Chapter Ten
Chapter 10 of 17
notsosaintlySolving mysteries one at a time, and taking a step in the right direction.
Author's Note: I've been gently poked by my two betas, ladyofthemasque and Southern_Witch_69, to wake up and write, and as always I listen to them. Thank you, girls!
Disclaimer: My thanks to JK Rowling for having such a splendid imagination and for allowing us to play around with her characters in the fanfiction universe. She gets all the credit for anything you recognize; the plot for this story is entirely mine (though I don't get paid).
Chapter Ten
"I need to let you know that your life is in danger..."
Curses slicing through the fog of a battlefield. Dark, hooded figures with grotesque masks, bone-white, a nightmare come to life. Turning this way and that. Aiming her wand. Voiceless commands. Spells racing to meet their targets.
"...and I believe it might be from the very man who just left your shop."
Fog molding itself, forming images of men, women, Death Eaters ... Mr. Burke. Once benign features transforming into malignant, bone-sharp angles. Lips curled back, a deformed sneer. Her aimed wand shook. Fear froze her throat. Words failed her.
A gnarled stick, producer of spells, aimed at her head. A breath. Mouth forming words meant to injure, to maim ... to kill.
And then ... an arm about her waist, holding her tight, pulling her out of harm's way. The spell skimming past her robes so close she could feel its energy jar her very bones. Sharp words she could not understand...muffled, distorted. Light spinning towards her attacker, traveling quickly, finding its target.
She turned in the arm that still protected her. She was safe. He held her tighter, their bodies joining as one, repelling the evil which surrounded them. Her savior.
She looked up, but the fog was so thick she couldn't see his face. Who was he?
~ o ~
Hermione awoke feeling as though she hadn't slept at all. She had stayed up late, her mind churning over the strange events of the day, unable to fall asleep. When she finally had fallen asleep, dreams plagued her. Strange dreams. Dreams of vague battles where the players were equally vague. Dreams where she was the target, in danger...
The strange, hooded man had told her she was in danger. But from whom? He hadn't seemed to think that it was important to let her know; that she was in danger was enough. "What matters is what you do with the information I've already given you." What was she supposed to do with so little information to go on?
What plagued her thoughts most was that she didn't know who the dark-cloaked man was. She didn't know who Mr. Burke really was either, for that matter, but that didn't seem to bother her as much ... though that did not say much for sorting her priorities. Not having been able to see the dark-cloaked man's face, not having been able to discern anything at all about his identity ... it made him a complete unknown, a mystery. She had always loved mysteries, but this one seemed to be a mystery that needed to be solved, and soon if her life was supposedly in danger. The sooner she knew who he was, the sooner she'd be able to find out who her attacker was.
He had saved her once ... but what if something else were to happen? Considering the multitude of information he had imparted before he had left her the night before...well, how would she know what to be on the lookout for?
His voice had been indiscernible, low, a near-whisper. Still, there had been bass undertones that could not quite be hidden. She assumed that his voice at full volume would be low in range, full-bodied, resonant. The softness of his words was meant to throw her off. He had been hiding his voice. But why? If he had spoken aloud, would she have recognized who he was?
Hermione formed a picture in her mind from what she could recall: He had been tall and not overly heavy, though she couldn't really tell for sure since he was cloaked. Other than that, since they had had no contact, she couldn't even venture a guess as to his stature. His hand...the only part of him she had seen when he had drawn his wand...had been pale, fingers long and thin, and he had held his wand with a certain grace and deftness.
Then there was his limp and the cane he used to aid his step...a black cane with a plain, round, silver head. A wizard having a limp was not unheard of...after the war there were several injuries that couldn't be completely healed by the Healers since dark spells sometimes caused permanent injury...but she did find it strange that she had seen two wizards with a limp in such a short period of time. Thoughts returned of a customer just last week with a similar limp. If it was the same customer who had come to her aid, however, she couldn't fathom why he'd have a reason to cloak himself last night.
Suddenly, she realized she was obsessing over the same exact things she had obsessed over before falling asleep the night before. She really had to stop this, get out of bed, definitely get some coffee...sod it, she shouldn't drink coffee anymore...make that herbal tea.
Mysterious strangers ... odd dreams ... no coffee ... She felt grouchy.
~ o ~
Not fifteen minutes after she had opened the shop, trying to pretend her herbal tea was coffee while reading the latest Daily Prophet, an owl came swooping through the small swing door she had installed for just that purpose. It dropped a thick stack of parchments, which thudded dully on the counter, and looked at her haughtily, apparently awaiting something.
