Unmarked
Chapter 7 of 8
AnijadeThe war is over and the cure for the Cruciatus Curse is on it's way but those involved have been thought long dead, Why did they leave and what are they hiding M/F,M/M
Thanks to my Betas CoacoCristy and Somigliana you are faboo
ReviewedChapter Seven: Unmarked
Draco and Severus arrived through the Floo in Dumbledore's office with a large billow of smoke. In the office, Ron, Harry, and Albus were all waiting, wondering if the trip had been productive. Almost immediately, both men were bombarded with a slew of questions regarding the women and the potion. Raising his hand, Severus called for silence and the questions died down.
"Alright, you want to know what happened, and we will do our best to tell you, but I will tell you now, a couple of things are private and a little foggy."
While he was talking, Draco had taken a seat and was apparently just sitting there in shock. Looking at him in concern, Albus suggested that perhaps it would be better for Severus to start telling them what had happened. Severus covered the pertinent details, including the fact that Ms Granger and Ms Weasley were very much alive and doing well Down Under. He got up to the point where he had had an attack, and that was where Draco picked up the story.
"Once Severus collapsed, I put him in Granger's office to rest out the worst of it..." He frowned before continuing. "But that is where things start to get fuzzy for me too. I am pretty certain that I was drugged by them...." Draco glared and shook his head. "When I woke up, Severus was healed, and I was fully rested." If anyone noticed that Draco had gone pale remembering what had happened next, nothing was said; however, Severus headed back to the Floo and indicated that Draco should follow.
"If you would excuse us, Albus, I would like to go over Dr. Kendall's notes in great detail so that I can start the mass production of the cure." Calling out, "My quarters," Severus vanished into green smoke, failing to listen to Ron and Harry's calls of wanting more information about their friend and sister. Seeing the Potion master had gone, they turned their questions to Draco, who paled even further.
"Potter, Weasley! I can't tell you anything more. I only got a glimpse at them as they were leaving. No conversation took place. I can't answer your questions yet. But don't worry; we will all get to the bottom of this." Granted, you two are going to kill us when you find out why they have been gone so long. "Now if you don't mind, I am going to help Severus with the notes. Circe knows you two were never that great at Potions. Without Granger's help, that is." A smirk came to his lips as Draco crossed the room and left via Floo to join Severus.
Once back in the dungeons, Draco flopped into the chair opposite the one that Severus was currently occupying, holding his head in either shock or dismay. Possibly both. "So, then, Severus, you've just been cured from the side effects of the Cruciatus Curse and found out you are the father of a seven-year old. How are you going to celebrate?" There was a tinge of sarcasm and amusement in his voice, but something else lingered there too.
Without looking up, Severus snapped back, "I wouldn't joke if I were you. If I am not mistaken, there is a seven-year old Malfoy running around too." It was a sobering thought for both of them really. Their spy status had kept the idea of having a family out of their immediate thoughts for as long as either could remember, since neither of them had really expected to outlive the Dark Lord.
Swallowing hard, Draco pulled out the packet that contained the notes, letters, and pictures. Handing a couple to Severus, he just stared at them, trying to deny what they clearly showed. "We did this, Sev. Can you believe it? They are a part of us, something untainted, unmarked from the evil that surrounded us." The awe in Draco's voice was unmistakable. Severus had to agree it was unbelievable; a miracle really. Now how were they going to handle this new situation? With cunning of course! A smirk came to Severus's lips as he planned their next stage of attack
Elsewhere in the castle, Ron and Harry paced inside the chambers they now shared. "What are we going to do, Harry? How do we explain that we don't love them like that anymore, and that we are now together?"
Sighing, Harry ran his fingers through his already rumpled hair. Since he and Ron had gotten together, it had never occurred to either of them that their presumed dead girlfriends might not actually be dead, or that they would have to explain that they were gay. "Not really sure, Ron. Maybe they will be so caught up in coming home that they will have forgotten about us having been together. Maybe they found other blokes to be with; it has been a long time."
Ron shook his shaggy red hair dubiously. "You really think that they would have gotten over us, mate? They were all alone in Australia for eight years. What else could they have been doing other than school work?" He shuddered at the thought of studying but knew that it suited both Hermione and Ginny.
"You might be right, love. They might still be pining after us, hoping that there is some way to pick up things where they left off before they left. We'll just have to break it to them gently that there is no chance for them to be with us, and that we are all better off as friends."
Harry wished he sounded more secure in his decision, but he also suspected that Hermione and Ginny's tempers had probably not improved in the past eight years. Flopping onto their bed, he stared up at the ceiling. "It's weird, huh? That they might be coming back? Thing is, Ron... I don't think they want to come back. Think about it. The war has been over for a while, so it was perfectly safe for them to come back but they didn't. They might not want to be with us any more either."
Ron was silent as he thought. It had never occurred to him that Hermione might not want to come back to him. True, she had been very distant with him before she'd left, but the war was going on, so he had ruled it off as that. Honestly, he really hadn't paid much attention to her in the months before she had been sent away. Once she had been gone, Hermione had become a distant memory until the war was over.
