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Desire and Deception
SeverusLovesUs83 Reviews | 6.61/10 (83 Ratings, 0 Likes, 76 Favorites )
The war is over, and Snape is now a war hero with plenty of fame, admirers, and adoring witches. Yet, none of that fulfills his real desires. Can the wizarding world ever truly accept Severus Snape?
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awwww how sweet.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Oh, yes . . . a nice, sweet beginning, but I wonder if they can sustain that? Hmmm. We'll see . . . Thanks for your review!
Awwww, that was so romantic!! I thought one or both of them would start crying for a moment there. I can't imagine anything angsty happening to them, though. We almost had an angsty moment in this chapter, but thankfully Severus prevented that by going back to Hermione. I can't wait to read more!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Yes, these two definitly have chemistry together. Yet, they still need to build a foundation, or else that desire might turn into desperationwhich may lead to some angsty situations . . . Thanks for reading and reviewing =)
I thought it was really cool that Hermione and Severus saw the same thing in the Mirror or Erised. I was definitely a bit shocked by Severus' behavior in this last chapter, but I felt better knowing why he acted like that. I'm glad Hermione didn't put up with it. I also don't like Professor Fletchley all that much. I have the feeling she's going to try to hit on Severus again. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Yeah, sorry about Severus' attitude. I think he really needed to flush that out of his system for good! Professor Fletchley is just another one of Snape's adoring female fansbut one who has greater access to Snape! Things get much better for them in the next chapter, so stay tuned (although I must warn you that angst still has a place in this story . . .)! Thanks for the review =)
Silly Severus! I hope he remembers to stay a bit more relaxed again now in Hermione's company. Looking forward to the next part!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Me too! Severus' behavior definitely improves! Thanks for reading and commenting!
They are working at such cross purposes. Very good chapter.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Thank you =) I think these two will need to stop trying to control the situation and just let their desire take over . . . The next chapter will be up soon!
Snape in the Mirror of Desire! (or Erised) xD
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
That he was! Thanks for reading!
Poor Sev and Herms! They want, they're afraid to want, they desore and they long. *sigh* What utter nonsense are we humans! LOL
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Oh, I know! Life is often wasted depriving ourselves of what we want just because we are afraid to go after it. I think it's about time Severus learns this lesson because he deserves to finally get what he wants =)
That restraint certainly didn't last for too long. This should be interesting, indeed.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
=)Indeed, it should be for our desire-struck duo. I hope it continues to interest you as well! Thanks for reviewing!
PLease update!!!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
I will! I am working on the next chapter now =)
I'm thoroughly enjoying this story. It's good to know you plan to continue it no matter what DH will bring!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Thanks! I hope you will continue to enjoy it . . .
Oh happy day, it's on PP too! Ashwinder, while well meaning, queues forever and a day! Loved this chapter, you captured perfectly how important first name basis is in that kind of relationship. Ron desperately needs to get over it and move on, but kudos to Harry for admitting he was wrong to send howlers. Thank you for sticking with this story, I'm hooked. Brilliant writing!
Response from rhettsmom (Reviewer)
now why in the heck did it put this on chapter one??? Oh well, I was refering to chapter five. -Rm
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Yeah, Ashwinder seems to take a day or two longer. I think PP moved the queue along pretty quickly on this one though. I think Ron's going to need some time, but he will eventually realize the same thing Hermione did~that they should only be friends. We'll eventually get to their resolution, but first I'd like to see Hermione and Snape realize each other's desire for the other! I'm getting impatient for that! LOL! Thanks for your kind review =)
ron should have every right to not want to be friends with hermione again after leading him on for a yr. hermione should have atleast known after a few months that she was not in love with ron and that all she was realy feeling was friendship. in a way hermione was lieing to herself and hurting ron and her along the way. to not hurt harry both hermione and ron should be able to be in the same and only to talk to each for harry. not a bad story so far with the release of dh it should just be like what he all did with hbp make it how we want it to come with hermione and severus toghter.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
A lot of times teenagers will "think" they are in love, only to learn much too late that they haven't experience "real" love (*AHEM* Enter Severus Snape). They had the joy of finally being together after their years of drama, combined with hormones, and of course, they genuinely care for eachother. In the end, though, they will always love each other, but they won't be in love. (At least in my story. In canon, I have to accept that Ron's the best man for her since there's no chance in hell it's going to be Snape-HA!) So, I'll just indulge in a little fun fantasy here: bringing this pair together. Thanks for the review, and I hope you continue to enjoy the story!
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
that new charms teacher needs to keep her hands off of severus
I love the way you are drawing us into your story.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Why thanks. I am glad you are getting hooked. Keep reading, hopefully it continues to please. Thanks for your comment!