Hermione peered at the topmost parchment, which read:
To: Miss Hermione GrangerOwner: Strega Letteraria
This is to notify you that an offer has been made as per your ad in the Daily Prophet on April 19, 2004. In lieu of a direct purchase of the establishment, Strega Letteraria, my client offers the opportunity to enter into a joint venture agreement in which he would join resources and efforts with you for a span of ten years. During this time, you would be co-owners of said establishment.
The following are the legal papers to set up a joint venture agreement. If you agree to the offer my client has put forth, please sign in the highlighted areas and return by owl at the address provided. If you do not agree to this, please return the forms unsigned.
Yours truly,
Edmund Everhart, Solicitor
Wright, Talbot, and Sharpe LLP
The following page began the legalese, something which she never truly had the mind for, though at least somewhat understood. She skimmed through the myriad pages, wondering who would offer her the opportunity to essentially keep her business. She had never thought of this possibility. Partner with someone for a set period of time, enough to get her feet back on the ground. Perhaps with their combined assets she could finally advertise the bookshop as she had always wanted to, but never had been able to afford. A ray of hope brightened the darkness she had been living in for so long.
She paged through, looking for the highlighted areas in which she needed to sign. There had to be a place somewhere where the other person also needed to sign. She checked off nine areas where she needed to sign and two where she needed to initial ... and finally, at the very end, there was a line with a name printed neatly beneath where the man offering to enter into the joint venture with her had yet to sign.
_________________________
S. Prince
She blinked. That name sounded very familiar. Where had she heard that name before? Prince ... yes, of course. Sixth year. Harry's borrowed Potions textbook. Prince was a name of a somewhat known pureblood family, but the familial line had ended when Eileen Prince had married Tobias Snape and ...It couldn't be. But there was no other explanation. It had to be him. It had to be Severus Snape.
Severus Snape had been a wanted man by the Ministry ever since the death of Albus Dumbledore. When it had come to the Ministry's attention that the ghostly apparition of Professor Dumbledore's ghost had been seen roaming the grounds of Hogwarts, an official had naturally been sent to question him about his murder and the whereabouts of his murderer. The ethereal Dumbledore, much the same as the corporeal Dumbledore, had given a vague, enigmatic answer: "All will be known in due time, my dear sir, in due time."
They hadn't returned until after Voldemort had been defeated, after Ron had insisted to all and sundry that he had either injured or killed Snape. When no body had been found, the Ministry had thought it time to question Dumbledore's ghost yet again. The official whom the Ministry had sent had been relatively new to the job and had offered up with very little prodding from Albus what had supposedly transpired between Ron Weasley and Severus Snape on the battlefield. Professor Dumbledore had affected a serious, concerned mien and had wandered off where no flesh could follow, leaving the poor official in the lurch. As far as Hermione knew, it was still an open case in the Ministry's eyes.
She noticed the owl was still there when it started pecking on her oak counter. It had left a present for her as well ... Damn bird. She tossed it one of Ginny's biscuits and told it that she didn't have an answer yet and it could leave. The bird thankfully took off through the swing door, and Hermione pulled out her wand to clean up the bird's mess.
She wanted to jump at the chance. She wanted to sign the papers and have the weight of making this all work without the proper help or gold behind it taken off her shoulders. But if S. Prince was who she thought it was ... to just sign the papers on a whim like that would indeed be rash. She wanted answers first.
Pulling a parchment from a stack by her computer, she decided to request a meeting with this Mr. Prince. That would be the logical thing to do, the right thing to do. After all, no business decisions should be made without a face-to-face meeting at the very least. With the note to the solicitor finished, she went to attach it to the owl's leg ... only to realize that she had let the damn bird go. Now she'd have to make a trip to the post office over lunch.
~ o ~
It took three days for a reply to come from Mr. Everhart, the solicitor representing Mr. Prince. She had begun to doubt whether the owl had indeed reached its destination and had decided that if she hadn't heard anything by five o'clock, she would owl him again and this time request a receipt notice. She didn't want to sound impatient, however. If she sounded too eager, Mr. Prince might deduce that she'd been having a difficult time drumming up business and back out.
This undoubtedly meant that she had effectively made up her mind, she realized. After having a few days to think about it and read over the thick sheaf of parchments, not to mention showing it to Alpin, Ginny's husband, who knew the various ins and outs of everything legal, she was ready to go ahead with the joint venture. The only thing stopping her was that she needed to know who exactly she was going into business with.
