Chapter Three
Chapter 3 of 17
notsosaintlyA night out with Harry makes Hermione forget her worries for a while … and adds a few more.
Author's Note: A thousand hugs, as always, to my two betas, ladyofthemasque and Southern_Witch_69.
Disclaimer: My thanks to JK Rowling for having such a splendid imagination and for allowing us to play around with her characters in the fanfiction universe. She gets all the credit for anything you recognize; the plot for this story is entirely mine (though I don't get paid).
Chapter Three
Ensconced in the veil of shadows, the Stranger watched as Harry and Hermione left the bookshop, arm in arm. The Stranger hesitated. Hermione never closed up shop early. Never.
A note stuck to the front door of the shop, one corner fitfully flapping in the breeze. Once the couple was out of sight and it was determined that they were not going to return, the Stranger emerged and surreptitiously approached the door.
"Closed early. Sorry for the inconvenience," the note read. "We'll be open at 9:00 A.M. Thank you!"
It was concise, and it revealed absolutely nothing. The Stranger turned to look down the street in the direction Harry and Hermione had disappeared into the darkness. It was too late to follow now; they could have Apparated anywhere. A search would most likely be a waste of time.
Hermione was a creature of habit...that the Stranger had already learned...and her habit had become the Stranger's habit. It was routine to watch her through the window of the shop every evening as she performed her closing ritual, locked the doors, and disappeared up the stairs. The Stranger would always stay until the lights came on in the flat above the shop, confident that she had survived another day without coming to harm.
It wasn't until now, when that routine was broken, that the Stranger realized her safety meant a little more than previously believed. The vague overheard threat to her safety aside, women working alone in a public establishment were vulnerable to the riff-raff that occasionally passed through this less-traveled section of Hogsmeade. The Hog's Head was just down the side street. It was only natural to want to make sure she was safe, after all.
After staring a while in the direction Hermione had parted, the Stranger seemed to come to the decision that she was most likely safer with Harry Potter than with anyone else and turned to walk in the direction of the Hog's Head. The night had a chill, and the pub sounded like an inviting place to warm up the insides before returning to the alleyway to await Hermione's return.
~ o ~
Madam Rosmerta welcomed Harry and Hermione exuberantly, and the evening turned out to be the best night out Hermione had in a long time. In fact, she couldn't remember the last time she had had so much fun. Having Harry back, even if it was only for a short while, had improved her mood considerably, and she even managed to forget about her troubles for a few hours.
She couldn't remember when the butterbeer had turned into wine, and ultimately champagne, but that didn't matter when a good time was being had. Together, they managed to finish three bottles of Merlot and one bottle of Rosmerta's finest Wizard's Vineyard champagne, all of which was on the house due to Rosmerta being totally infatuated over Harry's visit. Of course, several patrons sent Harry shots of liqueur and glasses of Firewhisky, just so they could say they had drinks with the Great Harry Potter.
Needless to say, by the time they left the Three Broomsticks around midnight, they were both pretty inebriated. Just as they had arrived, they left arm in arm, this time to ensure that they both remained upright and could walk in some semblance of a straight line. Harry found himself sat soundly on his bum once...or was it twice?...when Hermione lost her balance and pulled him down with her. The wizards and witches they passed were greeted loudly and jovially, and each answered in kind, laughing at the enthusiastic, stumbling pair.
When they reached the side door to the stairs that led up to Hermione's flat, Harry toppled against her, his body heavy as he pressed her up against the doorframe.
"Thththat wuz great," he said, his words shuffling together much like his uncoordinated feet. "We shshould do thish more offen."
Hermione giggled. "Yes, we should."
Harry's body felt warm and comfortable against hers, and apparently Harry thought so as well for he made no attempt to move off. Instead, he scrutinized the girl he had pinned against the doorframe, twisting a lock of her hair around one of his fingers.
"Bushshy as always, I sssee."
He smirked and accepted the playful swat he had earned. Sober or drunk, Harry had to make comments about her hair. She had never minded it though, and right now, she was enjoying how he was running his fingers through her hair. She rested her head on his chest and let him play with the tangled strands just a little longer.
"I don' wanna leave," he whispered, which made her look up into the fogginess of his eyes.
"Then don't," Hermione replied. She missed Harry and all the fun they once had. If only this night could last forever. If only he didn't have to go. If only.
