read this story in its entirety over the past 7 hours. I wasn't sure if I would like it, but I must say, this is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. I'm not sure I can find the words to explain to you the effect this story has had on me.It's not just incredibly well written (which it is)... The depth and clarity of your own creative plot-line was absolutely amazing. It was believeable. Not to mention, quite outside the box - which was so refreshing in fanfic.I've been reading fanfic for several years. Your story just blew me away. So complex, yet, incredibly simple. J,K. spouted about love over-coming - you brought MEANING to it. Like - "here's a cake" - you showed HOW to MAKE the cake. It was beautiful.I can't possibly praise this story as it truly deserves. It touched my soul. Thank you for sharing it.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Hi
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
, and thank you so much for your generous review. I have never received such praise from a reader and I am humbled by your words. Unlike the story I am currently working on which has been a struggle to write, The Potion Master's Assistant came to me in waves of inspiration. I carried my notebook everywhere and was constantly writing it down... at the dinner table, in bed before drifting off or late at night when I couldn't sleep, even in long lines waiting for rides at Disney World. I would sit on my notebook when we finally got to go on the ride! I knew most people wouldn't even give it a try because it was not a SS/HG pairing, but there was no way I could make it work with those two. I felt that Severus needed someone who would accept and love him unconditionally, and I figured it would take someone with extrodinary patience to do that. While she was in school, Hermione was not that type of person. We all love Severus, but let's face it, he would not be an easy person to live with. I had a friend who was very prickly like Severus. Many people hated him, many tried to ignor him. I was only ever nice to him, even when he was mean to me. We became dear friends mainly because I took the time to understand him. He turned out to be bi-polar, which made him wonderful sometimes and horrible other times. Very intelligent with a dry wit, but he could be very cruel if he was in a bad mood. So I modeled Sienna's and Severus' beginning around the way our friendship developed. I succeeded in becoming his friend because I stuck it out no matter how badly he treated me. Eventually I won him over. In the end he committed suicide, but I will always consider him one of my dearest friends.This story came pouring from my soul. I'm so glad to know that it touched yours.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Hi
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
, and thank you so much for your generous review. I have never received such praise from a reader and I am humbled by your words. Unlike the story I am currently working on which has been a struggle to write, The Potion Master's Assistant came to me in waves of inspiration. I carried my notebook everywhere and was constantly writing it down... at the dinner table, in bed before drifting off or late at night when I couldn't sleep, even in long lines waiting for rides at Disney World. I would sit on my notebook when we finally got to go on the ride! I knew most people wouldn't even give it a try because it was not a SS/HG pairing, but there was no way I could make it work with those two. I felt that Severus needed someone who would accept and love him unconditionally, and I figured it would take someone with extrodinary patience to do that. While she was in school, Hermione was not that type of person. We all love Severus, but let's face it, he would not be an easy person to live with. I had a friend who was very prickly like Severus. Many people hated him, many tried to ignor him. I was only ever nice to him, even when he was mean to me. We became dear friends mainly because I took the time to understand him. He turned out to be bi-polar, which made him wonderful sometimes and horrible other times. Very intelligent with a dry wit, but he could be very cruel if he was in a bad mood. So I modeled Sienna's and Severus' beginning around the way our friendship developed. I succeeded in becoming his friend because I stuck it out no matter how badly he treated me. Eventually I won him over. In the end he committed suicide, but I will always consider him one of my dearest friends.This story came pouring from my soul. I'm so glad to know that it touched yours.
I think this is a nice start. I will be downloading the story then reading on vacation. You can e-mail me in one month if I don't leave another review!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
I hope you enjoy it enough to give me another review when you are finished. I also like to download stories and read them later when I don't have access to the internet. Please let me know what you think. It was my first story, so it may not be a polished or as developed as many of the others on this site.
> This goodbye scene was getting way too mushy for his taste.Well, that's not utterly surprising! Siena's influence seems to come from her sheer presence, not actions, not words. Severus is as puzzled as I am.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
It was hard to write this story from only his POV. But yes, at this point, she is a puzzle to him. Thanks for the review and esp. for reading.
