New Chapter for The Chocolate War
The Chocolate War
pokeystar29 Reviews | 4.72/10 (29 Ratings, 0 Likes, 15 Favorites )
Much ado about tiny bits of confectionery.
What do a wooden puppet, a talking water cooler, a Greek god, archival folders, coffee, and magically altered choccies have to do with falling in love? Possibly everything...
Officially nominated at dramione_awards, round 3.
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Member Since 2007 | 43 Stories | Favorited by 57 | 87 Reviews Written | 370 Review Responses
I am a slytherin in hufflepuff clothing.
I read therefore I am.
I write therefore I amuse myself.
Reviews for The Chocolate War
LOL! Stolen kiss, indeed.
Great idea!
Response from pokeystar (Author of The Chocolate War)
*curtseys*Thanks! I thought so - until someone pointed out Kisses aren't available in the UK - but that inspired the bit about Hermione labeling her choccies, so it turned out for the best, no?
you are a very talented writer. please please finish this? i'm adding this.
hooray!!
Response from pokeystar (Author of The Chocolate War)
yippee?
Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)
I spose that was rather unexplained. I liked it. a lot. I thought you were done with this story for some reason, so it was like an unexpected present.
Response from pokeystar (Author of The Chocolate War)
yippee?
Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)
I spose that was rather unexplained. I liked it. a lot. I thought you were done with this story for some reason, so it was like an unexpected present.
I always walk away from this story singing random Disney songs. I suppose that is a good thing. XDI love that everyone is in on this gag now. Way to go!
Response from pokeystar (Author of The Chocolate War)
I always have songs in my head.It is a very good thing!Thanks!
Response from CharmedForce (Reviewer)
Just for that I am going to leave random songs in your head. As payback, since a review really isn't enough.
Today I have been singing "Sweet Caroline" over and over. Don't forget to add the "Bump, bump, bump"s in the chorus!
Response from pokeystar (Author of The Chocolate War)
Aren't you.... sweet.hmmmm...(99 red balloons).*sneaks away*
Response from CharmedForce (Reviewer)
My bologna has a first name, it's O-S-C-A-R...
Response from pokeystar (Author of The Chocolate War)
Who let the dogs out?who,who,who,who, who
Response from CharmedForce (Reviewer)
Ha! That song doesn't work for me. My college mascot is a Bulldog, so I am used to that song. LOLCome on Eileen, I swear, well he means, at this moment, you mean everything...
Response from pokeystar (Author of The Chocolate War)
This is the song that never ends, it just goes on and on, my friend.Some people started singing it before they knew just what is was and now they're singing it forever just becauseThis is the song that never ends (baba ba doo doo) it goes on and on my friend...
Response from CharmedForce (Reviewer)
The... sun'll come out... tomorrow! Bet your bottom dollar that tomorrow, there'll be sun!
Response from pokeystar (Author of The Chocolate War)
Here is a little song I wrote You might want to sing it note for note Don't worry be happy In every life we have some trouble When you worry you make it double Don't worry, be happy......
Response from CharmedForce (Reviewer)
GirlI can't understand it why you want to hurt meAfter all the things I've done for you.I buy you champagne and roses and diamonds on your finger -Diamonds on your finger -Still you hang out all nightwhat am I to do?My girl wants to party all the timeParty all the timeparty all the time.My girl wants to party all the timeparty all the time.
Response from pokeystar (Author of The Chocolate War)
http://kids.niehs.nih.gov/lyrics/smworld.htmThere is just one moon And one golden sun And a smile means Friendship to ev'ryone Though the mountains divide And the oceans are wide It's a small world after all
Response from CharmedForce (Reviewer)
Her name was Lola, she was a showgirlWith yellow feathers in her hair and a dress cut down to thereShe would merengue and do the cha-chaAnd while she tried to be a star, Tony always tended barAcross a crowded floor, they worked from 8 till 4They were young and they had each otherWho could ask for more?At the Copa (CO!), Copacabana (Copacabana)The hottest spot north of Havana (here)At the Copa (CO!), CopacabanaMusic and passion were always the fashionAt the Copa...they fell in love
Response from pokeystar (Author of The Chocolate War)
My milkshake brings all the boys to the yard,And their likeIt's better than yours,Damn right it's better than yours, I can teach you, But I have to chargeI can see youre on it,You want me to teach theeTechniques that freaks these boys,It can't be bought,Just know, thieves get caught,Watch if your smart,
Response from CharmedForce (Reviewer)
I saw her perform that song live in concert. She opened for this chick, whom I like much better:Oh, baby, baby, how was I supposed to knowThat something wasn't right hereOh, baby, baby, I shouldn't have let you goAnd now you're out of sight, yeahShow me how you want it to beTell me baby cuz I need to know now, oh becauseMy loneliness is killin me (and I)I must confess I still believe (still believe)When I'm not with you I lose my mindGive me a sign, hit me baby one more time!