She blinked, lost in Harry's gaze, and then suddenly she felt something soft and warm against her lips. A kiss. Tipsily, her head spun as she realized she was kissing Harry ... and it was good. Very good. His kiss made her feel sober...dizzy, of course, but sober. All her senses seemed to awaken from their alcoholic slumber and coalesce into thinking only about Harry.
She knew it was wrong, but at the same time, she thought, what did it matter? Who would find out? No one. They had been friends for so long, it was almost inevitable that this would happen. What was one night of passion between friends? She loved him, had put her life on the line alongside him. Why shouldn't this happen? It was perfectly understandable. It made sense.
She lost herself in his soft, inviting kisses. Every time her mind tried to analyze why she was in Harry's arms, how strange but how right it felt to be kissing him, she got caught in the whirlpool and was dragged back down where thoughts no longer mattered. Harry's lips on hers, insistently tangling his tongue with hers; Harry's hands in her hair, fingers entangled in the curls; Harry's body pressed tightly against her, harder than she ever remembered his body being: every point of contact was felt with great acuity. Only when their heartbeats stumbled over one another, and every breath was drawn merely to survive, and their bodies wound tighter in anticipation did they part and look at each other in a shocked sort of desperation.
"What are we doing?" Harry asked, sounding as sober as she suddenly felt.
"I don't know," was the honest reply.
"I want this. Do you?" Honesty between friends. Not afraid of the other's answer. It's what she always treasured about Harry.
"Yes." She breathed in the heat of his body, his musky male scent, and she couldn't help but want more, to find out what lay beneath Harry's exterior.
"We should go inside before we become the talk of the town," Harry whispered as he kissed the edge of her earlobe.
"Right," she answered ... or thought; she wasn't sure anymore if the words were coming out of her mouth or if she was just thinking too loud.
The locks came open easily, but it took her three tries to remove the wards. Her shaking hands made it difficult to perform the exact wand movements. It didn't help that Harry was hugging her from behind, pressing his hard body against her and placing kisses on her neck. When the door finally opened, she tugged him by the hand and led him up the stairs as quick as his stumbling feet could follow.
Harry had never seen her flat before ... The errant thought broke the surface and threatened to bring the real world back sooner than she wished. He had either been too busy or too involved soothing the easily-ruffled feathers of his overly jealous fiancée. Now his fiancée truly had reason to be jealous, Hermione supposed. Still, she found that she didn't really care at the moment. Perhaps she would later, in the morning; perhaps never. It didn't matter. She drowned the thought in another kiss, and the passion returned.
Several glasses of wine helped by a couple flutes of champagne removed their clothing before either of them knew what was happening. They collapsed onto the rug of her sitting room before the fireplace, and neither of them seemed to be able to stop the course set by the alcohol still swimming in their blood ... even if they had wanted to.
Hermione's consciousness swam. Harry's hands on her body, his mouth on hers ... trailing over to her ear ... it was all too much to comprehend. It was like a dream. Sweet, sexy Harry...yes, she had always thought of him as sexy. His image had been fuel for a fantasy or two during those moments she had taken for self-pleasure. But she had never seriously contemplated any relationship with him other than that of very good friends.
The room was spinning. Her body was throbbing. She didn't know how to deal with the situation, except to let it happen and deal with it tomorrow...when her mind was clearer and able to deal with things. Right now, all she wanted to deal with was ...
Harry's mouth kissing, nipping, sucking her swollen breasts. She arched her back to greet him, silently encouraging him. His fingers found her wetness below, and she slid onto him easily and let him caress her inside and out. She needed to make him feel what he was making her feel, felt an intense need to do so. Letting her hand slide down his body, she felt her way to his hardness and imitated his movements, simulating what it would be like if he were inside her at this very moment. Yes, she definitely wanted him inside her.
Harry groaned at the contact. "Hermione. Gods, I need you ... now. Oh, please." He was pleading, desperate, frantic as his hands roamed her body, requesting more than what she was already giving him.
Who was she to refuse? She wanted him. Oh, gods, yes. It was a fantasy come true. A dream. In the morning, it would all be a dream anyway, wouldn't it? Her mind was convoluted with desire and champagne. She wanted this. She wanted him.
She nudged him over, and he slid between her legs in response, each of their bodies pleading for the other to need, to want, to take. His needs were her needs. His desires were her desires. With heaving chests and burning lungs, they moved together over and over, bodies glistening in the firelight, hungrily devouring each other's burning flesh ... and this continued into the wee hours of the morning, until they both completely exhausted each other.
