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Potions Under Duress If the Shoe Fits
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If the Shoe Fits

1: Chapter 1: I Still Believe

2: Chapter 2: Are We Dancing?

3: Chapter 3: Once Upon a Dream

4: Chapter 4: Something There That Wasn’t There Before

5: Chapter 5: A Dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes

6: Chapter 6: I'm Wishing

7: Chapter 7: I Won't Say (I'm In Love)

8: Epilogue: So This is Love

If the Shoe Fits

GinnyW

95 Reviews   |   95 Ratings, 0 Likes, 63 Favorites )

Romance post-HBP/HBP compliant Potions Under Duress 34,924 Words 8 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Sometimes life can be a fairy tale. Hermione is an overworked, under appreciated Apprentice Healer who starts dreaming about a Prince at a series of masquerade balls. The odd thing is, he's having the same dreams.

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Chapters (8)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1: I Still Believe

Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Are We Dancing?

Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Once Upon a Dream

Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Something There That Wasn’t There Before

Chapter 5: Chapter 5: A Dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes

Chapter 6: Chapter 6: I'm Wishing

Chapter 7: Chapter 7: I Won't Say (I'm In Love)

Chapter 8: Epilogue: So This is Love


About GinnyW

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GinnyW

20 Stories  |  Favorited by 251  |  164 Reviews Written  |  529 Review Responses

I'm a 40+ year old mother of 4 who works full-time, goes to school, and writes in what little spare time I have. Once upon a time I co-moderate the SS/HG Gift Exchange with Shiv5468 and Scattered Logic.

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http://ginny-weasley31.livejournal.com/
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Reviews for If the Shoe Fits

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Gwenog Jones

I love my Snape snarky--and that missive from Severus to Hermione was very snarky!  Great chapter--rather mysterious with the night before and all...very intriguing.  I can't wait for more!

Response from GinnyW (Author of If the Shoe Fits)

:D I like my Snape snarky as well. He just doesn't seem right without that bit 'o bite. Thanks.

10/10

sinbad

This is getting more interesting, I wonder what the twins did to her?

Response from GinnyW (Author of If the Shoe Fits)

:) Thanks.

10/10

mmesnape

I loved this chapter, so 'Cinderella-ish' and all.  LOLI'm eager to see the next one, dying to know if Snape will go out looking for her.  Teehee!  Good work!

Response from GinnyW (Author of If the Shoe Fits)

I love Cinderella. Can you tell? Thank you.

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Gwenog Jones

Wonderful chapter!  That was a delightful little twist.  I love the twins' idea of getting Hermione out for a night and for the spell that they used.  I also really enjoyed Severus' entrance in to the story and the subsequent dialogue between him and Hermione.  I can't wait for more!

Response from GinnyW (Author of If the Shoe Fits)

Thank you!!

0/10

Calicoskys

awwwwwww such a cute start. <3 I love stories that have her a few years off from hogwarts. I always find it slightly unbelieveable when they have her IN hogwarts still or just a year out or so.

Response from GinnyW (Author of If the Shoe Fits)

Thanks! Yeah, lately I've been having a hard time with a younger Hermione. I feel they are much more likely a couple if it's a few years post-school.

10/10

sinbad

Sweet start.  Looking forward to more.

Response from GinnyW (Author of If the Shoe Fits)

:) Thanks.

10/10

sregner

Wooo, this is good!!! More please!

Response from GinnyW (Author of If the Shoe Fits)

:) Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it.

0/10

draegon_fire

This has an interesting start. I'm curious to see where this goes.

Response from GinnyW (Author of If the Shoe Fits)

Thank you.

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draegon_fire

It looks like the Weasley's plan for her to get with Krum backfired, and she spent the evening with Severus instead. I have the feeling it won't be long until he figures out who she really is. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Response from GinnyW (Author of If the Shoe Fits)

:D Thank you!

10/10

cenicienta

It said your story is completed. But I'm sure you won't let us "hanging"... right? I hope is more to come. Nice writing, love the plot so far and I'll be waiting for updates!

Response from GinnyW (Author of If the Shoe Fits)

LOL! It said that the story is completely written. It's not completely posted. It is 7 full chapters plus and epilogue. The second chapter is up now. Thank you.

10/10

Keladry Lupin

I love the twins' straighforwardness in this.  "We think you need a good shag, Hermione."  This is the perfect setup for a Cinderella story.  *applause*

Response from GinnyW (Author of If the Shoe Fits)

*hugs you* I do adore you. Thank you, my dearest Kel.

0/10

Gwenog Jones

Great start!  I really enjoyed what you have posted so far.  I can't wait to see what's up with Healer Sedgewick.  I also am quite enjoying your depiction of Hermione.  Well done.  I can't wait for more!

Response from GinnyW (Author of If the Shoe Fits)

:) Thank you very much.

10/10

Wine witch

Lovely story, thank you so much!

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Seventh

Once Upon A Dream is a song from Sleeping Beauty? There is a song by the same name from the musical Jekyll and Hyde. It is a very nice song indeed, and if it isn't the same one, you should check it out. Back to the story, though. I loved this story and read it from beginning to end (as all good readers should) and cherished every moment of well-placed fluff and angst. Thank you very much.

9/10

katielady08

Awesome!  Simply Sweet!

:)

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Very cute story. Glad the Healer got hers! :)

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WriterMerrin

That was absolutely adorable.  I really enjoyed reading this story.

10/10

snitchette

This is a perfect ending for a lovely story. Thank you for writing it.

0/10

fyiagcg

Very lovely, dear!

0/10

Mint Stick

I can't remember if I left a review for this story at LJ during the Exchange or not, but I just read it again and enjoyed it at least as much as the first time around. A really lovely story - thanks so much for writing it!

0/10

Aldara

Awww! ;) Very beautiful.

10/10

amsev

I LOVE this story!!!  I was so delighted to read it again.  It was just as wonderful the second (or is it third?) time through.

Very well done! 

10/10

Maddie

An entertaining tale full of frustrations for both Hermione and Severus. I especially liked to see that Hermione's mentor got the ax, although not literally. I thoroughly enjoyed the read.

10/10

WickedlyWanton

This was great.  I really loved how the songs actually fit the scenes in each chapter, and not just the titles.  By the way, I thought I was the only one who even knew the movie The Happiest Millionaire!  It's one of my favorite Disney movies-Fred McMurray, Tommy Steele, and Penelope Ann Miller were brilliant!  Nice to see someone out there still remembers the good stuff.

0/10

nightshift

I like the whole "what happened to Healer Sedgewick" resolution. That's love--a person who will plant evidence for you. And sparks are overrated unless you're trying to start a fire.

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