When the same haughty brown owl flew through the swing door just as she was worrying over the solicitor's non-response, she sighed heavily to dispel the nauseatingly twittering butterflies in her stomach.
She snatched the note from the owl's leg and perfunctorily tossed it a biscuit to keep it occupied.
To: Miss Hermione GrangerOwner: Strega Letteraria
After due consideration, since he is a very private man, Mr. Prince has decided to meet with you. However, it must not be in a public locale. This letter has been charmed into a Portkey, which will transport you to his location at exactly 9:00 p.m. this evening.
Yours truly,
Edmund Everhart, Solicitor
Wright, Talbot, and Sharpe LLP
Butterflies became fire-breathing dragons, and she had to take a biscuit, much to the owl's annoyance, who thought it had been meant for it instead of her. Of course, this posed another dilemma. The Stranger did warn her that her life was in danger. What if meeting this Mr. Prince wasn't such a good idea after all? He was asking that she meet him under his terms in an unknown place. What if he was the one she needed to beware of?
She couldn't believe she was actually waffling over whether or not to meet Mr. Prince when for the last three days she had been worried over his response. If she wanted to make a better place for herself in the business world, then she'd have to take chances.
But that did not mean that she didn't have to come prepared. A search in one of her drawers turned up a little Chinese figurine her mother had sent her a couple months back when they were still in China. Breathing a few words over it, it became a Portkey as well, ready to transport her back to the safety of her flat above the bookshop.
It was pure torture waiting for nine o'clock to roll around. Numerous times she had checked her appearance, determined how much time remained, patted her pockets for her wand and the little Chinese figurine-cum-Portkey. She had tried to contact Ginny through the Floo Network this afternoon, but no one had been home. A quickly penned message had to serve instead, a short note letting Ginny know that she was going to meet the man who wished to become her business partner and that she had no idea where the meeting was going to be, but here was the solicitor's contact information...just in case something went wrong.
She hadn't heard back from Ginny. She only hoped that little Molly or William hadn't gotten a hold of her message before Ginny had. In any case, it was too late to worry about that now. The solicitor's mail lying on her desk would have to suffice as evidence in the event that she did not return.
At two minutes before the Portkey was to activate, Hermione secured the shop with its usual locks and wards ... and waited.
~ o ~
The lights of the bookshop dimmed. To the casual observer, the Strega Letteraria was closing up for the night. The Stranger, however, knew that it was still a few minutes to closing time. It was extraordinarily unusual for Hermione Granger to close her bookshop early...even by a couple minutes.
He waited, naturally cloaked in the shadows, fingering an old silver spoon in one hand. At one minute of nine o'clock, the antique piece blinked out of existence, pulling the Stranger along with it through another dimension to a small house in a rather dingy part of London.
The Stranger positioned himself at the top of the steps leading to the entrance of the house. The hood of his cloak was down this time, his appearance unglamoured. He leaned upon the ebony cane heavily ... and waited.
At precisely nine o'clock, the air wavered, twisted, and deposited a woman just meters in front of him. She didn't notice him right away as she scanned the surroundings, and then her head turned.
Held breath expelled forcefully, half anxious, half curious. "It is you."
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418 Reviews | 7.02/10 Average
I know it's been a while since you've updated and/or worked on this story, but I missed your writing and was browsing backwards through the pages and remembered how enjoyable Strega Letteraria was. The acceptance between Hermione and Severus is soothing in the midst of all the unsettling circumstance. The fact that I would love to own such a store doesn't hurt, either. Hope you are well and with no shortage of muses.
Hellllooooo out there! Apparently I didn't review this back when I was reading it. So, I will do so now as a shameless ploy to drag you back to this story. I had to pull this off my bookmark list and dust it off a bit ;) Kidding aside, I was really enjoying this and hope that you are just on hiatus, and not gone for good. I am sure you have a million better things to do than work on this story, but just wanted you to know that there are still folks out here who would love to see this finished! And hey, it worked last Christmas... Anyway, have a happy holiday and I'll be looking under my tree for the next installment of this lovely tale.
Excellent story!! Harry what a 'butthead'!! Can't wait to see what Severus is going to do to Draco.
While not wanting to start a flame war and while admiring the insouciance of MHaydn, it must be emphasized that a review of a fan-fiction should respect the value of the genre: all girls think about is that all boys think about is getting in their knickers and it’s never the right boy, damn it, except in fan fiction. Also, it is never fair to chide a female author for not capturing the elements of romance. A little sensitivity in these matters is not amiss.