~ o ~
The Stranger had been lost in a Firewhisky haze, having had just enough to relax but not deaden the senses. Harry and Hermione's return was earlier than expected; many witches and wizards out for an evening stayed out long past the witching hour. And their return was inconsequential ... until Harry leaned into Hermione and their lips met in a kiss that was meant for more than friends.
They kissed with great familiarity, and it made the Stranger wonder if this relationship had been ongoing for some time. The conversation that followed was intimate, but not so quiet that the Stranger could not hear with a flick of a wand, and it became apparent that Harry and Hermione had never done such a thing before. For some reason, the Stranger breathed easier with that knowledge.
It wasn't until the door slammed shut to the flat above the shop that the Stranger finally left the pair to their privacy.
~ o ~
Hermione awoke, not in her bed but on the floor, completely nude beneath an afghan that usually decorated the back of the sofa. She wondered for a second how it happened that she came to sleep here. A turn of her head found Harry, fully dressed and looking out the window. Hazy memories began to filter back into her brain. Sitting up, she carefully wrapped the afghan around her shoulders and waited for her woozy head to clear a bit.
"Good morning, sleepyhead," Harry said, turning from the window with a smile.
Groggily, she answered. "G'morning. What time is it?"
"Only half past six. I made coffee. Would you like some?"
She nodded, and as Harry walked into the kitchen to get the coffee, Hermione wandered into her bedroom to put on a robe. The afghan was a little scratchy, and she felt slightly awkward sitting around Harry with nothing on save a bit of loosely knitted yarn. No matter that he had seen quite a bit more the night before. The thought made her blush.
She stopped to use the loo and wash her face a bit. Looking at herself in the mirror, she was glad she hadn't one of those nasty charmed things they used to have at Hogwarts. If it was one thing she did not need this morning, it was a judgmental piece of glass. She was judging herself enough as it was.
That reminded her ... She rummaged about in the bathroom cabinet, picking up this bottle and that, looking to see if she had any Morning-After Potion left over from gods-knew-when. She didn't think she had any, and if she did, its efficacy would probably have expired. She'd have to remember to place an order with the apothecary later this morning after she opened the shop.
Walking back into the sitting room, she noticed that Harry had placed two mugs of coffee on the table and was already seated on the sofa. Suddenly a little shy, her first instinct was to take the chair, but Harry patted the space next to him on the sofa. With a small smile of thanks, she sat down next to him and gratefully picked up the steaming mug of coffee, sipping it noisily to cool it down before it hit her throat. It was bad manners, but it was either that or she would remain decaffeinatedly incoherent.
Her coffee was half drunk before she realized that Harry was just sitting there staring into his still-full mug. Suddenly, she felt an overwhelming sense of guilt. It was all her fault. She should have never closed up shop early last night, and she should have never agreed to go to the Three Broomsticks. She would remember to listen to her practical side next time...if there ever were a next time.
"Harry, I'm...I'm sorry," she managed to say, though her throat felt too constricted to speak.
Harry looked up suddenly and put his mug down on the table. "No. No, Hermione. Don't be sorry." He took her hand in his. "Look, I'm the one who should be apologizing. It was all my fault. I kissed you first."
She smiled. It was so like Harry to take full responsibility for everything.
"Yes, but I kissed you back." The childish banter lightened the mood and made it easier to talk.
"True," he replied. "True. You know this can never happen again, right? I suppose that's kind of silly to say. Of course you know."
"Yes, I do. You will be married next month and off defeating the Wimbourne Wasps next. And I'll probably not see you again for another couple years...oh, except for the wedding. I didn't forget about that! Anyway, we're better off as friends, Harry. I know that." She decided to stop talking before she said something that sounded stupid or something that could be misinterpreted. She hadn't planned what had happened, of course, but it was embarrassing, and she felt an awful lot like crying. "This won't ruin our friendship, will it?"
For the first time since he woke up that morning, cuddling skin-to-skin next to Hermione, he touched her. Placing a hand on her arm, he smiled and said, "Of course not, Hermione! I don't ditch my friends over a bit of rough and tumble. If I did that, Ron and I wouldn't be best mates...." His grin faded. "Oh, that didn't sound the way I meant it."
