It's Doom Alone That Counts...
Chapter 9 of 10
livvy6The Battle in the Department of Mysterious takes place. Mary stalks the men who raped her and gets a bit of revenge. That is, until she makes a mistake that gets her face to face with Voldemort.
ReviewedA/N: It is with a very heavy heart that I present this last chapter. There is an epilogue, so please remember this is not the end. Thanks to my betas, Augurey27 and ImOnMedication (who, by the way, told me she cried when she read the ending). Also, if you want to know what Mary Anders looks like to me, go to the first chapter and you'll see a picture. Thank you and please review!
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After Severus had calmed down, he went to do his rounds about the castle. I took the time to dress in a clean, black dress and pinned my hair back. I didn't want any impediments. I got my traveling cloak ready and placed my wand inside. I looked into the mirror, studying my scars before buttoning the top buttons that would hide the scar on my neck.
I sat on the sofa, waiting for Severus to return. I decided to have a glass of firewhisky to calm my nerves. I was shaking with anticipation.
He blew in furious and raging. "Damn and blast! That woman is the most stupid, inept...." He stopped talking and glared at me.
What in the hell are you doing?" he yelled at me.
He finally saw I was drinking. "Nerves." I shrugged.
He took the glass from me and finished it in one gulp. "Have you nothing better to do to occupy your time?"
"Nope," I answered cheekily. I knew he hated cheek.
He glared at me. "I have things to do. I need you to stay in the bedroom until I call for you." He turned from me and began his task. He trusted me so implicitly, he never noticed I cast a Disillusionment Charm upon myself and stayed right in the room.
He knelt by the fireplace and muttered a spell I couldn't make out. I saw a head of a person I did not know come in through the flame.
"Shacklebolt, the bloody woman has Potter, Miss Granger, the two young Weasleys, Longbottom and Miss Lovegood holed up in her office. She tried to force me to give her more Veritaserum for questioning, but I was able to refuse her. But, we have a bigger problem. Potter warned me that the Dark Lord inside the Department of Mysteries is holding Black captive. You need to get the Order rounded up and see if it is true, or if it is all a ruse."
"Why would you think it would be a ruse...after what happened with Arthur? The boy has been right before," Shacklebolt replied.
"Merlin's Beard, man!" Serverus spat angrily. "I know the workings of Voldemort's mind better than any of you, and I tell you he is not above infiltrating a weak mind in order to produce a desired effect. Potter has proven himself inept at the discipline of Occulemency. Just get there before he goes off half-cocked and does something stupid!"
With that, Severus got up and readied himself to leave.
Still invisible, I grabbed my cloak and recast the spell. I kept my distance from him and followed him out. He was angrier than I had ever seen him. His calm demeanor made it scarier. I would rather he lost it and started hexing things, at least to release the tension. This was a Severus I was unfamiliar with...a determination seemed to drive him.
He went back to Umbridge's office and found her and Potter gone, as well as Hermione, Luna, Ron and Ginny. Draco and the Inquisitorial Squad were disheveled on the floor. Severus wrenched Draco from the floor. Dear God! He was a mess. Ginny Weasley with her Bat-Bogey Hex, no doubt!
"Finite Incantatem!" he snapped. The boy's face became normal again.
"Where is Potter?" he demanded.
"Took Granger and Umbridge out to find something." The boy was dazed.
Severus bolted from the room and went running through the corridors. He past Filch and grabbed him. "Have you seen Umbridge?" he demanded.
Filch tried to free himself from Severus' grasp. "Damn you man, answer me!" he threatened.
Filch pointed a yellow finger towards the outside. "She went towards the forest with Potter and Granger," he said in a fearful voice.
Severus released the man and ran out of the castle. I continued to stalk him, but maintained a considerable distance. Thank God he was so focused on his task. Otherwise, he might have been able to sense my presence.
He came to the forest, and I saw him speak with a group of centaurs. He was very careful to speak in cautious and respectful tones. I couldn't hear what they said, but it was a long exchange. After a while, he bolted back towards my direction.
Oh shite! I thought as I ran out of his direction. He was headed back to the castle. I ran with all the speed I could muster. I had to get back to the room before he did, otherwise there would be the devil to pay. I needn't have bothered. He went to the Headmaster's office to use the fireplace. I cautiously followed and heard behind the door his conversation with Dumbledore.
