End of Summer
Chapter 6 of 20
Dusty RoseEveryone's headed back to Hogwarts for another year. Another eventful year. There are mysteries to be discovered and doubts to confront.
ReviewedChapter Six
End of Summer
Harry packed the last of his things into his trunk and turned to his bureau. Hedwig's cage would need cleaning before packing up for Hogwarts; it would be a good time to let her fly freely around the room. It wasn't much, but he didn't dare let her out the window. She was angry with him, not having had as much attention from him as she was accustomed to. She'd probably stay away for weeks in retaliation.
He let her out, and began sweeping away the droppings at the bottom of the cage. Hoping the wastebasket wouldn't spit them back out, he emptied his dustpan into it, and looked around the room, making sure he wasn't forgetting anything.
His two miniature dragons had finally found a way of living peacefully together. They were currently asleep, and he would simply put them in his pocket for the trip. They'd probably sleep the whole distance anyway.
His eyes landed on his night table. With a start, he realized he'd almost forgotten to take the book, "The Wanton Tales of Lucy Braddox". It had proven to be quite a book. He hadn't worked up the nerve to actually "dive" into it; it didn't leave much to the imagination. Just reading it was nerve-wracking, and, he could admit, if only to himself, highly stimulating. It also led him to believe Tanya knew much more about sex than he did; he suspected as much the last time he dared to enter the attic. He wasn't sure how he felt about that.
He packed the book into his trunk, hiding it under some folded robes. The other books Tanya had given him were there already. Tanya had been right; the books had made the summer fly by.
But he missed her. A couple of days after Harry's birthday, she'd left with Lupin and Snape to go to Hogwarts, where she could continue her concentrated lessons in preparation her for her exams.
He'd been thrilled the night before she left; he had noticed how tired she'd been, and didn't have the nerve to go upstairs after everyone had turned in for the night. So she had come to him.
His heart had jumped into his throat when he'd sensed a presence and opened his just-beginning-to-get-heavy eyes to find her standing by the side of his bed. With a quick glance at Ron, sleeping in his own bed, she'd sat down next to where Harry was lying. She had smiled at him. "Weren't you even going to come up and say good-bye to me?"
"I thought you'd need to get a lot of sleep," Harry had answered, grinning. "I didn't think I should assume you'd be glad to see me."
"That's ridiculous," she said, leaning down to kiss his lips. "I'm going to miss seeing you everyday. Talking to you . . . and other things. . ."
Harry's face, even now, got hot when he remembered her hands touching him, sliding under his pajama shirt, getting more demanding, and his breathing becoming more labored under her attention.
She'd lain herself down on his bed, half covering him, and he'd let his hands do their own examination of her warm, willing body. She had begun kissing him; his neck, his chest . . . her lips traveling lower and lower, tantalizing, teasing, and he had not been able to suppress a moan as he'd felt her hot breath tracing a path down from his chest, moving lower.
But that moan had roused Ron, who had sat up in bed, looking into the darkness for some monster unknown. Quick as a flash, Tanya had slid off the bed and hid herself from Ron's view, should he turn toward them.
Harry had turned to his side, hiding his erection in case Ron's night vision was better than his timing. Harry silently cursed Ron for once again thwarting what would most likely have been the loss of his virginity. After Ron had fallen back down to return to his dreams, Tanya sat up to whisper to Harry, "Thwarted again! There are just too many people around here." She'd sounded regretful, and Harry felt, once again, the warm fuzzies at the thought of her wanting him. The way Lucy Braddox wanted her men. She kissed him once again, lingeringly, and left the room.
Harry at last had fallen into a fitful sleep, dreaming about what might have been, had they had the privacy they both wanted so much.
So now Tanya was working hard to catch up at school. The rest of them had gotten O.W.L.s in nearly everything; Ron and Harry both had missed the Divination O.W.L., but neither of them was about to lose sleep over it. Hermione had an O.W.L. in every area she'd sat the exam, and Harry couldn't figure out why she'd been anxious about it. He would have thought it was a given.
But he was surprised that both he and Ron had O.W.L.s in Potions. Snape had made it sound like they'd failed. Maybe Tanya was mellowing him out, Harry thought ruefully.
No, that couldn't be it. After all, it wasn't the professors who set the exams, it was the Ministry. Impartial. He began to feel a little less antagonistic toward Snape. Potions really was an art, and if Snape hadn't been so hard on them, he doubted he would have passed it. Could this be a glimmer of understanding into the methods of the sinister former-Slytherin Professor?
He dragged his trunk out of the room and down the stairs, to add it to Ron's, Ginny's, and Hermione's trunks. Pigwidgeon was already encaged and ready to go, and Crookshanks refused to be caged. Hermione would carry him on, as usual. They had about another forty-five minutes to kill before they had to leave for the station; he wondered if he could talk Hedwig back into her cage by then.
