There Must Be an Easier Way
Chapter 20 of 31
ClayPotterSeverus finds a new ally in Winky and enlists Aberforth's help to spend time with Sienna.
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"There Must Be an Easier Way,
Elfin Magic Saves the Day"
Severus let Wormtail report back to Voldemort about the house fire. He felt that his time would be better spent at Hogwarts getting ready for the onslaught of students that would inundate him in a few day's time. He also was sure that Voldemort would take great pleasure in Wormtail's embellished description of his sorrow over the loss of Sienna. Let them have their little laugh, he thought to himself as he walked up the path to the school.
As he walked through his office to get to his quarters, he heard a voice. All of the portraits had appeared to be sleeping when he entered, so the voice took him by surprise. He turned abruptly on his heel, his cloak swirling around his legs.
"So, what was all that about?" asked Dumbledore's portrait.
"Can't I tell you in the morning?"
"The morning will bring constant interruptions. Now is better."
"Oh, if you insist." Severus sighed and sat down in the throne-like chair behind the desk. He began to push the papers around absent-mindedly. If he had been honest with himself, he was bursting at the seams to relive the night's events.
"The Dark Lord finally captured Sienna."
"Sienna?" Dumbledore stood up, almost jumping out of his frame. "Is she alright?"
"Calm yourself. She's fine, she's safe." Then he closed his eyes and said in a dreamy whisper, "She's incredible."
"What happened? I want to know every last detail!"
Severus proceeded to recount the night's events, but left out the part where they had kissed and his admission of love for her.
"The Dark Lord even compared her to you at one point. It took three Death Eaters to bring her in."
With this, Dumbledore was bursting with pride. "That's our girl."
"May I be excused now?" asked Severus with very tired eyes. "I have a busy day tomorrow."
"Don't you mean 'today?'"
"Don't remind me," Severus said with a groan and headed off to finally get some much needed rest.
But as he lay in the bed staring at the ceiling, he found that all he could think about was Sienna. He wanted to be with her more than anything. But how could he manage it? Somehow he felt that an occasional meeting at the Hog's Head would not be enough. But it was at least a start. He had already come to an understanding with Aberforth. He would go talk to him tomorrow evening and try to arrange something.
The next day, a very tired Headmaster Snape faced one problem after another between the Carrows and the rest of the staff. They just couldn't seem to understand the meaning of the words "Tradition," or "Orderly," and McGonagall was up in arms about the discipline changes that they insisted on making. Severus had to take her aside and calm her down. Without actually coming out and saying it, he tried to make her understand that each teacher could keep order in their own way in their own classroom as long as the Carrows didn't find out about it. He also tried to convey to her the importance of getting that message out to the students since he couldn't exactly announce it at the start of term feast.
After dinner in the Great Hall, he slipped quietly out of the front door and up the path to Hogsmeade. The Hog's Head Inn was as grimy and dingy as ever, and Aberforth stood in his usual spot behind the bar using an already filthy cloth to wipe out dirty glasses. Severus wondered if the rag had ever been washed, or the glasses either, for that matter.
"Evening, Headmaster Snape. What can I get for ya?"
"Oak mead," he replied as he tossed his coins on the counter. Then he leaned closer and added, "I'd also like a word in private."
Aberforth glanced around the room. Everyone seemed content with the contents of their glasses and bottles. He jerked his head towards the back room, and they both ducked in. He closed the door and Severus cast the Muffliato spell.
"I'll make this quick," Severus whispered. "Do you have any rooms left that I could rent for just one night?"
"Nope, sorry. All filled up, and they all look long term. What'd you need a room for? Aren't your fancy new quarters big enough?"
"It's not that. I need to meet someone, and I can't chance trying to sneak her into the castle."
"A woman, eh?" Aberforth's face warped into a crooked boyish grin.
Severus felt himself blush.
"Do I know her?"
"No, and it's probably better that you don't."
"Gotcha," Aberforth winked. "Well, I'm afraid that, with the exception of a broom cupboard upstairs, there's not much I can do for you."
"What about the room where we had our previous conversation, with the portrait of the girl over the mantle?"
"Off limits. You don't want to know why."
Severus shook his head. "If the two of us had any more secrets, we wouldn't be able to talk at all."
They both chuckled at the thought.
"Well then, when can I have the broom cupboard?"
"That's available twenty-four, seven. Just let me know you'll be in there so I don't interrupt anything. I walked in on my parents once when I was about seven years old. Couldn't look either one of them in the eye for a couple of months. Don't ever want to do that again!"
"I doubt you'll be walking in on much, not in a broom cupboard anyway." Severus motioned towards the door as he lifted the Muffliato spell.
They went back out to the bar where Severus finished his mead. Then he leaned over towards Aberforth and said, "Thanks. I'll let you know," and he headed out the door back to Hogwarts.
Once back in his office, he conjured his doe Patronus. "Find Sienna. Tell her I want to meet her at the Hog's Head tomorrow night at nine p.m. But the place is crawling with Death Eaters and she will have to be very careful."
As the silver doe bounded across his office and disappeared out the window, he sat down to wait for her reply. Sometimes he felt that a Muggle telephone wouldn't be such a bad idea, since it was much easier to carry on a conversation over distances with that device than with letters by owl, or messages by Patronus. School started in two days. This would probably be the only night he would have time to meet her for a long while. He hoped against hope that she could make it by then. He was not sure where she had gone into hiding, but he had a feeling it was the ashram in India, quite a long trek to take in just one day.
After a few minutes, a silver streak of light shot through his window and transformed into a lively mongoose on his desk top. It spoke in Sienna's voice.
"I'm in India, but if I leave right now I should probably be able to get there on time. I can hardly wait to see you. Be careful. Remember I love you."
The last sentence seemed almost comical coming from the mouth of a mongoose, even though it sounded like Sienna. He wondered what motivation would make her choose a mongoose for her Patronus. He made a mental note to ask her later.
