Very nice. :)

lovely job! I very much enjoyed it. Poor Harry got more than he bargined for... - minuet99

I enjoyed this.  I especially liked Harry growing within the story--even though it was just a one-shot; that's a feat in itself. Oh, and the love-making scenes were nice and subtle, very appropriate for what you were aiming for (well, I thought so).

Loved it--you hit just the right pace and tone for Harry's thoughts. 

Oh I love it!  And Harry's reactions are just priceless!

Beautiful...
-k

Very sweet! It touched me especially since I just got engaged :D

Wonderful glimpse into a private moment.  Thank you for sharing.

Intriguing, thrilling, marvellous - and conflicting; you had me hooked after the first few paragraphs. It was somewhat creepy to have Harry watch this very private and intimate moment in Hermione’s and Severus’ life and to partake through his eyes. During the whole time I was afraid that Harry would reveal himself and destroy this wonderful, unique time between the two.

The contrast between Harry’s absurd perception and the deep feelings shown by the pair built up quite a tension – very well done. I was immensely relieved that he did not show himself. And I hope he’ll do a good job when Hermione’ll tell him about her fiancé – sometimes in the more or less far away future.

I could make a long winded review,but I don't think it needs it.In short,that was one of the best short stories i've ever read!

Absolutely lovely.  Strange what it takes a person to realize things sometimes.  And of course, many men need to be literally beaten over the head with the truth before they get it.  Your representation of it all is just beautiful.  Thank you so much for this wonderful story.

Wow...brilliant fic.HG and SS....and HP very much in canon (for a HG/SS romance)...really enjoyed this lovely vignette,well done!

Like so much of the confession Severus opened to Hermione and his love vow.   So empathetic for their romance.

cool you don't have to worrie about this story getting you in trouble here. like it would have on ff.net

ohhh that was just lovely!!! poor old Harry seeing Snapes pale naked arse LOl crack up.

I love how Harry re-evaluated himself after seeing the pair together that was beautiful! :) 

Brava!  Well done!  Good transition of Prat!Harry; not too fast, not too slow; just right.Now, go write some more yummy SS/HG!~Lotm

I liked this very much!  There's a lot which has gone unsaid about the early days of their relationship, but having Harry be the one to discover it was extremely clever.  I especially liked the fact that Harry had to admit that Snape loved Hermione without reservation. 

Another wonderful story. I'm so glad I have internet at this damn place, or I'd go even more crazy without your wonderful, gentle, romantic, loving Severus. Oh please, please, please, can he come visit me in the hospital? Even better, could you send him over to stay the night? ~The Mistress

And I here I was horribly afraid that they'd discover him there and everything would be ruined!? Well, he learned a few things.? Self-knowledge is a wonderful thing, isn't it?? Thanks for the happy ending; I'm a real sucker for them.

I did like it! Your story is original and very well written. Thanks for sharing!

This is great, doll. Nicely done. I especially like Harry in here. The process of thought that he goes through is very plausible. I also love the conversations between the lovers. Good work.

wonderful! how you managed to keep it unsquicky, i have no idea.

Ah! I love it! It's wonderfully written, and very original as well. Some Hermione/Snape stories have somewhat similar plots, but this one was unique. Great story.Thanks :o)Sue.

Very well written story. I like it very much. I can also see why it won first place!

i would have voted for it too...*seufz*

lg, nika