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Culmination Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Draco
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Culmination

1: Prologue

2: Chapter 1: Hermione

3: Chapter 2: Draco

4: Chapter 3: Severus

5: Chapter 4: Hermione

6: Chapter 5: Draco

7: Chapter 6: Severus

8: Chapter 7: Hermione

9: Chapter 8: Draco

10: Chapter 9: Severus

11: Chapter 10: Hermione

12: Chapter 11: Draco

13: Chapter 12: Severus

14: Chapter 13: Hermione

15: Chapter 14: Draco

16: Chapter 15: Severus

17: Chapter 16: Hermione

18: Chapter 17: Draco

19: Chapter 18: Severus

20: Chapter 19: Hermione

21: Chapter 20: Draco

22: Chapter 21: Severus

23: Epilogue

Chapter 11: Draco

Culmination

Chapter 12 of 23

Cosette

Draco's regret is not enough to stop his betrayal of the man he loves.

Drama Romance Erotica Smut Slash post-HBP/HBP compliant Potions Under Duress 20,555 Words 23 Chapters Complete
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Chapter 11:

Draco:

Draco watched without comment as his silver-locked father tried to force his way into a wall. At another time, this would have been amusing. But as angry as he had been at Severus—as angry as he still was at him—he didn’t really want him dead. After all, if Severus was dead, Draco would have no chance at winning him back from that freakish Mudblood.

Apparently coming to the conclusion that he couldn’t force his way into the wall, Lucius stopped and turned on Draco.

“Where would he have gone, Draco?” To not answer would be acting against the Dark Lord’s wishes, but to answer would be condemning Severus. The best choice, Draco decided, was to pretend he didn’t know.

He answered, with as much spite as he could manage, “Why do you think I would know?”

Lucius raised an eyebrow in amusement. “Do you think I’m blind? That I didn’t notice what went on between you two last spring? Oh, Severus did a good job of hiding it, but you… You pranced around our house like an excited first year when you heard he was coming to our little party. Spent all evening trying to get his attention, as I recall… It must have stung, didn’t it, when he ignored you.” The familiar look of malice had entered Lucius’s eyes. Instinct told him to tread carefully now, but the remnants of his affection for Severus forced him to ignore it.

“So? I still don’t see why I would know where he’s gone off to.”

“Oh, but I think you do, Draco. And it’s so very sweet of you to try to protect your dear Severus after you’ve just betrayed him to the Dark Lord, but don’t you think it’s a little late for that? How could Severus possibly forgive you for what you’ve done? Now, why don’t you just tell me where he’s gone to so we can follow through with the Dark Lord’s orders… Unless you think we should disobey them, of course.”

Just tell him before he gets any angrier. What good would not telling him do? He’s going to get it out of you one way or the other regardless, you know this… He couldn’t do it. Everything he and Severus had shared, how Severus had treated him like a real person and not just an extension of Lucius… Draco couldn’t give up on that.

“I don’t know where he’s gone to.” There was no turning back now as Lucius’s eyes narrowed.

“You are forcing me to do something I don’t truly want to do, Draco. But I will not go back to the Dark Lord as a failure. And I think you do know, I think you know exactly where he’s gone to. I’ve no choice…” And with that, Lucius pointed his wand at Draco, and the word he knew was coming came.

“Crucio.”

Hot lashes of pain whipped through Draco as his body gave way and fell to the floor.

“Just tell me where he is and the pain will stop. The Dark Lord need not know of your transgression. But I promise you, Draco, the pain will not stop until I know.” He paused here, drawing out the next few works with excruciatingly slow diction. “Exactly. Where. He’s. Gone.”

The convulsions had begun. He knew he wouldn’t be able to hold out much longer: he was nearing his previous record already.

“It didn’t have to come to this. If you had just told me in the beginning, this could have been avoided. Why protect him, Draco? Why protect someone who’s chosen a Mudblood over you? And you dare to call yourself a Malfoy!”

He knew he shouldn’t be listening to him, but the words stung almost as much as the curse did. Why couldn’t he just ignore him? But it was becoming harder to think now. The pain would overwhelm him soon, leave his mind so wounded he’d have to join the Longbottoms in St. Mungo’s. Was it worth it? Would Severus ever even know what he’d done for him? Would Severus even care if he found out?

Anything to make the pain stop. His mouth opened, forming the words for him even as what was left of his brain tried to stop them from forming.

“Spinner’s End! He’s gone to Spinner’s End!”

The familiar smile of victory split on Lucius’s face.

“And, Draco, will you lead us there?”