Copious amounts of laughter dispelled any lingering embarrassment between the two.
~ o ~
Harry ended up leaving at half past eight. Surprisingly, they had found much to talk about that hadn't been covered the night before, catching each other up and fitting in all the conversation they would miss out on in the near future. What had happened between them the night before was easily pushed aside for comfort's sake, but certainly not forgotten, at least not by Hermione.
Hermione opened the shop right on time and was surprised to see a customer already waiting at the door. She let the woman in with a bright and welcoming, "Good morning!" and saw the note she had put on the door the night before lying on the ground. The reason for the note came back to haunt her momentarily, and her morning turned out to be very unproductive indeed.
One thing she did manage to accomplish that morning was to send a request to the apothecary through the Floo Network. That seemed to be the one thing her mind was willing to grasp hold of and carry through with, at least.
~ o ~
The Floo flared green and spat out a singed piece of parchment onto the floor. Old Mister MacDougal levitated the parchment to his waiting hand, having lost his ability years ago to bend over and straighten back up successfully. He placed his spectacles upon his nose and squinted at the order.
ORDERITEM: 10 grams Morning-After Potion
RECIPIENT: Hermione Granger, Strega Letteraria, Hogsmeade
PAYMENT: enclosed
Please deliver this afternoon.
Old MacDougal tipped the envelope and heard the satisfying clink-clink of two Galleons hitting the counter. He shuffled back to his storeroom where he kept various potions in various quantities, ready to fill any order as soon as it arrived.
Squinting his spectacles up his nose, he focused on the small labels. He'd really have to remember to tell his son to write a little larger. His spider-scrawl was nearly illegible. Finding what he was looking for, he took down a small, red bottle and held it up to the sconce-light of the storeroom.
He could make out a script M and a P and what looked like scribble in between. Satisfied that he had found what he was looking for, he walked to the front of the store where he kept his prescription labels. He removed the old label and worked up a new one, complete with Hermione Granger's name and the directions to take one ounce every morning for three days, and slapped it on the tiny bottle.
As the apothecary's owl took flight with its cargo secured tightly to one leg, the old label was whisped off the table and floated to and fro until it came to rest upon the floor. It wasn't found until later that day when Old MacDougal's son was sweeping the floor. The boy picked it up and eyed it. Memory Potion, it stated, quite clearly in his opinion, on the label. His father had gone to have a bit of a lie down as he did every afternoon. Deciding he'd wait to ask the old man about it later, he pocketed the label ... where it remained, forgotten.
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418 Reviews | 7.02/10 Average
I know it's been a while since you've updated and/or worked on this story, but I missed your writing and was browsing backwards through the pages and remembered how enjoyable Strega Letteraria was. The acceptance between Hermione and Severus is soothing in the midst of all the unsettling circumstance. The fact that I would love to own such a store doesn't hurt, either. Hope you are well and with no shortage of muses.
Hellllooooo out there! Apparently I didn't review this back when I was reading it. So, I will do so now as a shameless ploy to drag you back to this story. I had to pull this off my bookmark list and dust it off a bit ;) Kidding aside, I was really enjoying this and hope that you are just on hiatus, and not gone for good. I am sure you have a million better things to do than work on this story, but just wanted you to know that there are still folks out here who would love to see this finished! And hey, it worked last Christmas... Anyway, have a happy holiday and I'll be looking under my tree for the next installment of this lovely tale.
Excellent story!! Harry what a 'butthead'!! Can't wait to see what Severus is going to do to Draco.
While not wanting to start a flame war and while admiring the insouciance of MHaydn, it must be emphasized that a review of a fan-fiction should respect the value of the genre: all girls think about is that all boys think about is getting in their knickers and it’s never the right boy, damn it, except in fan fiction. Also, it is never fair to chide a female author for not capturing the elements of romance. A little sensitivity in these matters is not amiss.
