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The Water Demons
beaweasley212 Reviews | 7.92/10 (12 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )
The Weasley twins are very clever practical jokers, masters of mischief and mayhem, staunch adversaries of authority, pretension, and known to be disrespectful to teachers in general. Is it any wonder that they took on Umbridge?
So what happens when a fellow student turns to Fred and George, asking for help in getting even with Umbridge? How far will they go in pestering and teasing her, flaunting their wicked sense of humor and inventiveness, and blatant shenanigans? And why would she be gullible enough to go along?
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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company.
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Reviews for The Water Demons
I read the entire story in one sitting. It was just too good to not finish! I loved it. How cute. :)But it's sad to think that in a few months he dies according to canon. *sniff*I loved her lynx form and the awkward teenage flirting. I remember it all too well. I'd forgotten, but remembered how it had been while reading your story. Thanks for the fun!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Water Demons)
Wow, but I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. I know, but that is the true tragedy of war. I cried when she killed off Fred and Dobby - man, I wept for Dobby. I'm gld you liked the lynx and the awkward teenage stuff. That was what was so much fun in writting this, remembering it all. Thank you so much for reading it and for the review. Hugs~
excellent story. I don't usually read weasley fics - i like snape as my romantic lead. However it sounded interesting and was very well written. I loved revisting 5th year again. All of the pranks were great. thanks for writing!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Water Demons)
Thank you for giving my story a try. I'm really very glad you took the time and appreciate your kind comment very much.
this is an awesome story! i really like it!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Water Demons)
Thank you very much.
**headdesk*** gaahhh. I've been waiting for the next chapter! I was so pleased to see it. oh Lord.... Fred... I keep thinking that he rides a broom and swings a club... what MUST that young, lean body look like??? Well, while I go take my cold shower, carry on!! Thanks for the update! Lots of good stuff there!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Water Demons)
Thank you for the review.I figured that since Bludgers are iron and that iron is really heavy - strong arms. I assumed that riding a broom like they must have to is simular to riding dirt bikes and horses. Playing a Beater would be the equivalence to cricket, polo or hocky on dirt bikes/broomsticks. Definitely atheltic.
More,please!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Water Demons)
It's coming - I assure you.
one cant help but love these two. keep them going!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Water Demons)
I'm more than happy to. Thank you.
Thank you for doing a twin story! I have recently become very besotted with Fred & George and there just isn't much out there about them as romances. I really enjoy that you caught their humor and wit! I'm enjoying this quite a bit.But I guess I will say that I'm not sure I'm enjoying as much of the details of how they create the spells and all the elements as much as just the story and enteraction between the characters. It tends to run a bit dry. And also, why does Dylan have to be so shocked and flustered at the suggestive bantering that the twins use on her? It seems that she likes them. But her continued response of "open mouth shock" goes against her brave character. I'd like to see her match them on some issues!Please forgive my critique. I AM enjoying this a lot and look forward to another chapter!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Water Demons)
Thank you for the review. I love the banter and wit the twins have with each other, but I also gave them a serious side to their personalities for when they are planning. Can't be joking it up twenty-four seven, can they? As for Dylan, I have portayed her as being naive in relationships with guys. Fred is her second relationship - the first floundered becasue Dylan introverted. Dylan's characterization is based around her Animagi form - solitary, quiet, perfers to be unnoticed and seeks hideouts around the castle rather than crowded areas. She is bookish, smart - but shy and is drawn out of her solitary ways by her friends. However, when alone she is her lynx personality. Look up the Eursian Lynx and you'll read my "personality traits" are taken from the animals descrition. Fred and George actually open her up - bring her out, especially Fred. In a sense, Dylan is opposite in many ways to the twins. Dylan tries to take the twins seriously, and their innuendos ruffle her. I don't think Dylan sees herself as atractive. Sorry for the long reply. I hope this helps understand her better.
I loved it!!!!... great story!!!
and in my wordl... Fred just can't die... =P
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Water Demons)
Thank you. I'm very glad.I cried at that part in DH... So in my Potterverse - he get's a second reprieve!
This followed the book so well ah...But what will she DO when Fred dies???It's such a tragedy!:(I loved it!~
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Water Demons)
Thank you - I really tried to be consistent with the book and be as close to canon as I could. That was part of the fun.I have a new challenge story I'm writing - your question will be written there....
Wait, this story cant end yet! (panics) George hasn't got a girl! What antics will he have to get into? Who will he end up with? I sure hope he will get his girl,too.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Water Demons)
One never knows with these two.... So unless I decide to type a sequel... yes, this story ends here. Sorry.
gaahahhahahahhhh..... Can't help but just want to stay in that "happy place" with Fred wrapping his arms around her, nuzzling her neck and trying to get her into the bath. Ohh and the snogging... It's all good stuff!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Water Demons)
Thanks. I gets steamier - I promice. The next chapt is with my beta.
Nice beginning. I like the fact that we are 'seeing' the work behind the instant 'bog' from HBP. Good work.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Water Demons)
Thank you. The work behind the Swamp is the excuse that brings them together.