He went into the den, where the others were watching the clock. Ginny was admiring the necklace she wore; Tanya had retrieved it for her and sent it back by owl a few days ago. Mrs. Weasley had quite a bit to say about that; the very idea of sending anything by owl. Why not put up a banner and neon lights to let everyone know wizards were here? But Harry was glad she'd sent it. It meant that she'd had enough time away from her studies to go get it, and he was glad she wasn't the sort of person to forget promises made to other people. Ginny was certainly a fan of hers, if she hadn't been already.
Hermione had been a little disappointed at not finding enough time to grill Tanya about her tenancy in New York. However, they'd heard from Lupin that Tanya had been sorted into Gryffindor; there'd be plenty of times in the common room so that Hermione's New York education could commence there.
Ron was glowering by the fireside. Although he and Harry were now legally adults, and were at last permitted to join the Order, Ron still felt they weren't allowed far into its confidences. Mr. Weasley explained to them that it didn't matter that they were old enough; they were still at school. Their studies would have to be given priority, because without their proper education, what good would they be to the Order anyway? Could they honestly say that persevering with the mundane studies hadn't taught them valuable skills needed for the coming war, should there be one?
They had no argument for that, and so the subject was dropped. Hermione had been paying close attention; her birthday was in September, and she would be joining the Order then. She obviously wanted to waste no time arguing the same points when her time came.
Harry had also learned, by pumping Lupin for information, that Tanya had sat her exams, and was now waiting for the results. They wouldn't be expected for another week or two, so Tanya would be in sixth year with the rest until such time as she'd have to go back to whatever year her test results dictated.
"But don't worry," Lupin had said, "we all crowded into the testing room during the practical exams, and there's no doubt in anyone's mind that she got all her O.W.L.s. Otherwise Professor Dumbledore wouldn't have placed her in so high a year, knowing she'd have to face a demotion later."
So, all that was left to do was get on the Hogwarts' Express and take up life again. He was so eager to see Tanya that he knew this would be one of the longest train rides of his life.
Cornelius Fudge was still trying to get back in the Order's good graces; he'd provided Arthur Weasley with two Ministry cars to take the students to the station. As Lupin and Moody struggled to get all the baggage into the cars (with supervision from Mrs. Weasley) Harry coaxed Hedwig back into her cage with promises of early release upon entering Hogwarts. They set off for Kings' Cross.
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22 Reviews | 7.68/10 Average
nice - spent the las few evenings reading your story. I appreciated your OC. Keep up your writing.
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
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That was really neat. I was hitting the random story link in search of something new and came across your story. I got a real gem this time.
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
I had a really tough time with the change-over from HP/OC to SS/OC. If the beginning had been told more from Tanya's POV rather than Harry's, it would have helped clarify the angle of the story, and would have made it flow easier, I think.Still, interesting tale, and of course, I'm always happy when Severus gets to have some happiness in his life.EM
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
Yes, so sorry about that HP/OC-SS/OC switch. I had intended it to be all about HP and Tanya, but as it progressed, I realized the characters weren't all that compatible, so I began to lose my belief. Instead of going back and rewriting the story (which I should probably have done), I just let it continue to unfold.Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Hi, wishing to tell you that I'm reading your story. You've created a great turn of events, congratulations! Corrupted Auror trainees? Of course Malfoy finds out a flaw if he can use money to exploit it. You deserve more reviews but OCs tend not to get the same attention as canon characters even if bent to be unrecognisable. Me for one, I then prefer a new person. You're, however, close to creating a Mary Sue but maybe her exhaustion and some other drawbacks compensate for her power .. and beauty? Gypsis are outcasts in both worlds, that's so tragic, but I think Tanya is right in that the wish for it as well. Face it, out world isn't oo great thateveryone must embrace it. I will be reading on, I promise, but not today.
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
Thank you!
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I have never liked Cho. Tanya is too much woman for Harry, seems more like Severus' type. Tamara
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
Something she and Snape soon discover for themselves...
This chapter is very good. It had all kinds of emotions in it. Tamara
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
Thank you.
Tanya reminds me of Hermione somewhat. Tamara
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
Well, they are both carbon-based forms of life, I suppose...
What I don't understand is why more people haven't reveiwed this story. Tamara
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
*smiles*
It's amazing how detailed your story is. I'm enjoying very much. Tamara
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Thank you!
Happy Birthday Harry! sorry you didn't get what you really wanted lol Tamara
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
He got as much as he could handle... hee hee
This story keeps getting more and more intriguing. Tamara
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
*grins*
I believe this is going to be a very interesting story. Great first chapter Tamara
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Thanks!
