Back to School
Chapter 7 of 20
Dusty RoseFirst day back at school, and there are adjustments to be made.
ReviewedChapter Seven
Back to School
When at last they arrived at Hogwarts, Harry searched the Great Hall for a glimpse of Tanya. As he took his place at the Gryffindor table, he spotted her sitting further down, almost to the empty area where the newly sorted first years would sit.
She turned to watch everyone file into the Hall and caught Harry's eye. She smiled happily, and at Harry's beckoning wave, moved to take a place next to him at the bench. Hermione sat on her opposite side, with Ron and Ginny taking seats on each side of her.
"It's so good to finally see you all again," she exclaimed, speaking more to Harry than to the others. At least that's how Harry chose to interpret it. "How was the rest of your summer?"
Harry took advantage of the others' catching up with the students all around them to capture Tanya's attention. "I've missed you terribly," he said shyly, making sure no one else overheard. "Are you ready for term to start tomorrow, then?"
"Aye, as ready as I'll ever be," she said. "I still don't have the results of my examinations, but everyone keeps telling me not to worry; I seem to have done well."
"Good, I hope you'll be in sixth year. Then we might have some classes together."
"Aye, I've been counseled by the staff about career choices. I'm heading for a career as a caretaker of Magical Creatures. So Professor McGonagall scheduled classes for me to prepare me for those particular NEWTs next year."
"Then you'll be under the immediate supervision of Hagrid," Harry said. "Do you get on well with him?"
"Aye, he's the best! I'm glad to be involved in something I feel so natural about. And he's so enthusiastic about teaching. He acts like I've bestowed a gift on him by being interested in his beasts."
"Yeah, that'd be Hagrid, all right. Mind you, he doesn't always realize that some of the more dangerous animals aren't really fitting for pets."
"Aye, he treats them all like kittens. I have to keep on my toes around him."
Harry looked up at the staff table and gave a start. "What's Raphael doing up there?" he asked incredulously.
Tanya smiled. "Oh, I forgot. Raphael will be apprenticing with Trelawney in Divination. Dumbledore offered him a job." She lowered her voice to avoid anyone hearing. "Trouble is, he can't do much. I suspect Dumbledore put him there to keep him out of harm's way."
Harry laughed, a load being lifted off his chest. It appeared by the laughter in her voice that Tanya didn't take Raphael very seriously. And yet . . . Harry's laughter died out, seeing the intensity of the look Raphael was giving Tanya, as if willing Tanya to seek him out. Harry guessed Raphael must still be considered a rival for Tanya's attention.
"Will you have to be taking any Divination classes for your NEWTs?" he asked nonchalantly.
"No, thank the gods!" Tanya laughed out loud. A lovely, uninhibited sound, Harry thought. Lowering her voice once more, Tanya said, "I think neither Trelawney nor I have the patience to get me through any more of her lessons!"
A hush fell over the Hall as Professor McGonagall marched down the aisle with the usual frightened-looking bunch of new first years following. It was time for the sorting to begin.
Dumbledore rose. "Welcome back to another Hogwarts year," he began. "A few announcements." His eyes considered the room at large, commanding them to take his next words seriously.
"If you don't already know, then hear this . . . Voldemort is back. Even the Ministry has decided to acknowledge this fact. For those first years among us who aren't yet acquainted with our current state of affairs, rest assured, your history classes will begin by bringing you up-to-date with the troubles in our midst.
"For everyone, be vigilant, be cautious, be alert. Now is not the time for petty squabbles and too much concentration on competition among Houses. It is, now more than ever, a time for unity and strength.
"Now, for you athletes and spectators at large . . . fear not, we will still have our Quidditch matches and the House cup at the end of the year. But I would like to think that we'll all keep the competition at an appropriate level. A little rivalry is good; it keeps us sharp; but let's not let it control us.
"Now on to things more academic. First years, be aware that the dark forest is strictly off limits; you do not know the dangers yet that lurk there. The rest of you do know; let that be enough to keep you out as well.
"We have a new apprentice Divination teacher this year; Mister Raphael Driver will be working with Professor Trelawney, perfecting his teaching skills." As Raphael stood up slightly, acknowledging the introduction, he once again looked to Tanya and smiled. Harry couldn't see from sitting behind her whether or not she'd smiled at him.
Raphael sat back down and Dumbledore continued. "We also have a transfer student with us." Harry frowned. Transfer? Tanya turned to him. "That sounded easier than explaining to everyone why I advanced so quickly," she explained to Harry. "It's easier for me." He smiled in understanding.
"Tanya Relke has been sorted into Gryffindor House, and I'm sure we'll all make sure she feels most welcome." He smiled, and Tanya stood up and sat down again so quickly, Harry was startled. Apparently, Tanya didn't like being the center of attention any more than he did.