"Albus, the boy has gone off to the Department of Mysteries. He's falling for the trap we feared most, I'm positive! What do you want me to do?"
"You can do nothing, Severus. I need you to stay at Hogwarts. There is no one to protect the students if everything comes to the worst. Promise me, Severus, you will stay, no matter what. Let me and the Aurors handle this."
"Please, Albus," he begged. "For Lily."
"I'll protect him, Severus."
I drew my head back from the door. Lily? Who is that? I thought jealously. I heard his footsteps towards the door. I flew down the stairs and ran towards the castle doors. I found the first broom I could find and headed for the Ministry of Magic.
***
The atrium was echoing from far away noises of screaming and crashing. I cast off my Disillusionment Charm and readied my wand. I walked among the debris obviously caused by Potter's recent clash with the Death Eaters.
I cautiously remained in the shadows, waiting to see any sign of my prey. I stalked the rooms, getting closer to voices. I heard the high cackling of a woman and saw the long, blond hair of Lucius Malfoy. I hissed at the sight of him. He was trying to get Potter to give him something.
Then, they all broke apart; hexes were thrown in all directions. I heard, "Crabbe to go with Rabastan." There's one, I thought as I readied my wand. "MacNair go with Avery." There's two, I seethed. There was no sign of Goyle. Ah, well, three out of four won't be bad for a night's work! I determined.
I knew to keep my distance from the woman. She was Bellatrix Lestrange. She was a right crazy bitch, and I did not want to distract myself from my purpose by having to deal with her. I went for MacNair and Avery. As they stalked and battled against my friends, I, from the shadows, deflected hexes and tried to spare them from being injured too badly without drawing attention to myself. Finally, the two separated and I went for MacNair. All was quiet in the office where we stood. He slowly turned, and his eyes widened at being surprised by my sudden close proximity to his person.
"STUPEFY!" I roared.
He crashed into the desk behind him. At my left, the door burst open, and the body of Crabbe came rushing after me, but with the head of a baby. He obviously had met with some wretched fallout. I didn't even blink.
"AVADA KEDAVRA!" I screamed.
He fell lifeless and silent to the floor. MacNair went to reach for his wand. I Summoned it to me.
"No, no," I laughed, shaking my head as I walked over to stand before him.
"W-who are you?" he whispered.
"Sectumsempra!" I hissed. Immediately, his neck was slashed open. He gurgled and tried to grasp for breath. I knelt down and straddled him, watching him bugged eyed and fearful. Finally, he gurgled, "Who... are... you?"
"Don't you remember?" I whispered. I then ripped open the top buttons from my bodice. His eyes grew dark in horror as the realization came over his face. He was frozen at the sight of the scar he had given me. I reared back and punched him in the face.
"OI! Wake up! I'm next!" I laughed madly. He choked in his death throes. I watched until he was still in death.
I left the room. Now, it was time to find Malfoy and perhaps capture another Death Eater and torture him into telling me where Goyle was.
There was no time. All hell had broken lose. The Aurors arrived, and the battle was in full play. I saw Lucius battle with Potter, and I frantically searched for Goyle. Then, I forgot in my frenzy to watch my back. I was whipped around and faced an unknown, masked Death Eater.
***
It was much later. I was chained to a wall. Beaten badly, I winced as I tasted the blood on my lip. My left eye burned badly, and I could barely see out of it.
All around me there was raging voices and screaming. I tried to focus and saw that Voldemort was performing the Cruciatus Curse on someone.
"She's awake, My Lord!" someone called out.
Voldemort snapped his head up and raced over to me, his eyes boring into mine.
"So, you are the whore that killed two of my Death Eaters."
I smiled. He was trying so hard to penetrate my mind, but I knew how to resist him.
He realized his efforts were not going to be fruitful. He backed away and came from another angle.
"You are somewhat of a paradox, my dear," he surmised. "A young Mudblood, thirsty for vengeance and adept at killing, but so very weak-looking and an accomplished Occlumens at that." He came close to my left side, his breath rank on my cheek. "I know of only one man able to train you so thoroughly."
He whipped around to my right side and whispered in my ear. "Tell me, how long have you been Snape's apprentice?"
I was silent. He tried again to peer into my mind. I gave him nothing.
"Very well. Wormtail!" he shrilled.