I've just found this story, and I WILL continue to ch2! People are nicely in character, including our sour Potions Master. I find the last scene ooc, though. Despite Sienna being reserved all time, she'd possibly come asking, agreed. But she can't be that extroverted, all out of the blue. The only explanation I find is that she's more acquaintant with him than he knows. It would fit to the exchange at the Sorting.A secret daughter, a niece or something? Green eyes... like Lili...? Hmmm. Severus is far too friendly to someone who's stealing his time, isn't he? No matter, as said I'll continue!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Hi
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
. I'm glad you found the story intriguing enough to continue. I hope that each chapter finds you wanting more. I wrote the first half of this story before DH came out. It was my first attempt at writting in over three decades! So my characterizations and the story as a whole improve as you get into it.You are very perceptive to realize that Sienna would not be so reserved and then suddenly throw her arms around our dour Potions Master. But she does have a secret reason. So you'll just have to keep reading to find out.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
I just discovered this story this week. I really liked the OC. It was a fun read.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Thank you so much, Rose, for leaving me a note. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.CP
Wow I really loved this story, you wove the new character in so well to the original. It's really amazing. I also adored the yoga, meditation, and spirituallity, I like to practice yoga and meditation myself (not as often as I really want too) and I thought it really gave this story great dimension. I hope to read some more of your work soon!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Hi Lauren Marie, and thanks so much for your supportive comments. I too wish that I had more time for yoga and meditation, but I fit it in when I can. Both practices really help to relieve stress and put things into perspective.I have another story going right here on TPP. It's called "Secret Recipe," and it is a lighter tale pairing Snape and Hermione. I know that there have already been zillions of SS/HG stories written, but mine happens after the epilogue and once again follows canon. I had some fun with the way she saved his life and the way they find each other after almost 20 years. It tackles some social issues, but it lacks the spirituality of this story.Thanks again for following with me for so long. I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story.
Beautiful story. I'm sorry that it had to end. Sienna was a great character, and I'm glad that you went OC. What's great about it is that it opened up the story line rather than trapping the plot into pre-built characters. That was very refreshing... and thought-provoking. I really enjoyed it, and am looking forward to your next story.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Thanks so much,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
. I'm so glad you enjoyed this story. I really wanted to tell it from Snape's POV, just to show how different it could be. It was a fun challenge to work around JKR's existing story, but I had the books in front of me for reference the whole way, so I stuck to canon pretty well. There is a lot of FF out there that I have not read, or course, but I have never read a story that sticks to canon and also weaves an OC romance into it for Snape. I'm sure there are some out there, but I have not come across any yet.After looking over some of the reviews that you have left for this story, I want to especially thank you for your past kind words and insightfulness. So many simply read the words for entertainment. Your responses were more spiritual, which was, of course, my ultimate goal. I have enjoyed our thought proviking exchanges during the course of this story.I don't know if you are reading my other story, "Secret Recipe," or not. It is a SS/HG fic, but it happens after the epilogue, so they are both much older. I understand why you find Hermione so annoying. So do I, but I look back on my own teenage years and feel that if I can mature and grow as a person, so can she. It is much more light-hearted than this one. So if you are looking for something entertaining, you might want to check it out.Thanks again for sticking with me.CP
Nice wrap-up, Clay. Hope you have another one planned! :)
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
I need to finish Secret Recipe before I start on anything new. RL is heating up and keeping me from my writing at the moment, but I still sneak in a little time to read other people's stories. Speaking of which, I just got a notice that "The Runner" has an update!Thanks for following along through this saga. I really appreciate your comments.CP
I'm always a little sad when a story I've enjoyed ends. This story is no exception. But I liked the ending. He and Sienna deserved the life they created.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Thanks,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
. I'm so glad you came along with me all the way to the end. It was sad for me to end it as well. This story simply poured out of me. I carried a notebook with me everywhere and was constantly writing in it.Thanks again for sticking with me.CP
While I shouldn't be surprised that the chapter ends where it does, it just leaves me hanging on, looking for more (looks side to side, down below reveiw box...nope, no more) Hope that the next bit comes up soon, I've enjoyed the story so far.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
More will be coming soon. IMO JKR wanted him dead, but she enjoys FF so much that she purposefully wrote his death scene in an ambiguous fashion and consipicuously left out his portrait just so we would all speculate and let our imaginations run rampant.And so mine did, as you will see in the next chapter. :)I'm glad you have enjoyed the story so far. I hope that my ending does not disappoint you.
Response from RhiannonAvon (Reviewer)
Your opinion works for me =) Besides, none of us would have any fun reading/writing if she didn't leave it ambiguousLike I said, looking forward to the next bit. Up till now, nothing has been disappointing, so unless you somehow manage to completely screw up the ending, I don't think you have to worry about disappointing anyone. =)
I am sure Winky and Sienna will save the day. Nice build up to the final stages! :)
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Thanks, sunny. Winky and Sienna will certainly try to save the day, but Sienna is a healer, not a miracle worker...Read on. I don't think that the ending will disappoint you.