I'm glad you won't abandon it. I hope the Weasleys get over themselves soon. Sigh.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
I know, angst and drama is so uncomfortable. I think, in the end, they will sort everything out, but I have to make them a little more uncomfortable first =( At least Hermione will have Snape to properly distract her =) Thanks for the review!
You need to update!!!!! I'm quite literally on the edge of my seat!!!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
It should be up within a few days. It's with my beta now. I am glad you are enjoying it!
loved it, can't wait till part 2 is out .
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
It's at the front of the queue so hopefully it will not be long =) Thanks!
Not bad, not bad at all.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Thanks. This is my first fic so I hope it turns out ok!
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
I know how you feel, I recently posted my first fiction. I was scared to death!
Ooooo! Can't wait to see more of where this is going to be heading! Great story! Keep up the good work!!!! :D
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. The next chapter is in queue and will hopefully be up shortly!
This story sounds great so far; I look foward to more awesome-ness in the future :o)Thanks for the story,Sue.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Thanks for reading and reveiwing. Chapter 2 should be posted any time now and I hope you continue to enjoy the story =)
Love this story!
Feel so bad for Hermione and Severus (as a couple) and Severus and Draco (as a family) after this chapter.
I'm assuming that Severus had Harry cast the spell on Draco because he couldn't bear to condem probably the one person he loved (at that time anyway) to that fate, which is probably why he taunted Harry with: “Save it, Potter!” Severus said shortly. “We both know that you can only do anything if you are first goaded into it.” and why Draco tried to put up the brave facade. Severus knew he couldn't do it, and he was warning Draco to help him 'coax' the needed emotions out of Harry to get him to be able to cast the spell correctly. I'm also guessing that Severus' promise to Lucius was to find a way to help Draco, and that's why Lucius was so calm: as long as his son would be okay, it didn't matter what would be happening to him.
Hopefully Severus will be willing to break down some of his walls, and Hermione will stick around long enough to...reap the rewards!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Hi, Aura! Thank you, I'm glad to hear you are enjoying the story!
You're right. Draco is someone Severus loves. We do not see anyone on the receiving end of Snape's love in canon, except when we find out about Lily. Snape loves fiercely and thoroughly. In this story, Draco is important to him, and no, I do not think he could have cast the fire over his cell. Draco's actions were very real, however. He is close enough to Severus to show his fear and ask for help, but he would not do that in front of Harry. But also, Severus honestly told him there was probably nothing else he could do for Draco. Severus did not want Draco to give up hope, but the realization of the hopelessness of the situation still affected Draco and managed to resign him to despair.
Severus and Hermione both have some things to work on, definitely. They desire each other intensely, but is it love? I hope you stick with me on the journey to find out.
Thanks for the review. I love the emoticons. I did not realize there were so many. I like this one: It is *so* Snape!
Harry comes across as such an immature whiner. Is he really qualified for the Ministry position he has been given? What kind of lover is Hermione that she would attack Severus before asking for his side of the story. She has some growing up to do. Being in prison now really will seem like hell.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Hi,
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
! Yes, Harry thought he would be able to secure Azkaban just fine. He did at first, getting a little overexcited when it was Bellatrix's turn! =) Soon, however, his emotions took over. Without going in to too much detail, the Ministry was really ruthless at the postwar trials, and there are perhaps, some prisoners in there who do not deserve to be. I'll be exploring Harry's feelings a bit more in this story. I see him as thinking that happiness would be had once Voldemort was defeated but finding that it isn't so easy to adjust to life postwar. He tries to hang on to whatever has made him happy in the past, not liking when those things change because he has lost so much. He has a bit of struggling to do.
Hermione definitely let her temper get the better of her. She heard Harry's story and saw how upset he was. Hermione's a good friend and believed Harry. And while Harry did not lie, Hermione did not think there could be more to the picture than the bit that Harry painted for her. This will be a lesson learned for her.
Yes, the mention of Azkaban will still send shivers down people's backs. Hellacious.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Severus really needs to have a bit more self esteem. I enjoyed that chapter.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Thanks,
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
! Yes, Severus is very confused. He knows Hermione desires him, which he would disfavor the same way he does with his fangirls, except that he desires her back. Hopefully she will be able to convince him of just how great he is =)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
I love the spell you created, you also did a great job illustrating the difference between Severus and Hermione as adults. Very impressive chapter!
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Thank you, Sinbad! Yes, as good of a match that we know these two are, she is still very young. They will have to learn more about each other in order to be able to relate better. Thank you for your review!
please finish the story.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Thank you! It won't be too much longer. Work on the next chapter has finally begun! =)
I just finish reading all the chapters and I really love this story. You've been doing a great job. Keep on trucking lolz.
Response from SeverusLovesUs (Author of Desire and Deception)
Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy the story =)