Chapter 6: Circles
Chapter 6 of 7
broomclosetravenclawHermione and Snape return to the house to destroy the mysterious Horcrux. Will they find out to whom it belongs?
ReviewedSnape convinced Hermione to wait until the next day to embark upon their attempt to destroy the Horcrux. Hermione awoke early. As she clasped her amulet around her neck, Hermione ran through the steps in her mind. Too anxious to eat, she decided to make some tea while she waited for Snape. Her wait was not long yet seemed an eternity. Upon entering, Snape’s brisk manner reminded her a bit of Tubersnuf’s.
“Ready?” he asked.
She nodded, and they were off.
When they arrived at the remote house, it looked the same as it had on their previous trips. Hermione approached the Horcrux with more than a little apprehension.
Snape saw her hesitation. “Are you sure you don’t want to wait for Tubersnuf?”
Hermione slightly shook her head to the negative and stepped towards the swirling bowl.
“I can help to lead you, but you must break the curse and destroy the Horcrux yourself.”
Hermione looked back at her former teacher, took a deep breath and began.
Leaving nothing to chance, Hermione started with the Four-Point Spell. “Point Me.”
Her wand spun on her palm, stopping at due north. She turned ninety degrees to face east and began casting the ancient Ogham runes. Hermione rotated in a clock-wise direction, drawing runic patterns in the air, then stepping to the right and forming a new circle oriented south.
She repeated this two more times until the Four Directions each had their own circle, each touching, forming a center over the cursed Horcrux. To complete the Celtic form of the Five Zones, Hermione needed to cast a fifth circle in the middle of the first four, the midpoint being directly on the Horcrux. She stood as close as she dared to the Horcrux and began the final circle; once complete, she would not be able to step outside of the circles until the task was complete.
Snape watched her precise movements slow as she became more cautious. Closing the last circle, Hermione stopped, facing north once again and locking eyes with Snape. Time seemed to stand still, enclosed within the symbols, everything outside looking pale in comparison. Hermione waited for something to happen, a sign that the curse had been broken and that it was safe to destroy the Horcrux—nothing, just utter stillness, except for the swirling mist of the Pensieve.
Snape spoke, “You need to unlock the circles to lift the curse.”
Unlock? Hermione stood there looking at the runes floating around her—looking for the key to unlocking them; they overlapped in several places.
“Raise the center circle,” said Snape. He sounded far off to Hermione, even though he only stood a few feet away in the small room. For some reason, his logic puzzle with the potions that he used to protect the Sorcerer’s Stone flashed through her mind.
She began elevating the circle; it was difficult to move. It seemed to lift a little and then slide back down. Hermione thought she maybe should have waited for Tubersnuf; two wands may have made the lifting less demanding. As it was though, she had to complete the task she had started. She concentrated all her efforts at hoisting the center circle and began making progress.
Suddenly, it dropped back down several feet with a large gust, the symbols shattering across the room in an outward wave, throwing everything in the attic, including every speck of dust, against one of the four walls. Hermione was not sure if standing in the center of the circle or the dragon amulet that Bill had given her from Egypt when she started her job had saved her from the blast. Snape had not been so lucky. He was lying slumped against the eastern wall. Hermione stood in the middle of the remaining four circles, unable to help him until she finished her task.
She had little time to worry about him as the remaining circles began to drift apart, opening the center. The Horcrux seemed to be highlighted amongst the aperture. Hermione noticed a movement that was not the swirling of the foggy mist. The marking of the serpent that had been on the outside of the Pensieve was growing larger and coiling around the basin. Its head made it around to the side Hermione stood on; it reared up to half her height, hissing and looking her in the eye threateningly.
Hermione froze. She was trying to recall everything she knew about serpents, but there was no time—the serpent rose up further. Hermione instinctively shot blue flames out of the end of her wand; the serpent disappeared in a blinding flash, leaving nothing but a smoky outline.
Hermione’s attention turned back to the Pensieve; the mist had slowed down, and a form was rising out of the miasma. The figure seemed oddly familiar. When it had fully taken shape, Hermione found herself staring at a small ghostly image of Snape. She was taken aback; she felt her knees weaken, but she managed to remain standing—staring.
The figure turned and began speaking. Hermione didn’t want to hear what he had to say, but at the same time felt she must. The image spoke of killings, whom he had killed to make the Horcrux. He referred to where he was the night the Potters had been attacked. He spoke of furtive meetings and secrets concealed, using names she knew and those she had never heard before. Hermione only heard half of what was said, her mind reeling. The image sunk back down into the mist. Hermione felt betrayed and angry at the man lying unconscious across the room from her. She raised her wand. Prosterno Ac Efflectum! The Pensieve turned to dust.
Snape regained consciousness just in time to see Hermione destroy his Horcrux. He felt a sense of sadness and relief. He tentatively stood, leaning heavily on the wall for support. Hermione stood there staring at him, her face and hair slightly damp from her efforts with a look he couldn’t quite place. When his eyes met hers, he recognized it as disappointment, then anger.
Hermione walked over to him, looked him up and down and said, “Harry was right; you are a coward. Your whole life—never standing up for yourself, killing for Voldemort, leaving me to destroy your Horcrux.”
