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Culmination Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Severus
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Culmination

1: Prologue

2: Chapter 1: Hermione

3: Chapter 2: Draco

4: Chapter 3: Severus

5: Chapter 4: Hermione

6: Chapter 5: Draco

7: Chapter 6: Severus

8: Chapter 7: Hermione

9: Chapter 8: Draco

10: Chapter 9: Severus

11: Chapter 10: Hermione

12: Chapter 11: Draco

13: Chapter 12: Severus

14: Chapter 13: Hermione

15: Chapter 14: Draco

16: Chapter 15: Severus

17: Chapter 16: Hermione

18: Chapter 17: Draco

19: Chapter 18: Severus

20: Chapter 19: Hermione

21: Chapter 20: Draco

22: Chapter 21: Severus

23: Epilogue

Chapter 12: Severus

Culmination

Chapter 13 of 23

Cosette

The battle finally begins...

Drama Romance Erotica Smut Slash post-HBP/HBP compliant Potions Under Duress 20,555 Words 23 Chapters Complete
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Chapter 12:

Severus:

Three pops of air alerted Severus that his attackers, along with Draco, had arrived. He nodded to Hermione, who stood alert with her wand facing the door. A polite knock sounded on the door, causing Hermione’s eyebrows to arch and an unintended smirk to move his lips. Lucius and his sense of decorum.

“Severus? Will you let us in, or do I have to come in uninvited?”

“Of course, Lucius. Do come in.”

At a confused look from Hermione, he could only shrug in reply. There was no harm in indulging Lucius’s need for politesse. Anything that could be done to lower his guard was worth doing.

The door swung open to reveal Lucius with his arm slung around Draco’s shoulders, a sign of affection he had never before seen Lucius bestow upon Draco. Any anger he might have had towards Draco for his betrayal dissipated as he noticed certain oddities: the hollowed look in Draco’s eyes, the slight vibration coming from his skin, the way he let his father keep him at his side without protest.

This changes everything… If Lucius had to Crucio Draco to lead them here...

Before he could finish his train of thought, the familiar silky voice interrupted.

“Severus Snape,” Lucius drawled, “I come here on behalf of our Master—well, my Master only, as it turns out—to perform your execution. Out of respect for our past years of friendship, I offer you a choice. Surrender, and I will grant you a quick death. Or, we can duel and risk harming one of the students you seem so fond of protecting.”

“I trust my students can protect themselves, Lucius.”

With a curt nod, Lucius stepped over the threshold, pushing Draco out in front of him. Goyle followed behind, squeezing into the room like an oversized melon.

“Draco, I trust that you can manage the Mudblood on your own while Goyle and I deal with the traitor. Surely you have no qualms with that?”

Fury rose in Severus as Lucius sneered disdainfully at Draco. Hoping Hermione had noticed Draco’s weakened state, Severus had no choice but to allow the duel to begin.

Lucius faced Severus as Draco attempted to stride over to Hermione. With a mock bow from both Lucius and Goyle, which he returned in kind, the duel began.

“Confrigo!”

“Duro!”

“Impedimenta!”

“Langlock!”

“Avada Kedavra!”

“Crucio!”

“Sectumsempra!”

Goyle, always nothing more than a lackey, hovered behind Lucius, occasionally sending a curse towards Severus. The real threat was Lucius. Severus had often imagined what it would be like to fight Lucius, or other Death Eaters, but battles never unraveled as imagined. Lucius seemed as comfortable blocking Severus’s curses as he was blocking his. Curse after curse was deflected, flowing harmlessly into the walls or furniture. That charm was one of my better ideas...

This battle would continue until one of them succumbed to exhaustion, unless Lucius could be caught off-guard. But how? I’ve got his full attention. He’s well accustomed to my fighting style. What could I do to surprise him?

Suddenly, a thump from the opposite side of the room momentarily interrupted their duel. Lying on the ground, a victim of Petrificus Totalus, was Draco. Hermione had won and had done so without harming Draco.

Goyle stared in shock as Hermione turned her wand upon him.

“I’ll, uh, go for reinforcements, alright?”

With that, Goyle Disapparated away.

Both he and Hermione turned their wands toward Lucius, but Lucius only saw Severus.

"Expelliarmus!”

Lucius’s wand flew into Hermione’s hand.

The temptation to enact revenge for Draco was strong as he looked at the defeated Lucius and muttered, “Crucio”. Only for a moment, and then he dies...

Lucius’s body began to writhe as moans seeped from his lips like blood from a wound.

“Severus! What are you doing?”

“Exacting revenge upon my dear, dear friend Lucius.”

It's too easy to enjoy this. This is for Draco, for all the times you’ve hurt him. Did you enjoy it, Lucius? Did it make you feel powerful, torturing your own son?