During the war, Harry and Ron had discovered that their lifelong friendship had grown into to an actual romantic love, something that had left them both very flustered. Upon hearing about the loss of Ginny and Hermione, their grief had been tinged with reluctant relief, knowing that they would not have to explain their betrayal. Now their reprieve would most likely come to an end.
"Ya think they forgot about being in love with us, Harry?" Ron wasn't sure if he should be hurt or relieved at that thought either. "It's very possible that they moved on with their lives, and I wouldn't have blamed them. Ron, I don't think we should worry about it until they come back, if they do come back...."
Both were sober in the realization that their friend and sister might not ever come back. For the first time, it dawned on them that they would not be in the center of the girls' circle of friends anymore.
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Back in the dungeon, Severus had recovered from his shock first and was now in the livid stage of acceptance. "HOW DARE THEY!"
Draco winced at the force behind the yell. He could understand why Severus was so upset. He wasn't exactly thrilled himself, but yelling really wouldn't get them anywhere. "What part are you most upset about? That they got pregnant in the first place or that they didn't come home after the war?" Draco was rather surprised how well he was taking all of this really. True, he was going to make Ginny pay for making him mourn, but he could understand her reasoning, and he still loved her.
In the case of Severus and Hermione, Draco didn't know if love had been involved at all or if it had just been a bit of carelessness in the heat of the moment. Severus's glare would have been enough to cause someone to turn to stone if Draco hadn't already been used to it. His mouth opened and closed a couple of times before he turned away in a huff. "Severus, the issue isn't what to do about the past. We need to know what to do about the present."
Taking a deep breath, Severus turned around and crossed his arms, a deep frown imbedded in his forehead. "For once, you are correct, Draco. We now require a plan. There is no way that I am going to allow my daughter to remain without my influence in her life, no matter what her mother wants." There was a twinge inside his chest as Severus had to admit to himself that he was a little bit pleased that he had a child and knew that Hermione hadn't kept her away from him to be cruel. Still, the situation couldn't remain as is, the little girl was his last remaining relative and he wanted a relationship with her.
Draco coughed at Severus' mention of Hermione. "Severus, you don't think that Hermione would deny you spending time with your daughter, do you? We both know that them remaining in hiding, especially in their conditions, was the best thing that they could have done." However, even Draco couldn't deny how much it had hurt to be deprived of so many firsts in his own son's life. Still if there was a chance to get his family back together and make Ginny his wife, he was going to do it--come hell or high water.
"I think that this situation should be handled delicately," Draco started, "so that the girls aren't spooked and feel the need to vanish again. I suspect that they have gotten comfortable in their new lives and must be feeling very off center right now. Not that I am condoning what they did. Yes, they should have contacted us as soon as the war ended, and we could have been dealing with this back then, but we can't change that."
Draco stood and walked to Severus' side. "I think our best plan of attack is to go back and talk to them face to face. They have nothing left to hide now that all the cards are out on the table." He had been about to head over to pour himself a drink, when he heard the Floo rush open. Turning, he was surprised to see two young children come spilling, out, obviously terrified and crying. The dark haired little girl righted herself first and her eyes fell on Severus. "Father, you have to come right away! The men... the men are hurting mummy and Aunt Ginny!"
A/N:Thanks so much to CocaChristy for all her help with this chaper it would not exist without her.. Thanks to all the reviewers for all your support
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31 Reviews | 2.77/10 Average
I'm not usually one to read a work in progress, but I"m glad I picked up on yours. I like the plot line you've got going - keep it up! I can't wait to read more!
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
Thanks I have more coming :)
how is chapter nine coming along
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
slowly but I haven't gven up on it
if you don't have high speed internet only dial up then your not going to like this aff is acting up again that place they use as host moved them and parts of the site like the harry potter. i and a lot of others where not able to get into. the head mod said it might take a week for your own isp to get it cleared up. how is your next chapter coming long
hope severus and draco are not too hard on hermione and ginny. if they wanted they could have gotten them a long time ago before or a little after the kids where born. can't wait to read the next chapter.
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
I don't think they will be too hard on them, at this point they are more concerned than anything else
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
you have one of the few stories where harry and ron are a couple in it.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
you have one of the few stories where harry and ron are a couple in it.
woo-hoo!!! an update!!
WOW! the kids knew about their fathers but the men knew nothing...how is that going to go over once the ladies regain their health? I think there are gonna be some ticked off men, once they get over their initial, "I'm gonna kill you" attitude. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update again soon, please!!
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
I am trying but yes I suspect things are going to be a little loud once the girls are better. in their defense they were sent away. at least they didn't say their fathers were dead
Response from queenp (Reviewer)
I know that the girls were sent away w/o the men knowing of their "situations." I'm just waiting to see the explosion...it'll be like a car wreck..nice and gory but you can't help but watch...it'll be an emotional time for all involved, which is what I love reading about. I can't wait...now, quit watching the reviews and write..
how many more chapters are there to this story. how is chapter 8 coming along.