Good. He would have her back in his arms in less than 24 hours.
*****
As all of the last minute preparations were being made for the arrival of the students the next day, Snape made his way around the school surveying everyone's progress. The teachers were checking their supplies. Madam Pomfrey had plenty of healing potions in stock (Severus had a feeling that she would really need them this year with the Carrows in charge of discipline), and Hagrid had lined up the creatures he would need for all of his classes. Filch kept himself busy polishing trophies in the trophy room and cleaning the giant hourglasses that kept track of house points in the entrance hall.
Severus made his way down into the kitchen to check on the house-elves. They were all busy with food preparation. Many things could be made a couple of days ahead and kept refrigerated. As he watched their busy little faces deep in concentration, he noticed that there was someone missing whom he had distinctly remembered seeing earlier in the summer: Kreacher. He was, after all, Potter's house-elf. Sirius had left him everything in his will, which included number twelve and the elf that went with it. But Kreacher's absence triggered a memory in Severus's mind: the fact that house-elves could Disapparate and Apparate anywhere in or out of the castle, even with Anti-Apparation Charms in place that prevented wizards from doing the same thing. Could a house-elf get Sienna into the castle unnoticed? It would be worth asking. But, he still had no place to hide her.
As he searched the room for the right elf to ask, he noticed two elves over by the fireplace. One was sobbing as she sat in her tiny chair. The other was on bended knee patting her hand. Winky and Dobby. As usual, Winky was lamenting the fact that she no longer had a family to serve. Severus remembered how she had howled with sorrow over Barty Crouch Jr. after the dementor had performed the kiss. Dobby was proud to be a free elf, but Winky felt only shame.
Severus strolled over to the fireplace and knelt down to be on the same level with the elves.
"What seems to be the trouble?" he asked with silky smoothness. He didn't want the tone to sound too sympathetic.
Winky jumped up from her chair and, she and Dobby immediately bowed low to Severus, addressing him as "Headmaster Snape."
"Winky still feels shameful that she is a free elf, Headmaster Snape," explained Dobby.
"Winky's life is wasted," sniffed Winky. Then she started to wail, "Winky's life is OVER!"
A flood of tears came streaming down her face. Severus reached into his inside cloak pocket and retrieved a white lace hanky, which he handed to Winky. As she shyly took it from his outstretched hand, an idea struck him. Could he ask Dobby and Winky for help? No, not Dobby. Potter had tricked Lucius into freeing him. Dobby's loyalty was certainly with Potter, even if he was under the employ of Hogwarts. No, his idea would have to involve Winky and Winky alone.
He thought perhaps a different approach would be necessary to help her regain her composure. Severus stood up and looked down his long nose at her.
"This is no way for a Hogwarts elf to behave," he said gruffly. "Winky, get hold of yourself, freshen up and report to my office right away!"
"Should Dobby come too, sir?" asked Dobby anxiously.
"No, you do an exemplary job for us, Dobby. I need to speak to Winky alone."
He turned and swept from the kitchen, leaving a now frightened Winky in his wake.
By the time he got back to his office, she was sitting there waiting for him. Her short little legs dangled off the wooden chair, not even reaching half-way to the floor. She looked so scared; she was trembling. Severus thought she might burst into tears again.
"Please, Headmaster Snape, sir." She jumped up and threw herself onto the floor in front of him as he entered. "Don't send Winky away. Winky will be better. Winky will work hard for Hogwarts. Please, please..." And she broke into hysterics.
Severus looked down at her and started shaking his head. She was clinging to his leg now, so he couldn't even move. He reached down and gently pulled her off of him and sat her back on the chair. Since he wasn't sure what had happened to his first hanky, he conjured another one and handed it to her.
"I didn't bring you here to scold you, Winky. I brought you here to make you an offer."
She looked up at him with tennis-ball-eyes. "An offer? Winky?"
"Yes, Winky," he said quietly. Thank goodness, she was calming down at last.
"I was in the room the night your last remaining master suffered the dementor's kiss."
"Poor Master Barty," she said, looking forlorn. "What a horrible thing."
"It was horrible, Winky. And although I feel he deserved to go to Azkaban for what he did, he didn't deserve that." He held his breath. He thought she might start crying again, but she didn't. With a sigh of relief, he continued. "I saw your reaction, and I knew right then that you were a loyal and good servant, who deserved a family that would treat you with dignity and respect."
Although Dumbledore had always shown her kindness, he had never talked to her this way. Winky looked at Severus with a touch of relief. Finally someone understood and appreciated her. She smiled at him. He smiled back.
"I was wondering if you would consider becoming my personal house-elf, an assistant, if you like."
"Oh YES! Headmaster Snape, Winky would--"
"You are technically a free elf now, Winky," he interrupted her, "so you can choose to accept or decline my offer. But before you decide, I must make certain things clear."
"Yes, sir." Her enthusiasm waned a bit.
"If you chose to accept my offer, you must swear with your life that you will keep my secrets, of which I have many." She didn't seem to mind that condition. He assumed that was a standard house-elf requirement.
"If you ever chose to leave my employ, you must still keep all my secrets, even if you must give your life to do so."
"If Winky is Headmaster Snape's house-elf, Winky would do that anyway, sir," she informed him, as if that was the first thing she learned in elfin kindergarten.
"Winky," his voice became much more serious, "this means keeping my secrets from Dobby also. No one, and I mean absolutely no one, can know what I tell you, what you do for me, what goes on or what is said inside my office, or my quarters. Do I make myself clear?"
"Yes, Headmaster Snape, sir. Winky understands perfectly, sir."
"Good. Now as for payment--"
"Oh, Winky won't accept payment, sir. Dobby shames himself by accepting payment. Winky would never think of such a thing! Just having a family to serve again will be payment beyond Winky's wildest dreams, sir!"