Our frustrated friend would have done better to point out that the exalted lust in this chapter is subtler and deeper than in the previous chapter. The hero protects the heroine from herself in her current unstable mood. She believes she can talk to him – venting before she explodes. He calms her and makes certain she rests. He does better than her parents: he is there for her but gives her space. Words are good, but these are deeds.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
, my dear
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
, oh how I missed you. It is too true that girls do think (once they reach the age of maturity and have been burned quite a number of times) that all boys want is to get in her knickers. The key is to mature first before discovering that MEN aren't always like that. Boys, however ... there are the rare few who are incredibly more mature than the female gender gives them credit for.Don't be too hard on MHaydn. Intentions are all good and I know a hard time when I'm getting one. I'm rather a bit of a masochist and enjoy it. But, at the same time you are correct. There is a level of relationship that goes beyond romance or even physical intimacy, and that is exactly what is occuring in this chapter when Severus weathers her (understandably) violatile mood and fields would-be mood triggers.So ... will I see you around more? I do miss old friends. I should remove your validated status just so I can talk to you more often in queue. (You know I'm only joking, right?)
The author note preceding this chapter ruined my plan for writing a series of sarcastic reviews about a lust-writer trying her hand at romance. They would have begun with the first chapter by pointing out that Hermione should be fuming because she stocked her store with the items everyone should read – <i>Ulysses</i> and <i>Palefire</i> and <i>101 Ways to Improve Your Kitchen</i> – but the ungrateful clots weren’t purchasing the volumes. Next, the reviews would have performed a checklist for a romance novel
Heroine in distress: check.
Mysterious lurking stranger: check.
Pesky and unsuitable suitor: oops.
The reviews would have continued providing unasked-for opinions until arriving at chapter twelve where they would have pointed out that the authoress had written herself into a hole by having the hero declare his undying devotion. For most readers, the relationship has begun, but since the authoress is a non-romantic, the thrill is in the chase, and the chase is over.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
– frustrated evil-reviewer
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
I would have known it was you anyway.
This chapter was worth the wait. Thank you so much for the update.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
I'm happy you thought so! Sometimes plot points need to simmer for a while before they're done. This one needed extra simmering.
Well, darn, I thought that this story was complete. I guess I should pay more attention when I click on something so I won't be disappointed.I really like what you've done here--there aren't many stories around where Hermione and Harry have any sort of sexual involvement and Harry is the one being a jerk (usually Ron has that role). I was so happy when Severus became a partner at the shop. I love him in this story!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
I really love to try out things that haven't been done much or done before, and I love to toss in the unpredictable wherever I can. No, this story is not quite finished, though I solemnly swear I shall not write a multi-chapter epic. No idea where the cut off will be, but we are certainly past the halfway point. I'm happy that you like it!
Thank you so much!!! This is just what I needed before all these crazy vacations come upon us!Love the tiny cliff you've left us on, but please please just throw us over! Any new writing is appreciated!!! Thank you again!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Hmm ... No one's ever asked me to throw them over a cliff before. *lol* And thank you!
yeah! amen! you go, sister! right on! great update. thanks so much
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Yup, Hermione needed a 'tude ... so I gave her one.
Thanks for the update! The Potter Place wish list really worked. How cool is that? Its nice to see victim!Hermione is gone. Im looking forward to her endind Draco. Its not good to be violent when preggers!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Very true. Have to keep positive vibes. I'll have to find a way to make sure Hermione does this intelligently.
Wow. This story is fantastic. I just spent most of the morning reading it. You have interesting characterizations of Snape, Harry, and Hermione. They aren't particularly out of character, just emphasizing parts of the personality that may not have been prominent in canon.I can't wait for the next chapter.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Thank you. I do try to keep them in canon as much as possible while introducing a storyline which would never be used by JKR. Sort of making the characters more 'real' than fantasy-like.
Harry has proven that his jealously of the situation has rotten his brain. Hermione and Severus are better off with him out of the picture, although I am sure it is very hurtful for Hermione. Severus is a rock He is so wonderful to her and for her. I hope Hermione realizes what she has in him.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
I think she will see. He is a good guy and I don't think there's any danger of her taking advantage of him.
How wonderful! I'm so glad you were able to update and I'm afraid I'm a bit greedy in wanting you to write more... soon... ish :)
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Well, soon ... ish sounds doable. Who knows? I'm thinking about the story a lot these past couple days, which can only mean more writing is in store.
Thank you so much for the update, I was trilled to see a new chapter!!!I loved that Hermione at the end placed her anger where it belonged; at the Malfoys! Not that she doesn't have reasons to be angry at Harry, but on the other side she should be glad not to have that prat hanging around her child in the years to come, the only looser is Harry, she should find joy in that!I hope we won't have to wait so long for the next update?