A scrawny, rotund, little man came to him and offered his arm where the Dark Mark was. Voldemort pressed into it with his wand. I saw my husband materialize before my eyes.
"Severus," Voldemort said, shaking his head. "You do disappoint me. What am I doing here having to busy my time with this whore when I have so much to do already?"
"My Lord," Severus spoke silkily, "this woman is a formidable warrior. True, she is a Mudblood, but I have fashioned her into a powerful fighting tool..."
Voldemort's eyes blazed red. "A formidable tool that slaughtered two of my Death Eaters...both Respectables!"
"My Lord," Severus pressed. "You cannot blame her for wanting her revenge. She only wanted to kill the men who raped her."
"Is that so?" Voldemort whispered. "Wormtail, bring out Goyle. Oh, yes, Severus, don't be shocked. Yaxley has filled me in on the events that transpired that evening. Now that MacNair and Crabbe are dead, all we have to do is give the cunt Goyle and Malfoy, and we'll all be even."
He rushed over to me and pushed his evil face close to mine. "Even-Steven. Isn't that what you Muggles call it?" He laughed as he released me from my chains. I walked to the center of the room as a stunned Goyle came in.
"Kill him!" Voldemort ordered as he handed me my wand.
"As you wish," I answered coolly. I pointed my wand at Goyle and screamed, "AVADA KEDAVRA!"
He crashed lifeless to the floor. Immediately, my wand was whipped from my hand.
"Very impressive, my dear," he murmured with approval as he circled me. "Pity, though," he said sadly as he took a finger and traced the scar on my face. "Such a beautiful girl. Would you serve me if I were to give you Malfoy? Would you be mine? Do as I will?" he asked seductively in my ear.
My anger was rising. Malfoy! The mention of his name caused my emotions to spill over. I could sense Severus shifting. I pushed my anger down as quickly as I could, but I was not fast enough.
"Your anger betrays you," Voldemort whispered. "You worship a master, and it will never change. Unfortunately, since I doubt your master's loyalty at this point, I can't see how we can proceed further."
"Severus!" he yelled. "This is what we are going to do. You have much to make amends for. It's fortunate for you Lucius will be spending a significant time in Azkaban due to his incompetence. Otherwise, you would be facing my wrath in ways you could never imagine! So, it is simple. This incident does not leave this room. Wormtail, Yaxley...you will never repeat these events again. Severus, your punishment is to watch your whore be given to Yaxley as a reward. After all, he is the one who brought her to me. Then, when he's had his fill, you will kill her."
My eyes flickered at Severus and then towards Voldemort. It's going to happen again. This man Yaxley is going to rape me and then order my husband to kill me!" A flash made me jump. There was the bed...the horror of my nightmares. I saw Severus' hand twitch near his wand. I can't let him do it! His work isn't finished! I turned my eyes to Severus as Yaxley walked towards me. There was no emotion that betrayed his face, but I saw his hand reach for his wand ever so slowly. I whispered, "I love you." Then, I closed my eyes and swiftly brought my palm to face my chest.
"AVADA KEDAVRA!"
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Latest 25 Reviews for Shelter from the Storm
28 Reviews | 6.79/10 Average
What a sad story :(
beautiful fic......... very nice, very touching n i especially liked the ending
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the ending.
Livvy
I must admit that I was shocked that she killed herself in the last chapter but then I really shouldn't be surprised by what people will do for love.
I'm glad that you kept it as close to canon as possible and that Severus still died (although I do love him) - it's lovely to read how he found peace and love at last.
The epilogue is beautiful, simply beautiful.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
I'm glad you liked it. It was a very difficult decision to have Mary commit suicide and then have to think, now what for these two? Then it was simple, keep it canon compliant.
I'm glad you liked the epilogue. I wanted to make it simple and not complicated.
Thanks for sticking with the story, I hope you will read more of my fics that I'll be posting soon.
Livvy
Well that didn't end like I had hoped it would, but at least their together.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
Tell me how you envisioned it? I racked my brain and thought, how am I going to make this work? Because I tried to make it work within the canon. But I'd like to know your ideas.
Thanks,
Livvy
Oh my!
You caught me. I didn't expect this.
Heaven!
