Secure Yet Still Unsure
Chapter 9 of 11
SeverusLovesUsHermione meets with Ron, Harry, Kingsley Shacklebolt, and Severus to discuss what must be done now that they know someone is trying to steal the secret of how to break into Azkaban. Hermione wonders just what Severus’ involvement in the Ministry project entails.
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Ron and Hermione entered the Barking Man to see a distressed-looking Harry sitting in the back of the room waiving off a hovering server. They were greeted heartily by the manager, Mr. Salkis, who was invariably over-the-top friendly to them in order to mask his nervousness at having the owner or his best mates stop in.
Harry looked up when he heard Mr. Salkis bellow enthusiastically, "Ms. Granger! Mr. Weasley! Always a pleasure to see you both! Mr. Potter is right over..."
"Ron!" Harry said in disbelief as he rose and strode quickly to where they stood in front of the door. "You followed me here so you could see Hermione?" Harry noted Hermione's red, tear-streaked face. Turning on Ron, Harry exclaimed, "She's been crying! I told you to give her some time! What have you been saying to her?" Harry glared at the sweating manager who was pretending not to be listening to them. The man turned and quickly retreated to the kitchen area. "Hermione, are you all right? I swear, I didn't know Ron was going to come along!"
"Harry, it's okay. Ron just... he just... someone... Well, he stopped someone who just used Legilimency on me to learn how to make the... er...you know," Hermione said inarticulately.
"What! Are you okay, Hermione?" Harry asked as he silently cast a Muffliato about them. The slight buzzing noise that suddenly filled the air clued her in to the magic worked.
She nodded. Harry put an arm around her and guided her back to his table. Ron followed.
"I need you to tell me everything that happened," Harry began, now in full Auror mode. "Then we will need to report to Kingsley so he can get a team of Aurors working on this. Someone out there has learned to brew the potions, and we will need as many of us on the case as possible so we can stop him before..."
"Harry, hold on! He didn't learn anything. All he could get before Ron showed up was a memory that showed Professor Snape making the potion." She took a deep breath and continued, "He knows I do not know how to make it! So, no need to worry on that account. The secret is still safe."
Harry, despite her efforts to reassure him, looked more worried. "Hermione! You mean Snape hasn't taught you how to brew them yet? What's he playing at?"
"Nothing!" Hermione said indignantly. "He just had to be sure he could make them flawlessly before explaining the procedure to me. It is a really difficult recipe. Besides, why should you mind? If I had known, then someone who obviously wants to break into Azkaban would know as well."
Ron shook his head. "True, but Harry's right. The Ministry will be upset that Snape hasn't taught you yet. It's a matter of security."
"What do you mean?" Hermione asked with a frown.
"Look, Snape was told that he had to teach you the potions as well," Harry explained. "For one thing, the secret can't be known to only one person! What if something happened to him?" He casually added, "Then... well, you know, the Ministry doesn't particularly trust Snape, so they want another..."
"What are you going on about?" Hermione countered. "Everyone knows now what he did! They awarded him an Order of Merlin, First Class, for goodness' sake! They honored him with the title 'War Hero!' If they didn't trust him, they wouldn't have him brewing potions for them that could be deadly if made wrong! Of course they can trust him!" she ended emphatically.
"Sure they can..." said Ron sarcastically, "Trust him as far as they could throw him in a dueling match!"
"Ron, be fair!" cautioned Hermione. She paused, smirked, then added sweetly, "And it's really all right of you to compliment Professor Snape's defensive skills!" She beamed at him mischievously.
Ron looked indignant and was about to come back with a retort when Harry spoke first, "I see you two are back to your usual, bickering selves." He grinned, then continued, "That's great, but we need to go report to Kingsley now. It's up to him how to handle this, and I'm betting he won't want Scrimgeour aware of what happened."
Hermione suddenly had several more questions than the many that arose just a minute ago. She started to speak as Harry led them to the pub's fireplace, but he interrupted her, "Kingsley will explain it all to you. Let's just hurry."
The trio, who had not all been in one room at the same time for the past several weeks, now sat closely together on a short, upholstered bench in the office of the Head of the Auror department. Harry was relieved that they were together again, but felt the circumstances could certainly be better. Ron had an arm wrapped around Hermione's shoulder, which, Harry noted, seemed to make her slightly uncomfortable. He hadn't even asked them if they had resolved everything. Were they getting back together after all?