Our frustrated friend would have done better to point out that the exalted lust in this chapter is subtler and deeper than in the previous chapter. The hero protects the heroine from herself in her current unstable mood. She believes she can talk to him – venting before she explodes. He calms her and makes certain she rests. He does better than her parents: he is there for her but gives her space. Words are good, but these are deeds.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
, my dear
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
, oh how I missed you. It is too true that girls do think (once they reach the age of maturity and have been burned quite a number of times) that all boys want is to get in her knickers. The key is to mature first before discovering that MEN aren't always like that. Boys, however ... there are the rare few who are incredibly more mature than the female gender gives them credit for.Don't be too hard on MHaydn. Intentions are all good and I know a hard time when I'm getting one. I'm rather a bit of a masochist and enjoy it. But, at the same time you are correct. There is a level of relationship that goes beyond romance or even physical intimacy, and that is exactly what is occuring in this chapter when Severus weathers her (understandably) violatile mood and fields would-be mood triggers.So ... will I see you around more? I do miss old friends. I should remove your validated status just so I can talk to you more often in queue. (You know I'm only joking, right?)
The author note preceding this chapter ruined my plan for writing a series of sarcastic reviews about a lust-writer trying her hand at romance. They would have begun with the first chapter by pointing out that Hermione should be fuming because she stocked her store with the items everyone should read – <i>Ulysses</i> and <i>Palefire</i> and <i>101 Ways to Improve Your Kitchen</i> – but the ungrateful clots weren’t purchasing the volumes. Next, the reviews would have performed a checklist for a romance novel
Heroine in distress: check.
Mysterious lurking stranger: check.
Pesky and unsuitable suitor: oops.
The reviews would have continued providing unasked-for opinions until arriving at chapter twelve where they would have pointed out that the authoress had written herself into a hole by having the hero declare his undying devotion. For most readers, the relationship has begun, but since the authoress is a non-romantic, the thrill is in the chase, and the chase is over.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
– frustrated evil-reviewer
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
I would have known it was you anyway.
This chapter was worth the wait. Thank you so much for the update.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
I'm happy you thought so! Sometimes plot points need to simmer for a while before they're done. This one needed extra simmering.
Well, darn, I thought that this story was complete. I guess I should pay more attention when I click on something so I won't be disappointed.I really like what you've done here--there aren't many stories around where Hermione and Harry have any sort of sexual involvement and Harry is the one being a jerk (usually Ron has that role). I was so happy when Severus became a partner at the shop. I love him in this story!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
I really love to try out things that haven't been done much or done before, and I love to toss in the unpredictable wherever I can. No, this story is not quite finished, though I solemnly swear I shall not write a multi-chapter epic. No idea where the cut off will be, but we are certainly past the halfway point. I'm happy that you like it!
Thank you so much!!! This is just what I needed before all these crazy vacations come upon us!Love the tiny cliff you've left us on, but please please just throw us over! Any new writing is appreciated!!! Thank you again!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Hmm ... No one's ever asked me to throw them over a cliff before. *lol* And thank you!
yeah! amen! you go, sister! right on! great update. thanks so much
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Yup, Hermione needed a 'tude ... so I gave her one.
Thanks for the update! The Potter Place wish list really worked. How cool is that? Its nice to see victim!Hermione is gone. Im looking forward to her endind Draco. Its not good to be violent when preggers!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Very true. Have to keep positive vibes. I'll have to find a way to make sure Hermione does this intelligently.
Wow. This story is fantastic. I just spent most of the morning reading it. You have interesting characterizations of Snape, Harry, and Hermione. They aren't particularly out of character, just emphasizing parts of the personality that may not have been prominent in canon.I can't wait for the next chapter.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Thank you. I do try to keep them in canon as much as possible while introducing a storyline which would never be used by JKR. Sort of making the characters more 'real' than fantasy-like.
Harry has proven that his jealously of the situation has rotten his brain. Hermione and Severus are better off with him out of the picture, although I am sure it is very hurtful for Hermione. Severus is a rock He is so wonderful to her and for her. I hope Hermione realizes what she has in him.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
I think she will see. He is a good guy and I don't think there's any danger of her taking advantage of him.
How wonderful! I'm so glad you were able to update and I'm afraid I'm a bit greedy in wanting you to write more... soon... ish :)
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Well, soon ... ish sounds doable. Who knows? I'm thinking about the story a lot these past couple days, which can only mean more writing is in store.
Thank you so much for the update, I was trilled to see a new chapter!!!I loved that Hermione at the end placed her anger where it belonged; at the Malfoys! Not that she doesn't have reasons to be angry at Harry, but on the other side she should be glad not to have that prat hanging around her child in the years to come, the only looser is Harry, she should find joy in that!I hope we won't have to wait so long for the next update?