Thank you for such an intriguing and captivating story, and such a fulfilling ending.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
It was the only way I could keep it all canon compliant. I worked hard to keep it that way. I thought because I needed to keep the truth of Severus' love/obsession for Lily accurate, Heaven would be the only place where he would be able to be whole and so would Mary. Then they could be together always.
Thanks,
Livvy
I don't even have words for this chapter. It was just.......... (No words in a good, shocked way though) This story has been great since the beginning and the ending was serous. I truly love everything you write. I think this is my favorite fic so far and you are my favorite fic writer period.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
I am deeply touched. I am so glad my writing touches you and I do appreciate your coming here and on HHFF to check out my fics. Definately I have more to write. I have two finished and waiting to be beta read.
I do hope you like the epilogue!
Livvy
OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
I do hope that's good. Remember to watch out for the epilogue!
Livvy
Response from Merlinsbeard (Reviewer)
Of course that's good, it's bloody brilliant.
I couldn't express myself properly earlier.................I was in shock at the chapter ending.
Wonderful, wonderful!
I love watching the events transpire from a different perspective, and I love how you've developed Mary as understanding and accepting and reveling in "being loved" even though it isn't the same as having him "in love" with her.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
Yes, I think it is VERY important (and will be covered in the Epilogue) to remain true to the canon - which is, Severus is -I don't know IN LOVE or if he's stuck in an obession with Lily- driven by his "attachement" to Lily. Which is sad, because it keeps him from fully experiencing a whole existence. It least that is my opinion.
Livvy
Yea!! *does happy dance*, this is soooo good! I want another chappie now please, ok *pouts* have to wait. *tap* *tap* *tap*, are we there yet?? ...
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
Well, I have it on queue, so as soon as it is validated it'll be up. LOL! So happy you're happy for Severus and Mary! Don't they deserve it!
Livvy
Grow to love him indeed, words of wisdom they are. He's a very lovable man we all know that. I do have to say i almost had laser bolts shooting from my eyes at Rowling for killing him off in the last book! She always did hate that charater, witch! Sorry, I love Snape and kinda took it personally. My bad should not have deviated from your fic. Please forgive me. I am so very glad to seeyou have shown the true light of severs here. Its lovely. I can't wait for more.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
You and I are kindred spirits in the "what in the hell was jkr thinking when she killed Snape?!" I was depressed and cried for three days. My husband thought I was off my nut! I just thought it was a total rubbish death for someone as skilled and powerful a wizard as Severus Snape.
Absolutely, still waters run deep, if I may quote from Alan Rickman about Snape. If anyone deserved a happy ending, it was Snape, after all the BS he endured over the years.
Oh well, enough ranting for now. I hope you will check out my other Severus stories. He is a wonderful character to write about.
Thanks for reviewing!
Livvy
I'm sorry I was so hooked on reading I forgot to leave a review with the last chapter. It was very well done. I'm really glad Hermoine could be of some help to her. I like the fact that some of the original characters are involved. Sometimes when other write of OFC with Severus its sappy this one however is very very good in my opinion. This last chapter is my favorite so far. I really am enjoying this fic alot. Thanks
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
Thank you, I wanted this story to be canon compliant and I worked haard to make it so, I wanted to bring in an Original Character to help it stay canon compliant. I thought Hermione would be a good choice.
Thanks,
Livvy
Poor little lamb ( I'm entitled to make cracks regarding Mary, its my real name too) anyway very nicely written, I just want to cry along with her. Bastards! I am throughly hooked tho, must continue on reading more.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
Thanks, and it's nice you let me know how each chapter affects you! I put a lot of soul into this fic and really struggled with making the decision even to submit it! I'm certaintly glad I did, since I have received so many wonderful reviews on it.
Thanks,
Livvy
OMG! I must say that I was warned. Don't worry, I don't flame (thats just freaking rude) I am going to continue reading the rest of this anc check out your other fics. See ya then
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
Yeah, it was horrific what happened to Mary, I think I'm getting your reviews in reverse order, but I'm glad you have stuck with it and hope you enjoy my other fic as well!
Thanks,
Livvy
Wonderful and realistic and so, so good. What a wonderful job of taking them through this process.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
Yeah, it was hard and I had to really think long and hard how to go about the process. Thanks!
Livvy
Time is the greatest healer and Severus is just wonderful!
Awww I've come over all mushy again.