Kingsley Shacklebolt sat in a high-back, plush, leather chair behind his desk, his fingers idly stroking the jaw line under his chin while he considered what he had just been told. He leaned forward and spoke to Hermione, "Now, are you sure you told me everything you can remember about the man who attacked you? Is there anything else?"
"No, I think that must be it," she said more calmly than anything she had said since the attack. "I could not see his face. All we know is that he is fairly tall, large-framed, with a deep voice, and that he wants to break someone out of Azkaban. Oh, and that he knows how to perform Legilimency," she replied, summoning it up.
"That's not a lot, but we can start with that." Kingsley turned to Ron and said politely, but with authority, "Ron, go now and pass this description to everyone in the Department. Make sure they are all clear about this being an 'inside case,' please. Thank you."
Ron nodded and rose, leaving the room with an air of dignified duty.
"Inside case?" queried Hermione.
"Hermione," Kingsley began in conspiratorial tones, "there are some situations about which it would be... shall we say, unwise to inform the Minister or his minions. In this case, Severus Snape does not need the grief they will surely give him for not beginning your training. Secondly, we need to protect you both, and Scrimgeour would certainly hinder our efforts by making a compromising spectacle of it all." Kingsley leaned back in his chair and let out a deep sigh.
"So, what are you going to do?" Hermione asked.
"First, we are going to get the Potions master over here so we can discuss this with him as well." Kingsley regarded Harry and asked, "Harry, would you be kind enough to draft him a letter requesting his presence here? Tell him what has occurred, but please be nondescript about the rest."
"Of course," was Harry's reply as he took parchment and quill from the desk. He found the idea of sending a letter to Snape a little disconcerting. What would his former professor think when he unrolled the scroll to see a letter in his nemesis' handwriting?
My bounty is as boundless as the sea,
My love as deep; the more I give to thee,
The more I have, for both are infinite.
Severus Snape sat on the deep brown, suede sofa in his chambers. He had just read the most affecting passage on page 472 of his collection of works written by the noted playwright, William Shakespeare. He paused to wonder why it was that Hermione had been reading from Romeo and Juliet. The story was about two lovers who loved one another despite the stark disapproval of everybody they knew. It is nearly fitting, I suppose, Severus thought, except the love part was questionable! Hermione might, for some unfathomable reason, desire him, but surely she would never love him!
What am I getting myself into? Severus shook his head. How long would it take, once her friends found out about him, for them to talk the sense back into her? Unlike Juliet, Hermione would never choose him over the friends she loved. And they would certainly never approve of Hermione's and his relationship!
That damn Potter still hated him despite having finally learned of everything Severus had ever done to help him! The brat had not even thanked him once. He even knew about Lily. Severus had been sure that Potter would have approached him to ask about his mother...
Severus frowned, remembering the past Saturday spent in Hell. There had been that hate-filled stare Potter had given him during those wretched circumstances they had been forced to share.
No, it seemed Potter would always hate him. It was not as if that were a big deal in and of itself... of course... but Severus Snape would never be tolerated by the Chosen One as the lover of his best friend. Severus snorted. Hermione was with Potter even now. Surely she will never actually...
Tap! Tap! Tap! There was suddenly the sound of an owl outside the one, lone window in his private rooms. It was a narrow window located way up near the ceiling, which equated to being just above ground level from the outside. There was no way for him to reach it. Severus pointed his wand at the window instead, and an owl came soaring through the opening, bearing a scroll embossed with the Ministry's seal.
Severus untied the letter from the owl's leg. He gave the bird a pat, and it flew out without further ado. He unfurled the scroll and nearly dropped it in surprise at the sight of the handwriting of the former student on whose papers Severus had delighted in drawing big, prickly, black D's. Speaking of the Potter brat, what the hell was he writing to him for?
Severus stood in the lift, pushing the button for level two over and over again. The damn lift was going entirely too slow. He let out a frustrated growl. Finally, it opened to the right floor, and Severus quickly made his way to the Head Auror's office. He was seething with rage and replete with worry as he opened the door without bothering to knock. He needed to see...
