Chapter 6 - Proviso on Property
Chapter 6 of 20
Lady StrangeWhat happens when Hermione realises that Severus is in her chambers? A confrontation and a lesson on property, of course!
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Chapter 6 Proviso on Property
"Have I startled you?" Severus asked carelessly, stepping out of the shadows.
"What are you doing in my apartments, Professor Snape?" she challenged, recovering rapidly from her shock.
"What are you doing in my private rooms, Miss Granger?" he retorted, forcing himself to cease dwelling on what he had just witnessed.
"Isn't it apparent?"
"Do you mean you live here now?" he mocked.
"I see you've managed to get past my wards," she said coolly.
"It seems you are not as powerful as others paint you to be; you could not discern my intrusion," he gloated, curling his lips with a glint in his eyes.
"Let me see, how do I put it objectively to you? YOU'RE DEAD!" she hollered, her eyes reclaiming their hard edge. At that pronouncement, Severus shut his eyes as if wounded. His eyes felt as if a hot poker had pierced them he could not look at this fiery creature in the same manner any longer without a bodily reaction. "If only I had not been privy to that sight!" he mentally berated himself. "Idiot! Voyeur! Degenerate!"
"You've finally decided to think on it! Bravo!" she barked, folding her arms.
"You should try the intimidation act without the turban, Miss Granger. After Quirrell, the look is démodé," he responded, his eyes still closed. "Pray," he added after a brief pause during which he reopened his eyes. "Pray, enlighten me as to why everyone here seems to be labouring under this misapprehension of my death?"
"Because you are, sir," she quietly answered.
He curled his lips contemptuously while approaching her. "Then explain why I am still on this plane, facing the drudgery of this mortal coil! Don't you think I want to die? Do you think I enjoy this miserable existence where life is an empty succession of busy nothings?"
Crookshanks jumped out in front of Hermione and hissed at Severus in a bid to protect his owner.
"Out of the way, cat!" he shouted to no avail. Crookshanks remained where he was, glaring at Severus. "How touching, Miss Granger," he began, maintaining eye contact with Crookshanks. "It seems your cat has decided to engage me in a puerile staring competition. I should hex it into oblivion and put it out of its misery; perhaps then you'll see what death really is."
Hermione picked Crookshanks up defensively. "You will do no such thing! Shame on you, Professor Snape! Threatening a poor helpless creature like..."
"That cat is neither helpless nor defenceless," he interjected. "And seeing how well fed he is, I do not think it is poor either." He took a step forward and was met with a swat from Crookshanks' paw. "I rest my case, Miss Granger," he said triumphantly. "Perhaps you should return to Gryffindor Tower, I wish to be alone."
"These are no longer your apartments, sir!" she retorted, placing Crookshanks on the ground. After watching him pad away, she continued, "Or do property rights extend from beyond the grave? These are my rooms now!"
"Indeed? Then tell me why is everything just as I left them? Do not tell me some stupid maudlin lie. Do not tell me the house elves done so; I know you execute your own cleaning," he snarled, curling his lips scornfully.
"Such impudence! And to think I promised Professor Dumbledore that I would help you! You're a selfish bastard holding onto things that are not really yours!" she declared hotly, jabbing her finger at his ghostly chest. "Do you take anything with you when you die? No! Do these rooms belong to anyone of us? No! They are Hogwarts' property. I don't see your name labelled on everything in the dungeons!"
"Details, mere details, Miss Granger," he said quietly with a glare as he dismissively brushed aside her hand. "Have you read John Locke? If you've read Machiavelli, you should know Locke. He postulated, rightly in my opinion, that the state of nature is one where anyone can acquire a part of nature for himself without the consent of anyone else."
"But there are limits to acquisition," she countered evenly, her previous violent action causing her towel to fall to the ground.
