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The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore Chapter 20: Manslaughter
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The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore

1: Hermione Pursued

2: The List

3: Sirius' Story

4: An Unlikely Partnership

5: 5. Words of Warning

6: 6. An Unpleasant Conversation

7: Aberforth

8: In Death's Own House

9: 9. Sv Mgglbrn Chldrn fr DEs

10: The Sisters

11: The Seance

12: Mr Mgglbrns

13: At the Motel

14: 14. The Dead Speak

15: 15. 'Sv Lvr frm M McF'

16: Sv lvr frm N Mlfy

17: Wrn D Drsly

18: Kp Mlfys Sf fr V lng as poss

19: Hlp O Brgg

20: Manslaughter

21: 21. Breaking & Entering and Embezzlement

22: 22. Scrl fr Erchths Kncktrn Ally

23: 23. Hlp RL gt ovr SBs dth

24: 24. Dnc at BW & FDs wddng...

25: 25. Cnvrt Scrmgr

26: 26. Gt PW bck hm

27: 27. Kidnapped!

28: 28. Exps Pttgrw

29: 29. The Last Battle

Manslaughter

The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore

Chapter 20 of 29

spiderwort

There are some things not on the list that just must be taken care of.

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20. MANSLAUGHTER

"On to the Sixth Task!" crowed Hermione, as she burst out of the waiting room. "Where are you, James? Did you hear? Ms. Collins is going to drop her adoption petition and help Lu's father to recover."

James appeared in front of her. That's wonderful, Hermione.

"Didn't you hear our conversation? We found evidence...in Lu's lunch box...oh, I'm so happy! I didn't even have to use magic..."

I'm sorry, Hermione, I got side-tracked again.

Hermione was strangely disappointed. She had never much cared what Sirius thought of her, but she respected James' sobriety and patience and found that she really craved his approval too. She pouted, "Wow, I guess it's a good thing the aunt didn't try to blast me for talking to Lu, or that the inmates didn't stage an uprising while your back was turned, or..."

You're right. I should have been there for you...just in case. But, there is something more important right now...

"Yes, I know. Saving Dumbledore. But let's not forget that it's yours truly who's sticking her neck out for him...

It's not Dumbledore I'm thinking of. It's Sirius.

"What?"

Sirius has a favor to ask of us.

Hermione blinked.

James gestured at a bluish haze at the end of the corridor. It looked as if someone had been smoking there. The haze congealed into a ghostly figure...Sirius, looking woeful.

He can't speak to you...it's a condition of his testing...but he wants to thank you for what you did for Ovid Bragg. And...he would like you to help some of the ex-convicts on this ward.

"Why?"

It's one of the tests he has to undergo. He has to roam the land, looking for people to help, to prove that he's changed, that he really can sympathize with the sufferings of others.

"Sounds a bit like Dickens' A Christmas Carol."

Really? Oh, yes, I remember. Though Sirius more resembles Scrooge's happy-go-lucky nephew, than the old miser himself. Anyway, he stopped in here to get my advice about where to start looking and sensed that there are others here who have been convicted wrongly. It seems as though, as a former inmate himself, he has a special understanding of their situation. Every one of them has become a pariah to family and friends. That support system, so crucial to recovery, is denied them. He feels their pain deeply. Will you help them...and him? This is not a part of Dumbledore's tasks, Hermione. You can say no...if you want.

"No...I mean...yes, I want to help."

They followed the shade of Sirius back through the waiting room, unnoticed by the receptionist, who was listening to an animated conversation between Modesty Collins and an attendant. They slid through the door to the ward, passed some cubicles where visitors were meeting with patients, and followed a long, straight flight of steps downward. There was a stream of water flowing beside them in a narrow stone trough. The water swirled against the grayish-blue stone and made a restless, rushing sound. It was troubling, that sound, but at least the water was not fetid, like the air.

You need to know that this place is not well-kept. The rehabilitation of ex-convicts is not high on the Ministry's list of priorities.

"I gathered as much from the smell. I can't decide whether it reminds me more of a swamp or Crookshanks's litter pan."

It's the price the inmates pay for their perfidy.

"But apparently not all of them are guilty."