Anything to make the pain stop.

“Yes! Yes!”

The curse ended, leaving a defeated Draco sprawled on the ground as his triumphant father loomed over him.

“Then get up. Oh, and Draco? If you hesitate again to follow the Dark Lord’s orders, if you dare to lead us false, the Dark Lord will know of it. And what he will do to you… well, you’ll be looking back on this memory with fondness.”

With that, Draco pushed himself up off the ground to lead his father and Goyle to his heart’s destruction.

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Latest 25 Reviews for Culmination

170 Reviews  |  6.47/10 Average

10/10

jenidralph

Oh, that's not good. 

10/10

jenidralph

So, they're spying on each other and he needs to turn her.  Sounds interesting.  Draco seems to be the wild card.

10/10

jenidralph

Uh oh.  Draco is really gonna be upset now.  I'm liking this story.  It's different.

10/10

jenidralph

Oh, how I wish Dumbledore had told someone that Snape was loyal.

0/10

snapify52

Smutty and sweet and short. I like it! Thanks. :)

0/10

katielady08

I think the last chapter was the best... you could have skipped all the rest and just made it a one shot!  :)

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Hehe, thanks!

0/10

MollysSister

Nuts! He was so close to offing Lucius!!

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Sorry to disappoint you. ;)

0/10

MollysSister

Lucius is not going to win a father of the year award is he?

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Ha, no. :P

10/10

MollysSister

Good heavens I am biting my nails!!

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

10/10

MollysSister

Oh I hope that info to Harry was enough to buy their freedom later on

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Maybe... you'll just have to keep reading to find out!

0/10

MollysSister

Draco! This is not the way into Severus' bed!

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

We just have to forgive Draco for getting all emotional and making a stupid decison. :)

10/10

MollysSister

Sneaky Snape is double booking his "detentions" Naughty prof!

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Yup! :D

0/10

MollysSister

OH NO! Did she just blow his cover???

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

I think Snape will be able to talk his way out of this one... for now... ;p

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MollysSister

Dumbledore–he’s been speaking to us from one of those collectible cards I always wondered if that was possible. Clever of you !!

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks. It seemed to make sense to me.

10/10

MollysSister

Your twisty Snape is such fun!

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thank you!

10/10

MollysSister

Ahhhhh the naked payoff I have been waiting the whole damn story for! Yipeee!!!!!Thank you!

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

You're very welcome! Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review! :D

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

You're very welcome! Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review! :D

10/10

braye27

And they lived happily ever after!  Who knew?  A great read.Beth

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D Check out my original fiction if you've enjoyed my writing. :)

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D Check out my original fiction if you've enjoyed my writing. :)

10/10

braye27

Good news, and celebratory sex!  They are a happy threesome.Beth

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

10/10

braye27

Well, they have certainly hatched a plan!Now what is Treedy on about?Beth

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

10/10

braye27

A meeting of the minds then.  Now that they are all on the same page, I wonder what plans they will create to hasten the Dark Lord's downfall!Gotta catch the next chapter!Beth

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

10/10

braye27

Good for Draco!  He threw off the Cruciatus and killed his good-for-nothing father.  He has become a more powerful wizard through sheer determination and Hermione's encouraging help.Now the three of them will have some decisions to make about how to survive until the Dark Lord is vanquished.Another great chapter!Beth

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

10/10

braye27

Draco and Hermione have forged a new relationship with each other and found a new respect for one another.And just in time, because they are going to have to work together to save the man they both love!Another wonderful chapter!Beth

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

10/10

braye27

Severus had managed to ingratiate himself to Hermione, for making sure her parents would be safe.And then he pissed her off again by not agreeing to let Draco leave.That pissed Draco off, and he spilled the beans about him and Severus having sex.Life's a bitch!  Poor Professor just can't do anything right.  I think his biggest problem is that he wants a relationship with both of them, and they don't want to share.  But if I know Severus, he will figure out a way to get what he wants and have both Draco and Hermione thank him for including them in his affections!He is too clever for their own good.  I loved this chapter!!!Beth

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

:D Thanks for the review! :D

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

:D Thanks for the review! :D

10/10

braye27

Severus had managed to do something good for Hermione's parents only to return to their beautiful and i-ass-rate daughter.Some days it just doesn't pay to get out of bed in the morning.  But we do what we must!Great chapter!Beth

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

10/10

braye27

Draco is Lucius' son after all.  Kill them with kindness.And Hermione is too trusting.  What will happen next to our three reluctant companions?Beth

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

Response from Cosette (Author of Culmination)

Thanks for the review! :D

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