Human
Fervesco61 Reviews | 61 Ratings, 0 Likes, 72 Favorites )
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About Fervesco
Author
Fervesco
Member Since 2005 | 16 Stories | Favorited by 507 | 29 Reviews Written | 544 Review Responses
Hmmm..a bio huh? Oh, blimey, let's just sum this up: I'm a crazy mid-twenties review whore with a totally unhealthy obsession with Snape.
Reviews for Human
Oh, an excellent chapter. I love the thoughts you have given him, the edge of darkness in him that he visibly balances with her innocence. Well done!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Human)
Woohoo! Thank you!
Oh my god. I'm so relieved. Because even as a brilliant and tragic oneshot, which it would have been, it left me aching and empty. I need MORE. And you're saying there is more.There is a goddess.And her name is Fervesco. (wink)(This actually reads like a response to one of my scenarios for the exchange, which gives me extra warm fuzzies!)
Response from Fervesco (Author of Human)
Thank you!! Yes, two more chapters to come :DI'm so pleased you enjoyed it! Is that the exchange that just closed?
Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)
It was the winter exchange ss/hg, not the potter place one. One of the prompts I wrote was that Hermione showed up and asked Snape to take her virginity the night before they graduated. In mine, I also said that there was a Hogwarts legend that if a Gryffindor ever left Hogwarts still a virgin, "something" would happen, and she's afraid of being humiliated. I've fun many scenarios through my head on that one, from comic to angsty, and seeing even part of it played out in your fic was very fulfilling!
Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)
The night before SHE graduated. I've RUN many scenarios... you get the picture.
Response from Fervesco (Author of Human)
Oooh, now that does sound like fun! :D
*sigh* You just want to yell at the screen, "Don't be a prat, Severus!" But ... still, it's very in character. Thanks for digging out this old story and sharing.
Response from Fervesco (Author of Human)
Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for the review!
oh god, this was so utterly well written and beautiful I don't know what more to say than.. wow! just wow!
reading this was so easy, I didn't question a sentence or one of severus' thoughts once, it seemed so real *-*
good job!
Response from Fervesco (Author of Human)
Wow - thank you so much!! That's put a big smile on my face :D
Wow! That was terrific! Thanks for sharing this! *waits patiently for more*
Response from Fervesco (Author of Human)
Thank you!!! I'll put the next chapter up tonight :D
The story pulled me in immediately. Since the story is already written, I can't beg for (only hope) that there is a happy ending Thanks for your work -- I'll be watching for the next installment.
Response from Fervesco (Author of Human)
I'll pop the next chapter up tonight :) I'm glad you're enjoying it, thank you!
I like the way he refers to her as Miss Granger at the start then as Hermione as things heat up and he feels his humanity
Response from Fervesco (Author of Human)
Thank you!
Oh he is so deliciously stubborn! Love it.
I do love the way your stories are from Severus Snape's point of veiw. A quite moving little romp. I've been reading you for years. I went to my favorite authors list and thought, Fervesco. That name brings a sense of anticipation remembered. I have a terrible memory which is usually a problem, but the wonderful thing is, I never remember what is going to happen next even though I've read a story before. I just remember if I liked the way I felt when I read it. Yep! That was a nice one alright. 
More?
MORE! You are a wonderful writer and the point of view you chose was beyond perfect! Well done and thanks for writing.