“Revenge? What—”

“Let me finish, Hermione.”

After a few more moments, Severus lowered his wand, allowing the Cruciatus Curse to stop.

“And now, Lucius, you die.”

As Severus raised his wand, aimed directly at his former ally’s forehead, a multitude of popping sounds came from outside.

There’s no time. And I have to keep Draco—and Hermione—safe.

Rushing over to Draco, Severus barked, “Get over here, Hermione!”

Relieved that she was able to make it to him in time, he held her with one arm and bent down to hold Draco’s stiff body with the other. The door burst open just as he Disapparated them away to safety.

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Latest 25 Reviews for Culmination

170 Reviews  |  6.47/10 Average

10/10

jenidralph

Oh, that's not good. 

10/10

jenidralph

So, they're spying on each other and he needs to turn her.  Sounds interesting.  Draco seems to be the wild card.

10/10

jenidralph

Uh oh.  Draco is really gonna be upset now.  I'm liking this story.  It's different.

10/10

jenidralph

Oh, how I wish Dumbledore had told someone that Snape was loyal.

0/10

snapify52

Smutty and sweet and short. I like it! Thanks. :)

0/10

katielady08

I think the last chapter was the best... you could have skipped all the rest and just made it a one shot!  :)

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Hehe, thanks!

0/10

MollysSister

Nuts! He was so close to offing Lucius!!

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Sorry to disappoint you. ;)

0/10

MollysSister

Lucius is not going to win a father of the year award is he?

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Ha, no. :P

10/10

MollysSister

Good heavens I am biting my nails!!

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

10/10

MollysSister

Oh I hope that info to Harry was enough to buy their freedom later on

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Maybe... you'll just have to keep reading to find out!

0/10

MollysSister

Draco! This is not the way into Severus' bed!

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

We just have to forgive Draco for getting all emotional and making a stupid decison. :)

10/10

MollysSister

Sneaky Snape is double booking his "detentions" Naughty prof!

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Yup! :D

0/10

MollysSister

OH NO! Did she just blow his cover???

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

I think Snape will be able to talk his way out of this one... for now... ;p

0/10

MollysSister

Dumbledore–he’s been speaking to us from one of those collectible cards I always wondered if that was possible. Clever of you !!

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks. It seemed to make sense to me.

10/10

MollysSister

Your twisty Snape is such fun!

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thank you!

10/10

MollysSister

Ahhhhh the naked payoff I have been waiting the whole damn story for! Yipeee!!!!!Thank you!

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

You're very welcome! Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review! :D

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

You're very welcome! Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review! :D

10/10

braye27

And they lived happily ever after!  Who knew?  A great read.Beth

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D Check out my original fiction if you've enjoyed my writing. :)

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D Check out my original fiction if you've enjoyed my writing. :)

10/10

braye27

Good news, and celebratory sex!  They are a happy threesome.Beth

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

10/10

braye27

Well, they have certainly hatched a plan!Now what is Treedy on about?Beth

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

10/10

braye27

A meeting of the minds then.  Now that they are all on the same page, I wonder what plans they will create to hasten the Dark Lord's downfall!Gotta catch the next chapter!Beth

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

10/10

braye27

Good for Draco!  He threw off the Cruciatus and killed his good-for-nothing father.  He has become a more powerful wizard through sheer determination and Hermione's encouraging help.Now the three of them will have some decisions to make about how to survive until the Dark Lord is vanquished.Another great chapter!Beth

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

10/10

braye27

Draco and Hermione have forged a new relationship with each other and found a new respect for one another.And just in time, because they are going to have to work together to save the man they both love!Another wonderful chapter!Beth

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

10/10

braye27

Severus had managed to ingratiate himself to Hermione, for making sure her parents would be safe.And then he pissed her off again by not agreeing to let Draco leave.That pissed Draco off, and he spilled the beans about him and Severus having sex.Life's a bitch!  Poor Professor just can't do anything right.  I think his biggest problem is that he wants a relationship with both of them, and they don't want to share.  But if I know Severus, he will figure out a way to get what he wants and have both Draco and Hermione thank him for including them in his affections!He is too clever for their own good.  I loved this chapter!!!Beth

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

:D Thanks for the review! :D

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

:D Thanks for the review! :D

10/10

braye27

Severus had managed to do something good for Hermione's parents only to return to their beautiful and i-ass-rate daughter.Some days it just doesn't pay to get out of bed in the morning.  But we do what we must!Great chapter!Beth

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

10/10

braye27

Draco is Lucius' son after all.  Kill them with kindness.And Hermione is too trusting.  What will happen next to our three reluctant companions?Beth

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

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