There was another set of doors at the bottom, and a guard station set into the wall. A woman with iron gray hair so perfectly combed and flattened that it looked as if it had been painted on her scalp sat at the admitting desk behind a window. Her white robes looked stiff and were buttoned up to the top of her neck.

"And how can I help you today, young lady?" she simpered in a voice that reminded Hermione of Professor Umbridge. Her badge proclaimed her to be: AMY RECHIDD, HEAD NURSE.

Hermione sent a desperate brain-wave to James. What'll I do now?

Feel inside your left pocket, he whispered.

Hermione felt and pulled out a bright yellow card. She speed-read it:

ST. MUNGO'S HOSPITAL...VISITOR'S PASS

Date: 14 July 1997

Name: Hermione Granger

Department/Ward: Azkaban Recovery Unit

Purpose: To observe day-to-day activities. Visitor is a seventh-year student at Hogwarts who is considering apprenticing as a Healer.

The signature was an illegible scrawl. She slid the card though the opening in the glass.

Nurse Rechidd pursed her lips. "Hogwarts. Well, aren't we special?" She looked Hermione up and down. "I suppose it would be all right for you to visit the day room. But I'm afraid we don't have anyone available to show you around just now."

"That's all right. I can find my way, I'm sure."

"Oh, can you? I must warn you, the inmates can be...frightening at times."

"I'm well-versed in defensive spells."

"I'm sure you are. But you'll still have to sign a waiver." She waved her wand and produced a clipboard. A bright green quill detached itself from behind her left ear and began frantically scrawling something on it. When it finished, the pen reinserted itself into Nurse Rechidd's hair, and she handed the clipboard and another pen to Hermione.

Hermione read the paper that was attached to it. I fully understand the risks of entering this ward without an escort and will not hold the staff of St. Mungo's Azkaban Recovery Unit and Outpatient Mental Services responsible for anything that might happen to me while I am within its confines.

Hermione signed the sheet and asked in as calm a voice as she could manage, "Erm...what kind of 'anything' are we talking about here?"

Nurse Rechidd's eyes gleamed at her discomfort. "Oh, they have no weapons, if you're worried about that. But some of them are quite strong...yes, quite strong. But it's more the nightmares..."

"Nightmares?"

"Yes, some visitors find it difficult to sleep at night once they've been here. They have no stomach for the harsh reality of mental illness. Most never return." She smiled, showing a perfect set of very large teeth. "Was there anything in particular you'd like to see?"

Hermione gulped and glanced through a small window in the double doors next to the station. She could see Sirius hovering over a ragged mass, curled up on the floor.

"That person there. I'll start with him...or her...if I may." She pointed through the glass.

Nurse Rechidd looked through her own window into the ward and frowned. "What's he doing in there?" She waved her wand, and both her door and the double doors opened. Hermione took that as a cue to enter. She found herself in a large shadowy room, minimally furnished. There were figures lounging on more of those plastic couches, or leaning against walls, or crouching and staring at the threadbare rug, or pacing it in the gloom. Faint groans and grunting sounds came from somewhere behind the dingy walls.

She glanced back at the nurse, who was nudging the pile of rags with her foot. "Mr. Fletcher," she scolded, "are you still here? Best be off now, before the orderly mistakes you for one of the inmates...erm...patients."

"Uh... whah?"

Hermione goggled. Dung Fletcher. What's he doing here? He couldn't have served time in Azkaban since I last saw him, could he? Did Harry have him arrested for stealing the Blacks' plates?

The disheveled old wizard sat up and looked about him. "Arr... must've dropped off. 'Ere, who's this?" He gazed at Hermione through rheumy eyes. "It's Miney... Miney... Gingold, ain' it? 'Arry's Potter's girl-friend."

"It's Granger, Mr. Fletcher. I'm Hermione Granger. What are you doing in this place?"

"Oh, you're acquainted with our traveling compost heap?" Nurse Rechidd looked doubtful, then added cheerfully, "Well, he can show you around then. He knows the place better than most." She turned, tittering at her little joke, and walked back to her station. The doors snapped closed.

He got up gingerly and brushed at his robes, a useless gesture. "Miney Granger, what you doing 'ere? Last I 'erd you was storming the Ministry itself, roustin' Death-Eaters by the score."

"That's been a year ago..."

"Wisht I coulda been there....I'd a hexed 'em good. Say, don' tell me they collared you for that!"

