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For All Intents and Purposes
rhiannonofthemoon494 Reviews | 7.21/10 (494 Ratings, 0 Likes, 320 Favorites )
A moment of inattention transports Hermione to one year after the fall of the Dark Lord, but with no way back to her own time. Her only clue is a small object that she finds between worlds. She enlists the aid of a young Professor… but he has his own agenda. EWE
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5/4/08
Hello, dear readers and fellow writers!
I read and write in the Inuyasha and Harry Potter fandoms, preferring non-canon pairing that involve bad boys of the fandoms: Sesshomaru, Snape, Draco, Lucius (mmm, Slytherins), and Hermione is the Potterverse bicycle.
Completed fics in the Potterverse:
* The Devil is in the Details (HG/SS - M for language and violence - and I'm happy to mention that it was a Featured Story at TPP for 2/08 and nominated for the SS/HG awards Round Two)
* For All Intents and Purposes (HG/SS - M for language and violence)
Completed fics for Inuyasha:
* Darkness (Kag/Sessh - NC17 for smut - won multiple awards at IY groups)
* To Shed a Little Light (Kag/Sessh - NC17 for smut- won multiple awards at IY groups)
* Quadrangle (Kag/Sessh - NC17 for smut)
* Moving Pictures (Sessh/OC - NC17 for smut)
* Don't Know What You've Got 'til it's Gone (Kag/IY - NC17 for smut - and this was my first fic ever, so be warned)
WIP:
* Cereal Box Romance (Kag/Sessh - Inuyasha - updated irregularly- won multiple awards at IY groups)
* Primal (Kag/Sessh - Inuyasha - pretty much abandoned)
Upcoming projects? Yes. I've got a one-shot HG/SS cooking that I may never finish or post, and I've started a multi-chapter HG/SS as well. I will probably write a number of the chapters before I start posting, so you probably won't see anything new for a while.
Reviews for For All Intents and Purposes
That was a slightly skewed chapter. I am really enjoying the story, though.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
Skewed? Ooh, I'd love to know what you mean by that.
Response from blue artemis (Reviewer)
I guess the way Hermione doesn't know what she is feeling, the whole loss of the vial, Severus really discovering that he enjoys her company, and it all going to hell. It is really enjoyable, but skewed.
Haha, great original character.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
So glad you think so - I do try. :)
What a great chapter!!! I absolutely love your younger Severus.Your plot is has me on the edge of my seat!Well done!
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
:D I'm thrilled that you like him. I was nervous about that. Thanks!
Hermione is now stuck in the past with Severus. Now, they can either find the Starglass (and Hermione goes back to the present) or they don't find it ,and Hermione must learn to live in this past version of the wizarding world. That would certainly be conductive to developping their friendship (and maybe a bit more?)
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
Mm, a romantic at heart. ;) But first, some adventure!
Oi, yeah... pretty brain dead to keep the Starglass on her person. Hermione is going to have some explaining to do soon. Severus isn't clueless.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
He does have patience - but not an infinite amount. Not the best decision to bring the Starglass with her, but she is used to carrying it around while in the past - she was usually calling on Snape for studying it. I think it is a fairly normal mindset for people to assume that bad things happen to others and not themselves, so it isn't unreasonable for her to overlook the fact that she might be part of the robbery - especially considering how distracted she is by her circumstances. And, I like irony. :)
I was so happy to see that this had been updated! You just keep drawing me in with your plot twists. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
This was actually updated much more quickly than I expected! Glad you like it!
Well, at least we now know that Hermione won't be leaving Severus' time for a while. If she still had the Starglass, she may have gone back to the future as soon as the picture was taken. I quite liked how jealous Severus was when Andrew hit on Hermione. It was quite rude of Andrew, but I am sure that he thought nothing of it, since she was with Severus.I wonder how Lucius will act toward Heidi, after he behaved poorly to her before. It would be funny if she met a young Draco.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
He was actually doing it to irritate Severus. You know, when there are two dogs and two bones, but one of the dogs takes the other's bone just because he can. A pecking order thing.