Severus' lips curled just slightly at the corners. "I am honored to have you as my house-elf, Winky. You start immediately."
"This is the happiest day for Winky in many years, Headmaster Snape, sir. THANK YOU!" She rushed over and bowed at his feet. "What is Winky's first task, sir?"
"Someone has already been in my quarters to make the bed and tidy up this morning. But from now on, I would like you to be the only house-elf allowed into my office or quarters for any reason unless I say so. Once you are through with the morning chores in here, you can go to the kitchen to see where they might need you. If I need you for something else, I will call for you. If you hear me call your name, you can Apparate from anywhere in the castle, right?"
"Winky can come from anywhere immediately, Headmaster Snape, sir."
"Excellent." He nodded, then paused for a moment. "Even somewhere outside of the castle?"
"Yes, sir."
His eyes narrowed as he became lost in thought. Then slowly, carefully, as if he was afraid what her answer might be, he asked, "Could you take me with you in side-along Apparation?" He held his breath as he waited for her reply.
"Oh, yes, Headmaster Snape, sir."
The wheels of his mind began to turn at warp speed. "Could you take two people at once?"
She nodded. "All they have to do is hold Winky by the hand, sir."
This bit of news opened up an entire avenue of possibilities. And Winky's kind would go unnoticed by Voldemort. He considered house-elves "disposable." Another foolish mistake born of arrogance on the Dark Lord's part. Such a loyal house-elf as Winky could end up becoming one of Severus' greatest assets before this whole ordeal was over.
"Winky, you're a life saver!" Severus smiled broadly at her. The little round face and tennis-ball eyes beamed up at him. "Now, get back to the kitchen. If I need you, I'll call you."
"Yes, Headmaster Snape, sir. Thank you, sir." She bowed deeply and with a pop she disappeared.
*****
Later that night, Severus made his way to the Hog's Head. Anyone out on the street after dark was subject to harassment by the legion of Death Eaters that patrolled the streets, but since they all knew Severus he passed without question.
He slipped in through the front door and sidled up to the bar.
"What'll ya have, tonight, Headmaster?" asked Aberforth.
"Oak mead." Then he leaned in and added, "And the broom cupboard, if you don't mind."
Aberforth nodded. He served Severus a mug of mead. Then they both searched the room for signs of anyone that didn't look familiar. Even though Aberforth knew better than to ask questions, he was still curious who Severus was planning to meet.
One small figure caught both their eyes. What appeared to be a woman, dressed in long, flowing, black robes and a hood that partially covered a face that was wrapped in dingy gray bandages, sat at a nearby table. She slowly rose and made her way laboriously towards the bar as if walking was extremely painful.
"Can I help you?" asked Aberforth warily.
She remained silent, but reached into a pocket and pulled out something small that remained concealed in the palm of her hand. Then she slowly slid it along the surface of the bar until it was right next to Severus' hand. He looked down with great curiosity at this point. She pulled her hand away to reveal an individually-wrapped dark chocolate truffle with a liquid cognac center from Honeydukes. Severus quickly covered it with his own hand before anyone noticed. Then he leaned over to Aberforth and whispered, "Bring her up to the broom cupboard in a minute or two." With that, he took his mug of mead and headed up the stairs.
He found the broom cupboard and let himself in. "Lumos," he said quietly as he surveyed the scene. If he had thought the bar rags downstairs were dirty, he was really grossed out by the contents of this four-by-five closet. Brooms and mops full of cobwebs adorned the back wall, looking as if they had been hanging there untouched for decades. Several buckets were stacked in a corner, some with even dirtier rags hanging over their sides. A shelf full of cleaning solutions had been left undisturbed long enough to build up over an inch of dust.
Severus sneezed violently. He knew his allergies wouldn't be able to stand this room for long. He hoped Aberforth would bring Sienna up soon. He fished around in the pocket of his robes for a hanky but remembered he had given it to Winky. He put out the light so he could conjure himself another when the door opened, and in walked the mysterious person wrapped in gray bandages.
"Have fun, you two," teased Aberforth, "and let me know when you leave." Then he closed the door behind him with a snap.
The little room became pitch black.
"Lumos," said Severus again as he stifled another sneeze.
"Severus, it's so good to see you," said Sienna. They wrapped their arms around each other for a moment, and then she began to unwrap the bandages to reveal a grotesquely contorted face that appeared to be suffering from severe burns.
"My God! What happened to you?"
"Nothing!" She laughed as she cast the Muffliato spell at the door.
He sneezed again, but his wand was being used to light the room, so he couldn't conjure a hanky.
"Here," having read his mind as she could so easily do now, she silently conjured one for him. Then she reached under her chin with the fingers of both hands and pulled off the latex mask she was wearing.
Severus was quite relieved to see the beautiful, vibrant young face he had been expecting. "That's quite a disguise you've got there."
"The mask is from a Muggle Halloween costume shop. It fit me well and seemed pretty realistic when I put it on. I covered it with bandages to make it look more real. When I got here it was still daylight. I was stopped a couple of times by the Death Eaters. When they insisted I show my face, I would start to unveil myself, but as soon as they could begin to see the burns underneath, they would make some snide or ugly comment and send me on my way. I didn't even have to answer any questions. It worked perfectly."
Severus smiled down at her in the wand light. "I'm just so glad you arrived safely."
He bent down and began to kiss her like there was no tomorrow. They tangled themselves around each other like a Devil's Snare vine. Severus felt blood rushing to parts of himself that it hadn't rushed to in many years. He could tell that she was full of the raging hormones of youth as her hands began to explore his body and made their way down towards the erection that was so strong, he feared it would pop the buttons off his trousers.
Suddenly, he pulled away and sneezed violently again, jarring himself back to reality.
"Oh, you poor thing. Allergies?"
"Yes. All the dust in here."
"Can't you mix yourself up a potion for it?"