"No, I'm just visiting. But you...why are you...?"

"Like you... just visitin'. Course..." he lowered his voice, "place like this 'ud make a decent hidey hole if you was on the lam er something." He straightened up, trying to look respectable. "Not that I am o'course. Just visitin' my ol' pal, Brutus... Brutus Mortlake." He gestured to a corner where a hulking fellow stood pressed against the wall. He dropped his voice to a whisper. "Terrible thing they did to ol' Brutus. I brought 'im a little somepin' to cheer 'im up... you know... hair of the dog...." He opened his coat briefly. Hermione could see a pint bottle secreted in an inside pocket. It looked nearly empty. "But 'ee won' have none of it. Jes' stands and stares."

Hermione watched as the figure of Sirius drifted over behind the object of their scrutiny. He caught her eye and nodded his head. Apparently Brutus Mortlake was one of the people who needed to be helped. "What happened to him, Mr. Fletcher?"

"Arr... sent to Azkaban. For... you know... manslaughter!" This got an appropriately horrified reaction, so he hastened to add, "But he didn't mean to do it."

Hermione took Dung's arm and led him over to a couch. "Tell me about it, won't you?" she asked. They sat. The plastic crackled, and a smell of old urine wafted up about them.

"You see, me an' Brutus an' 'is wife...we was havin' coupla drinks at the Cauldron one night...."

"The Leaky Cauldron?"

"Right, an' when we left, we was jumped by a gang of wiz-kids... "

"Whiz kids?"

"You know.... Choovenile dee-linquents. They wear Muggle jeans, ride souped-up power-sweeps... uh... brooms... They hang around bars tryin' to bully decent, law-abidin' folk. Some say they're part of You-Know-Who's narsties.... Well, this gang drops out of the sky, takes us by surprise an' Accio-s all our wands...like that! Nen they start takin' the jewelry an' money right off us. One of 'em... big, rangy kid... their leader, they say... does a blast spell right over our 'eds... like a kind of warning. Nen they hops their brooms. But ol' Brutus-'ee was a wrestler back in his palmier days... 'ee grabs a-holt o' the big kid... to tries to drag 'im off 'is sweep. The kid drops 'is own wand and manages to take off anyways. Brutus scoops up the wand an' takes aim, and there's this 'orrible flash, an' the kid screams an' gets tangled in these wires 'angin' across the street. Nen 'ee drops down in the road... fried like an oyster. They give Brutus ten years fer that... said it was excessive use of force. 'Ee never recovered from the Dementors. An' now, since 'ees out, that gang's threatening 'is fambly... revenge an' all that you know. 'Is wife don't dare try to visit 'im."

"How horrible," breathed Hermione, peering into the gloom to get a good look at Brutus Mortlake. He was quite large, not Hagrid-sized, but big enough. His face was lined deeply with sadness. "But if we could find proof that he didn't do it...the gang might leave them alone."

"I fink they're mad 'cause Brutus got the feller in the back. It's against their code of honour, y'see...an' these gangs got memories as long as a Pygmy Puff's tongue. But Brutus... 'ee did hex 'im.... I seen it.... Had to testify even. Felt rotten about it. But all that time Brutus said 'ee was innercent.... 'ee never did no spell at all. But the Aurors did one o' them Priory Ink and Dado hexes on the wand."

"You mean Prior incantato?"

"Right-ee-oh! An' there it was... a Blasting Spell."

"But you said the leader had fired off a Blasting Spell as a warning, just before they all took off. Couldn't that have been the one the Aurors detected?"

"Yeh, but if Brutus didn't do one too... how'd the kid get fried?"

"You said he got tangled in some overhead wires. Were they... possibly... telephone wires?"

"Yeh, Brutey's lawyer tried to make something out of that... like maybe the kid strangled on 'em, and it weren't the blast what kilt 'im at all."

"You mean the possibility of electrocution never came up at the trial?"

"What? That thing where eckle-trickity passes through yer, and you drop down dead? Nah, couldn't be that; there wasn't no lightning in the air at all."

"I don't mean lightning. I mean electricity from the phone wires!"

"But everybody knows them wires is 'armless. Why birds even sit on 'em wiv never so much as a spark. Nah, that ain't the answer."

