Unbound
Chapter 8 of 8
AnijadeA/N: Thank you so much to my beta, Cocoacristy. Thank the rest of you and you know who you are for supporting me and pushing for this chapter.
Chapter 8 Unbound
The children falling out of the Floo was unexpected, to say the least. The fact that they recognized Draco and Severus as their fathers was reassuring yet surprising. The little girl that Severus could plainly see was his daughter recomposed herself faster than Draco's son, who still sniffled a little before moving closer to his friend. Severus and Draco exchanged a look, but stayed calm. The children's words had chilled them, and they knew that there was no time to waste.
Severus moved first, kneeling down in front of his daughter. No, her name is Sage... call her Sage. "Okay, Sage, I know you are frightened, but I need to know exactly what is going on. What men are hurting your mothers?" At the mention of their mothers, both children let out fresh sobs, and Sage flung herself into her father's arms. Severus gave Draco a bewildered look as he wasn't sure what to do with the child, but he didn't want to upset her further.
"Umm, yes. Now, Sage, I need you to calm down so that we can help both your mothers; we don't have much time." The little girl sniffled again, but the sobs had died out. Thank Circe she is calming down. I am never sure what to do with crying women. Sage took a staggered breath, but grew calmer. Severus wondered if she was articulate enough to explain what had driven them to come all this way. He shuddered at the idea that Albus might have closed the international Floo and then the pair would have been good and lost.
Finally the little girl was ready to talk. "It happened maybe thirty minutes ago. Someone knocked at the door. Aunt Ginny went to open it, and the first thing she said was, 'Oh, no.' Then she said, 'Breadfruit...'" Letting out a deep breath, Sage continued. "Breadfruit is the code word for us to hide, so me and Dante ran and hid in the room that we are supposed to go to." The memory made her eyes well up, and Severus was afraid she would start sobbing again. Kneeling at her side, he looked directly into dark eyes that were so much like his own.
"Sage, I need you to stay calm, that is the only way we can help your mummy and Aunt Ginny. Okay?" She nodded and continued with her story. "Mummy used some hexes and then she screamed. Mummy never screams like that, so I knows that the mens hurt her. I grabbed Dante's hand and ran out, wanting to help Mummy. When Mummy saw us, she was lying on the floor crying, and she looked hurt. I wanted to go to her, but she shook her head and mouthed 'office.' I knew that she meant for us to go to the office, so we went through the Floo. I don't think the mens saw us; they were hurting Aunt Ginny though."
Draco stiffened at the idea of Ginny being tortured. He could only guess from Sage's description that the attackers had used Crucio on the two women. At this point, Dante was finally calm enough to pipe up. "That's when we decided to come here. I knew that my daddy would help my mummy." He looked over at Draco adoringly.
Severus walked to the Floo connection in his room, taking some powder and throwing it in calling for Dumbledore. "Albus? We need to come through. We have two guests and a problem." Nodding at the children, they went through the connection and into Dumbledore's office. Albus was sitting behind his desk, and his only response to seeing the young children was to raise an eyebrow at Severus and lift the lid of his candy bowl. "Lemon Drop, anyone?" Only the children seemed happy with the offer and carefully took one each before taking a seat in one of the chairs together. Albus looked at the two men expectantly, waiting for an explanation, and Severus was quick to give him one.
"Their mothers have been attacked, and they came here hoping that Draco and I would save them." Albus got an understanding look on his face before he turned to the youngsters.
"You two made the right decision coming here. Now I want to you think very carefully. Do you know the name of the people who attacked your mothers?"
Both children stilled and seemed to be in deep thought as their minds went over the past forty-two minutes. Then Dante looked over at his father. "I think Mummy called one of them Nott." Sage's eyes grew wide, and she nodded furiously. "They were wearing all black robed clothes, and I couldn't see their faces."
The name brought back bad memories for both men. They had suspected the Death Eater had survived the final battle, but they hadn't had a clue as to where he was hiding. Now it was becoming clear that he had gone looking for revenge and apparently found it.
Draco ran his hands over his face, hating the idea that Nott had found and was harming Ginny and Hermione. "How could he have possibly found them? It took us this long to find them, and that was an accident...unless...." Draco's face went ashen as he considered that they might have led Nott and his companion to the women. "They must have been watching us. Damn it, Severus, we led them right to them."
A hush came over the office as everyone digested this new information. There had never been any indication that either Severus or Draco had been monitored, and granted, until they came across the research done by Sarah Kendall, a.k.a. Hermione Granger, they almost never left the castle other than the occasional trip to Hogsmeade or Grimmauld Place. That meant one of two things: Either there was a spy in their midst, or Nott had known all along that the women had not died and thought that the Order knew as well.