"Well, I could have if I had known, but I didn't check the place out when Aberforth offered it. I just assumed... I never dreamed it would be this bad in here."
"Is there somewhere else we could go? Your house at Spinner's End, perhaps?"
"Too risky. Wormtail feels free to come and go there as if he owns the place. I objected at first, but since I'm never there, it doesn't really matter."
They began to intertwine again and things really started to heat up. She pushed his cloak off of his shoulders, and it fell to the dirty floor in a rumpled heap. Then she reached to unbutton his shirt, but he grabbed her hands in his own and pulled away from her with a scowl.
"What's wrong?" She obviously looked puzzled and a bit hurt.
"It's a broom cupboard, Sienna. We're in a broom cupboard, for goodness sake!"
"So?"
"You don't want your first time to be in a dirty, dingy, very dusty broom cupboard, do you?"
"It's better than the back seat of an automobile, which is what usually happens with Muggles."
Severus pursed his lips. "Well, we're not Muggles, are we?"
She started for his buttons again. Again, he stopped her.
She didn't hesitate to show her disappointment.
"I'm not going to do this. Not here, not like this. Don't you want it to be special?"
"It will be special, as long as I'm with you. Every moment I spend with you is special. It doesn't matter where we are."
Severus sighed deeply. He thought for a moment. "What about the ashram?"
"Even if you had the time to spare to make the long journey, my guru, Babaji wouldn't let us sleep together unless we were married."
Severus didn't reply. He simply stared at their hands clustered together between them. Unless we were married... Would that be such a horrible thing? In the midst of this war he wasn't sure it would be wise. But the Dark Lord thought she was dead. If he only could find a place to hide her in the castle so they could spend time together as husband and wife, he would consider it. He wanted her he loved her more than anything in the world.
"What about your private quarters?"
"Too risky. Several of the teachers already have the password to my office. If they can get into the office, they can get into my quarters. The system was really designed more to keep the students out than the teachers. When I change the password, the heads of each house are automatically notified."
"Well, I guess it wouldn't help anyway, since there's no way I can get in there undetected."
"Ah, now that little problem I have already taken care of." Severus announced proudly. Then he sneezed again.
"This is ridiculous!" She turned away from him to the room at large and began to whirl her wand through the air. "Scourgify!" The dust and grime began to lift off the objects, the floor, the walls and shelf, and disappear into the tip of her wand. Another wave brought forth a roomy padded chair, just large enough for both of them to squeeze into.
Severus took a deep breath. "Thank you." He cocked his head in her direction with a slight bow. He sat down and motioned for her to join him. As she nestled herself into the chair, he savored the sensation of being relaxed and happy with her by his side. When was the last time he had felt this way? Perhaps never. Her presence was food for his starving soul.
He proceeded to tell her about Winky and all the wonderful things she could do that wizards couldn't, and then they began to catch each other up on their separate goings on since the last time they had seen each other they hadn't exactly had a chance to talk much.
Finally, even with a cleaner environment, the dark, closed-in space began to wear on both of them.
"It's getting late. I'd better get back. I'm so sorry you came all this way for such a short visit."
She shrugged her shoulders and shook her head. "Don't worry about it. As far as I'm concerned, it was worth the trouble just to feel your arms around me."
"When I find a better place to meet, I'll contact you. I wish there was someplace in the castle. I would suggest the room of requirement, but the entrance is too far from my quarters. Anyone could pass by in the hall, and if someone else is using the room you can't get into it."
Sienna gazed at the wall dreamily. For a moment, Severus wondered if her mind had wandered elsewhere.
"Earth to Sienna..."
"Oh, sorry. I was just thinking about something Albus said to me once."
"What's that?"
"He said that whenever he had a problem he couldn't solve on his own, he voiced his concerns in the peace and quiet of his bed chamber, and a solution would almost always present itself." She smiled up at Severus. "You might want to try it. You never know."
"Couldn't hurt, I suppose." He stood to put his cloak back on.
"Are you ready to meet my new house-elf?"
"Sure."
"Winky!"
She appeared with a loud POP! Sienna jumped back, startled, but also to give her some room.
"Winky at your service, Headmaster Snape, sir." She tried to bow deeply, but the room was so cramped her head hit the wall in front of her.
"Do be careful, Winky. I wouldn't want you to hurt yourself," Severus said, trying not to smirk. "Sienna, meet Winky. Winky, meet Sienna."
Winky turned to Sienna and tried again to bow, just not so deeply this time. "Pleasure to meet Miss Sienna, ma'am."
"The pleasure's all mine." Sienna smiled and held out her hand to shake.
"Winky, if you would please, take Sienna wherever she needs to go, and then return to my quarters. I'll walk. People saw me walk in here. They need to see me walk back."
"Where would Miss Sienna like to go, ma'am?"
"Well, I need to get to India, but I guess if you just get me past the town limits I'll take it from there."
"India, ma'am?" those huge tennis-ball eyes stared up at her like she had always wanted to go there.
"Yes, but--"
"Where in India?"
"The ashram where I'm staying."
"If Miss Sienna closes her eyes and concentrates hard on the place, Winky can take her straight there!"
Severus' jaw dropped. "You mean you can take her all the way to India in the blink of an eye?"
"Yes, Headmaster Snape, sir."
"Why didn't you tell me this earlier?"
"But Winky did tell Headmaster Snape, sir. Winky said, 'Winky can come from anywhere immediately,' Headmaster Snape, sir."
Severus looked at Sienna and nodded slowly. "She did say that. I remember now. I just didn't think she meant any where." They both looked down at Winky and started laughing.
"And once Winky knows where the ashram is, Winky can go there and bring back Miss Sienna."
"That's wonderful, Winky." Sienna was beaming at her.
"As I told you before, Winky, you're a life saver! Now you two better get going."
