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Desire and Deception
SeverusLovesUs83 Reviews | 6.61/10 (83 Ratings, 0 Likes, 76 Favorites )
The war is over, and Snape is now a war hero with plenty of fame, admirers, and adoring witches. Yet, none of that fulfills his real desires. Can the wizarding world ever truly accept Severus Snape?
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I love your story. Any chance of you finishing it?
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
You are in good timing! I happen to be working on the next chapter finally! Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it so far!
Wonderful! I asked for mystery and suspense and you give in spades! So many threads I want to follow. Very good, Thank you
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Thank you kindly! The next chapter is in the works....
I wonder if Severus has figured out a way to save Draco?
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
In chapter 10 where we see Draco, Severus was feeling hopeless about the matter. He'd already tried the legal ways, as we see with Scrimgour's comment about Severus needing to stop defending his Death Eater pals. Will he resort to other means? Who (or whom) is it that the mysterious person wanting to break into Azkaban wants to free? Hmmm... More soon!
very seductive potion making LOLI'm glad the Ron nonsense is out of the way :)
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
I could totally see Hermione going overboard in her praising. Kinda funny that - her shpewing off at the mouth about how great the man in front of her is. I'm surprised Snape put up with it as long as he did. A true Slytherin I guess eh? Not going to stop her from pronouncing his greatness. LOL
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Yes, Snape was very curious, especially has he would have never expected Hermione to have the initiative to commit to something at which being successful requirest more than book knowledge.
As for Hermione, this is her chance to convince Snape to really work with her, to set a higher tone to the working relationship than the expected reluctance and annoyance he would most likely have had instead.Yes, a true Slytherin… letting the Gryffindor chatterbox go on and on while he listens, ascertains, and craftily calculates what to do with the influx of information. =)
Too bad she surprises him so much that he is too confused to be conniving!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Yes, Snape was very curious, especially has he would have never expected Hermione to have the initiative to commit to something at which being successful requirest more than book knowledge.
As for Hermione, this is her chance to convince Snape to really work with her, to set a higher tone to the working relationship than the expected reluctance and annoyance he would most likely have had instead.Yes, a true Slytherin… letting the Gryffindor chatterbox go on and on while he listens, ascertains, and craftily calculates what to do with the influx of information. =)
Too bad she surprises him so much that he is too confused to be conniving!
So Hermione and Sev both got a surprise at the meeting. And McGonagall expects them to spend a lot of time together before the school year starts - hmmm... wonder how they'll pass the time :)
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Oh, they will have to spend quite a bit of time together this summer! Passing the time… everything from angsty arguments to educational enlightenment to discovering their desire to sensual se— Oh, wait— shouldn't give it all away just yet!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Oh, they will have to spend quite a bit of time together this summer! Passing the time… everything from angsty arguments to educational enlightenment to discovering their desire to sensual se— Oh, wait— shouldn't give it all away just yet!
I'm glad I finally got around to reading this update - was well worth it! Strong stuff - I felt really sorry for Severus during the Pensieve sequence.
It will definitely take some work for him and Hermione to start understanding each other properly.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Hi
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
! I'm glad you liked this chapter. I felt sorry for Severus too (and for just about everyone in that scene, excluding, of course, Bellatrix Lestrangeheh)!
They both will have to reach for understanding. Their intense attraction to each other has brought them together, but they are both a bit clueless about how to have a relationship with each other.
So, now what? I hope you stick with me to find out =) Thanks for the review!
Response from Mint Stick (Reviewer)
I will certainly plan to stick around and read on! Have just had a bit of a busy time lately, so the update notification was sitting in my inbox, looking at me pleadingly every day, until I finally had time to catch up. ;-)
Fabulous story - cannot wait for more- keep us the great work
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Hi there! I'm glad to hear you are enjoying the story. The next chapter is in queue, so it shouldn't be long!
It doesn't seem like Ron is only wanting to stay friends. Tough! I don't think Hermione would want him back, now that she has someone much better. ;-)
I'm looking forward to seeing what Harry wants to talk to Hermione about.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
HehRon Weasley or Sexy, Dark, Delicious, Severus Snape? Decisions! Decisions! =)
I'm glad your looking forward to the next updateit shouldn't be too long in coming.
Thanks for reviewing!
It's pretty creepy how some fast bad guys found out about the change in security at Azkaban and that Hermione was involved. Ron remains a whiner and I wonder what Harry needs to speak with Hermione about.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
The answers will be on their way soon! Thanks for the review!