Hermione did promise to help Severus with his project - so she wouldn't have left right away. She seems to be the kind to keep her promises.
As for your last comment - I think you'll like the next chapter (it's been written for months).
Poor Severus! He is so confused. Serves the bugger right for trying to still the Starglass.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
I think he would be a very conflicted youth. And yes, he deserves some of what he gets - he can be a big jerk.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
I think he would be a very conflicted youth. And yes, he deserves some of what he gets - he can be a big jerk.
Loved her going back and loved the the time separate had left him with remorse and now I think she does have hope saving him and more...Great chapter
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
He'd better feel bad about chasing her down to steal the Starglass! But yes - that bit was important to his development.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
He'd better feel bad about chasing her down to steal the Starglass! But yes - that bit was important to his development.
another terrific chapter! i liked that sweet, batty, crazy cat lady giving severus a kitten. and i really like how you are writing him, with all of his conflicting feelings and everything. i am extremely curious what is ultimately going to happen with him and "heidi." can't wait for the next chapter!
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
A crazy old cat lady would think that the cure to one's ills is a cat. :) You don't know how much it pleases me to hear all of the positive feedback on my version of Severus. Of course, there are probably readers out there who think I'm full of it, but I haven't heard from them. >.<
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
A crazy old cat lady would think that the cure to one's ills is a cat. :) You don't know how much it pleases me to hear all of the positive feedback on my version of Severus. Of course, there are probably readers out there who think I'm full of it, but I haven't heard from them. >.<
Beautiful development of a wonderful story. I love it. Poor poor Severus.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
I can't wait to see where you take this, actually. Because Hermione doesn't know what she changed.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
Right! And she won't know until she goes back and it's too late. :)
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
Right! And she won't know until she goes back and it's too late. :)
I'm glad that Hermione went back in time to see Severus. It appears that the Starglass is a time traveling device, but I wonder if it also does other miracles. Severus wants to raise Lily from the dead, but so far in the future that has not occurred. Maybe they will change the future some more? Hopefully Severus will realize that he actually doesn't want Lily anymore, but instead Heidi.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
The Starglass is more than a time traveling device, but it is tricky to operate because it works off of what the user intends (not necessarily wants) - both consciously and subconsciously. One must be clear of purpose when one is using it or the results can be disasterous, which is why so many users ended up in a bad way.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
The Starglass is more than a time traveling device, but it is tricky to operate because it works off of what the user intends (not necessarily wants) - both consciously and subconsciously. One must be clear of purpose when one is using it or the results can be disasterous, which is why so many users ended up in a bad way.
I am enjoying this story so much! Mewlips was a great touch.
Wow! Such a creative story! I also love the witty touches of humour mingled in there!I truly can't wait for more!
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
Thanks! The thing with humor, though, is that when I'm reading it for the umpteenth time, I can't tell if I'm being funny or just a smart-arse.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
Thanks! The thing with humor, though, is that when I'm reading it for the umpteenth time, I can't tell if I'm being funny or just a smart-arse.
Oh good, she went back! I must compliment the way you’ve written Severus. He’s utterly believable. This was a great chapter and I can’t wait for the next!
What a mystery. I loved the explanation from Luna on what the creature was the she encountered when she went through the hole. I like the fact the home was cleaned up as a tribute - I always hate the way it was described in the past - like a place of no hope. Great chapter.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
Spot-on description of his house! I've always wanted to see that at least one of Luna's creatures existed. Just because you can't see a Wrackspurt doesn't mean they aren't there... and Luna is a tribute to my beta. She is her favorite character. :)
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
Spot-on description of his house! I've always wanted to see that at least one of Luna's creatures existed. Just because you can't see a Wrackspurt doesn't mean they aren't there... and Luna is a tribute to my beta. She is her favorite character. :)
You got to really understand what Remus goes through as a werewolf... it was heartbreaking. The fight with Severus and Hermione - I always wondered what it would be like if they crossed wands. Him blowing that back door off the hinges - well it just shows you what a powerful wizard that he is. It also show the darkness within him as to why he became a deatheater to begin with. I wonder where she went when she fell again - I love a good cliffie.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
Yeah, Lupin must have had a miserable two decades after Lily and James died. He lost his entire friend base in one fell swoop.
