New Chapter for The Love You Take
The Love You Take
Subversa1,365 Reviews | 6.59/10 (1,365 Ratings, 0 Likes, 977 Favorites )
Now Complete! ~Winner Rd 3 Quill to Parchment for Best Fanon Het, Best AU, Best WIP!~ Hermione is cursed by the Death Eaters, and Dumbledore believes Professor Snape is the only one who can help her and keep her safe. Hermione is 18 years old in this story, but she is still a student.
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another cliff hanger...bummer,anyway,this is the first time I've reviewed and i wanted to make sure i did b/c this is a GREAT story. You've done a wonderful job, and i always looked foward to an update of this story. thank you so much for writing this story, and i look foward to the next couple of chapters. hope to see more from you soon, thanks again.
silly me...i almost thot things would resolve easily! sily, silly me. wonderful update and i look forward with great anticipation to the next chapter. thanks so much.
I would say this was cruel had I not known for certain you would not let them stay unhappy for the rest of their lives. Subvers, please, try to make sure you don't betray my trust in you as an author. I so very much believe the note says: "Hermione, the address of our home is ..." or whereabouts.
GREAT story twists! The origin of the curse, the timely reappearance of the Nexus -- Can I just say how much I admire your ability to plot and smut at the same time? I know "smut" isn't a verb, but nothing else will do at the moment.
Subversa, please don't take away our/their happy ending! See what this story has reduced me to? Begging and pleading! This chapter was so good!! Hermione was perfect-- telling off Dumbledore and then handling Severus. It's why we sshg-ers are so brilliant, really. Those two are perfect together. *sigh* Can't wait for Halloween now!
So close, and yet snatched away yet again! I'm beginning to think you're something of a sadist... a quality I very much admire! Cheers to you.
Great chapter, although I'm concerned about Severus's disappearing act.
NO, No, No, No, No, No, No!
Tell him while he's out buying her a wedding ring to grab some milk , will you, we're running a bit low!
If this weren't such a beautiful chapter I'd be irritated by the ending. How cruel to leave us this way, I imagine Hermione is not too happy either.
Argh! I bow to the Queen of Evil Cliffies! I am going to stand by the rule that Subversa never breaks our heart for good.
Way to go Hermione. Tell that dotty old fool where to stuff his lemon drops.
Severus probably ought to be aware that I put a *great* deal of effort into finding out where Spinner's End is, and if I have to go look his ass up and beat some sense into him, he is NOT GOING TO BE HAPPY about it. (The smut was fantastic, by the way, and I loved Hermione giving Albus what for)
Love this fic!!! Still angry at Albus though. First he guilted Severus into trying to give Hermione up, and then he tried to pull the same thing on Hermione. I'm glad she made her position known (LOVED her threatening him), but wonder if he's going to leave it alone as he doesn't like it when his 'precious plans' are interfered with... He didn't fire Severus or try to press charges of some kind against him for having 'inappropriate relations' with a student, I hope... Was so happy that it looked like she got through to Severus! Really didn't like the sound of "the empty wardrobe" when she couldn't find him...
Oh what a stupid git!
Come on Severus don't let me down! I swear I will break right down and cry if he ends up being a prat! I am actually sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. You do like to leave us all hanging don't ya? Great job!!
Way to go Hermione. Come on Dumbledore, don't believe her, please. LOL. Beautiful chapter, but the ending chilled my blood. I'm on pins and needles wondering what's going through Severus' mind.
oh no!!! I hope he didn't run away, and that he's just talking to his grandmother or something, or finding a suitable place for them to start a life together! *is worried*ANYWAYS...I don't remember with my sleep-deprived brain if I already left you a review saying this, but COMPLETE BEATLES FREAK OUT!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!! :D
This is brutal!!! I cannot believe Dumbledore - obviously he doesn't know Hermione very well! And as for Severus - he'd better not be planning anything stupid and *noble*! Love, love, love this story! Pretty please, may we have the happy ending now??
AAAAAAAAAAACCCCCCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!I can feel you grinning all the way from here, you evil (wonderful) author, you!Argh!Four more days till Halloween.....ARGH (throwing pillow across room)---!!!!
Response from countrymouse (Reviewer)
And, oh---hurray! I _was_ right about Bella!
Response from countrymouse (Reviewer)
And, oh---hurray! I _was_ right about Bella!
I love Hermione telling Dumbledore how the cow ate the cabbage! Thanks for our spitfire Hermione!
another lovely roller coaster ride of a chapter. i very much enjoyed hermione telling off dumbledore. and kind of telling off severus, albeit nicely. i hope that he is not off trying to be "honorable" i.e. leave her alone. i prefer to think he's off planning some wonderful surprise? guess we'll find out soon enough.
You can't leave it there!*whimper*
if he did what i think he did i am going to reach through the screen and kill him! men are so selfish sometimes, and stupid, they think they know what is best for a woman when she is the only one who can truly know what is best for her. stupid sods!
Oh bloody fucking hell! All that turmoil... and he fucking leaves! Gah!!!!!I'm eagerly awaiting the epilogue so I can find out what hells Hermione puts him through when she catches up with him.(Excellent chapter, BTW)
damn the headmaster. i forsee much misunderstanding before the happy outcome. thanks so much for the lovely and touching update and i look forward to the next chapter.