Hermione. There she was. She was sitting at the far end of a bench. He quickly noted with his peripheral vision that Potter was seated next to her, and on the other side of him sat Weasley. She smiled softly at him when his eyes sought hers. He could see she had been crying earlier. He half-moved to wrap her in his arms, but the presence of Harry Potter, Ronald Weasley, and Kingsley Shacklebolt stopped him. Instead he asked solemnly, "Are you well, Miss Granger?"
"Yes, Se...sir," she answered, her eyes still locked with his.
Severus walked over to her, pulling out a vial from a pocket in his robes. He offered it to her as he said, "I brought this for you. It will cure your headache. Drink it down promptly, please." She took it obediently with a word of thanks. Severus nodded and sat in a nearby chair that Shacklebolt offered him.
Severus looked around and saw Potter staring at him...not with hatred this time...but in a prying way, as if he wished he could perform Legilimency on him. He huffed. As if the boy could ever have the fortuity or discipline! Severus glowered at him until Potter broke his gaze.
Shacklebolt began, "Now, Severus. Harry told you what has happened to Hermione. We are going to need to take some extra precautions..."
"We most certainly are," said Severus. "First, I no longer agree to teach Miss Granger how to brew the Fire-Immunity potions. Clearly, it is much too dangerous for her to..."
Undeterred, Shacklebolt interrupted him, taking back over the conversation. "Severus, you know why you must. If you do not teach her, Rufus will have your head! That is why we are prepared to ensure your protection so that no one will be able to get to either one of you."
"There is no need to remind me of my little arrangement with the Ministry, Shacklebolt," Severus said coldly. "However, surely Miss Granger's safety is more important than their political games? You know I hardly care for the so-called benefits I have been receiving from them! Let them take all that away! I..."
"Severus, listen to me. It's either all or nothing for you. If they take it away, then surely you must know where that will leave you?"
Severus glowered fiercely at him.
"You know I do not agree with the Ministry's decisions in their handling of the post-war trials, Severus. I want to help you. We will not tell Rufus anything of what has happened today. You only just cast the Black and Purple Flames this past weekend, and already someone is trying to break in. You don't want him to think that the secret is no longer safe in your hands, or he just might 'take it all away.'"
Severus sat with his arms crossed, his scowl deepening.
Shacklebolt continued, "Instead, I will tell him that I am instituting a new security plan as a simple precaution. We will station Aurors at Hogwarts again. No one will be allowed admittance without prior screening and approval. One of them will meet you or Hermione on the grounds and Apparate with you whenever one of you comes here to drop off a batch of potions. We will also mention as an aside in the Daily Prophet that only Aurors have the knowledge of how to enter Azkaban. That way we divert attention away from you. Few would be foolish enough to dare take on one of our well-trained Aurors. Not to mention, even if they would dare, they would still not learn a thing about getting through the Flames of Azkaban." Shacklebolt finished speaking and sat silently, allowing for Severus to give his thoughts about the security plan he had just detailed.
Severus sighed with exasperation. "That is all well and good, Shacklebolt, except you are overlooking one significant detail."
"Oh? And what would that be then?" Shacklebolt inquired while using all of his concentrated effort to ensure that it came out politely.
"Someone already knows that the way through the flames comes by means of a potion," Severus explained smoothly. "He already knows that she..." he gestured toward Hermione, "...is assisting me, even if he believes that she is not to actually make the potion herself. This person clearly knows that I am in possession of the knowledge he seeks."
"Rest assured, Severus, that we are doing all that we can to track this person down before he causes any more trouble. With the Aurors stationed at Hogwarts, you will be secure. Until the man is caught, we can have Aurors attend you when you must leave the Hogwarts grounds."
"How utterly delightful," Snape declared sarcastically. "And what about Miss Granger? Our illicit foe's inability to get helpful information from her does not assure her future safety. He could still use her to get through to me."
"We'll offer her the same security, of course," Shacklebolt replied smoothly.
Potter cleared his throat. "Er...might I suggest something?" he asked.
Shacklebolt said, "Certainly, Harry!" but Potter was looking at Severus when he asked.
Severus rolled his eyes. "Out with it then! Let's hear it."