"And now, the Sorting!"
After the new students had been sorted and everyone had their fill of the feast, the prefects led the way to the dorms.
They entered the common room, and as Tanya hung back to let others go around her, Harry followed suit. They drifted toward the corner fireplace, and sat down on the couch opposite, just happy to be in each other's company.
Everyone else was tired enough to drift up quickly to their dormitories, so it was only a matter of minutes before they found themselves alone. Harry looked at Tanya, running a finger down the arm of her new robes.
"So, you're now officially a witch," he said.
"There's something about these robes," she said with a smile. "They make you feel magical, don't they?"
"For me, I think it was more that I'd entered a world I hadn't known existed until about two days before my first term here. Once I got my letter accepting me into Hogwarts, everything seemed to happen so fast."
"I had to wait more than a year before I knew I'd ever be a part of it," she said. "It was a long year, but I'm glad it came out all right. I'm glad I'm here."
"I'm glad you're here, too," he said, looking directly into her eyes.
She leaned forward slowly, silently inviting him to do the same. When their lips met, Harry fought to still his breathing, allowing his hand to touch her hair, which she'd worn loose today. All those dreams and all that reading made him anxious once again for her touch, but he would not rush her. He would not push her in such a way that they ended up wrestling on this couch. He wanted something special, and he wasn't sure they'd ever find it here, at school, especially in the common room, where they could be disturbed at any time.
It was a good thing too, that he reined himself in. The Head Boy, a Ravenclaw that Harry didn't know well, someone by the unlikely name of Chance Mince, chose that moment to enter the room. Harry silently cursed the rule that allowed Head Boy and Head Girl to go into any Tower or dormitory, and stood up, trying not to look as though he and Tanya had been up to anything.
"It's quite late, you know," Mince said bossily. "You should both be in bed by now. Your own beds," he added insultingly. Tanya rolled her eyes and Harry clamped his mouth down tight, not wanting to begin the new school year by having points deducted from Gryffindor.
In spite of Mince's presence, Tanya deliberately stood up, and moving closer to Harry, threw her arms around his neck and kissed him, pressing her body into his. Harry's arms, of their own accord, came up to her back, pulling her even closer to him as he returned the kiss, his brain's inability to function patently obvious.
"I'll see you at breakfast," she breathed. Without a look at Mince, she walked purposefully up the stairs to the girls' dorm.
Harry's eyes followed her, nonplussed. As Mince turned to look back at Harry, Harry was grateful for the way his robes draped over him, lest Mince see exactly how much his body was affected by Tanya's wantonness. He turned away and strode up to his own dorm before Mince could get obnoxious.
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22 Reviews | 7.68/10 Average
nice - spent the las few evenings reading your story. I appreciated your OC. Keep up your writing.
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
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That was really neat. I was hitting the random story link in search of something new and came across your story. I got a real gem this time.
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
I had a really tough time with the change-over from HP/OC to SS/OC. If the beginning had been told more from Tanya's POV rather than Harry's, it would have helped clarify the angle of the story, and would have made it flow easier, I think.Still, interesting tale, and of course, I'm always happy when Severus gets to have some happiness in his life.EM
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
Yes, so sorry about that HP/OC-SS/OC switch. I had intended it to be all about HP and Tanya, but as it progressed, I realized the characters weren't all that compatible, so I began to lose my belief. Instead of going back and rewriting the story (which I should probably have done), I just let it continue to unfold.Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Hi, wishing to tell you that I'm reading your story. You've created a great turn of events, congratulations! Corrupted Auror trainees? Of course Malfoy finds out a flaw if he can use money to exploit it. You deserve more reviews but OCs tend not to get the same attention as canon characters even if bent to be unrecognisable. Me for one, I then prefer a new person. You're, however, close to creating a Mary Sue but maybe her exhaustion and some other drawbacks compensate for her power .. and beauty? Gypsis are outcasts in both worlds, that's so tragic, but I think Tanya is right in that the wish for it as well. Face it, out world isn't oo great thateveryone must embrace it. I will be reading on, I promise, but not today.
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
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I have never liked Cho. Tanya is too much woman for Harry, seems more like Severus' type. Tamara
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
Something she and Snape soon discover for themselves...
This chapter is very good. It had all kinds of emotions in it. Tamara
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
Thank you.
Tanya reminds me of Hermione somewhat. Tamara
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
Well, they are both carbon-based forms of life, I suppose...