"Did I say 'class dismissed'? I am not finished! There are two principles limiting acquisition in the state of nature: first, we must leave enough and as good for others; second, we must not let anything spoil or go to waste under our care. Suppose Hogwarts is the state of nature. In adopting this section of Hogwarts as mine, I have taken from nature. I have left the rest of the castle alone, thereby leaving enough and as good for others. Because the dungeons are now mine, you cannot trespass on it or forcibly take it away from me without my permission. I have attended to nature, so to speak, because I have put my labour into rendering my quarters inhabitable, my office comfortable and my classroom organised. Seeing how I have put my labour into the area that is the dungeons, it becomes mine by default. Do you see how I have my dungeons more productive? I have turned it into a library, sitting room, and bedrooms. This is one of the fundamental principles of labour theory one must be rational and assiduous. Do you see how labour is incredible in transforming nature and spectacularly increasing the dungeons' productivity? I have improved on and increased the original state of nature that the dungeons formerly were. And you have not added to the store of nature. You have merely rested on my laurels. And to further exacerbate matters, you've allowed your part of nature to spoil under your care. Look at your empty teacup! And you claim to be the executor of this portion of nature! How can you be when you've done nothing to deserve it!" he lectured in a cautiously quiet yet arch manner.
"Even if that were so, you are dead and as such, are unable to exert any influence over nature," she replied, her chocolate eyes shining brightly with what she had just learnt.
"Really?" he drawled causally as he sat on the desk. "You have not been reading my books then!" He gestured to the library. "Tell me, Miss Granger, you reside here, do you not?"
She nodded at his rhetorical question, watching him trace his lips with a long tapered finger. "I thought so," he sneered, gesturing for her to sit. When she had done so, he continued, "Therefore, as an inhabitant in this section of nature, which IS mine, you are a part of it as well. And unless I am much mistaken, I had just contributed to nature again by improving on something in it, namely, you. If it were not for my labour, id est, teaching, a moment ago, you would still be the same Miss Granger ignorant of political philosophy." He caught a look of admiration from Hermione as she drew her bathrobe closer to her body. He flinched slightly as he persisted, "If I were dead as you insist and unable to contribute to nature as you intimated earlier, how was I able to add to your store of knowledge?"
Tucking her legs to her chest, Hermione glared at him in spite of the miniature lecture. "Does that mean you regard me as your property then? I am not a piece of meat at the butcher's! I am not chattel! Blackstone's commentary does not hold in the wizarding world! It no longer even holds water in the muggle world!"
"Have you been paying attention?" he hissed in a low dangerous tone, not taking his eyes off hers. You are your own greatest property. However, your presence as merely another object, such as, say, these books, you come under my jurisdiction, not my property because you are an inalienable right unto yourself. Since you come under my jurisdiction as you are in and on my property, my 'land' as it were I have the right to improve upon you as I deem fit. And this I have just achieved."
"Indeed," she conceded. Severus noted with satisfaction that she had the good grace to look somewhat abashed.
"I suggest, Miss Granger, that you add analytical philosophy to your repertoire," he offered casually, forming a steeple with his fingers.
"Yes, yes, now can I get dressed?" she exclaimed, rising from her seat.
"By all means." He gestured nonchalantly to the screen in the corner, leaning back as if pondering a weighty issue.
"Well?" she questioned, folding her arms and impatiently tapping her foot.
"Yes?" he levelled at her, meeting and holding her glare. "Go get dressed."
"You are in my boudoir," she pointed out from between her teeth.
"Nonsense, this is my library," he said coolly. Then catching sight of the chaise lounge and her flushed cheeks, he hastened to add, "Just this once, Miss Granger. I shall be in the sitting room." And he swept out. He was pleased with the speed at which his gesture of common civility was rewarded. Soon after he stationed himself near the empty heart, Hermione entered the room in a black housecoat. Her damp hair had by then ceased their previous creeping around her neck and he observed how much she resembled those magical porcelain dolls at Diagon Alley.
