Aw, is it finished? As always, utterly brilliant! We bow to thee, O Smut Goddess!

Oh, my God! What an amazing story, I love it. Severus, the bastard arguing with himself over his feeling for the know-it-all and Hermione just shaking her head at his actions. Any chance you'll consider writing a companion piece, say after Harry has won and Severus has to face his feelings or lose Hermione forever?

Wow.  Great story.  Loved the end with just the simple stay.  Perfect.

I think I have something in my eye. That was beautiful. Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

LoL! I loved Snape's internal snarking. It was highly comical! And that was one hell of a freudian slip!

Excellent! It was really sweet, but kinda twisted and messed up at the same time. I really liked that.

well written and well delivered thank you for summing htis up for mehappy writting

I think Severus is fighting a 'battle of wills' with himself.  I think you could add a chapter quite easily as an epilogue showing who won so to speak.  This was a pretty good story and I loved the internal dialogue.

Wow good start, I can totally see Severus throwing Hermione out just to hide his own feelings!

Severus is at his best, snarky, cranky and insufferable.  I think Hermione is drawn to the 'bad boy' image.

very nice. there are so few nice fics written from severus's POV, so I'm glad there is now one more.

Severus, sometimes you can be such a twit!

Yes "just for a while". * wide grin spread on my face for the rest of the day*

I love it when she simply rolled her eyes at him for being such an idiot. Hope he comes back to his senses soon.

*sigh with deep regret to have not read this soon*

I still think this needs more, more more...but then I'm an insatiably greedy little twit, aren't I?~Lotm

I love it when Hermione stands up to a nasty and viscious Snape. She always seems to surprize him and get what she wants in the end!

I love how you write your Severus. He is determined to hide his vulnerability behind his fierce mask of nastyness. I only hope Hermione can break through it.

Well I wish there were more to read. Lovely story.

Oh so sweet, and then snarky snape shows up.

Great story! I really enjoyed it, and I'm glad Snape got over his 'attitude', with Hermione, and spent the night with her. At least he's not being the greasy git that he always is.

You said this was published elsewhere. I believe I have read it, but think it is definately worth a re-read.

Oh, I hope he stays a good long time!  He deserves some happiness.  After being treated so horribly in DH, he deserves all the happy endings he can get.  Thanks for your work!

I really enjoyed this story. I felt bad however, that at the end, Snape was so mean to Hermione. But I guess that's Snape for you. But yet, he enjoyed the whole thing.  It was a great story, and can't wait for the next chapters! 

Yeeee-um!!!! One of my favorite Severuses (!!); equal parts cranky and smitten. Knows his way around a mattress (or wall...floor...tabletop...desk...alcove...you get the idea). Inner dialogue was magically delicious!A lovely amuse bouche!Now...Mission IV?