What I don't understand is why more people haven't reveiwed this story. Tamara
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
*smiles*
It's amazing how detailed your story is. I'm enjoying very much. Tamara
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
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Happy Birthday Harry! sorry you didn't get what you really wanted lol Tamara
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
He got as much as he could handle... hee hee
This story keeps getting more and more intriguing. Tamara
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
*grins*
I believe this is going to be a very interesting story. Great first chapter Tamara
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Very beutiful story. It has met my expectations in almost every way. The fact that this could have been a book also impressed me. The drama and the suspence between the relationship between Harry, Tanya, and Snape seems to have been the most "encapturing" of the story. Though the ending of the feared wizard Voldemort could have gone better, I believed that the irony of his death being a knife seems off balance. Still Good Story.
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The story is keeping my interest. Tanya seems too mature and knowing for sixteen, but perhaps it's her gypsy heritage. Would part of her heritage be an inclination to hide her skill, or does she trust everyone at Grim Old Place?There was a crossover story of Buffy and Harry where Xander took out the portrait with a chain saw.
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
Her wanting to hide her skills is part of her wish to blend into the background, never having been comfortable with other people's attention. And she will never completely trust everyone...
Okay, you got Harry out of the Dursleys without subjecting him to a lot of misery. That's good. It's a bit dull to me because the characters are acting predictably, but we have to balance this against introducing the new characters and the story line in a clear manner. Molly's reaction to Gypsies was a good touch. My suggestion would be to have Snape make Harry nervous by being nice to Harry.
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
Snape's going to be too busy to bother Harry...
I have had this planted firmly on my favorites list for a long time, and I finally got the time to read it fully. Had to go back and re-read a few chapters to remember where I was, but I have finally finnished! And wow, what a story! I can't figure out if Tanya is a Mary-Sue or just a really good original character. The fact that she ends up with Snape supports the MS theory, but all the Gypsy history and its relation to the magical world makes me think Tanya was created to segway Gypsy magic into Harry-Land. If so they kudos to you. I was totally taken in by the new and interesting magical lore Tanya could wield. I also loved that you had her originally involved with Harry. The best stories always have some sort of love interest/antagonist to f#@$ up the works. I was kind of pissed that you didn't go further down that road before clearing the way for Snape. But hey, it all works! Excellent story - I am so glad I finally got the time to read this in its entirety. It must have taken a mammoth effort to get it right! Can't wait for the next story you put out as your writing style is really beautiful. lol
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Thank you,
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
! This story was written before I found a group that has helped me with my writing, but for a first effort, I'm still rather pleased I actually managed to finish it. When I wrote it, I had no concept of what a MS character was. I think I have a pretty good grip on things now, and am learning more all the time.
I have to admit that in the beginning I had such a pervy crush on young Harry, that I had fully intended this story to be a OC/HP pairing, but somewhere along the lines, I discovered Snape, and was completely swept off my feet. Just as well, because I don't normally find myself attracted to anyone younger than 40. Now I feel a little less perverted.
I headed Tanya away from HP, mainly because things had been getting too hot for them, and didn't want to cross any underage sex policy lines. It was going to be difficult enough to rationalize Snape's interest in so young a woman later.
Thank you again for taking the time to read the story, and also for taking the trouble to send a review. It is truly appreciated!
Response from Brizywitch (Reviewer)
I will confess the same dilemma - a pervy crush on boy wonder got me into this fan girl mess, and finding Snape hooked me like cigarettes (very hard to give up). Thanks for your rationalisation - knowing where authors are (brain-space-wise) when they are writing has always interested me. Being able to find, and hold the same wavelength while writing a novel length fic is a mission in itself. I am in awe of anyone who can. I also didn't know who, or what, a MS was for the longest time - then I spotted someone being bitch slapped for it on a Buffy site, and caught on pretty quick. The fact that you made Tanya so believable and flawed, makes up for the fact that she is an AU character. Again, fantastic story - keep up the great writing.
Worthy of J. K. rowling herself!
The characters seemed alive. As an author myself I can say that Dusty Rose has a better grasp of characterization than I do.
Her storyline flowed smooth as silk. No gaps, inconsistancies or errors that I could spot.
All in all this is the best piece of fanfic that I have ever had the pleasure of reading!
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
Thank you! You are too kind!
Harry isn't as anxious as I am to see why she wants to see him alone in her room. ;) Excellent, excellent story. I am enthralled with Tanya.
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
Thanks! Remember, Harry is just learning about things like romance. In future chapters, you'll see that they're not really all that compatible, because of events which will unfold . . .
notsosaintly's response: I am looking forward to it., even if Harry loses another girl (poor thing). I have my own suspicions (pushes Mrs. Weasley aside) ... I'll just have to wait and see, I guess. (updateupdateupdate *snicker*)
What a great story! Thank you so much!PS I was a little disappointed when the Harry/OC stuff didn't happen.Well, we cant have everything in life....Anyway, whatagreatstory!
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Thank you so much!
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Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
Thank you so much!