Hermione was so upset, she only wanted to leave, but she also wanted to know why, so she asked the simple one-word question, “Why?”
Snape did not answer. He was still a bit unsteady, but not too woozy to realize that she had said Potter was right and called him a coward in the same sentence. He wanted to scream at her his reasons for everything he had done since joining the Death Eaters to standing in this room with her.
Instead, he said, “Get out of my house!”
Hermione snatched up the Portkey and left.
A/N: Thank you to GinnyW for beta reading.
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30 Reviews | 7.43/10 Average
I can picture Severus in a country setting. No dunder heads as neighbors, because there are no neighbors.
what a facinating story. thanks so much
i like your premises, your reasons for snape's behavior, hermione's background. you write a good stuation.
Whoa, I did not expect that! I'm guessing that Severus could not have destroyed his own Horcrux because I can't think of anything else that would cause him to send the letter to the Ministry telling them about it.
I've got to go read the last chapter. Now!
Beth
I'm glad that Severus went to Gringotts to look for Hermione. Sooner or later she would have talked herself into going back to that house whether she had anyone to accompany her or not! And when he turned up at ther door I laughed out loud!
Beth
Read straight through and thoroughly enjoyed. I got the idea that the story could have been fleshed out a bit more - especially around the beginning and end of the tale. Delightful in any case.
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it. And I agree about the ending being more fleshed out--unfortunately with stories written for exchanges, if the muse isn't cooperative, the ends can get rushed because of time limits (at least for some authors--meaning me). :) This was written two years ago, so I have been working on better characterization. And thanks for reviewing.
Why did she get angry? Snape's reply that if he had merely told her what the inscription said she would have learned nothing made perfect sense to me.And now she is missing his presence. She will have to do better in the future if she wants him to spend time with her.Neat chapter!Beth
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Yes, Snape's reasoning makes sense, but Hermione needs time to let it all sink in. Hermione is just frustrated (and a bit angry) because she realized that Snape sat there for weeks and watched her translate the runes when he knew what they said all along--and his comment, made her think that he wasn't treating he as a equal.They are both too prideful for their own good. :)
Mister Snape is lonely, and this works quite well to Hermione's advantage... except he doesn't want to take money form her personal funds... So, he has two homes, and I can't help but wonder where is second home is. I'm very intrigued to find out what he will be able to tell her about the Pensieve cum Horcrux. On to the next chapter!Beth
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Glad you're stil enjoyint it. :)
Cool! If I needed to know how a spell had been made, I'd ask Severus, too. I only hope he will be willing to help his former student.Off to chapter three now!Beth
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Thanks. He's willing to help. but his reasons for doing so may be selfish. ;)
Tubersnuf is a wonderful character! I started reading this story today on my lunch break (on my cell phone, no less) and couldn't' wait to get home to be able to post a review and tell you how much I like it!I'm off to the next chapter!Beth
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Thank you. Isn't TPP great that it is easy to read from our cells... I'm guitly of that too. :) I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Very Hermione. :) I enjoyed their convo.
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Thanks. :)
I like the way she worked everything out from the little he told her
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Well, she is the brightest witch of her age. ;)Thanks for reading and reviewing.
So THAT"S where his second home is located! I'm glad that the two of them were able to settle down together in this now welcoming home in Scotland!
Lovely story!
Beth
This is an imaginative and logical use of JKR's world.
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Thanks. :)
I see by the dates this was written before the 7th book was out. an interesting start. Glad to see this at the top of the list; I like finished tales. A good choice of career for Hermione.
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Yes, it was written (and complete) pre-DH for the 2007 summer exchange. I went on summer vacation shortly after and somehow missed posting the last chapter and just realized it the other day when I was looking for something else. oops. But, I'm glad you're reading. Thanks.
That was a twist I didn't see coming - Snape's horcrux?! I'm dying to read the next chapter now!
I bet Snape is annoyed (alright, pissed) that Hermione called him a coward. Interesting take that Severus had his own Horcrux.
LIfe certainly is dealing Hermione some blows, isn't it?
Always in for a mystery, our Snape.
I like this quite a bit.
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Thank you. I am glad you are enjoying it. The next chapter is in queue. :)
Oh my, this is interesting! Sluething horcruxes and Dark Arts ... you'd think this to be more up Harry's alley ... well, except there's no glory.
Write more, you've got at least one reader!
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Thank you. I am glad you are enjoying it. :) This story is complete in seven chapters, other chapters are in queue.
Nice hook and an interesting start to the story. This is a job I could see Hermione doing--lots of bookwork and lots of action once all the contingency planning is done.
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Thank you. Chapter 2 is in the queue. And yes, there will be lots more bookwork and action. :D
Ooo! A little mystery on our hands... Love it! I'm dying to see the next chapter, good work by the way. :)
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying it. This story is complete in seven chapters. The next chapter is in queue.
I like this beginning.
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of Sovereignty)
Thank you. Chapter 2 is in queue. :)
Ok, you got my interest. What is Severus doing for a living? Why would he help Hermione? This is looking good.