"So then, Albus, we're heading back to the cottage, where hopefully these children's mothers are, and then we'll be back." The words sounded light hearted for the children's sake, but Severus wondered if it would not be better to be upfront and let them know there was a good chance that their mothers were dead.
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Severus and Draco took the same path that their children had taken, first going back to the Apothecary and from there, to the cottage. When they came through, they had their wands drawn, ready for an attack. The smoke was the first thing that hit them as they came out of the Floo. Draco stumbled over an upturned chair. The cottage was on fire, and from what little Severus could see through the smoke, he could tell that the girls had put up a fight. The idea that they wouldn't go down without a fight made him feel a little bit better, but still they couldn't possibly know all of the dark spells that the Death Eater knew. Both men cast a Bubblehead Charm on themselves to make breathing easier as they searched for Ginny and Hermione.
"Do you see anything, Draco?" Severus called through the smoke. The two men had moved in opposite directions, hoping to cover more area faster. The response was slow in coming, and that made Severus wary. "Yes, yes, I think I have found a body." Draco's voice cracked when he spoke, and Severus couldn't tell if it was emotion or the smoke. Following Draco's voice, Severus made his way to Draco's side where he saw a burned hand coming out from under an overturned bookshelf.
"There is no pulse... should we?" Draco didn't even know how to form the question, but Severus understood, bending down to move the shelving. It took some effort on both their parts to lift if off the body, but when it was moved they both released a relieved breath. The body didn't belong to either Ginny or Hermione. On the downside, it wasn't Nott either. "Nott must have had an accomplice who wasn't up to par."
It was obvious that the skirmish here hadn't gone the way Nott had planned, and both Draco and Severus assumed that he had fled once he had lost his advantage. Still they didn't spend much time thinking about this as they continued looking for the girls.
"I've found one, Severus!" came Draco's almost jubilant cry from the remains of the sitting room. Severus had gone upstairs and was going through the less mangled bedrooms. It was there that he found a very injured Ginny Weasley. Her eyes fluttered weakly at him, and she tried to speak.
"Not now, Miss Weasley, we need to get you out of here. Don't worry, your son is safe." Severus cast a stasis spell on her for fear that moving her would be fatal. Then with a Moblius Corpus, he led her prone form downstairs where Draco was holding an unconscious Hermione Granger.
Draco's eyes held a question that he couldn't bear to ask, but Severus answered anyway. "She's alive, but barely. We don't have time to go back to Hogwarts, but Brisbane has the Oodgeroo Noonuccal Hospital. We'd better get them there now." With mixed feelings, both men headed to the Floo with their precious cargo, hoping that it wasn't too late.
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31 Reviews | 2.77/10 Average
I'm not usually one to read a work in progress, but I"m glad I picked up on yours. I like the plot line you've got going - keep it up! I can't wait to read more!
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
Thanks I have more coming :)
how is chapter nine coming along
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
slowly but I haven't gven up on it
if you don't have high speed internet only dial up then your not going to like this aff is acting up again that place they use as host moved them and parts of the site like the harry potter. i and a lot of others where not able to get into. the head mod said it might take a week for your own isp to get it cleared up. how is your next chapter coming long
hope severus and draco are not too hard on hermione and ginny. if they wanted they could have gotten them a long time ago before or a little after the kids where born. can't wait to read the next chapter.
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
I don't think they will be too hard on them, at this point they are more concerned than anything else
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
you have one of the few stories where harry and ron are a couple in it.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
you have one of the few stories where harry and ron are a couple in it.
woo-hoo!!! an update!!
WOW! the kids knew about their fathers but the men knew nothing...how is that going to go over once the ladies regain their health? I think there are gonna be some ticked off men, once they get over their initial, "I'm gonna kill you" attitude. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update again soon, please!!
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
I am trying but yes I suspect things are going to be a little loud once the girls are better. in their defense they were sent away. at least they didn't say their fathers were dead
Response from queenp (Reviewer)
I know that the girls were sent away w/o the men knowing of their "situations." I'm just waiting to see the explosion...it'll be like a car wreck..nice and gory but you can't help but watch...it'll be an emotional time for all involved, which is what I love reading about. I can't wait...now, quit watching the reviews and write..
how many more chapters are there to this story. how is chapter 8 coming along.
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
I think that there might be around 12 and chapter 8 is well on it's way hope to have it at the beta's soon/ Thans for reviewing
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
thats good. 12 chapters looking forward to them.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
we can only hope aff is fully and completty fix sometime this summer. knock on wood
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
Yeah I am getting wary of that site really. But chapter 8 is coming along nicely I think :) Coming soon
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
if you ever need an extra personm to look over your story. i can do just let me know.