"Well, sir. I think it might be a good idea for you to teach Hermione Occlumency," he answered.
"Excellent idea, Harry," Shacklebolt said as he acknowledged Potter with a smile.
Snape grimaced. Of course he would have to teach her Occlumency! Way to state the obvious, Potter!
"Mr. Potter, I intend to do as much," Severus answered in a tone just barely perceivable as scathing. "However, I am surprised that such a suggestion has come from you. I seem to recall you thought me to be rather remiss in teaching you Occlumency?"
"Er, I... well..." Potter began.
Hermione spoke up, "Please, let's not get off-track here. Professor, I am sure you will teach this well, just as you do everything else." Weasley raised his brows at Potter. It was obvious to Severus that these two galling boys definitely disagreed with Hermione on that point. They looked as though they were trying not to laugh. Severus sneered.
Shacklebolt spoke, "Yes, Hermione is right. Let's get this all settled then. Severus, you must immediately begin teaching Hermione Occlumency. You must also show her how to brew the Azkaban potions...the necessity of which is unquestionable."
Hermione caught Severus' darkening eyes. She frowned and asked, "Why must he...?" She trailed off when she saw Severus shake his head at her.
Shacklebolt answered the unfinished question. "Hermione, the Ministry thinks it unwise for only one person to know how to brew the potions. You are well-placed and uniquely qualified to be their second brewer. You are a Potions apprentice for one. Not to mention that they trust you implicitly as you are a friend of the 'Savior of the Wizarding World'..." Severus and Harry both rolled their eyes. "...and because of your effort in the war. It's not as if they could simply recruit any decent potion-maker to take on such a serious job. They might be entrusting their lives to someone dangerous for all they could know."
Hermione nodded and said, "Oh, I see. Okay." Yet, when she looked at Severus again, he could tell she knew there was more to it. Hermione is way too curious sometimes! I really hope she does not pry...
"Well, I believe we are finished here now." Shacklebolt stood and walked around his desk. "Hermione, take care, dear. Rest assured we will work tirelessly to find this man." She nodded in response.
"Harry, Ron, Severus," he acknowledged them all in farewell. "I must go and put that spin on the new article about Azkaban security. You all have a good evening." Shacklebolt left the room.
Potter stood up and said, "Hermione, I think it would be a good idea if I see you home safely. Unless you'd rather Ron...?"
Weasley piped in, "Yeah! I'll do it..."
But Hermione shook her head, "Sorry, Ron, but I need to talk to Harry anyway."
The redhead whined, "I think we need to talk some more. I haven't been able to talk to you for..."
"Mr. Weasley," Severus cut in smoothly, "I think your friend deserves some rest after today's events, wouldn't you agree?"
Weasley glared at him but said, "Yes, she does, sir." He turned to Hermione and said, "Sleep well, and Floo-call me tomorrow so I can hear how you're doing, yeah?"
"Sure, Ron," she replied.
Weasley, now obviously uncomfortable, said shiftily, "Well, I'll just go then. Goodnight to you all." He turned and left the room.
Potter turned to Hermione, "Is he still hoping you two get back together or something?"
With a quick, wide-eyed glance at Severus, Hermione exclaimed, "No! We're just going to try being friends again!"
Severus felt an entire sequence of emotions wash through him in swift waves from when Potter had voiced his question. First was fear, and then came jealousy. Then there had been a fleeting, self-chastising thought about knowing this would all be too good to be true. With Hermione's reply came relief, joy, and as an afterthought... annoyance.
"Well, that's good! So, are you ready to go then?" Potter asked her.
Severus answered for her, "Mr. Potter, I must speak with Hermione for a moment before she leaves."
"Yes, Harry, will you give me just a minute?" Hermione chimed in. "We need to discuss how we are going to fit these lessons in on top of those for my apprenticeship."
"Sure. I'm going to catch up to Ron real quick before he Floos out... see what's got him tied up in a knot. Meet me down by the lifts when you're ready to go, okay?" Potter saw Hermione nod in affirmation, and he turned and exited the room after briefly nodding in Severus' general direction.
Finally, Severus could do that which he had been desperate to since he had arrived. He pulled Hermione into his arms. She buried into his chest, and he rested his cheek on the top of her head.