"But it could be! If you only touch one of the wires you're okay, but if you touch two at the same time, it causes a short-circuit, and a terrific surge of voltage passes through your body. It's lethal in most cases."

"You mean the wires really killed the kid? Not Brutey?"

"I believe so, and if you just get someone at the Ministry...say Arthur Weasley...to look it up in any Muggle physics text, they can clear him."

"I'll do that, Miss. Right now. Arthur and me is thick as thieves... you know... what wiv being in the Order an' all." He stood up and shook Hermione's hand, then looked down at his shoes. "Uh... but maybe... do you think you could write all that stuff down? About the eck-lec-tiks and all. I'm not sure he'd believe... I mean... I'm not sure I could explain it as good as you...."

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Latest 25 Reviews for The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore

50 Reviews  |  9.52/10 Average

10/10

MuseAmusant

Hopefully, the goblins will give Hermione a chance to prove she has, in her possession, the rat who intended to rob their bank? Talk about out of the fire and into the frying pan!

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

You're so right!  I should have called the story "The Perils of Hermione" a la the old movie serial "Perils of  Pauline," with a cliffhanger at the end of every installment.

10/10

blue artemis

Oh, poor Hermione, that must be horrid.  But good job using the electrified rail on Voldie.

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

I'm an old chem-major, so the idea of a scientific solution to H's problem appealed mightily.

10/10

Wahoo and Wesleyanne

I thought this couldn't get any better, and then I read that magic word, RATNIP!  I love you.You do keep coming up with wild situations and wilder original cahracters.  Such an original and clever tale!  ab fab.-Wahoo

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

**blushes** aw shucks...

10/10

Wahoo and Wesleyanne

Hooray, more chapters! You are so clever and inventive. Your wonderful ideas keep this story so fresh and alive! (unlike some of its characters) Thanks for sharing this with us!

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

Thanks, guys.  Unfortunately the story's almost over, but might I interest you in my next, about Minerva's childhood?

Response from Wahoo and Wesleyanne (Reviewer)

"dying" to see it!  -Wahoo

10/10

blue artemis

Hermione is a bit naive, isn't she?

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

Hmmmm... maybe, or maybe she had little choice but to cooperate... and of course, she still does like Viktor... a little.

10/10

Wahoo and Wesleyanne

Oh that is sweet!  This chapter is a wonderful mix of humor and emotion.  Poor Grawp!  That was very sad.  It was thoughtful of Percy to give him the poster. I'm glad he went home to his mom! I hope Hermione goes back ino the woods and gets the wand and briefcase!  They might come in handy.  -Wahoo

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

Good point!  But--oh, she's going to be busy for a while.

10/10

Wahoo and Wesleyanne

Golly this one had me laughing!  My favourite line was that Helga Hufflepuff wanted to participate, but only in a small role.  My hubby and daughter are 'theatre folk' and that just rang hysterically true to me.Well done,Pookah

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

I was 'theatre folk' once myself, and the party they threw afterward came out of memories of some first-night celebrations I've attended.

9/10

Wahoo and Wesleyanne

This is a very sweet chapter.  I am glad Hermione was able to overcome her jealousy.  I know how that is, my best friend from college was the prettiest girl at University of ---,  and I was a bit jelaous of her when we first met.   But her sweet nature and many sterling qualities won me over, in spite of my own bad nature and jealousy.  Maybe this will be the start of a beautiful friendship between the two?-Wahoo

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

Sounds like a great idea for a one-shot--or a challenge, n'est-ce pas?

Response from Wahoo and Wesleyanne (Reviewer)

yes, it does sound like a good challenge. We don't get enough stories of the lesser-known characters, and not enough friendship tales. thanks for your friendship tale, and you have given us delightful OCs as well.
-Wahoo

10/10

blue artemis

That was an interesting chapter.  The verse was really quite amusing. 

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

Thanks.  The story comes from a series of one-shots I wrote for a challenge called "Hermione's Inferno". I felt I had try to do one in the poetic form Dante used in The Divine Comedy.  I think it's called "terza rima". 

10/10

blue artemis

Wow, a Ron I can like.  That doesn't often happen in fanfiction.  Well, at least the stuff I read, anyway. 

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

I've met some icky Rons too, blue, (and written some as well).  But, of all the Rons I've created,  I like this version the best.

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

I've met some icky Rons too, blue, (and written some as well).  But, of all the Rons I've created,  I like this version the best.