Very beutiful story. It has met my expectations in almost every way. The fact that this could have been a book also impressed me. The drama and the suspence between the relationship between Harry, Tanya, and Snape seems to have been the most "encapturing" of the story. Though the ending of the feared wizard Voldemort could have gone better, I believed that the irony of his death being a knife seems off balance. Still Good Story.
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The story is keeping my interest. Tanya seems too mature and knowing for sixteen, but perhaps it's her gypsy heritage. Would part of her heritage be an inclination to hide her skill, or does she trust everyone at Grim Old Place?There was a crossover story of Buffy and Harry where Xander took out the portrait with a chain saw.
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
Her wanting to hide her skills is part of her wish to blend into the background, never having been comfortable with other people's attention. And she will never completely trust everyone...
Okay, you got Harry out of the Dursleys without subjecting him to a lot of misery. That's good. It's a bit dull to me because the characters are acting predictably, but we have to balance this against introducing the new characters and the story line in a clear manner. Molly's reaction to Gypsies was a good touch. My suggestion would be to have Snape make Harry nervous by being nice to Harry.
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
Snape's going to be too busy to bother Harry...
I have had this planted firmly on my favorites list for a long time, and I finally got the time to read it fully. Had to go back and re-read a few chapters to remember where I was, but I have finally finnished! And wow, what a story! I can't figure out if Tanya is a Mary-Sue or just a really good original character. The fact that she ends up with Snape supports the MS theory, but all the Gypsy history and its relation to the magical world makes me think Tanya was created to segway Gypsy magic into Harry-Land. If so they kudos to you. I was totally taken in by the new and interesting magical lore Tanya could wield. I also loved that you had her originally involved with Harry. The best stories always have some sort of love interest/antagonist to f#@$ up the works. I was kind of pissed that you didn't go further down that road before clearing the way for Snape. But hey, it all works! Excellent story - I am so glad I finally got the time to read this in its entirety. It must have taken a mammoth effort to get it right! Can't wait for the next story you put out as your writing style is really beautiful. lol
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Thank you,
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
! This story was written before I found a group that has helped me with my writing, but for a first effort, I'm still rather pleased I actually managed to finish it. When I wrote it, I had no concept of what a MS character was. I think I have a pretty good grip on things now, and am learning more all the time.
I have to admit that in the beginning I had such a pervy crush on young Harry, that I had fully intended this story to be a OC/HP pairing, but somewhere along the lines, I discovered Snape, and was completely swept off my feet. Just as well, because I don't normally find myself attracted to anyone younger than 40. Now I feel a little less perverted.
I headed Tanya away from HP, mainly because things had been getting too hot for them, and didn't want to cross any underage sex policy lines. It was going to be difficult enough to rationalize Snape's interest in so young a woman later.
Thank you again for taking the time to read the story, and also for taking the trouble to send a review. It is truly appreciated!
Response from Brizywitch (Reviewer)
I will confess the same dilemma - a pervy crush on boy wonder got me into this fan girl mess, and finding Snape hooked me like cigarettes (very hard to give up). Thanks for your rationalisation - knowing where authors are (brain-space-wise) when they are writing has always interested me. Being able to find, and hold the same wavelength while writing a novel length fic is a mission in itself. I am in awe of anyone who can. I also didn't know who, or what, a MS was for the longest time - then I spotted someone being bitch slapped for it on a Buffy site, and caught on pretty quick. The fact that you made Tanya so believable and flawed, makes up for the fact that she is an AU character. Again, fantastic story - keep up the great writing.
Worthy of J. K. rowling herself!
The characters seemed alive. As an author myself I can say that Dusty Rose has a better grasp of characterization than I do.
Her storyline flowed smooth as silk. No gaps, inconsistancies or errors that I could spot.
All in all this is the best piece of fanfic that I have ever had the pleasure of reading!
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
Thank you! You are too kind!
Harry isn't as anxious as I am to see why she wants to see him alone in her room. ;) Excellent, excellent story. I am enthralled with Tanya.
Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
Thanks! Remember, Harry is just learning about things like romance. In future chapters, you'll see that they're not really all that compatible, because of events which will unfold . . .
notsosaintly's response: I am looking forward to it., even if Harry loses another girl (poor thing). I have my own suspicions (pushes Mrs. Weasley aside) ... I'll just have to wait and see, I guess. (updateupdateupdate *snicker*)
What a great story! Thank you so much!PS I was a little disappointed when the Harry/OC stuff didn't happen.Well, we cant have everything in life....Anyway, whatagreatstory!
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Thank you so much!
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Response from Dusty Rose (Author of The Gypsy)
Thank you so much!