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Sovereignty
broomclosetravenclaw30 Reviews | 7.43/10 (30 Ratings, 0 Likes, 24 Favorites )
Infractum Prosterno Ac Effligo! The object glowed a bright crimson. The space around it seeming to expand— that was the first sign that something was going wrong.
Curse-breaker Hermione finds that she needs help from someone who has considerable Dark Arts knowledge--will she ask Snape?
Written for Timestep in the Summer 2007 SS/HG Exchange.
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Well, as the decades catch up to me, I had to come change my bio, if for nothing more than to change my age. I discovered HP and fanfiction after the 5th book and was instantly drawn to Snape. I mainly ship HG/SS with my 2nd favorite ship being NL/LL, although I will write almost any (non-canon) pairing (ok, so I have been known to write a drabble or two with a canon pairing, but it doesn't mean I enjoyed it).
Reviews for Sovereignty
I can picture Severus in a country setting. No dunder heads as neighbors, because there are no neighbors.
what a facinating story. thanks so much
i like your premises, your reasons for snape's behavior, hermione's background. you write a good stuation.
Whoa, I did not expect that! I'm guessing that Severus could not have destroyed his own Horcrux because I can't think of anything else that would cause him to send the letter to the Ministry telling them about it.
I've got to go read the last chapter. Now!
Beth
I'm glad that Severus went to Gringotts to look for Hermione. Sooner or later she would have talked herself into going back to that house whether she had anyone to accompany her or not! And when he turned up at ther door I laughed out loud!
Beth
Read straight through and thoroughly enjoyed. I got the idea that the story could have been fleshed out a bit more - especially around the beginning and end of the tale. Delightful in any case.
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it. And I agree about the ending being more fleshed out--unfortunately with stories written for exchanges, if the muse isn't cooperative, the ends can get rushed because of time limits (at least for some authors--meaning me). :) This was written two years ago, so I have been working on better characterization. And thanks for reviewing.
Why did she get angry? Snape's reply that if he had merely told her what the inscription said she would have learned nothing made perfect sense to me.And now she is missing his presence. She will have to do better in the future if she wants him to spend time with her.Neat chapter!Beth
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Yes, Snape's reasoning makes sense, but Hermione needs time to let it all sink in. Hermione is just frustrated (and a bit angry) because she realized that Snape sat there for weeks and watched her translate the runes when he knew what they said all along--and his comment, made her think that he wasn't treating he as a equal.They are both too prideful for their own good. :)
Mister Snape is lonely, and this works quite well to Hermione's advantage... except he doesn't want to take money form her personal funds... So, he has two homes, and I can't help but wonder where is second home is. I'm very intrigued to find out what he will be able to tell her about the Pensieve cum Horcrux. On to the next chapter!Beth
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Glad you're stil enjoyint it. :)
Cool! If I needed to know how a spell had been made, I'd ask Severus, too. I only hope he will be willing to help his former student.Off to chapter three now!Beth
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Thanks. He's willing to help. but his reasons for doing so may be selfish. ;)
Tubersnuf is a wonderful character! I started reading this story today on my lunch break (on my cell phone, no less) and couldn't' wait to get home to be able to post a review and tell you how much I like it!I'm off to the next chapter!Beth
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Thank you. Isn't TPP great that it is easy to read from our cells... I'm guitly of that too. :) I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Very Hermione. :) I enjoyed their convo.
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Thanks. :)
I like the way she worked everything out from the little he told her
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Well, she is the brightest witch of her age. ;)Thanks for reading and reviewing.
So THAT"S where his second home is located! I'm glad that the two of them were able to settle down together in this now welcoming home in Scotland!
Lovely story!
Beth
This is an imaginative and logical use of JKR's world.
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Thanks. :)
I see by the dates this was written before the 7th book was out. an interesting start. Glad to see this at the top of the list; I like finished tales. A good choice of career for Hermione.
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Yes, it was written (and complete) pre-DH for the 2007 summer exchange. I went on summer vacation shortly after and somehow missed posting the last chapter and just realized it the other day when I was looking for something else. oops. But, I'm glad you're reading. Thanks.
That was a twist I didn't see coming - Snape's horcrux?! I'm dying to read the next chapter now!
I bet Snape is annoyed (alright, pissed) that Hermione called him a coward. Interesting take that Severus had his own Horcrux.
LIfe certainly is dealing Hermione some blows, isn't it?
Always in for a mystery, our Snape.
I like this quite a bit.
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Thank you. I am glad you are enjoying it. The next chapter is in queue. :)
Oh my, this is interesting! Sluething horcruxes and Dark Arts ... you'd think this to be more up Harry's alley ... well, except there's no glory.
Write more, you've got at least one reader!
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Thank you. I am glad you are enjoying it. :) This story is complete in seven chapters, other chapters are in queue.
Nice hook and an interesting start to the story. This is a job I could see Hermione doing--lots of bookwork and lots of action once all the contingency planning is done.
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Thank you. Chapter 2 is in the queue. And yes, there will be lots more bookwork and action. :D
Ooo! A little mystery on our hands... Love it! I'm dying to see the next chapter, good work by the way. :)
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying it. This story is complete in seven chapters. The next chapter is in queue.
I like this beginning.
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Thank you. Chapter 2 is in queue. :)
Ok, you got my interest. What is Severus doing for a living? Why would he help Hermione? This is looking good.