Well done.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
Thank you, Some might think this may be to OOC for Snape, but I think after Deathly Hallows, who can really tell what happens behind closed doors in the most intimate of relationships.
Thanks for reviewing!
Livvy
Aw.... that's so sweet! He was so shy, and the kiss was wonderful -- and hand-holding! It made me melt.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
Good, slowly we'll get them on to bigger and better things, but it's all gotta take time.
Livvy
I just LOVE all your stories!!!!!!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
Thank you so much. I haven't been getting reviews and I've been really doubting that maybe this story wasn't such a great idea. But you and another lady here on TTP have been die hard supporters of this fic. So, thank you so much for cheering me on!
Thanks!
Livvy
Brilliant.
And...
More. Please?
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
YOu betcha! I'll have it up as soon as I can! This is so awesome for me. Do you know that you are my favorite fic author? I have many stories as favs, but I told my husband the other day about your story and I thought you were the the best author I came across and that you were reading MY story! I was so geeked. So I'm really humbled you are liking my fic.
Thanks,
Livvy
Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)
Excuse me while I join you in a mutual squeee!
I'm not worthy!
And I can't wait to read the next installment!
Wow. Yes, intense. Yes, dark.
I can't wait to read more.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
Thank you so much for reviewing. I have fretted over this fic terribly, but it is complete, and I just HAD to write it. I just now have to have it beta read and have it validated.
I hope you will stick with it to the end.
Thanks,
Livvy
Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)
I started reading it wondering who the victim would be. OCs aren't always my faves, but you pulled this one off really well by establishing enough up front to get me fully vested in it, and then going back to where I had to relive it already caring about her. Excellent job.
o0o wow....what a begining. It was crazy though, I couldnt stop reading and when I got to the end, I was left looking for more. Anyway, 10/10 and please update soon.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
I will. The fic is complete, I just have to get it submitted and approved. If you could get past the 1st chapter, the rest is cake in my opinion. There was no way I could post this on HPFF. Too graphic. But i'm still doing the other story as well. Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm nervous about this fic, because it is so dark. I'm curious as to how people will respond to it.
Thanks,
Livvy
oh, what a great story, and so excellently woven into canon!! Even if we hear little of Mary's past, she is well enough portrayed to make this believable. The relationship between the two evolves so gradually, and we see so much caution in Severus' actions. Not easy to stick in the first-person narration but you managed nicely. we alwayw see a little deeper into Mary but we cna also see what Severus goes through--better than she can. The scene with only Minerva, Albus and Severus where they discuss Mary's future didn't work so well,as she isn't present. But in the long run, it was only this one problematic scene and is easily excusable. You finally give me a credible reason why Severus had to die in DH!!! OK, knowing this, I can let him go. Whoever else makes Severus reach heaven usually has him assume this must be hell. So I loved that seeing Mary makes him wonder right away whether this was paradise. Both being clad in white is also a stark contrast to their black attire during life. Your excellent story deserves a much much wider audience, but I assume an" own character" never gets the same attention as canon -- surely not as Hermione. I for one am glad you did not attempt to weave such a story around her.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. I have started posting it on the Restricted Section, Occlumency, and Mia Madwyn had it put into The New Library Live jounal. It doesn't get as much "press" as HG/SS fics, but it has been recieved rather well.Thanks!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. I have started posting it on the Restricted Section, Occlumency, and Mia Madwyn had it put into The New Library Live jounal. It doesn't get as much "press" as HG/SS fics, but it has been recieved rather well.Thanks!Livvy
I'm crying. The ending was so bittersweet and perfect :)
What a surprise ending! Sad that they both had to die to be together, but very, very sweet.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
It had to be that way. There was still so much left for Severus to do and she loved him enough to let him go.
Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
It had to be that way. There was still so much left for Severus to do and she loved him enough to let him go.
Livvy
Whoo-hoo! very good job!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
Thank you so much!Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
Thank you so much!Livvy
You really do a good job of illustrating the conflict Mary experiences in regards to her sexuality. Well done.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
I really wanted to make it realistic. Things don't just go from one clean slice to another. Especially when dealing with sexual issues. It all takes time and trial and error.
Livvy
Response from livvy6 (Author of Shelter from the Storm)
I really wanted to make it realistic. Things don't just go from one clean slice to another. Especially when dealing with sexual issues. It all takes time and trial and error.
Livvy