10/10

pookah

I love this chapter!  Thank you for the update, and for house elves!  Love those house elves!

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

Yes!  And it's so much fun to write dialogue for them.  JKR gave us such a wealth of characters and ideas to elaborate on.

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

Yes!  And it's so much fun to write dialogue for them.  JKR gave us such a wealth of characters and ideas to elaborate on.

10/10

blue artemis

I really love the idea of Hermione as a house elf. 

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

Yay! Me too.  Gives her a chance to see the other side of things.

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

Yay! Me too.  Gives her a chance to see the other side of things.

0/10

Wahoo and Wesleyanne

another great chapter!  Thanks for the update!  I am really enjoying this unusual tale.  I'd love to see what happens when the snidget-catcher goes to Hogwarts! 

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

Thanks, Double-W, so would I.  (Plot bunnies abound in this fic.)

10/10

blue artemis

They are judging Hermione based on upset dead Weasley Prewitt ancestors?  yeesh.  Although the concept is funny as all get out. 

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

I know.  Sorry, couldn't come up with anything better.

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

I know.  Sorry, couldn't come up with anything better.

10/10

pookah

spontaneous magic is great!  Thanks for another chapter, I am enjoying this tale, it's very original.

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

I've always been galvanized by the idea of underage magic.  Anything can happen!

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

I've always been galvanized by the idea of underage magic.  Anything can happen!

10/10

blue artemis

That was some serious accidental magic. 

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

Yep, big things come in small packages.  Like baby Harry... and Darla.  All generated by love.

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

Yep, big things come in small packages.  Like baby Harry... and Darla.  All generated by love.

10/10

blue artemis

Oh, that poor Darla.  Anyway, that was a smart plan of Hermione's.  This story takes quite a few twists, doesn't it? 

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

A new one almost every chapter.  Hope it doesn't tire you out!

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

A new one almost every chapter.  Hope it doesn't tire you out!

10/10

pookah

I am really enjoying ths clever tale!  Thank you for writing it!

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

You're most welcome!  I really enjoyed writing it too.

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

You're most welcome!  I really enjoyed writing it too.

10/10

Wahoo and Wesleyanne

Oh! the plot thickens!  And I love Sirius's clever use of his limitations, he senses or spots a dead owl, but it turns out the aurors are there already.  Really a neat little chapter!  thanks for the update.-- Wahoo

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

Sirius is soooo much fun to write.  I bless JKR every day for making his character, but I bless even more all the writers who have elaborated on it.

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

Sirius is soooo much fun to write.  I bless JKR every day for making his character, but I bless even more all the writers who have elaborated on it.

10/10

blue artemis

That was wonderful, and funny all at once. 

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

Yeh, I'm a big fan of comic relief.

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

Yeh, I'm a big fan of comic relief.

10/10

Wahoo and Wesleyanne

Sirius is a hoot!   I like your little Muggleborn witches and their families.  HOW is Hermione going to convince them they are in danger?  Looking forward to another amusing chapter soon!

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

Thanks,

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

(that sure is a mouthful).  I do enjoy putting Sirius into embarrassing situations.  I figure his aplomb and sheer brass will get him out of most of them.  (And there are lots more to come.)

10/10

Wahoo and Wesleyanne

Don't know how I missed this chapter but here it is!  good chapter and I am on to the next.  Thanks for this so-funny, so bizarre story.

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

Thanks, W&W, it will get bizarrer still, I assure you.  (Well, um, I hope it will.)

10/10

blue artemis

Interesting chapter.  Nice segue. 

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

Thanks, ma'am.  This came out of a series of short sketches, loosely tied together by another writer's plot line that I had to give up on to create the book, so 'nice segue' is good, very good.

10/10

pookah

This keeps getting better and better.  Poets have their own death, and  RATS of all things?!  Wonderful & imaginative.

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

This sorta kinda came out of Terry Pratchett's Discworld.  I think there's a Death of Rats in that one, but Reginald is my own idea.

10/10

blue artemis

This story is delightfully bizarre.  I'm really enjoying the descriptions of death's place. 

Response from spiderwort (Author of The Ransom of Albus Dumbledore)

I have to credit Terry Pratchett with most of that, so if you want more bizarre, try his Discworld series.

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