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Resurgam
ayerf174 Reviews | 8.19/10 (174 Ratings, 0 Likes, 71 Favorites )
Darkness never dies. Sequel to Redivivus.
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Jumped on the Harry Potter bandwagon in 2000 (when Goblet of Fire was out in hardback). Prisoner of Azkaban is my favourite in the series, followed by Order of the Phoenix. I read and write in the SS/HG corner of the Potterverse.
Reviews for Resurgam
The mystery is nail-biting. I can't wait to see where this goes.
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
Thanks! That's great to know.
The next chapter will be out late Wednesday/early Thursday, GMT.
Great job of introducing more intrigues in this chapter. I hope Tonks and her furry boyfriend are ok.
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
Thanks! As for Tonks, you'll have to wait and see. Her furry boyfriend's fine, but then he didn't accompany her to confront a certain Dark Lord.
Oh no. the re-animated Voldy CANNOT be good, not at all. *gibbers in terror*
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
It doesn't look like good news... but maybe, just maybe, it's a red herring? Would I do that to my poor readers?
She stole the Weasleys' bodies except Ginny's? That's ... peculiar. Hmm. And what's Moody got up his sleeve. Probably plans to disobey Dumbledore's orders about killing Atropos. But why wouldn't Lupin tell anyone? Looking forward to the next installment!
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
Ahh, but the thing about Ginny is that there's no body to steal, without expending more effort than Atropos wanted to, there being nothing left of poor Ginny but ash after being touched by that atomising spark.
Lupin is all too good at staying quiet, as he proved in PoA. Maybe Moody has some dirt on him to blackmail him with... whatever the case, something dodgy is going on!
Response from firefly124 (Reviewer)
Ah, ok. I thought it might have had something to do with her having been possessed by Voldie before, instead, which would seem to make her more valuable rather than less. Sometimes I think too much. :)
Good point about Lupin. You'd think he'd learn though! Definitely dodgy.
This story is just getting more and more interesting. I'm really enjoying it.
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
Thanks! It's good to know that you are... I just hope I can keep it interesting.
Okay, I cheated. I was supposed to save this for "dessert" after I got some other things done, but I couldn't wait. This was an excellent chapter. Great tension between them all at Grimmauld Place. I had forgotten Hermione didn't know about the Weasleys yet! I'm glad Albus is willing to wait for a bit more info, because I have a feeling that he is right and there is more we don't know about Atropos. And what an ending! I'm trying to figure out how to express my thoughts about the dynamic between them while they're having sex and Severus "reading her the riot act" earlier, but I'm not quite finding the words, other than to say he does seem to be in a place of not quite realizing it's not all about him and how he feels about what happens to Hermione, and perhaps waking up to that a bit. And I like that quite a lot.
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
Thank you for such a long review!
Hermione must have been the last to know of the poor Weasleys. Ironic after she was initially the prime suspect!
Albus may well be right about there being more to know of Atropos...
Glad you like the end! It's difficult even for me to describe the undercurrent in that bit, and I wrote it. Severus does have a right to be angry and overprotective, but at the same time he probably knows that he's being selfish. It sounds kinda clumsy when I put it like that for some reason!
Response from firefly124 (Reviewer)
I think it's the sort of thing that is going to sound clumsy said straight out, which is why it works so much better as the scene you used to evoke it.
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
Thanks! Come to think of it, Severus was a little clumsy in that scene when it came to the sex...
Ooo, interesting chapter ending. I wonder what will Severus do
I like your Albus in this story, which I think is closer to the JKR Albus. He's a general, but he tries to maintain his morals unless pushed into a corner.
I'm relieved that you've finally confirmed the other Necromancer's identity, not that you haven't done a lot of hinting before. Now I just have to wait for the rest of the story to unfold.
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
I wonder...
Thanks! Moody is doing his best to push him into the corner, too. Just as well Albus has backbone.
Atropos's identity is not the only twist in this tale, but as you know my writing, you doubtless already guessed that.
That was a good chapter.
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
Thanks! It certainly took long enough to write. Anything in particular that made it good to you?
Response from blue artemis (Reviewer)
The details. The way Hermione stopped Moody by touching him. The fact that McGonnagal said only a witch would notice the lines around the eyes. The fact that Ron said Hermione would never murder his family.
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
I'll try to keep details like that coming, then!
Atropos is the aftereffect of drinking the soul-puryfying potion. Dark part of Hermione escaped and somhow mingled with her boggart making very something really bad.
Both stories are wonderful and I can't wait for the rest of this one.
Fresh transport of Old Ogdens for You for making Hermione REALLY powerful - it's rare.
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
Thanks! I'm working on the next two chapters, which should be finished soon, although after that there's still the betaing process. Expect more at some point next month, likely before the release of Deathly Hallows.
That's a good theory you've got there... not the one I'm following, but a good one all the same.
Response from Bawetta (Reviewer)
Thanks. The theory is based on the fact, that "bad Hermione" had to be created before "good Hermione's" death and the boggart being corporeal and really hurting Granger.
But now I'll think about something else.
Hmmm...now I'm wondering if Hermione somehow inadvertently created a Horcrux of herself that found its way with some of her dust from when she was atomized...can't wait to find out!
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
A Horcrux? Hmm, now that's a very good idea... she did kill before she died, after all...
Super chapter! Just can't get enough of this! That's our Hermione for sure, struggling to save everyone that she can!~HR
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
Thanks! I'm glad to hear that. Yup, that's what Hermione does... while the, er, other Hermione seems to kill whenever she can.