"Hermione," Severus breathed. His hand ran slow circles over her back. "Tell me truly, are you quite all right?" Somehow he should have been able to prevent this.
Hermione's arms encircled his waist, and she hugged him to her more tightly. After a few moments she said, "I did not realize when I signed on to become the new Potions professor that it would become such a dangerous job."
Severus brushed aside a loose strand of her hair that had been plastered to her cheek. He chuckled softly. "Well, it has always been a precarious position. Children blowing up cauldrons of potent and perilous potions being a daily hazard..."
She smiled up at him. "You never really enjoyed teaching Potions, did you?"
"I have enjoyed teaching you in these last weeks, but otherwise, no. Now, the art of potion-making will forever be an affection of mine, certainly. However, you are more than welcome to the teaching of it to unskilled and unappreciative children."
"It won't be as bad as all that," she said, her eyes glinting with humor.
Severus' throat tightened at the sight. "Hermione," he whispered, his voice rich with emotion, "you cannot know how relieved I am that you were not more seriously hurt today."
"Thank you, Severus," she said, clasping her hands to his and entwining their fingers. "So am I. Though, everything will be fine. It sounds as if we have a good plan for security. We can carry on as we were." She paused for a moment in thought, then asked, "Severus, what kind of arrangement do you have with the Ministry?"
He sighed deeply, releasing her hands and hugging her to him once again. He spoke softly into her ear, "I would prefer not delve into those matters right now. We can not afford the time with Potter awaiting you at the moment. And I must insist you go home and ensure you get sufficient rest tonight."
"I suppose you shall endeavor to explain it to me at a more opportune time?" teased Hermione dryly.
Severus sighed. "I suppose I am building up quite a number of matters in which I have acceded to elaborate on in later discourse." He smirked. "Then again, perhaps that is only due to your propensity to ask an inordinate amount of questions."
She huffed at him though he was smiling at her. Hermione was about to retort in kind, but Severus ran his thumb gently across her lips. She immediately quieted as he leaned down to kiss her.
Hermione never stayed silent for long, Severus noted with amusement as she let out a soft moan when their lips began to move together. He kissed her gently, savoring her, sharing with her his relief.
It is entirely regrettable that Hermione's next lesson is not until Thursday! Severus thought at they finished the kiss and gazed upon each other.
Hermione whined softly, "I do not want to wait three more days until I see you again!"
Severus let out a small laugh. "I do not intend to let that happen. I would suggest that you come up to the school tomorrow, and we can..."
"Start Occlumency lessons?" she provided. Then, with a smirk and sparkling eyes, she put forth, "Or perhaps discuss you and the Ministry?"
Severus responded with a hard stare that was supposed to be reproachful but was somewhat undermined by the amusement in his eyes. "Yes to Occlumency. However, I thought perhaps we could finally have that literature discussion..." he said with mirth, raising his brows suggestively.
"You, Severus, are devious!" she exclaimed in playful reprimand. He laughed, and Hermione kissed him briefly to shush him. She added, "You are not able to deceive me. I know you are just trying to divert my attention from asking you questions by offering me instead what you know I find inescapably appealing!"
Hermione kissed his smirking lips again. "Okay, I'll play your game, but in all seriousness, I hope you know that you can talk to me about anything."
"You are exceptional, Hermione," Severus offered, giving her a kiss of his own. He led her to the door, saying, "Let's get you down to the lifts before Potter wonders what has been keeping you."
Hermione and Harry Flooed from the Ministry to her flat. She would now hear what Harry had needed to talk about. And tomorrow, she would get Severus to talk to her!
A/N: Sorry to make you wait yet another chapter to find out what's bothering Harry. It just didn't quite fit at the end of this one. More soon!
The passage Severus reads from his book is, indeed, attributed to William Shakespeare.
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I love your story. Any chance of you finishing it?
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
You are in good timing! I happen to be working on the next chapter finally! Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it so far!
Wonderful! I asked for mystery and suspense and you give in spades! So many threads I want to follow. Very good, Thank you
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Thank you kindly! The next chapter is in the works....
I wonder if Severus has figured out a way to save Draco?
