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Potions Under Duress Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues
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Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues

melusin

86 Reviews   |   86 Ratings, 0 Likes, 136 Favorites )

Humor Drama compliant post-DH/DH Potions Under Duress 9,005 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Ronald Weasley Severus Snape

Already experiencing a miserable second pregnancy, Hermione receives an unexpected surprise...

**Winner: Best Short, HG/SS Awards, Third Round, 2008.**

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Alan Rickman obsessed ex-civil servant now living the good life in France. I only write in the good ship SS/HG. However, if you think that the only way these two can get together is by some sort of forced marriage, 'binding' or whatever, don't read my stories. You will be disappointed.

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OWL Ashwinder and my IJ asylum (see above).

Reviews for Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues

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10/10

mick42

" Mischief Managed " very well indeed, I love this story so much. I read it before, but didn't review, I'm sorry. Thank you for giving me so much pleasure.

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

thank you. glad you enjoyed it

0/10

Ljpjcg

Every time I re-read this, tears come to my eyes. Happy yet poignant tears. This story truly is an unexpected treasure. 

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

thank you

0/10

LeaFairy124

OMG!!! This has to be one of the funniest stories I've ever read!! Also along with it being absolutely hilarious, it was also *very* original. I seriously never read anything like this before and I'm completely amazed that you came up with such a crazy idea :-)Thank you for the laughs!!!

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

thanksglad you liked it

10/10

katielady08

AMAZING!!!!! So enjoyable!:)

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

thanks :)

10/10

paddiew

This is so terrific.  I laughed, I cried; and then I did both again when I read parts to my son.  Thank you

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

Thank you. I hope you both liked it.

10/10

joyfulheart

I really loved this story. I have long looked for a Severus reincarnation story. Now it makes me wonder who Molly 'got'.

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

thank you

0/10

MalyssaQuark

Loved it :)

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

thanks

10/10

Anonymous

Oh, what a crazy and amusing story.  I think my favorite bit was when Hermione threatened to call him "Remus Sirius".  But of course, now I'm dying to know which of Molly's kids are reincarnated, and who they were before.  And I want to see the scene where Hermione does tell Hugo/Snape about himself.

Author's Response: Thanks, but this was definitely a one off. My reaction to DH as it left us so I could put if firmly behind me and move on.

10/10

pookah

I devoutly believe in reincarnation and that, sometimes at least, the soul chooses the family.  And I love this story.  I love the idea that she can communicate with the soul that will inhabit her baby.  I wish I could have done.  I invited three of my four grandparents and one old freind to come be my baby, but of course, I will never know if one of them took me up on it.   The story is a little sad, but ultimately hopeful and absolutely lovely.  Is there a perfect rating here?  You get it!

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

Thank you. So do I - and I certainly believe that the same souls keep bumping into each other all the time - whether as friends, lovers, parents etc. The only constant is love, and that's all that matters in the end.

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

Thank you. So do I - and I certainly believe that the same souls keep bumping into each other all the time - whether as friends, lovers, parents etc. The only constant is love, and that's all that matters in the end.

10/10

lady_rhian

Brilliant! I'm reading for the SSHG Awards, and this was absolutely fantastic. What great original, friendship-oriented fic -- such an ingenius idea. Terrifying thought, carrying Severus Snape's soul around in you for nine months, but this was an exceedingly well done fic, and the end there -- perfect. Well done!

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

Thank you. I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

0/10

Kudilu

GLEE!!

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

:)

0/10

sunny33

bloody clever that!

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

Thank you.

9/10

morgan

I laughed throughout the whole thing! That's great!

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

Thanks

0/10

Cissy_n_Snape

What a delightful story!

10/10

kar5001

awesome reincarnating severusliked how you portrayed  hermione as a caring mother, if only people would follow your story sample (taking care of their bodies, talking and playing music, other things) the world would be better lol molly's babysitting service! tisk tisk naughty Ron loved it thanks

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

Thanks.  Glad you liked it.

9/10

silverdoe

Wow! Such a great story. Total enjoyment from begining to end.

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

beaweasley2

I totally loved the mother/Hermione and Severus conversations. Oh, if it were possible! Too bad he wasn't put in Gryffindor - he'd have put the house on it's ears!!

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

Thanks.He certainly would have

0/10

kimjo2

this is the BEST dh compat story in the universe!!!!  it's even better the second time.  thanks so much, you brillant mel, you!

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

LOL! thank you

0/10

Brisinggammen

Oh - this was surprising, a touch sad and very funny. I feel like asking for the sequel but maybe this is perfect, just as it is. Although I'm sort of curious about his time in the Mollywobbles Nursery *LOL*

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

thanksOthers have asked for a sequel but that's where I'm leaving it. Hugo has a distinct personality from Severus even though they share the same soul. There's no where for it to go really.

10/10

Prof M McGonagall

What a terrific story!  Of course, it doesn't have the usual SSHG romantic relationship, but I just loved that Hermione gets to take care of Severus and nurture him (which is what most of us SSHG-ers want to do anyway).  Congrats on your SSHG Awards nomination!

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

Thank you

9/10

sassy19

very adorable!!!

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

thanks

10/10

justjen

That was FANTASTIC! I have held to the belief of reincarnation for a very long time, and I also feel that we come back to the same group of people time after time, but in different relationships to learn different lessons. This is a beautiful example of what may happen.Great job all around!!

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

Thank you.Yes, I also feel the same souls keep bumping into each other time after time, and that ultimately, love is the only thing that matters.Cheers :)

0/10

Angel Prince

Brilliant! This has my vote. Good luck in the awards.

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

Thank you

10/10

Passionate4Snape

It is not to often that I write a review to the author but I just had to let you know how touching and moving your story was.

As I began to read it I nearly stopped and moved on to the next selection. I don't care for fan fictions of Ron and Hemione but once I continued I found a truly wonderful story.

It is a very unique look at what could have happened after the final chapter of Harry Potter was written.

Thank you for this little treasure and I do hope that you win this catagory as your's was the very best.

Linda

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Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

Thank you. It was my way of dealing with canon at face vaue before moving on

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

Thank you. It was my way of dealing with canon at face vaue before moving on

10/10

onecoppercent

Oh, wow! That DOES make me feel better about the end of book 7. Thank you so much for writing this!!

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

Thank you. It was a very cathartic piece of writing for me too

Response from melusin (Author of Cuckoo in the Nest: The Baby Dialogues)

Thank you. It was a very cathartic piece of writing for me too

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