Very worried. Hermione seems to be the only one with sufficient power to stop Ats. doesn't even sound if Dumbledore can stop her now if he tried; he couldn't get the Hogwarts wards to hold. *shivers* They (Herms and Ats) seem to be one and the same; but Hermione has one thing that she doesn't--love and a loving husband in Severus. *crosses fingers and hopes for best*
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
You should be worried! Particularly since Hermione is still lacking some of her powers... and can't hurt Atropos without hurting herself.
If Dumbledore was still in his prime, he'd be able to stop her, but he is 150-ish years old.
I wonder what would happen if Atropos was to take that one thing away from Hermione...
Oh poo this is the 2nd story this week that Hogwarts bites the dust. I hope this has a happier ending. Good story so far.
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
Poor Hogwarts! I more or less made it bite the dust twice, too, by retelling some of the events of the previous chapter from another POV.
A happier ending? Well, happier than Redivivus, anyway.
Just hope I can keep this a good story all the way through!
Bizarro Hermione? That was an interesting chapter.
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
Thanks! Now the challenge is to keep the other chapters interesting too.
Damn, so it really is her? From some alternate universe, perhaps? Hmmm. At least she survived the collapse of Hogwarts! I love how you brought the critters into it. ::offers your plot bunny carrots and chocolate::
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
Yup, Atropos does look exactly like Hermione for a reason... but I'm still not letting on exactly why!
Hogwarts wouldn't be the same without the critters, as I'm sure that Hagrid would agree.
The plot bunny seems to like carrots and chocolate... along with fingers, so be careful.
You answered one question, but brought up more questions too. Nice to see Fawkes having his moment. As always I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
That's my speciality! For every answer there's at least one more question.
I thought Fawkes deserved some action after just sitting pretty in Redivivus.
As yet, I haven't started on the next chapter, but I'm setting bait for any helpful plot bunnies... my plot is, for the moment, rather threadbare for that part.
*blinks* NNOOO!!!!
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
That was rather evil of me. Sorry!
Response from Sorceress_Sarah (Reviewer)
It was very evil! You'd better try to update soon!
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
I'm writing the next chapter! It's the betaing that takes the most time, really, but I think it's worth the wait for it.
Response from Sorceress_Sarah (Reviewer)
What d'you think to a since before christmas wait... Oops... I'm co-writer of Pride & Prejudice at Hogwarts, and unfortunately due to our bad grammar and not managing to keep a beta, it's been a long while since we put up chapter 1... We can't seem to get chapter 2 up. It's really annoying... But I guess it can't be helped...
Ok, that gave me the chills. I can't wait to see more.
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
That must mean that I'm doing something right! I hope to post more by the end of the month.
Wow!
You keep making each chapter with more suspense..
waiting for more
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
Thanks! I just hope I can keep it up.
The next chapter is being written, honest!
That was frightening. Poor Severus.
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
I hope I have managed to get across just how scary it is for your average (or even not so average!) wizard to face a Necromancer.
I don't let up on poor Severus at all, do I? In penance, I should write a fluffy fic after this is all over. But I'm not sure that I can pull that off...
That was some chapter! The action was superb, my favorite of all time!
I feel bad for Severus and Co., while I'm worried about Hermione.
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
Thank you! That action was certainly tricky enough to write, so I'm glad that it works for you.
And so you should... (evil cackle)
Happy happy joy joy. I have more to read. this fan fic it getting adittive. Is there a 12 step program ? Now you know I just cant wasit to see what is going to happen next or what happened to Hermine. It is a sham that the Hogwarts is distroyed. Can Hermine fix it. Well waiting for the next update. Thanks. Bill.
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
If there is a Fanficcers Anonymous group, I've never heard of it! I suspect that it'd have millions of members.
I'm working on the next chapter. Hopefully it'll be finished before too long.
Poor old Hogwarts, indeed. Before it can be rebuilt or fixed, there's a certain evil Necromancer at large to deal with...
Oh. frakkin'. sh!t. World War 3 w/witch power, not nuke power. Damn, Atropos is super-evil. OMGOMG. She made Hogwarts disappear and the wards refused to obey Albus?!? *gibbers*
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
Evil could be Atropos's middle name!
Much as she'd like to claim credit for reducing Hogwarts to rubble, it's more to do with her wand... malfunctioning, for lack of a better word. More on that in the next chapter, which is in progress!
If only the Founders had Necromancers in mind when they enchanted the wards!
OMG, this just gets more and more complex. Thought that Narcissa was perhaps Atropos polyjuiced, but that got blown out of the water. Oh, update soon!
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
Thank you! Who Atropos really is will probably be revealed in the next chapter... which is still in progress. I hope to get it finished and posted by the end of the month.
Damn! Who is this Atropos? LOL @ Snape reflecting on Hermione's swottiness in the middle of all that. Little moments like that relieve the overall direness of the events well, I think. Also found myself wanting to shake Harry for his attempt to Accio the Necromancer. Hasn't he learned by now to watch what he says? I can't believe you leveled Hogwarts. Evil cliffie indeed! But I shall patiently await the next installment.
Response from ayerf (Author of Resurgam)
You'll find out who Atropos is in the next chapter, presuming that I don't delay it.
Having a few moments of levity does help lighten the tone, although it may add to the next dose of gloom and doom with the contrast.
Poor stupid Harry. He didn't actually have his wand in hand, but you'd think he'd know about being careful for what you wish for. It was so tempting to include him whining something like 'It's not my fault!' or 'I didn't do it!'
I did wonder if I'd get more adverse reactions from my readers for levelling Hogwarts than I did for killing off most of the Weaselys.
Response from firefly124 (Reviewer)
I did wonder if I'd get more adverse reactions from my readers for levelling Hogwarts than I did for killing off most of the Weaselys.
Damn. You're right. I'm actually kind of embarassed about that, now.