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
In chapter 10 where we see Draco, Severus was feeling hopeless about the matter. He'd already tried the legal ways, as we see with Scrimgour's comment about Severus needing to stop defending his Death Eater pals. Will he resort to other means? Who (or whom) is it that the mysterious person wanting to break into Azkaban wants to free? Hmmm... More soon!
very seductive potion making LOLI'm glad the Ron nonsense is out of the way :)
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
I could totally see Hermione going overboard in her praising. Kinda funny that - her shpewing off at the mouth about how great the man in front of her is. I'm surprised Snape put up with it as long as he did. A true Slytherin I guess eh? Not going to stop her from pronouncing his greatness. LOL
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Yes, Snape was very curious, especially has he would have never expected Hermione to have the initiative to commit to something at which being successful requirest more than book knowledge.
As for Hermione, this is her chance to convince Snape to really work with her, to set a higher tone to the working relationship than the expected reluctance and annoyance he would most likely have had instead.Yes, a true Slytherin… letting the Gryffindor chatterbox go on and on while he listens, ascertains, and craftily calculates what to do with the influx of information. =)
Too bad she surprises him so much that he is too confused to be conniving!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Yes, Snape was very curious, especially has he would have never expected Hermione to have the initiative to commit to something at which being successful requirest more than book knowledge.
As for Hermione, this is her chance to convince Snape to really work with her, to set a higher tone to the working relationship than the expected reluctance and annoyance he would most likely have had instead.Yes, a true Slytherin… letting the Gryffindor chatterbox go on and on while he listens, ascertains, and craftily calculates what to do with the influx of information. =)
Too bad she surprises him so much that he is too confused to be conniving!
So Hermione and Sev both got a surprise at the meeting. And McGonagall expects them to spend a lot of time together before the school year starts - hmmm... wonder how they'll pass the time :)
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Oh, they will have to spend quite a bit of time together this summer! Passing the time… everything from angsty arguments to educational enlightenment to discovering their desire to sensual se— Oh, wait— shouldn't give it all away just yet!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Oh, they will have to spend quite a bit of time together this summer! Passing the time… everything from angsty arguments to educational enlightenment to discovering their desire to sensual se— Oh, wait— shouldn't give it all away just yet!
I'm glad I finally got around to reading this update - was well worth it! Strong stuff - I felt really sorry for Severus during the Pensieve sequence.
It will definitely take some work for him and Hermione to start understanding each other properly.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Hi
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
! I'm glad you liked this chapter. I felt sorry for Severus too (and for just about everyone in that scene, excluding, of course, Bellatrix Lestrangeheh)!
They both will have to reach for understanding. Their intense attraction to each other has brought them together, but they are both a bit clueless about how to have a relationship with each other.
So, now what? I hope you stick with me to find out =) Thanks for the review!
Response from Mint Stick (Reviewer)
I will certainly plan to stick around and read on! Have just had a bit of a busy time lately, so the update notification was sitting in my inbox, looking at me pleadingly every day, until I finally had time to catch up. ;-)
Fabulous story - cannot wait for more- keep us the great work
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Hi there! I'm glad to hear you are enjoying the story. The next chapter is in queue, so it shouldn't be long!
It doesn't seem like Ron is only wanting to stay friends. Tough! I don't think Hermione would want him back, now that she has someone much better. ;-)
I'm looking forward to seeing what Harry wants to talk to Hermione about.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
HehRon Weasley or Sexy, Dark, Delicious, Severus Snape? Decisions! Decisions! =)
I'm glad your looking forward to the next updateit shouldn't be too long in coming.
Thanks for reviewing!
It's pretty creepy how some fast bad guys found out about the change in security at Azkaban and that Hermione was involved. Ron remains a whiner and I wonder what Harry needs to speak with Hermione about.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
The answers will be on their way soon! Thanks for the review!
Ugh!!! You've piqued my interest, now. You can't stop here!!! Seriously, though, you are doing a wonderful job, SLU. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
I can't stop here? But . . . but that was the end! =) Just kidding, more will be on the way soon. Thank you for the compliment!
Nice chapter, I can see you are building tention up for a big scene.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Hehjust you wait! Tension and general angst have made their way into this story already, but they will most certainly step in for another appearance or two or . . .
=) Thanks for the review!