Severus kissed Sienna one last time with such passion that it made Winky blush. Then she took Sienna by the hand, and with a loud POP they were gone.
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Ok, I'm going to give it another chapter, but I see some issues. I know how how badly it impacts a writer when they get a bad review. So, I'm going to try to be helpful and not just talk down you to about not liking the story. You have a good start, but it's just too coincidental. The description of this girl is even odd. Try for subtelty. I can see where you are going a mile away. You don't have to be so blatant about things. There is no lead up to her appearing in his room and offering to be his assistant.The Lilly interlude was also strangely done. For a moment I wasn't sure that you were inferring he was dreaming or if she was a ghost... or if she was real. THat being said, you have a great idea, but the execution just lacks some. I'm going to continue to read because I think the idea is interesting and I hope you keep writing.
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Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
. Thanks for taking the time to review. I understand your concerns about the beginning of this story. I don take offense at all at your gentle constructive criticism. It was my first attempt at creative writing since high school, and by my own admission, it wasn't very good. If you can suffer through the first few chapters, it does actually get better, though. I got to know the characters and got a better feel for writing in general. If you look at the posting date for the first chapter, you'll see that it was several years ago. If you don't wish to continue, I certainly understand. Someday I would like to re-write the first 10 chapters, but right now, I am working on the last 6 chapters of my only other story, "Secret Recipe". If I ever get that done, I will go back and tweak this one.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Hi
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
. Thanks for taking the time to review. I understand your concerns about the beginning of this story. I don take offense at all at your gentle constructive criticism. It was my first attempt at creative writing since high school, and by my own admission, it wasn't very good. If you can suffer through the first few chapters, it does actually get better, though. I got to know the characters and got a better feel for writing in general. If you look at the posting date for the first chapter, you'll see that it was several years ago. If you don't wish to continue, I certainly understand. Someday I would like to re-write the first 10 chapters, but right now, I am working on the last 6 chapters of my only other story, "Secret Recipe". If I ever get that done, I will go back and tweak this one.
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Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
, and thank you so much for your generous review. I have never received such praise from a reader and I am humbled by your words. Unlike the story I am currently working on which has been a struggle to write, The Potion Master's Assistant came to me in waves of inspiration. I carried my notebook everywhere and was constantly writing it down... at the dinner table, in bed before drifting off or late at night when I couldn't sleep, even in long lines waiting for rides at Disney World. I would sit on my notebook when we finally got to go on the ride! I knew most people wouldn't even give it a try because it was not a SS/HG pairing, but there was no way I could make it work with those two. I felt that Severus needed someone who would accept and love him unconditionally, and I figured it would take someone with extrodinary patience to do that. While she was in school, Hermione was not that type of person. We all love Severus, but let's face it, he would not be an easy person to live with. I had a friend who was very prickly like Severus. Many people hated him, many tried to ignor him. I was only ever nice to him, even when he was mean to me. We became dear friends mainly because I took the time to understand him. He turned out to be bi-polar, which made him wonderful sometimes and horrible other times. Very intelligent with a dry wit, but he could be very cruel if he was in a bad mood. So I modeled Sienna's and Severus' beginning around the way our friendship developed. I succeeded in becoming his friend because I stuck it out no matter how badly he treated me. Eventually I won him over. In the end he committed suicide, but I will always consider him one of my dearest friends.This story came pouring from my soul. I'm so glad to know that it touched yours.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Hi
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
, and thank you so much for your generous review. I have never received such praise from a reader and I am humbled by your words. Unlike the story I am currently working on which has been a struggle to write, The Potion Master's Assistant came to me in waves of inspiration. I carried my notebook everywhere and was constantly writing it down... at the dinner table, in bed before drifting off or late at night when I couldn't sleep, even in long lines waiting for rides at Disney World. I would sit on my notebook when we finally got to go on the ride! I knew most people wouldn't even give it a try because it was not a SS/HG pairing, but there was no way I could make it work with those two. I felt that Severus needed someone who would accept and love him unconditionally, and I figured it would take someone with extrodinary patience to do that. While she was in school, Hermione was not that type of person. We all love Severus, but let's face it, he would not be an easy person to live with. I had a friend who was very prickly like Severus. Many people hated him, many tried to ignor him. I was only ever nice to him, even when he was mean to me. We became dear friends mainly because I took the time to understand him. He turned out to be bi-polar, which made him wonderful sometimes and horrible other times. Very intelligent with a dry wit, but he could be very cruel if he was in a bad mood. So I modeled Sienna's and Severus' beginning around the way our friendship developed. I succeeded in becoming his friend because I stuck it out no matter how badly he treated me. Eventually I won him over. In the end he committed suicide, but I will always consider him one of my dearest friends.This story came pouring from my soul. I'm so glad to know that it touched yours.
I think this is a nice start. I will be downloading the story then reading on vacation. You can e-mail me in one month if I don't leave another review!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
I hope you enjoy it enough to give me another review when you are finished. I also like to download stories and read them later when I don't have access to the internet. Please let me know what you think. It was my first story, so it may not be a polished or as developed as many of the others on this site.
> This goodbye scene was getting way too mushy for his taste.Well, that's not utterly surprising! Siena's influence seems to come from her sheer presence, not actions, not words. Severus is as puzzled as I am.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
It was hard to write this story from only his POV. But yes, at this point, she is a puzzle to him. Thanks for the review and esp. for reading.
