Part Six - Bed
Chapter 6 of 6
lux_astraeaRemus is meeting Hermione's parents for the first time. How he feels, and what happens after. A series of short drabbles. (Higher rating for later chapters.)
ReviewedDisclaimer: I don't own any of these characters. If I did, my name would be J.K. Rowling.
A/N: Inspired by a prompt from my lovely beta shalimar1981. Credit to her for getting it back to me so fast.
Sorry it's been so long since I updated! Exams, laptop problems, and Uni got in the way.
Thanks for reading!
Part Six – Bed
“Again.”
“Again?”
“Yes, again… please,” he whispered, kissing her collarbone softly.
“Yes… oh, there, just… mmm,” she said breathlessly.
He moved down kissing her left breast, his hand gently smoothing the skin of the right.
“More, Remus…”
“Again,” he said in response, pausing in his attentions to her.
“Yes! Remus, please, don’t stop,” she moaned.
He returned his attention to her chest, kissing and stroking but never touching her nipples, where she really wanted him to more than anything. He moved his hand a little lower, stroking her stomach first, then her hips, the tops of her thighs, never moving quite where she wanted.
“Say it again.”
“Yes.”
“Again.” He smiled, lifting his head to look in her eyes.
“Yes,” she breathed.
They were on the bed now; still wet from the bath they’d left a little while before. Remus was half laid over her, and she was laid back on the bed, her arms held above her head by one of Remus’, his other hand and mouth kissing and caressing her softly.
“Remus,” she moaned, trying to move her body so as to position his mouth and hand where she wanted them.
He laughed ever so softly, “Again.”
“Yes, Remus, I will marry you. Now… please.”
He smiled and finally, finally bent his head to her nipple. Hermione sighed in satisfaction.
Slowly he moved so he was fully over her, still mouthing her nipple, and settled between her legs which she spread eagerly in anticipation.
He stopped, moving his head so that they were nose-to-nose and positioning himself where he knew she wanted, just from the look in her eyes. “Again.”
She sighed more in frustration than annoyance at the repetition of the question. He kissed her deeply, sliding into her a little as he did, causing her to gasp into the kiss. Pulling back from the kiss and thrusting, ever so slightly further into her, he asked her once more, “Again.”
“Gods, yes, Remus… please!” Taking that as a request to move, he thrust into her and her head fell to one side as she groaned in satisfaction. Leaning his weight on an elbow he stopped moving and slowly trailed his index finger of his other hand up, from her shoulder, over her neck, to the sensitive spot near her hairline behind her ear.
“I love you,” he whispered and started moving again, her moans and softly gasped words encouraging him to move faster, harder, deeper.
Soon, her back arched and she cried out, “Remus… Ahh, Gods, Remus!” One of her hands on his shoulder, gripping tightly, the other on the bed, clutching at nothing but air.
The feeling of her tightening around him and saying his name in that tone made him lose the last shred of control he was clinging to and he sped up, gasping in from exhaustion until he, too, came with a cry.
Recovering his breath, he moved so he lay next to her, and both of them stared up at the canopy of the bed listening to the sound of each others breathing slowly returning to normal.
A/N: Up next is Part Seven - After.
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31 Reviews | 5.71/10 Average
Oh but there is no next part posted? What happened? Did Hermoine get cold feet and bolt? ((insert sad fangirl))
Response from lux_astraea (Author of A Series of Events)
*hides*I'm bad, I've not updated this in SO long and I really ought to. In fact I might go and dig up the notes for this one... :)Thanks for reviewing!!
Response from lux_astraea (Author of A Series of Events)
*hides*I'm bad, I've not updated this in SO long and I really ought to. In fact I might go and dig up the notes for this one... :)Thanks for reviewing!!
A naked proposal? How will she tell her Mother? Oh no!
Response from lux_astraea (Author of A Series of Events)
Well... some embelishment up the circumstances might be necesary. *g*
Response from lux_astraea (Author of A Series of Events)
Well... some embelishment up the circumstances might be necesary. *g*
Your Remus is a planner! Now does he have the ring??
Response from lux_astraea (Author of A Series of Events)
One would hope so! ;)
Response from lux_astraea (Author of A Series of Events)
One would hope so! ;)
Well she did have to buy the books for class, might as well let the family get some use out of them!!
Response from lux_astraea (Author of A Series of Events)
True enough. Somehow I think the shop would be reluctant to take them back...
Response from lux_astraea (Author of A Series of Events)
True enough. Somehow I think the shop would be reluctant to take them back...
Are Remus' parents alive so he can be embarassed in return?
Response from lux_astraea (Author of A Series of Events)
You know I hadn't thought about that! *has ideas*
Response from lux_astraea (Author of A Series of Events)
You know I hadn't thought about that! *has ideas*
I hope to hell Hermione didnt tell her parents he is a dangerous magical creature! that is the kind of thing that can upset a parent straight off!