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
I hope you won't have to wait long too. If it's any consolation, the story is very much on my mind. So much so that I think Tutoring Session won't get updated because of it (and that was on the wish list too).My whole theory, when I feel irritated and ornery, is that the only people who should benefit from my ire are people who deserve it (i.e. the jerk who speeds out of his driveway without stopping and looking, nearly causing an accident, or the woman who ties up the handicapped spot for five minutes as she walks her kids into a rehearsal, leaving someone who needs the space driving around in circles and waiting because she can't walk 2 blocks). I thought I'd let Hermione do the same.
meeps! well, no romantical thoughts about Severus in this chapter, but I'm glad she at least has realized that it's futile to try to knock sense into Harry's head, and glad Severus stopped her from sending the owl to Ellie. still suspicious about the Aurors, although surely someone would remember that she "killed" Lucius, whose widow and son are still zipping around. thanks for the new chapter - very good to see you again!!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Good to see you too! *waves* Nope, no romantic thoughts this chapter; her anger won't allow her to concentrate on anything else. But hopefully it will all be resolved soon and we can get back to the more loving feelings. ;)
Glad to see this updated. Hope Hermione doesn't go off on her own, whether in person or not, to seek revenge on the Malfoys. Not only could that put her in more danger or get her caught and arrested herself, but it could interfere with whatever Severus has planned... Team vengence would be a lot less messy. (Of course, I don't want my petty little mutterings to influence your plot in anyway. I'm sure whatever you have planned is much better than what I could come up with...) Enjoyed this thoroughly! Looking forward to the next.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Anything is possible at this point. Hermione hasn't entered that 'planning' stage yet (in my mind), and you know how she loves to plan.
*sighs in relief* oh my goodness, I am so happy that you did not give up on this one! And what a great chapter it was... I hope it got you in the mood for more!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
No no no ... I would never give up on a story. Sometimes the plot stagnates and I don't know what to do. I've deviated from my original plan; it seems as if the story writes itself at times. I thrive on suggestions since it gets those creative juices flowing. I am definitely in the mood for more.
I'm with Severus on letting him take care of them. Harry is a jerk, they don't need him. Great chapter, i'm really glad to see an update.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Thank you. I was glad to be able to update.
poor hermione ~pats~ if she likes i can string harry up by his unmentionables over a meat grinder? ooo! or better yet! inform his wifey of his misconduct and how hermione is sooo sad and what an awful person harry's being ~nods and sends lots of little helpful goblins to get right to work!~
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Well, let's see... if you string him up by the unmentionables, then those won't be the first to hit the meat grinder. We'll have to think on that a bit....
Response from keske (Reviewer)
no...they wouldn't be...but i imagine it would still hurt quite a bit, no? ~is...perhaps a little too vindictive...but oh well! lol~
Nice chapter, I suspect our Hermione is in the plotting stage. I wonder what she will do to make the Malfoy's suffer?
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Hopefully Hermione is as creative as she is smart. She's still working on the particulars. ;)
Glad to see this updated. Looking forward to seeing what Hermione and Severus have in store for the Malfoy's. More soon please.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
I hope I'm able to write more soon. Perhaps with Christmas vacation coming up, I will.
Oh yeah, have at those Malfoys, girl! :)
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Uh-huh. I'd lke to have at them, but not in the way this story is making them out to be....
Oh, that was so perfect. So sweet that my eyes welled with tears. I cannot wait to see what happens now that Harry is there. And I'm glad her parents are there, too.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
I loved the various responses to this chapter. It really was interesting. Aren't you glad you waited for chapter 15 to be posted instead of it ending at 14, though? Now that might have gotten me a sound scolding, I think.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
I loved the various responses to this chapter. It really was interesting. Aren't you glad you waited for chapter 15 to be posted instead of it ending at 14, though? Now that might have gotten me a sound scolding, I think.
I did love the mirror idea. I also really like how you described the potion's characteristics. I'll have to check out lotm's books soon! You do a really wonderful job at story-telling. I enjoyed also the public persona, Samuel Prince, that you created for Severus.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Hehehe ... I sort of like how he mildly (?) resembles Lucius myself.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Hehehe ... I sort of like how he mildly (?) resembles Lucius myself.
Hehe! This is so exciting!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Glad you thought so. Boy, was that difficult trying to find the right way to make this happen.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Glad you thought so. Boy, was that difficult trying to find the right way to make this happen.