I've just found this story, and I WILL continue to ch2! People are nicely in character, including our sour Potions Master. I find the last scene ooc, though. Despite Sienna being reserved all time, she'd possibly come asking, agreed. But she can't be that extroverted, all out of the blue. The only explanation I find is that she's more acquaintant with him than he knows. It would fit to the exchange at the Sorting.A secret daughter, a niece or something? Green eyes... like Lili...? Hmmm. Severus is far too friendly to someone who's stealing his time, isn't he? No matter, as said I'll continue!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Hi
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
. I'm glad you found the story intriguing enough to continue. I hope that each chapter finds you wanting more. I wrote the first half of this story before DH came out. It was my first attempt at writting in over three decades! So my characterizations and the story as a whole improve as you get into it.You are very perceptive to realize that Sienna would not be so reserved and then suddenly throw her arms around our dour Potions Master. But she does have a secret reason. So you'll just have to keep reading to find out.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
I just discovered this story this week. I really liked the OC. It was a fun read.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Thank you so much, Rose, for leaving me a note. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.CP
Wow I really loved this story, you wove the new character in so well to the original. It's really amazing. I also adored the yoga, meditation, and spirituallity, I like to practice yoga and meditation myself (not as often as I really want too) and I thought it really gave this story great dimension. I hope to read some more of your work soon!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Hi Lauren Marie, and thanks so much for your supportive comments. I too wish that I had more time for yoga and meditation, but I fit it in when I can. Both practices really help to relieve stress and put things into perspective.I have another story going right here on TPP. It's called "Secret Recipe," and it is a lighter tale pairing Snape and Hermione. I know that there have already been zillions of SS/HG stories written, but mine happens after the epilogue and once again follows canon. I had some fun with the way she saved his life and the way they find each other after almost 20 years. It tackles some social issues, but it lacks the spirituality of this story.Thanks again for following with me for so long. I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story.
Beautiful story. I'm sorry that it had to end. Sienna was a great character, and I'm glad that you went OC. What's great about it is that it opened up the story line rather than trapping the plot into pre-built characters. That was very refreshing... and thought-provoking. I really enjoyed it, and am looking forward to your next story.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Thanks so much,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
. I'm so glad you enjoyed this story. I really wanted to tell it from Snape's POV, just to show how different it could be. It was a fun challenge to work around JKR's existing story, but I had the books in front of me for reference the whole way, so I stuck to canon pretty well. There is a lot of FF out there that I have not read, or course, but I have never read a story that sticks to canon and also weaves an OC romance into it for Snape. I'm sure there are some out there, but I have not come across any yet.After looking over some of the reviews that you have left for this story, I want to especially thank you for your past kind words and insightfulness. So many simply read the words for entertainment. Your responses were more spiritual, which was, of course, my ultimate goal. I have enjoyed our thought proviking exchanges during the course of this story.I don't know if you are reading my other story, "Secret Recipe," or not. It is a SS/HG fic, but it happens after the epilogue, so they are both much older. I understand why you find Hermione so annoying. So do I, but I look back on my own teenage years and feel that if I can mature and grow as a person, so can she. It is much more light-hearted than this one. So if you are looking for something entertaining, you might want to check it out.Thanks again for sticking with me.CP
Nice wrap-up, Clay. Hope you have another one planned! :)
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
I need to finish Secret Recipe before I start on anything new. RL is heating up and keeping me from my writing at the moment, but I still sneak in a little time to read other people's stories. Speaking of which, I just got a notice that "The Runner" has an update!Thanks for following along through this saga. I really appreciate your comments.CP
I'm always a little sad when a story I've enjoyed ends. This story is no exception. But I liked the ending. He and Sienna deserved the life they created.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Thanks,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
. I'm so glad you came along with me all the way to the end. It was sad for me to end it as well. This story simply poured out of me. I carried a notebook with me everywhere and was constantly writing in it.Thanks again for sticking with me.CP
While I shouldn't be surprised that the chapter ends where it does, it just leaves me hanging on, looking for more (looks side to side, down below reveiw box...nope, no more) Hope that the next bit comes up soon, I've enjoyed the story so far.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
More will be coming soon. IMO JKR wanted him dead, but she enjoys FF so much that she purposefully wrote his death scene in an ambiguous fashion and consipicuously left out his portrait just so we would all speculate and let our imaginations run rampant.And so mine did, as you will see in the next chapter. :)I'm glad you have enjoyed the story so far. I hope that my ending does not disappoint you.
Response from RhiannonAvon (Reviewer)
Your opinion works for me =) Besides, none of us would have any fun reading/writing if she didn't leave it ambiguousLike I said, looking forward to the next bit. Up till now, nothing has been disappointing, so unless you somehow manage to completely screw up the ending, I don't think you have to worry about disappointing anyone. =)
I am sure Winky and Sienna will save the day. Nice build up to the final stages! :)
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Thanks, sunny. Winky and Sienna will certainly try to save the day, but Sienna is a healer, not a miracle worker...Read on. I don't think that the ending will disappoint you.
Well done! Sometimes love scenes go too one way or the other. Yours was dead on. Not an easy thing to do. Great job... and very romantic!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Wow, thanks so much for the great compliment,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
. It really means a lot to me. That was my first attempt at a graphic love scene. To tell you the truth, I wasn't very comfortable writing it, but I really like the way it turned out.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Wow, thanks so much for the great compliment,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
. It really means a lot to me. That was my first attempt at a graphic love scene. To tell you the truth, I wasn't very comfortable writing it, but I really like the way it turned out.
He heee, I loved the last bit... The wedding and the wedding night were wonderful. And I hope he won't obliviate Minerva in the end.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
I'm sorry to tell you, but for her safety as well as theirs, Severus has no choice but to Obliviate Minerva. But there will be some residual benefits from her knowing the truth for a little while.Glad you liked it. Thanks for your comments.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
I'm sorry to tell you, but for her safety as well as theirs, Severus has no choice but to Obliviate Minerva. But there will be some residual benefits from her knowing the truth for a little while.Glad you liked it. Thanks for your comments.