"Well?" she began as she walked before him.
"Well," he answered blankly, his eyes fixed at her damp bushy hair. "Her hair was long, her foot was light and her eyes were wild. A description quite analogous to what I see, isn't it?"
"Professor Snape, we need to discuss the matter of our lessons. You can have your potions classes back, at least, for the time being," she said in a business like tone, sitting opposite him. Noticing his thoughtful silence as he leaned on the mantelpiece, she decided to venture a polite question so as to ease the tension. "Would you like some biscuits? Accio..."
"It will not be necessary. I am not hungry," he snarled, curling his lips as if repulsed by the idea of food.
Her eyes lit up. "When was the last time you ate?"
"I do not recall," he answered slowly, inclining his head to the left, intrigued by her half-smirk.
"Think about it, sir," she insisted with an undisguised look of triumph. "You are welcome to your old bedroom, that is, if you can rest. I shall retire for the night. Think on hunger, sir."
Before Severus could utter a sharp rejoinder, Hermione had already locked herself in the library, leaving him to mull over her strange words.
A/N: This chapter, though short, may be a little tedious, I apologise.
Footnotes:
"Her hair was long, her foot was light and her eyes were wild" is a quote from John Keats's poem La Belle dans sans merci
The reference to John Locke is drawn from his Two Treatises on Government; the state of nature argument is a combination of my readings on Hobbes and Locke.
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By the sound of it Harry has been in dire need of the verbal kick in the ass, that Severus has so masterfully delivered.
Severus has never been one to play it safe.
A chocolate frog card, no greater acollade.
I think the trick is, to accecpt himself.
Poor Severus, must be quite a shock.
It's going to be a shock, when Severus finally sits and listens to Dumbeldor.
Hermione seems to be channeling Severus in her grief.
Hermione seems to be channeling Severus in her grief.
this was by far the most enjoyable chapter for me. i was smiling and awwing nonstop. the scholorship is very nice and i like the idea behind it. but the whole entire bit about the chocolate frog card was just golden. i think it will go down in my top fanfiction moments of all-time.
those poor students! but what a show and story to tell.
I love all the greek references. Very good story.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Beyond Time and Space)
thank you for the kind comment
I can't quite get why you've been berated for the kiss in the last chapter but then when I read a story I have no expectations and just follow along accepting what happens most of the time. Your ghosty Snape wanted to kiss her and she was a bit surprised. That's good enough for me. But didn't you set up something in the first chapter that would make this a fairly normal Snape behavior within the context of your own story? He may be JKR's creation but that doesn't mean we can't play with him the way we like.I am intrigued by this story so will keep reading.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Beyond Time and Space)
thank you for your words of support. i'm used to my share of flames and whatnot, after my fics were the cause of some wank, i've learnt to ignore everything and just concentrate on writing what i want. thank you for your kind words once again.
Severus is cracking me up with his bouts of cursing himself alternating with self-congratulation. I'm really enjoying this.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Beyond Time and Space)
He does have his moments when he amuses. This is one of those moments.
I kind of figured it would have such an ending. Afterall, clearly, Severus had fallen in love with Hermione. Yet, he knew that she would obsess over his resurrection should he stay, and that would be her demise. Interesting tale.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Beyond Time and Space)
THank you. This tale was considered "too much thinking" for a fic when I first wrote it years ago. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I loved this story. I am in the habit of reading the last chapter of certain stories to see what happens to our couple and that is what I did last night with this story. I cried then and after finishing the entire story I cried again. This was absolutely wonderful and I must thank you for writing it. Thank you.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Beyond Time and Space)
Oh no, my dear. I must thank you for reading this story. After writing this two years ago, I am still glad it is able to elicit such emotions from my readers. Thank you for reading and reviewing this story. I deeply appreciate it.
excelent excelent story. i was in absolute tears at the end and i positively adored all the literary sources and quotes in this story. it was wonderful...i am actually in tears right now! thats really rare for me!
kudos to you on your positively moving story ssl
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Beyond Time and Space)
Thank you for the kind review.