Well done! Sometimes love scenes go too one way or the other. Yours was dead on. Not an easy thing to do. Great job... and very romantic!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Wow, thanks so much for the great compliment,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
. It really means a lot to me. That was my first attempt at a graphic love scene. To tell you the truth, I wasn't very comfortable writing it, but I really like the way it turned out.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Wow, thanks so much for the great compliment,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
. It really means a lot to me. That was my first attempt at a graphic love scene. To tell you the truth, I wasn't very comfortable writing it, but I really like the way it turned out.
He heee, I loved the last bit... The wedding and the wedding night were wonderful. And I hope he won't obliviate Minerva in the end.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
I'm sorry to tell you, but for her safety as well as theirs, Severus has no choice but to Obliviate Minerva. But there will be some residual benefits from her knowing the truth for a little while.Glad you liked it. Thanks for your comments.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
I'm sorry to tell you, but for her safety as well as theirs, Severus has no choice but to Obliviate Minerva. But there will be some residual benefits from her knowing the truth for a little while.Glad you liked it. Thanks for your comments.
I'm surprised he didn't give them both detention with Filch!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Since Filch is a squib, I guess he didn't want to take the chance that they might pull something over on him.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Since Filch is a squib, I guess he didn't want to take the chance that they might pull something over on him.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
How are they going to their secrets from the staff (the real staff, not the Carrows)? Won't Snape's magical signature change as he opens himself to this new awareness? Thanks for the lovely chapter and your dad's lovely lyrics.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
His spiritual experience did have an effect on him, but as you will soon see, the effect is not lasting. I doubt that it would change his magical signature enough for others to notice until he attains a more permanent spiritual perception shift. That will come, but only much later.I'm glad you liked the chapter, and especially my dad's song. :) Thanks for your supportive comments.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
His spiritual experience did have an effect on him, but as you will soon see, the effect is not lasting. I doubt that it would change his magical signature enough for others to notice until he attains a more permanent spiritual perception shift. That will come, but only much later.I'm glad you liked the chapter, and especially my dad's song. :) Thanks for your supportive comments.
My brother lives in an Ashram (which I have never visited, so it was interesting to get this peek inside one!)
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
I have been to one here in the USA, but never to India. This actually came out of my imagination. The Ashram here in Virginia is called Yogaville. It is a spralling place that covers many acres, with rollings hills, beautiful gardens, and a river on its boarder. There are dorm rooms, semi private rooms, and private facilities. There is a dining hall where everyone eats. There is a huge shrine that pays homage to all of the world's major religions. The man who started it was from India and came here several decades ago, Swami Satchidananda. His life was dedicated to bringing together people of all religions, to learn from eachother, and to celebrate their diversity as well as their common goal of enlightenment.Where does your brother live? What country?
Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)
OHMYGOD MY BROTHER *LIVES IN YOGAVILLE*!!!!*FLAIL*
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
It is truly a beautiful place. And the people are beautiful. I feel such peace when I go there. It is always hard to leave.
Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)
Yeah, it's been very good for him. He had a rough time and while we all joke about him being off playing with the fairies (he can be very . . . unreliable sometimes; he'll say he's going to do something and then doesn't do it and he doesn't seem to understand how his behaviour can impact others sometimes), we are all quite glad he is where he is because it's a place where he is okay.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Is your brother a Pisces? He sounds like a dear friend of mine that goes up there a lot, and stays for weeks at a time sometimes. I joke him because he will tell me that he will call me when he gets back and a month goes by and he doesn't call. Or he will say that he will come by and see me, but he never comes. He has a heart of gold, but he is unreliable. Time has no meaning for him. My friend is a Pisces.
Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)
Naw, he's a Sag.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
I have been to one here in the USA, but never to India. This actually came out of my imagination. The Ashram here in Virginia is called Yogaville. It is a spralling place that covers many acres, with rollings hills, beautiful gardens, and a river on its boarder. There are dorm rooms, semi private rooms, and private facilities. There is a dining hall where everyone eats. There is a huge shrine that pays homage to all of the world's major religions. The man who started it was from India and came here several decades ago, Swami Satchidananda. His life was dedicated to bringing together people of all religions, to learn from eachother, and to celebrate their diversity as well as their common goal of enlightenment.Where does your brother live? What country?
Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)
OHMYGOD MY BROTHER *LIVES IN YOGAVILLE*!!!!*FLAIL*
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
It is truly a beautiful place. And the people are beautiful. I feel such peace when I go there. It is always hard to leave.
Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)
Yeah, it's been very good for him. He had a rough time and while we all joke about him being off playing with the fairies (he can be very . . . unreliable sometimes; he'll say he's going to do something and then doesn't do it and he doesn't seem to understand how his behaviour can impact others sometimes), we are all quite glad he is where he is because it's a place where he is okay.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Is your brother a Pisces? He sounds like a dear friend of mine that goes up there a lot, and stays for weeks at a time sometimes. I joke him because he will tell me that he will call me when he gets back and a month goes by and he doesn't call. Or he will say that he will come by and see me, but he never comes. He has a heart of gold, but he is unreliable. Time has no meaning for him. My friend is a Pisces.
Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)
Naw, he's a Sag.
I really like this story. Snape and someone else was the first type of fanfiction I read, so it is the one I'm most comfortable with I think. Wonderful chapter, I like the use of Eastern thought in the story. Snape had to be overwhelmed by the idea of power that could eliminate Voldemort with a thought. But then to see an individual who had the power and wouldn't use it, that had to be really hard to take. I wonder if Dumbledore is using his private time with Babaji to try to bring him around more? Dumbledore ,like Snape, is so committed to the task of destroying Voldemort that I can't see him ever missing an opportunity to gain an advantage. And the locket, wouldn't it be wonderful to be able to talk to certain people that are gone? I wonder would this allow you to reach closure, or would the problems in a relationship during a life continue with the portrait?
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Hi,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
, and thanks for the very insighful review.I have read eastern philosophy extensively, and with the truly wise and spiritually enlightened people, the more power they acquire, the less they want to use it. They look at life, death and suffering very differently than the people of western thought do. It is hard to imagine someone who would not be willing to use his power to destroy Voldemort, but someone with Babaji's power would indeed let karma play itself out and not interfere. So any efforts made by Dumbledore will go unheaded.As for the closure issue, I imagine that if access to the deceasded love one is on going, the problems in life would follow, growing, changing and perhaps resolving themselves. But then new issues would come up. Case in point, the interaction between Snape and Dumbledore's portrait in DH. It is as if the person is still alive, but helplessly trapped in the canvass.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Hi,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
, and thanks for the very insighful review.I have read eastern philosophy extensively, and with the truly wise and spiritually enlightened people, the more power they acquire, the less they want to use it. They look at life, death and suffering very differently than the people of western thought do. It is hard to imagine someone who would not be willing to use his power to destroy Voldemort, but someone with Babaji's power would indeed let karma play itself out and not interfere. So any efforts made by Dumbledore will go unheaded.As for the closure issue, I imagine that if access to the deceasded love one is on going, the problems in life would follow, growing, changing and perhaps resolving themselves. But then new issues would come up. Case in point, the interaction between Snape and Dumbledore's portrait in DH. It is as if the person is still alive, but helplessly trapped in the canvass.
Finally!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Yes, I did make you wait a long time for this. Sorry, but I felt that he wouldn't marry her until certain things fell into place.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Yes, I did make you wait a long time for this. Sorry, but I felt that he wouldn't marry her until certain things fell into place.
Poor Sev. Even Voldemort didn't know ALL his secrets! Must be disconcerting to be laid wide open like that.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
It would be disconcerting for anyone to have their mind and memories be an open book, but especially someone as secretive as our beloved Potions Master.Thanks for chiming in,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
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Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
It would be disconcerting for anyone to have their mind and memories be an open book, but especially someone as secretive as our beloved Potions Master.Thanks for chiming in,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
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Wow! Great chapter! I had no idea where you were going with it. Quite the power punch from Babaji calling SS on his would-be abandonment of Sienna if Lily were to return. Babaji was done well. His presence really came through. And DD's memory... loved it! But it was the argument afterward that made this chapter fantastic. Seeing SS and DD argue was like watching two bulls in a turf battle. Whew! DD didn't give SS any ground on that one, fortunately. It's one thing to be powerful physically (or magically, in this case), but another thing when the power comes from conviction and solid priorities. Okay. Maybe that's just called wisdom. Oh, and the details were wonderful, from the covered walkway, snores, inlaid slatted screen, to a drawer full of black socks. Looking forward to hearing what Sienna has to say in counselling!