I'm surprised he didn't give them both detention with Filch!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Since Filch is a squib, I guess he didn't want to take the chance that they might pull something over on him.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Since Filch is a squib, I guess he didn't want to take the chance that they might pull something over on him.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
How are they going to their secrets from the staff (the real staff, not the Carrows)? Won't Snape's magical signature change as he opens himself to this new awareness? Thanks for the lovely chapter and your dad's lovely lyrics.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
His spiritual experience did have an effect on him, but as you will soon see, the effect is not lasting. I doubt that it would change his magical signature enough for others to notice until he attains a more permanent spiritual perception shift. That will come, but only much later.I'm glad you liked the chapter, and especially my dad's song. :) Thanks for your supportive comments.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
His spiritual experience did have an effect on him, but as you will soon see, the effect is not lasting. I doubt that it would change his magical signature enough for others to notice until he attains a more permanent spiritual perception shift. That will come, but only much later.I'm glad you liked the chapter, and especially my dad's song. :) Thanks for your supportive comments.
My brother lives in an Ashram (which I have never visited, so it was interesting to get this peek inside one!)
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
I have been to one here in the USA, but never to India. This actually came out of my imagination. The Ashram here in Virginia is called Yogaville. It is a spralling place that covers many acres, with rollings hills, beautiful gardens, and a river on its boarder. There are dorm rooms, semi private rooms, and private facilities. There is a dining hall where everyone eats. There is a huge shrine that pays homage to all of the world's major religions. The man who started it was from India and came here several decades ago, Swami Satchidananda. His life was dedicated to bringing together people of all religions, to learn from eachother, and to celebrate their diversity as well as their common goal of enlightenment.Where does your brother live? What country?
Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)
OHMYGOD MY BROTHER *LIVES IN YOGAVILLE*!!!!*FLAIL*
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
It is truly a beautiful place. And the people are beautiful. I feel such peace when I go there. It is always hard to leave.
Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)
Yeah, it's been very good for him. He had a rough time and while we all joke about him being off playing with the fairies (he can be very . . . unreliable sometimes; he'll say he's going to do something and then doesn't do it and he doesn't seem to understand how his behaviour can impact others sometimes), we are all quite glad he is where he is because it's a place where he is okay.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Is your brother a Pisces? He sounds like a dear friend of mine that goes up there a lot, and stays for weeks at a time sometimes. I joke him because he will tell me that he will call me when he gets back and a month goes by and he doesn't call. Or he will say that he will come by and see me, but he never comes. He has a heart of gold, but he is unreliable. Time has no meaning for him. My friend is a Pisces.
Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)
Naw, he's a Sag.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
I have been to one here in the USA, but never to India. This actually came out of my imagination. The Ashram here in Virginia is called Yogaville. It is a spralling place that covers many acres, with rollings hills, beautiful gardens, and a river on its boarder. There are dorm rooms, semi private rooms, and private facilities. There is a dining hall where everyone eats. There is a huge shrine that pays homage to all of the world's major religions. The man who started it was from India and came here several decades ago, Swami Satchidananda. His life was dedicated to bringing together people of all religions, to learn from eachother, and to celebrate their diversity as well as their common goal of enlightenment.Where does your brother live? What country?
Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)
OHMYGOD MY BROTHER *LIVES IN YOGAVILLE*!!!!*FLAIL*
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
It is truly a beautiful place. And the people are beautiful. I feel such peace when I go there. It is always hard to leave.
Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)
Yeah, it's been very good for him. He had a rough time and while we all joke about him being off playing with the fairies (he can be very . . . unreliable sometimes; he'll say he's going to do something and then doesn't do it and he doesn't seem to understand how his behaviour can impact others sometimes), we are all quite glad he is where he is because it's a place where he is okay.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Is your brother a Pisces? He sounds like a dear friend of mine that goes up there a lot, and stays for weeks at a time sometimes. I joke him because he will tell me that he will call me when he gets back and a month goes by and he doesn't call. Or he will say that he will come by and see me, but he never comes. He has a heart of gold, but he is unreliable. Time has no meaning for him. My friend is a Pisces.
Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)
Naw, he's a Sag.
I really like this story. Snape and someone else was the first type of fanfiction I read, so it is the one I'm most comfortable with I think. Wonderful chapter, I like the use of Eastern thought in the story. Snape had to be overwhelmed by the idea of power that could eliminate Voldemort with a thought. But then to see an individual who had the power and wouldn't use it, that had to be really hard to take. I wonder if Dumbledore is using his private time with Babaji to try to bring him around more? Dumbledore ,like Snape, is so committed to the task of destroying Voldemort that I can't see him ever missing an opportunity to gain an advantage. And the locket, wouldn't it be wonderful to be able to talk to certain people that are gone? I wonder would this allow you to reach closure, or would the problems in a relationship during a life continue with the portrait?
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Hi,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
, and thanks for the very insighful review.I have read eastern philosophy extensively, and with the truly wise and spiritually enlightened people, the more power they acquire, the less they want to use it. They look at life, death and suffering very differently than the people of western thought do. It is hard to imagine someone who would not be willing to use his power to destroy Voldemort, but someone with Babaji's power would indeed let karma play itself out and not interfere. So any efforts made by Dumbledore will go unheaded.As for the closure issue, I imagine that if access to the deceasded love one is on going, the problems in life would follow, growing, changing and perhaps resolving themselves. But then new issues would come up. Case in point, the interaction between Snape and Dumbledore's portrait in DH. It is as if the person is still alive, but helplessly trapped in the canvass.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Hi,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
, and thanks for the very insighful review.I have read eastern philosophy extensively, and with the truly wise and spiritually enlightened people, the more power they acquire, the less they want to use it. They look at life, death and suffering very differently than the people of western thought do. It is hard to imagine someone who would not be willing to use his power to destroy Voldemort, but someone with Babaji's power would indeed let karma play itself out and not interfere. So any efforts made by Dumbledore will go unheaded.As for the closure issue, I imagine that if access to the deceasded love one is on going, the problems in life would follow, growing, changing and perhaps resolving themselves. But then new issues would come up. Case in point, the interaction between Snape and Dumbledore's portrait in DH. It is as if the person is still alive, but helplessly trapped in the canvass.