Response from lux_astraea (Author of A Series of Events)
Well I think she'd be tactful enough to leave that part out until, say, after they're married. :)
Response from lux_astraea (Author of A Series of Events)
Well I think she'd be tactful enough to leave that part out until, say, after they're married. :)
If this is your first story ...then welldone you! Most people follow canon pairings or favour HG/SS ( I must admit I'm one of them!)...but reading this Hermione and Remus fit together so well.I think we all secretly hanker after a bit of wolf ! This is a nicely written 'gentle' fic, congrats to you and your beta.I will be waiting for more of the same.
Response from lux_astraea (Author of A Series of Events)
Yes, this was my first story and thank you for your kind words!! I do have a tendency to read/write ss/hg normally but for some reason the plot bunny for this one bit hard and wouldn't let go.
Glad you liked it so much... I really ought to update soon! :)
~lux
Oh this is so cute. I can't wait to read more.
Response from lux_astraea (Author of A Series of Events)
Aww, thanks for reviewing! More on its way soon. ^_^~lux~
awwwww so sweet!!! The last line is definitely the clincher!
Response from lux_astraea (Author of A Series of Events)
Yeah, that last line was one I agonised over a little actually. I must have had about six different versions of it at one point.Thanks for taking time to review again!!
Response from lux_astraea (Author of A Series of Events)
Yeah, that last line was one I agonised over a little actually. I must have had about six different versions of it at one point.Thanks for taking time to review again!!
This is very sweet! I love the start!
Response from lux_astraea (Author of A Series of Events)
Thanks for taking time to review!!
HAHAHAHA!!! Too funny! and only a father can embarrass you like that!!! can't wait for more.
Response from lux_astraea (Author of A Series of Events)
It's sort of an unwritten rule to embarrass children. Or so my dad seems to think, the amount of times he's done that kind of thing. I'm glad my childhood nickname isn't that bad though.Thanks for reviewing!
This looks like it going to be very cute. Can't wait for more.
Response from lux_astraea (Author of A Series of Events)
Thanks for reviewing! More will be up soon, promise. =D
Well, I need to say this officially: This is such a cute little ficlet. I'm glad you're posting it!
Shal
Response from lux_astraea (Author of A Series of Events)
Hehe. Well, thanks has to go to you for inspiring it!!
Response from shalimar1981 (Reviewer)
LOL, but my prompt was not very detailed and you managed to write this whole story from that. My respect! :)
Shal
Awwww How sweet. A very nice beginning. I look forward to more!
Response from lux_astraea (Author of A Series of Events)
Thank you! More should be up soon!
Awww that was really sweet. I love this story. I'm so glad you updated.
Response from lux_astraea (Author of A Series of Events)
Aww thanks. Yeah, too many RL things happend and it's taken me ages to get round to updating. But that's mostly sorted now so updates won't be as long in coming!~lux-astraea~
I believe I answered him before she did last time. ^.~ But I suppose since she was there in the tub with him and I wasn't, I'll let her Yes take the place of mine. heheI was so tickled to see this update this morning. I LOVE these drabbles. They've all been so sweet. And of course now I must add HAWTT to that description. His need for her to keep repeating herself was cute. I can totally see him needing to "keep" hearing it. And that he was withholding until she did repeat again and again was pretty sneaky of him. At least they both (and WE) got the payoff that was supposed to be. ^.^Just great. Can't wait for After.
Response from lux_astraea (Author of A Series of Events)
Heehee! Thanks for your review! Yup, he was sneaky but at least he stopped'withholding' once she'd said it again for him. ^_^ Thanks for the review, 'After' will be up soon!~lux-astraea~
I knew that she'd say yes. I love how he keeps getting her to say it over and over. I do hope that you are still around and will finish this Series of Events up. I've rather enjoyed it.
That was rather impulsive, wasn't it? Something tells me she won't say no.
Test #1 passed, so lets see how the rest of it goes. Nothing like a 'relaxing' bath after an evening like that. :)
Nice to see that went well and I love that her mom is reading Lockhart's books. I can definitely see Remus and Hermione having a good laugh about him.
Well, so far so good. Of course he hasn't had to say much yet, so that could all change. Love the nickname
Poor Remus. Meeting the parents is hard, moreso when you have a dark secret and are a much older man dating their little girl.
aww... very sweet. hmm... I guess she'll be showing him her answer huh?
Response from lux_astraea (Author of A Series of Events)
Heh, you'll see, you'll see!! Thanks for reviewing ^_^~lux_astraea~
Anonymous
I don't really read this ship, normally. I'm sure that if I did, though, it would be nice. It is a really good story, though.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! That you actually read this even though it's not your normal 'ship is a real compliment.