Ugh!!! You've piqued my interest, now. You can't stop here!!! Seriously, though, you are doing a wonderful job, SLU. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
I can't stop here? But . . . but that was the end! =) Just kidding, more will be on the way soon. Thank you for the compliment!
Nice chapter, I can see you are building tention up for a big scene.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Hehjust you wait! Tension and general angst have made their way into this story already, but they will most certainly step in for another appearance or two or . . .
=) Thanks for the review!
Hi, SLU. I love the flame idea for Azkaban! It's brilliant and I've never heard of such a scenario used in a fic like this before. All of the post-Voldemort ideas I've read, many of which are extremely far-fetched, and you've discovered an answer straight from canon! Brilliant. Can't wait to read the rest! BTW, in case you don't recognize the penname, you know me as Cyn. Great work, SLU.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Hey there, Cyn! Thanks for the feedback about the flame idea. It's good to hear it =) Thank you kindly!
I am really enjoying this story. It's not merely a 'Snape and Granger fall in love' tale, but has some more plot to it, which I appreciate. Thanks for sharing this!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
I am so glad that you find the story enjoyable! Thank you for taking the time to tell me. It's truly appreciated =)
Ah, Ron needs to have his head smacked about. And keeping all those secrets is not good for Severus and Hermione. Good chapter.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Not feeling the love for Ron, hmm? LOL! Perhaps Severus wouldn't mind helping you out with that one =)
Yes, Hermione and Severus are in a precarious position with the secret they keep in regards to Azkabanbut also with the things that go unsaid between the two of themas we shall see.
Thank you!
It seems they have a good plan in place. I think Harry knows there's something more going on between Severus and Hermione. I wonder what Ron's problem is though. I think Harry was right and that Ron is hoping that Hermione will go back to him. Perhaps he thinks it can be accomplished by playing the hero. Too bad for him that Hermione has a dark knight to protect her now.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Harry is concerned about Hermione's well-being, and he still has many of the same feelings towards Snape that he had in canon. He misjudges his actions and views them with suspicion. Mostly, he just wants to ensure that he doesn't harass his friend, so he will be keeping a keen eye on him, yes!
LOL, yes, Hermione has her dark (and delicious!) knight who will, most certainly, be protective of her =)
Thank you kindly for reviewing!
Your characterizations are just so delectible, I find myself hard pressed to resist the urge to squee after every other chapter. Or, at least after this one. Thank you so much for writing, and I look forward to further updates!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Thank you! What a kind compliment! Thank you for reading and reviewing! More will be along soon!
I just found your story today and read all nine chapters. I'm eagerly awaiting the next one!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Wow, I'm glad you found it captivating enough to sit and read all the way through! Thanks, and more will be coming shortly!
Wow, that was a very hot kiss. Great job so far I like what you have done for plot. Thanks for taking the time to write for us readers.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
I'm glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for taking the time to review for us writers =) The next chapter is with my beta, and it should be up shortly!
Hermione and Severus seem to have some kind of magical connection beyond attraction and compatibility. Thank goodness Hermione made the first move and had been dropping heavy hints. I'm so glad Severus turned around. It was a very passionate scene.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
That was so sweet!I think I'm going to ignore Albus' advice and fantasise about this for the rest of my life!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Yeah, sometimes, for really good things (like a hot romance with Snape), you don't need to be in front of the Mirror of Erised in order to fantasize continuously =)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from vdemon_96 (Reviewer)
Thanks for writing that... masterpiece!I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Wow! What a great compliment, thanks! The next chapter should be up soon =)
Response from vdemon_96 (Reviewer)
Good!! Can't wait. =]
Oh, I am so happy you had Severus turn around and go back to Hermione!!! It is about time he allowed him self to think that he migth be loved, to know that he is someone special for one person. As Hermione deserves to have the perfect man for her (which will never, ever be Ron Weasley). I absolutely loved this chapter!!! Now you just have to make them and their relationship strong enough to take the storm comming from Harry, Ron and the other Weasleys when they find out who Hermione is in love with. Update again soon!!!!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
I'm glad you loved this chapter. These two really deserve each other. In my opinion, even in canon they are the perfect match for each other =) However, the coming storm is full of more wrath than Harry, Ron, and co. could ever muster!
I just don't know if I can make their relationship strong enough to weather it
. . . ::grin:: Thanks for reviewing!
oh come on! That can't be the end...lol!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
LOL =) More to come soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Wow! Very intense!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Yes, nice and steamy down in the Potions lab! Thanks for the review!
Oh, that was a very hot set of kisses. I loved that.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Thanks! I know they made me wish I had a Severus Snape of my own!