Finally!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Yes, I did make you wait a long time for this. Sorry, but I felt that he wouldn't marry her until certain things fell into place.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Yes, I did make you wait a long time for this. Sorry, but I felt that he wouldn't marry her until certain things fell into place.
Poor Sev. Even Voldemort didn't know ALL his secrets! Must be disconcerting to be laid wide open like that.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
It would be disconcerting for anyone to have their mind and memories be an open book, but especially someone as secretive as our beloved Potions Master.Thanks for chiming in,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
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Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
It would be disconcerting for anyone to have their mind and memories be an open book, but especially someone as secretive as our beloved Potions Master.Thanks for chiming in,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
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Wow! Great chapter! I had no idea where you were going with it. Quite the power punch from Babaji calling SS on his would-be abandonment of Sienna if Lily were to return. Babaji was done well. His presence really came through. And DD's memory... loved it! But it was the argument afterward that made this chapter fantastic. Seeing SS and DD argue was like watching two bulls in a turf battle. Whew! DD didn't give SS any ground on that one, fortunately. It's one thing to be powerful physically (or magically, in this case), but another thing when the power comes from conviction and solid priorities. Okay. Maybe that's just called wisdom. Oh, and the details were wonderful, from the covered walkway, snores, inlaid slatted screen, to a drawer full of black socks. Looking forward to hearing what Sienna has to say in counselling!
Response from color (Reviewer)
One more thing: SS's emotional development. For all of his intellectual intelligence, the fellow has next to no emotional intelligence. He just doesn't get it. Why would you abandon someone who you passionately love and who passionately loves you, and, more importantly, who *wants* to be with you, for someone else who doesn't want you that way? Goodness! This man's emotional understanding is still that of a high-school student. Dunderhead!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
He most definitely has an arrested emotional development. But remember, he has not been able to let go of Lily because she keeps showing up in his dreams. And the dreams are very real to him. They don't fade away like regular dreams. So that has made it particularly hard for him to let go.And DD's ties to Sienna go even deeper than the friendship that has been illustrated here. You will find out how a bit later in the story. They are tied together in ways that even they don't realize yet.I am so glad you like this story. I really put my heart and soul into it when I wrote it. The words just came pouring out of me. I carried a notebook everywhere I went. Because it is not a SS/HG paring, I don't have many readers, like I do with Secret Recipe, but the ones who do read this one really seem to like it.Thanks so much for your kind and insightful review. You made my day.
Response from color (Reviewer)
I've been reading "Secret Recipe". It's a good story, but "The Potion Master's Assistant" is better. The other readers who don't read this story because its SS/OC, well, too bad for them.
Response from color (Reviewer)
One more thing: SS's emotional development. For all of his intellectual intelligence, the fellow has next to no emotional intelligence. He just doesn't get it. Why would you abandon someone who you passionately love and who passionately loves you, and, more importantly, who *wants* to be with you, for someone else who doesn't want you that way? Goodness! This man's emotional understanding is still that of a high-school student. Dunderhead!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
He most definitely has an arrested emotional development. But remember, he has not been able to let go of Lily because she keeps showing up in his dreams. And the dreams are very real to him. They don't fade away like regular dreams. So that has made it particularly hard for him to let go.And DD's ties to Sienna go even deeper than the friendship that has been illustrated here. You will find out how a bit later in the story. They are tied together in ways that even they don't realize yet.I am so glad you like this story. I really put my heart and soul into it when I wrote it. The words just came pouring out of me. I carried a notebook everywhere I went. Because it is not a SS/HG paring, I don't have many readers, like I do with Secret Recipe, but the ones who do read this one really seem to like it.Thanks so much for your kind and insightful review. You made my day.
Response from color (Reviewer)
I've been reading "Secret Recipe". It's a good story, but "The Potion Master's Assistant" is better. The other readers who don't read this story because its SS/OC, well, too bad for them.
What an interesting chapter. Severus is so very western in his thinking, I can see the look on his face when the seemingly young man spoke to him as though he were a child. As for Dumbledore and the kiss, I knew a couple of gay guys that were damn good kissers. (One kissed me to make me feel better, the other did it to make a point.) As young as Sienna is, she probably didn't realize why it felt off. This is such a great story.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Thanks so much,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
. Yeah, I'm sure that I am not the only girl who has been kissed by a gay guy.I am so very glad that you are enjoying my story. It doesn't have a large number of fans because it is not a SS/HG fic, but the few readers that follow it seem to really enjoy it, and that means so much to me.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Thanks so much,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
. Yeah, I'm sure that I am not the only girl who has been kissed by a gay guy.I am so very glad that you are enjoying my story. It doesn't have a large number of fans because it is not a SS/HG fic, but the few readers that follow it seem to really enjoy it, and that means so much to me.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
This is a very nice chapter and a wonderful use of Winky.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
I love Winky. She comes in very handy for the rest of the story.Thanks for chiming in,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
, the reviews keep me going.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
I love Winky. She comes in very handy for the rest of the story.Thanks for chiming in,
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
, the reviews keep me going.
Sounds like the Headmaster's bedroom is a version of the Room of Requirement. Hum. Severus considering marriage already? Nice to see how completely his hesitancy has ended.Good job!
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
People tend to accelerate their private lives during war time because they never know if this day will be their last. He has known her (and loved her) for years, but now that she is through with school, he feels free to express those feelings.Thanks so much for your kind review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
People tend to accelerate their private lives during war time because they never know if this day will be their last. He has known her (and loved her) for years, but now that she is through with school, he feels free to express those feelings.Thanks so much for your kind review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
So who does Winky obey? Severus or Sienna?
Response from ClayPotter (Author of The Potion Master's Assistant)
Winky is a free elf. She will do what she thinks is best for all concerned. But she is not the only one...