Response from color (Reviewer)
One more thing: SS's emotional development. For all of his intellectual intelligence, the fellow has next to no emotional intelligence. He just doesn't get it. Why would you abandon someone who you passionately love and who passionately loves you, and, more importantly, who *wants* to be with you, for someone else who doesn't want you that way? Goodness! This man's emotional understanding is still that of a high-school student. Dunderhead!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
He most definitely has an arrested emotional development. But remember, he has not been able to let go of Lily because she keeps showing up in his dreams. And the dreams are very real to him. They don't fade away like regular dreams. So that has made it particularly hard for him to let go.And DD's ties to Sienna go even deeper than the friendship that has been illustrated here. You will find out how a bit later in the story. They are tied together in ways that even they don't realize yet.I am so glad you like this story. I really put my heart and soul into it when I wrote it. The words just came pouring out of me. I carried a notebook everywhere I went. Because it is not a SS/HG paring, I don't have many readers, like I do with Secret Recipe, but the ones who do read this one really seem to like it.Thanks so much for your kind and insightful review. You made my day.
Response from color (Reviewer)
I've been reading "Secret Recipe". It's a good story, but "The Potion Master's Assistant" is better. The other readers who don't read this story because its SS/OC, well, too bad for them.
Response from color (Reviewer)
One more thing: SS's emotional development. For all of his intellectual intelligence, the fellow has next to no emotional intelligence. He just doesn't get it. Why would you abandon someone who you passionately love and who passionately loves you, and, more importantly, who *wants* to be with you, for someone else who doesn't want you that way? Goodness! This man's emotional understanding is still that of a high-school student. Dunderhead!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
He most definitely has an arrested emotional development. But remember, he has not been able to let go of Lily because she keeps showing up in his dreams. And the dreams are very real to him. They don't fade away like regular dreams. So that has made it particularly hard for him to let go.And DD's ties to Sienna go even deeper than the friendship that has been illustrated here. You will find out how a bit later in the story. They are tied together in ways that even they don't realize yet.I am so glad you like this story. I really put my heart and soul into it when I wrote it. The words just came pouring out of me. I carried a notebook everywhere I went. Because it is not a SS/HG paring, I don't have many readers, like I do with Secret Recipe, but the ones who do read this one really seem to like it.Thanks so much for your kind and insightful review. You made my day.
Response from color (Reviewer)
I've been reading "Secret Recipe". It's a good story, but "The Potion Master's Assistant" is better. The other readers who don't read this story because its SS/OC, well, too bad for them.
What an interesting chapter. Severus is so very western in his thinking, I can see the look on his face when the seemingly young man spoke to him as though he were a child. As for Dumbledore and the kiss, I knew a couple of gay guys that were damn good kissers. (One kissed me to make me feel better, the other did it to make a point.) As young as Sienna is, she probably didn't realize why it felt off. This is such a great story.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Thanks so much,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
. Yeah, I'm sure that I am not the only girl who has been kissed by a gay guy.I am so very glad that you are enjoying my story. It doesn't have a large number of fans because it is not a SS/HG fic, but the few readers that follow it seem to really enjoy it, and that means so much to me.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Thanks so much,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
. Yeah, I'm sure that I am not the only girl who has been kissed by a gay guy.I am so very glad that you are enjoying my story. It doesn't have a large number of fans because it is not a SS/HG fic, but the few readers that follow it seem to really enjoy it, and that means so much to me.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
This is a very nice chapter and a wonderful use of Winky.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
I love Winky. She comes in very handy for the rest of the story.Thanks for chiming in,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
, the reviews keep me going.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
I love Winky. She comes in very handy for the rest of the story.Thanks for chiming in,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
, the reviews keep me going.
Sounds like the Headmaster's bedroom is a version of the Room of Requirement. Hum. Severus considering marriage already? Nice to see how completely his hesitancy has ended.Good job!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
People tend to accelerate their private lives during war time because they never know if this day will be their last. He has known her (and loved her) for years, but now that she is through with school, he feels free to express those feelings.Thanks so much for your kind review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
People tend to accelerate their private lives during war time because they never know if this day will be their last. He has known her (and loved her) for years, but now that she is through with school, he feels free to express those feelings.Thanks so much for your kind review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
So who does Winky obey? Severus or Sienna?
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Winky is a free elf. She will do what she thinks is best for all concerned. But she is not the only one...