Classical Greek rocks! ( i have an A in that class!)
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Beyond Time and Space)
Alas, I am self-taught. I'm glad you're enjoying this story.
Thank you for a well written story. I don't know why I didn't read this when it was originally posted, but I'm glad I read it today. The emotions were very intense. It was amazing. Thank you!
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Beyond Time and Space)
Thank you! I've received some nasty revieww on this being pretentious. Glad you liked it.
Response from queenp (Reviewer)
Those nasty reviews are from the complete dunderhead/ignorant masses. I saw all your clarifications and felt that you shouldn't have needed to defend yourself so much. If they ddn't like or understand it why did they continue reading it? oh, well, c'est la vie. I have seen that you have a new story, but I will wait until you finish it...:D I've got so much on my plate right now that I'm refusing to start any WIPs, even though they are finished and just being posted as they are editted.
You are a wonderful author and I enjoy reading your stories. They require me to think, which is something a lot of people don't want to do/know how to do.
Please continue writing the thought provoking stuff. We need a bit more of that.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Beyond Time and Space)
Thank you. It is very kind of you to praise my little work so. Truth be told, I've not worked on my new fic for a while now, I wonder whether it will be finished. I have a riugh sketch of each ch in my notebook, but at present, i ponly have till ch 8, and even then, i've just realised that I need a prologue and some explanation - all of which requires more research on Freud and Wittenstein... I'll let you all know whether it'll be finishedm when i do finish it... hang on, does this make sense? oh well, you know what i mean...
I read this on Ashwinder and loved it. I still do. It's just beautiful. I took your advice and bought the reading list you sent in form of a reply to a review that I left on Ashwinder. A few of my friends think that I'm a dreadful swot (is that the right term? I'm American.) but I've learned quite a bit from the reading. It's amazing, the fact that humanity stays the same from age to age, isn't it? I, being a romantic soul, still love the ending. Now, I must go and dry my eyes, and blow my nose. Live long and prosper, Titania
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Beyond Time and Space)
One learns from many things - and so long as one feels that one has learnt something or taht one has come to a better understanding of the self then it's all right. I have a romantic streak too, so i know exactly what you mean. i'm glad you're enjoying the reading list - it's not for everyone... some ofmy students complain that it's too heavy... oh well, c'est ca. thanks for your kind words!
Thank you for the wonderfully written and well delivered story. I absolutely adore your writing style. I quite agree with your interpretation of Hermione (I never did find her to be "bubbly"). Also, thank you for the explanations/translations. Good luck with your health and academic endeavors!
/goes off to cry (such a sad, sad, touching tale of love...)
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Beyond Time and Space)
thank you for all your kind words.
Good luck Hermione, Severus will be a tough nut to crack.
And the last word goes to Hermione.
This was excellent. It is so enjoyable to read intelligent fiction. Most people want to focus on smut. Not that I mind smut, this is just so refreshing. It upsets me that people berated you for writing ?smart? fiction.
Your research and explanations were so thorough. It strongly reminds me of Dan Brown, providing history and information while simultaneously telling a story (even if it?s not always true).
I actually feel like your writing is strong enough and this plot compelling enough, that you could expand and adjust the tale (HP references removed obviously) for actual publication and not just fanfiction.
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Beyond Time and Space)
thank you for yr kind words. i am very touched. I only hope that you will continue to enjoy my work. many thanks once again, lady strange
Peeping Severus, rather than peeping Tom. And he still won't admit he is dead.
I couldn't help but to keep on reading till the end. Alas, I am not very learned in philosophy, but I tried to understand the ideas you put in your story. It is a very heart-wrenching tale. Thank you for sharing it with us!
Response from Lady Strange (Author of Beyond Time and Space)
thank you for reading and commenting.