I've never gone for a super-Hermione. She is smart, resourceful, hard-working, and somewhat battle-savvy after the fight with the Dark Lord, but I think Snape would have the advantage in a fight between them, even as a young man. He is quite powerful, sly, and he must have picked up some tricks during his time with the Dark Lord.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
Yeah, Lupin must have had a miserable two decades after Lily and James died. He lost his entire friend base in one fell swoop.
I've never gone for a super-Hermione. She is smart, resourceful, hard-working, and somewhat battle-savvy after the fight with the Dark Lord, but I think Snape would have the advantage in a fight between them, even as a young man. He is quite powerful, sly, and he must have picked up some tricks during his time with the Dark Lord.
I love the interaction between Severus and Madam Beetlebump - it reminds you that he was a young man even though he was a young professor (the early years).Now I am stumped - what does that vial do and what does Severus think it does...cannot wait to see where this goes or how it finally ends. I hated seeing Severus die in the book. Another good chapter.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
Thanks! I imagine that he was a surly, awkward young man, but must have had manners at some point.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
Thanks! I imagine that he was a surly, awkward young man, but must have had manners at some point.
Madam Beetlebump -what a great original character. She so fits into that world and is a wonderful creation. I know Hermione likes cats but even I think she would not like that many. Severus is still very slytherin - he wants that vial and I daresay what he will or will not do to get it. Loved the latest.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
I like her, too - and her cats. I'm biased, though - they are based on my own cat (toe-nibbling and all), who is the best cat in the world. ;)
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
I like her, too - and her cats. I'm biased, though - they are based on my own cat (toe-nibbling and all), who is the best cat in the world. ;)
Lucius is still as evil as ever - He was quick to slip her a potion. Severus shows us who he really can be by not allowing anything to happen to Hermione while she is out. The object that they are looking at a good mystery.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
Severus is good deep down, despite Lucius' influence. Lucius meant well, in hiw own creepy, abusive way. He just doesn't take into condiseration that what he thinks is good, isn't what is necessarily good for all involved.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
Severus is good deep down, despite Lucius' influence. Lucius meant well, in hiw own creepy, abusive way. He just doesn't take into condiseration that what he thinks is good, isn't what is necessarily good for all involved.
Interesting first chapter - transporting Hermione back in time when Severus was still alive. The whole thing with the backyard is bizarre - makes you wonder what it really is or if Severus knows it. It was great that Hermione was showing such respect to Severus by cleaning up his home. A tribute to the man - liked the first chapter.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
Well, I don't know how often it has been done post DH, but I hope the rest of the fic is original. :D When I was writing the backyard, I imagined a lonely Severus exploring the field and climbing into the larger structures of rusted metal and throwing rocks and things down the well. I think I would have enjoyed exploring it as a kid, too.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
Well, I don't know how often it has been done post DH, but I hope the rest of the fic is original. :D When I was writing the backyard, I imagined a lonely Severus exploring the field and climbing into the larger structures of rusted metal and throwing rocks and things down the well. I think I would have enjoyed exploring it as a kid, too.
It is quite funny that her boss gives her money just so he doesn't have to listen to her proposals. There is nothing like finding a way to use your strengths to your advantage.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
I've bullied approvals and whatnot out of my bosses is a similar manner ;)
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
I've bullied approvals and whatnot out of my bosses is a similar manner ;)
Oh, yay! It is obvious she has to go back. Afte rall, she was caught in the paper.
I like how you are showing the subtle differences between her before and after. It will be interesting to see all the changes she brings.
Response from rhiannonofthemoon (Author of For All Intents and Purposes)
Yes! I'm glad that people caught that. Time lines for time-travel fics can get convoluted - and since I have her going back and forth, it might get confusing.