Hi, SLU. I love the flame idea for Azkaban! It's brilliant and I've never heard of such a scenario used in a fic like this before. All of the post-Voldemort ideas I've read, many of which are extremely far-fetched, and you've discovered an answer straight from canon! Brilliant. Can't wait to read the rest! BTW, in case you don't recognize the penname, you know me as Cyn. Great work, SLU.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Hey there, Cyn! Thanks for the feedback about the flame idea. It's good to hear it =) Thank you kindly!
I am really enjoying this story. It's not merely a 'Snape and Granger fall in love' tale, but has some more plot to it, which I appreciate. Thanks for sharing this!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
I am so glad that you find the story enjoyable! Thank you for taking the time to tell me. It's truly appreciated =)
Ah, Ron needs to have his head smacked about. And keeping all those secrets is not good for Severus and Hermione. Good chapter.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Not feeling the love for Ron, hmm? LOL! Perhaps Severus wouldn't mind helping you out with that one =)
Yes, Hermione and Severus are in a precarious position with the secret they keep in regards to Azkabanbut also with the things that go unsaid between the two of themas we shall see.
Thank you!
It seems they have a good plan in place. I think Harry knows there's something more going on between Severus and Hermione. I wonder what Ron's problem is though. I think Harry was right and that Ron is hoping that Hermione will go back to him. Perhaps he thinks it can be accomplished by playing the hero. Too bad for him that Hermione has a dark knight to protect her now.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Harry is concerned about Hermione's well-being, and he still has many of the same feelings towards Snape that he had in canon. He misjudges his actions and views them with suspicion. Mostly, he just wants to ensure that he doesn't harass his friend, so he will be keeping a keen eye on him, yes!
LOL, yes, Hermione has her dark (and delicious!) knight who will, most certainly, be protective of her =)
Thank you kindly for reviewing!
Your characterizations are just so delectible, I find myself hard pressed to resist the urge to squee after every other chapter. Or, at least after this one. Thank you so much for writing, and I look forward to further updates!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Thank you! What a kind compliment! Thank you for reading and reviewing! More will be along soon!
I just found your story today and read all nine chapters. I'm eagerly awaiting the next one!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Wow, I'm glad you found it captivating enough to sit and read all the way through! Thanks, and more will be coming shortly!
Wow, that was a very hot kiss. Great job so far I like what you have done for plot. Thanks for taking the time to write for us readers.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
I'm glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for taking the time to review for us writers =) The next chapter is with my beta, and it should be up shortly!
Hermione and Severus seem to have some kind of magical connection beyond attraction and compatibility. Thank goodness Hermione made the first move and had been dropping heavy hints. I'm so glad Severus turned around. It was a very passionate scene.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
That was so sweet!I think I'm going to ignore Albus' advice and fantasise about this for the rest of my life!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Yeah, sometimes, for really good things (like a hot romance with Snape), you don't need to be in front of the Mirror of Erised in order to fantasize continuously =)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from vdemon_96 (Reviewer)
Thanks for writing that... masterpiece!I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Wow! What a great compliment, thanks! The next chapter should be up soon =)
Response from vdemon_96 (Reviewer)
Good!! Can't wait. =]
Oh, I am so happy you had Severus turn around and go back to Hermione!!! It is about time he allowed him self to think that he migth be loved, to know that he is someone special for one person. As Hermione deserves to have the perfect man for her (which will never, ever be Ron Weasley). I absolutely loved this chapter!!! Now you just have to make them and their relationship strong enough to take the storm comming from Harry, Ron and the other Weasleys when they find out who Hermione is in love with. Update again soon!!!!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
I'm glad you loved this chapter. These two really deserve each other. In my opinion, even in canon they are the perfect match for each other =) However, the coming storm is full of more wrath than Harry, Ron, and co. could ever muster!
I just don't know if I can make their relationship strong enough to weather it
. . . ::grin:: Thanks for reviewing!
oh come on! That can't be the end...lol!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
LOL =) More to come soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Wow! Very intense!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Yes, nice and steamy down in the Potions lab! Thanks for the review!
Oh, that was a very hot set of kisses. I loved that.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Thanks! I know they made me wish I had a Severus Snape of my own!