9:Potter's Tale
Chapter 9 of 18
Fawkes_07Harry adds some missing details to Snape?s findings.
ReviewedSnape frowned at the unseemly revision, glaring at Potter. "Regardless, she-who-is-called Pendragon is now the only living sorcerer to witness the Atra Fulminis. She may even be able to cast it. I feel somewhat relieved that she now owes me a life debt, but I fear the wisest course of action would be to let the curse take her. Who is she, Potter?"
The younger man's eyes flashed but he said nothing at first, opting to take his turn at staring into the fire and preparing his thoughts. Snape sampled a petits-four as he waited, raising a startled eyebrow at the first bite and quickly picking up another cakelet.
"She was an Auror before the accident," Potter began. "A damn good one, too. Smart, tough, tenacious... but she was more than that. You might as well know, I suppose, it really isn't a secret anymore."
"Your daughter?"
Potter's eyes flashed again. "No. But close. She was my godchild. You do know her parents, though: Ron and Hermione. They went to Hong Kong after the War, just to get a change of scenery. Ron was wounded pretty badly... Anyway, they both liked Asia, decided to move there for good, got married, Ron started coaching Quidditch, Hermione ended up deciphering a sort of Rosetta Stone that unlocked a rune-language that was thought to be lost... You're not even remotely interested, are you?"
"On the contrary, Potter. I'm just savoring yet another irony, that Miss Gran--pardon me, Mrs. Weasley--revealed the code that I needed to break in my quest for the Atra Fulminis. I should have guessed. Perhaps if I'd been friendlier with the silly cow she would have translated that stone for me while I had it at Hogwarts."
Potter turned a bit green around the edges.
"The written language was stolen from the Inca by Spanish conquistadors," Snape continued, "and it ended up being traded along the Silk Roads. By Muggles, of course; they regarded it as a mere novelty, just another plundered Aztec calendar. It was eventually bequeathed to a temple where, over the following centuries, its origins were forgotten and it became "sacred." Voldemort's signet ring led him to it, undoubtedly trying to help him uncover the Caerula. I'd imagine that the authorities were more than a bit surprised when the tablet turned up in the dungeons of Hogwarts."
"That was why Hermione picked Hong Kong in the first place," said Potter bitterly, "because of all the news articles regarding the 'stolen cultural artifact.' There was a big controversy about whether it belonged in its temple, or a museum, or back in South America. She just thought the pictures of Asia were so beautiful." Potter ran his hands through his hair, a familiar gesture that brought Snape a brief rush of memories of a more youthful time. "She took an interest in the tablet itself after they got settled in. It took years to decipher the thing, because the Wizard Incan was superimposed on the Muggle Incan in a complex way, through palindromes and Spoonerisms and what not--"
"I'm familiar with it, Potter," Snape interrupted, though without malice.
Potter gawked at him for a moment, then nodded. "I suppose you are. Well. She and Ron both slaved over some of the puzzles, and there had been damage to the engravings over time, but you know how Hermione is. When she finally broke it all open, you'd have thought she'd found a new Elixir of Life. She was the hottest topic on the lecture circuit for decades.
"I was so happy when their daughter was born! I even moved to Hong Kong for a while just to get to know her. She came to Hogwarts for one term and I blew two years' salary on her. She got Ron's sense of adventure and Hermione's brains. It was as much fun as having both of them around, without all the bickering. Perfect."
Potter noticed that Snape was peering down his nose at his reminiscences and sighed. "Yeah, well, long story short: She became an auror. Someone stole the tablet Hermione had worked on for so long. She demanded to take the case and went to South America. She reckoned the thief wanted to translate something in Wizard Incan, so she just went and searched through every single ruin, setting up wards to sound the alarm if the tablet passed them, all that sort of thing. Good, systematic detective work. And then she turned up at Machu Picchu."
Potter pinched the top of his nose as though his head suddenly ached. "She'd lost more than her arm. Her name was gone. None of us can remember it, least of all her--and every single place it had been written down went blank. Most of her memory was gone. She had no idea who I was, or Ron, but she at least recognized Hermione as a familiar face. The only person in her family that she could actually identify was her Uncle Charlie. He was the one that named her Pendragon. Nothing else would stick--we tried to agree on things to call her and an hour later no one could remember. But Charlie managed it.
"Sometimes at night, people can't see her. It's the same as her name--you know she's there, but she's just somehow beyond your perception. And her magic changed. She can't Apparate, can't Transfigure, can't make Potions. She can still belt out Charms like there's no tomorrow, and you do NOT want to be on the receiving end of one of her hexes."
"But the only thing that's exactly the same is her love of music. She was a virtuoso at the piano, Severus; it was so beautiful to hear her play, it was almost unbearable. But now, with only one arm... I can't believe that's a coincidence. That curse deliberately preserved her talent, just to torture her with the fact that she can no longer play."
"She does play, Potter. I heard her last week."
"She tries. She holds her wand in her teeth and spells the keys to play. I think it still sounds wonderful, but she can tell the difference. She gets so angry, but I try to encourage her. If the curse wants her to give up music in despair, then she should do the opposite."