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
Thanks I will keep that in mind :)
Very pleased to see an update :) Hope you add more soon. Thank you for writing
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
Doing my best to have more for you soon
oooo...this is getting interesting...Please don't make us wait as long for the next chapter...I want to know which men and why...update again soon!!
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
I will do my best you really motivated me to get the chapter out :)
Response from queenp (Reviewer)
I noticed that you mentioned being temporarily abandoned by your muse...what does your muse prefer--chocolate, alcohol, etc.? I've been told I make a mean 'rita on the rocks...and I've got lots of chocolate around here...Incentives for the muse to stay around maybe? :D
What an incredible story! Great opening gambit and I like the multi-time frame ideas. All it needs now is to be updated and for the story to be complete! LOL
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
working on it really I am more to come I promise
omg evil cliffie....hope next upodate is soon...great chapter...keep up the good work...
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
Thanks so much and I hope to have more up soon :)
i love this story update soon please
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
More to come I promise
Very nice... um, cliffhanger! You know what this means, don't you? This means that you need to update sooner than later. ;) I was wondering what had happened to this story. Hope you're feeling okay.
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
Well mostly my muse ran away when it came to this story and I have been fighting exhaustion but I think I have things up and running again so more to come
Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)
Well, if anyone can understand, I can. Hang in there, and I am glad your muse is back.
Great job! Glad to see you writing it again!
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
Thank you sooooo much for all your help with this *huggles*
First of all -- YEAH -- I am so glad this story is back and that I found it! I originally read it on AFF and anytime I spent time at that site I made sure to check on the status of Black Orchid. I just fell in love with it right away. And now with all the difficulties at AFF to find it here well that is just a major treat! As for this chapter it was very nice getting reaquainted with everything that is going on and my only complaint is that it is too short. But I will take what I can get and be very happy about it. I can't wait for what's coming. Hope to see it soon. Thanks, JoAnne
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
Oh wow a fan I am so honoured. I am working on the next chapter. I am trying to make them longer we'll see about next chapter
Going to Hogwarts first!!! The girls will feel rejected! LOL
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
They are men not rocket scientist :-p
Well...not much longer now. But I wonder why they have to knock Draco out? Why not just talk to him now? (LOL I am Miss Impatient!)
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
I think mostly they aren't ready to have that conversation and I don't think Draco would just let them go about their business without a couple of good answers
It's so sad! I want them to all be together! LOL But, a lot of time HAS passed I know and they need to see what is what.
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
After 8years you have to wonder how much has changed and if things can be healed. I am sure there are a lot of assuptions that has to be aired out
Good chapter! Though sad that she just got the courage to tell him right before she left...
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
Timing is everything and often timing doesn't work out I fear
OH! Great and interesting start so far!
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
Oh thanks you so much:) I appriciate it I hope you like the rest
Well, you have to update! I have to see what happens when Draco and Severus confront Hermione and GInny!
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
I am working on it really,really.
Are Sage and Dante Ginny's children? That would add even more drams to the mix. I love this story so far, and please update with the next chapter soon.
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
New chapter is in the que so it won't be long now
more...please...now....I can't wait to see what you do with this story...
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
will do my best lots of fireworks coming thanks for reviewing glad you are liking it
Update soon! I love the ending in that chapter. Runs in the family maybe? Who are the kids? Whose kids are they? hum... does the plot thicken? Update!
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
Chapter 7 is almost done glad you like it
Anijade,
I realize it has been a while since you have updated this story. I would love to see you update it again. I will admit that I had forgotten about it in the chaos that has been real life for the last couple of years, however, upon searching for something new to read, I came across it again. your characters are interesting and make me wish I could fix things for them. The descriptions are well written. The plot feels comfortable, not strained as some stories feel.
I do hope you have not abandoned this lovely story and that RL has created a level of insanity that prevents writing or has infected you with a bout of writer's block that is nearing an end.
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
QueenP,Thank you for your kind words. I have some ideas for the next chaper but things have gotten crazy and I lost my beta. As much as I hate it until I find someone else it will be slow going but not abandoned as this is really my first multichaptered fanfic. I can tell you the next chapter is the chaos of the hospital and probably some confessionsAnijade
Response from queenp (Reviewer)
That is good to know. I do enjoy this story. I'll look forward to reading the next chapter when it is finished. *off to mark as favorite story to get update*
If I were not at a point where I'm only on the computer for pleasure/personal stuff about once a week, I'd volunteer to help you out, but RL has kicked me in the butt since I joined the "real world" again. What I wouldn't give to go back to the carefree days of being a college student! *snerk*
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
Oh I understand totally. I am in school and working full time. I am lucky I have time to sleep much less write but I had the bright idea of signing up for the exchange as well so the muse is still up and running lol.