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
I hope you won't have to wait long too. If it's any consolation, the story is very much on my mind. So much so that I think Tutoring Session won't get updated because of it (and that was on the wish list too).My whole theory, when I feel irritated and ornery, is that the only people who should benefit from my ire are people who deserve it (i.e. the jerk who speeds out of his driveway without stopping and looking, nearly causing an accident, or the woman who ties up the handicapped spot for five minutes as she walks her kids into a rehearsal, leaving someone who needs the space driving around in circles and waiting because she can't walk 2 blocks). I thought I'd let Hermione do the same.
meeps! well, no romantical thoughts about Severus in this chapter, but I'm glad she at least has realized that it's futile to try to knock sense into Harry's head, and glad Severus stopped her from sending the owl to Ellie. still suspicious about the Aurors, although surely someone would remember that she "killed" Lucius, whose widow and son are still zipping around. thanks for the new chapter - very good to see you again!!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Good to see you too! *waves* Nope, no romantic thoughts this chapter; her anger won't allow her to concentrate on anything else. But hopefully it will all be resolved soon and we can get back to the more loving feelings. ;)
Glad to see this updated. Hope Hermione doesn't go off on her own, whether in person or not, to seek revenge on the Malfoys. Not only could that put her in more danger or get her caught and arrested herself, but it could interfere with whatever Severus has planned... Team vengence would be a lot less messy. (Of course, I don't want my petty little mutterings to influence your plot in anyway. I'm sure whatever you have planned is much better than what I could come up with...) Enjoyed this thoroughly! Looking forward to the next.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Anything is possible at this point. Hermione hasn't entered that 'planning' stage yet (in my mind), and you know how she loves to plan.
*sighs in relief* oh my goodness, I am so happy that you did not give up on this one! And what a great chapter it was... I hope it got you in the mood for more!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
No no no ... I would never give up on a story. Sometimes the plot stagnates and I don't know what to do. I've deviated from my original plan; it seems as if the story writes itself at times. I thrive on suggestions since it gets those creative juices flowing. I am definitely in the mood for more.
I'm with Severus on letting him take care of them. Harry is a jerk, they don't need him. Great chapter, i'm really glad to see an update.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Thank you. I was glad to be able to update.
poor hermione ~pats~ if she likes i can string harry up by his unmentionables over a meat grinder? ooo! or better yet! inform his wifey of his misconduct and how hermione is sooo sad and what an awful person harry's being ~nods and sends lots of little helpful goblins to get right to work!~
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Well, let's see... if you string him up by the unmentionables, then those won't be the first to hit the meat grinder. We'll have to think on that a bit....
Response from keske (Reviewer)
no...they wouldn't be...but i imagine it would still hurt quite a bit, no? ~is...perhaps a little too vindictive...but oh well! lol~
Nice chapter, I suspect our Hermione is in the plotting stage. I wonder what she will do to make the Malfoy's suffer?
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Hopefully Hermione is as creative as she is smart. She's still working on the particulars. ;)
Glad to see this updated. Looking forward to seeing what Hermione and Severus have in store for the Malfoy's. More soon please.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
I hope I'm able to write more soon. Perhaps with Christmas vacation coming up, I will.
Oh yeah, have at those Malfoys, girl! :)
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Uh-huh. I'd lke to have at them, but not in the way this story is making them out to be....
Oh, that was so perfect. So sweet that my eyes welled with tears. I cannot wait to see what happens now that Harry is there. And I'm glad her parents are there, too.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
I loved the various responses to this chapter. It really was interesting. Aren't you glad you waited for chapter 15 to be posted instead of it ending at 14, though? Now that might have gotten me a sound scolding, I think.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
I loved the various responses to this chapter. It really was interesting. Aren't you glad you waited for chapter 15 to be posted instead of it ending at 14, though? Now that might have gotten me a sound scolding, I think.
I did love the mirror idea. I also really like how you described the potion's characteristics. I'll have to check out lotm's books soon! You do a really wonderful job at story-telling. I enjoyed also the public persona, Samuel Prince, that you created for Severus.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Hehehe ... I sort of like how he mildly (?) resembles Lucius myself.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Hehehe ... I sort of like how he mildly (?) resembles Lucius myself.
Hehe! This is so exciting!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Glad you thought so. Boy, was that difficult trying to find the right way to make this happen.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Glad you thought so. Boy, was that difficult trying to find the right way to make this happen.