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
I think that there might be around 12 and chapter 8 is well on it's way hope to have it at the beta's soon/ Thans for reviewing
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
thats good. 12 chapters looking forward to them.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
we can only hope aff is fully and completty fix sometime this summer. knock on wood
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
Yeah I am getting wary of that site really. But chapter 8 is coming along nicely I think :) Coming soon
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
if you ever need an extra personm to look over your story. i can do just let me know.
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
Thanks I will keep that in mind :)
Very pleased to see an update :) Hope you add more soon. Thank you for writing
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
Doing my best to have more for you soon
oooo...this is getting interesting...Please don't make us wait as long for the next chapter...I want to know which men and why...update again soon!!
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
I will do my best you really motivated me to get the chapter out :)
Response from queenp (Reviewer)
I noticed that you mentioned being temporarily abandoned by your muse...what does your muse prefer--chocolate, alcohol, etc.? I've been told I make a mean 'rita on the rocks...and I've got lots of chocolate around here...Incentives for the muse to stay around maybe? :D
What an incredible story! Great opening gambit and I like the multi-time frame ideas. All it needs now is to be updated and for the story to be complete! LOL
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
working on it really I am more to come I promise
omg evil cliffie....hope next upodate is soon...great chapter...keep up the good work...
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
Thanks so much and I hope to have more up soon :)
i love this story update soon please
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
More to come I promise
Very nice... um, cliffhanger! You know what this means, don't you? This means that you need to update sooner than later. ;) I was wondering what had happened to this story. Hope you're feeling okay.
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
Well mostly my muse ran away when it came to this story and I have been fighting exhaustion but I think I have things up and running again so more to come
Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)
Well, if anyone can understand, I can. Hang in there, and I am glad your muse is back.
Great job! Glad to see you writing it again!
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
Thank you sooooo much for all your help with this *huggles*
First of all -- YEAH -- I am so glad this story is back and that I found it! I originally read it on AFF and anytime I spent time at that site I made sure to check on the status of Black Orchid. I just fell in love with it right away. And now with all the difficulties at AFF to find it here well that is just a major treat! As for this chapter it was very nice getting reaquainted with everything that is going on and my only complaint is that it is too short. But I will take what I can get and be very happy about it. I can't wait for what's coming. Hope to see it soon. Thanks, JoAnne
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
Oh wow a fan I am so honoured. I am working on the next chapter. I am trying to make them longer we'll see about next chapter
Going to Hogwarts first!!! The girls will feel rejected! LOL
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
They are men not rocket scientist :-p
Well...not much longer now. But I wonder why they have to knock Draco out? Why not just talk to him now? (LOL I am Miss Impatient!)
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
I think mostly they aren't ready to have that conversation and I don't think Draco would just let them go about their business without a couple of good answers
It's so sad! I want them to all be together! LOL But, a lot of time HAS passed I know and they need to see what is what.
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
After 8years you have to wonder how much has changed and if things can be healed. I am sure there are a lot of assuptions that has to be aired out
Good chapter! Though sad that she just got the courage to tell him right before she left...
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
Timing is everything and often timing doesn't work out I fear
OH! Great and interesting start so far!
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
Oh thanks you so much:) I appriciate it I hope you like the rest
Well, you have to update! I have to see what happens when Draco and Severus confront Hermione and GInny!
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
I am working on it really,really.
Are Sage and Dante Ginny's children? That would add even more drams to the mix. I love this story so far, and please update with the next chapter soon.
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
New chapter is in the que so it won't be long now
more...please...now....I can't wait to see what you do with this story...
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
will do my best lots of fireworks coming thanks for reviewing glad you are liking it
Update soon! I love the ending in that chapter. Runs in the family maybe? Who are the kids? Whose kids are they? hum... does the plot thicken? Update!
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
Chapter 7 is almost done glad you like it
Anijade,
I realize it has been a while since you have updated this story. I would love to see you update it again. I will admit that I had forgotten about it in the chaos that has been real life for the last couple of years, however, upon searching for something new to read, I came across it again. your characters are interesting and make me wish I could fix things for them. The descriptions are well written. The plot feels comfortable, not strained as some stories feel.
I do hope you have not abandoned this lovely story and that RL has created a level of insanity that prevents writing or has infected you with a bout of writer's block that is nearing an end.
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
QueenP,Thank you for your kind words. I have some ideas for the next chaper but things have gotten crazy and I lost my beta. As much as I hate it until I find someone else it will be slow going but not abandoned as this is really my first multichaptered fanfic. I can tell you the next chapter is the chaos of the hospital and probably some confessionsAnijade
Response from queenp (Reviewer)
That is good to know. I do enjoy this story. I'll look forward to reading the next chapter when it is finished. *off to mark as favorite story to get update*
If I were not at a point where I'm only on the computer for pleasure/personal stuff about once a week, I'd volunteer to help you out, but RL has kicked me in the butt since I joined the "real world" again. What I wouldn't give to go back to the carefree days of being a college student! *snerk*
Response from Anijade (Author of Black Orchid)
Oh I understand totally. I am in school and working full time. I am lucky I have time to sleep much less write but I had the bright idea of signing up for the exchange as well so the muse is still up and running lol.