Snape nodded. "I agree. I suspect it will not leave her except by its own will. She should make herself as inhospitable to it as she can."
Potter rolled his eyes. "Yeah, we reckoned as much. The trick is figuring out how to do that, exactly. At first it seemed to weaken when she cast jinxes and curses--almost as though it was draining out of her along with the other 'negative' magic. I used to let her curse me when her scars got really bad, and that would make them go dormant for a few months. But I finally had to accept that it just wasn't working the way I thought. Her curses kept getting stronger and stronger--she can put me under the Imperius, and not even Voldemort could do that! And her Cruciatus... It got to a point where I couldn't bear it, not even for a few seconds. We gave it up, and for a while her scars really punished her, but they eventually settled into a sort of steady background. Then they came back with a vengeance this fall. It's like all her resistance failed at once."
Snape felt a bit like an iron spring had been coiled within his rib cage and suddenly released. He had to wait a moment before he could speak, to be certain his voice would not waver.
"I would like to try to help her, Potter, for reasons of my own. I have already brewed some potions, and after tonight's... insights, I have a few more experiments to carry out. She has told me she will accept nothing from me, and I can appreciate her distrust. If you believe me, Potter, perhaps you can persuade her to take her medicine."
Potter's brows furrowed briefly. "I don't think so. Even without her older memories, she knows I'm no Potions Master." Both men grinned wryly. "It'll be a lot easier for you to convince her of your intentions than for me to do it 'once removed.' She knows you helped her tonight. Just talk to her, Severus." Potter's eyes narrowed in challenge. "She's bitter, but she's no Dark Lord, you know. She won't hurt you."
The spring in Snape's chest went off again with even more force.
"I am no kindly uncle, nor gentleman godfather, Potter," he muttered quietly. "It is not my own pain that concerns me."
Story Actions
To follow, favorite, like, and more either log in or create an account.
Leave a Review
Log in to leave a review.
Latest 25 Reviews for Private Lessons
93 Reviews | 7.99/10 Average
I love this fic! I hope it's not abandoned.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
No, it's just on the back burner with many other things.
Response from darkavatar (Reviewer)
yay! good to hear it's still on a burner somewhere.
Here I sit on my toadstool waiting and waiting to be fed just a few bites of this story. (let's pretend this is a toadstool,shall we?)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
awww... I will get to it eventually, I promise.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
awww... I will get to it eventually, I promise.
More please.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
I think I know how this one will end, at last--so this'll probably be my next endeavor once I wrap up Heirs.
ahh, a lovely Harry-free chapter!! (sits back to listen to music) my cousin was a piano teacher for years, and then had a stroke and could only use one hand. but she plays beautifully - music for one-hand, of course. I'm hoping Pen realizes the beauty of the music, especially if/when she discovers that Severus is paying for it himself on his teensy salary, making this a very valuable gift. thanks for updating! (more, please?)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
I have a few chapters left which I hope to write and post as soon as I can...sadly, I am She Of Too Many Unfinished Fics.
excellent to find an update of this great story.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Thanks! It only has a couple more chapters to go, but I don't know when I can get to it again. But I will, promise.
Response from Bettina (Reviewer)
Hi, please rememer us poor sods who're waiting for an update of this great story!
I am so glad you updated. Just in time for my birthday again. But please don't feel you need to wait a year again. Seriously, I am really glad this has not been abandoned. This is one of my favorite stories. I love the way you have created both characters and the situation you have created. It feels so real and plausible. I look forward to reading the rest.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Thanks! Happy B-day! I know, I'm behind on all my updates--RL has a way of interfering with my fanfics.
Glad to see an update! Hope we don't have to wait so long for the next! Greedy bunch of readers, aren't we? Thanks for your work!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
LOL, well, it's nice to be wanted.
Oh, I'm so glad you updated, I have been waiting for this one!
I'm glad he managed to calm her about the music, it will be wonderful for her to get back into doing it properly.
Thank you for updating, and please don't leave it so long next time!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Thanks--trying. Lots of stuff to write.
FINALLY!!!!!!! I had almost given up hope...
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
I always finish things. Eventually...
I've thoroughly enjoyed reading all 18 chapters. I can understand the medthod he uses to calm her, My god son's middle child, a boy, has the Asperger's Syndrome form of autism and his parents use the same methods with him. He couldn't stand to have people around or the sound of their voices and and got very upset if anyone tried to touch him. When anyone came to see the family he went into a shell and totally ignored everything.
He has shown quite a bit of improvement in the last few years. His great grandmother told me that last year he actually kissed her when she came to visit and kissed her goodbye when she left. When I saw her during the holidays she told me that it's become routine now for him to do that when she visits.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
good for him! They do grow out of it to some extent, but it can take a very long time. Have to believe in a little dragon magic, I guess.
I should have reviewed when i started reading this about 11 PM, but I got so enthralled I couldn't stop until now. It's just about 4 AM and i should go to bed, but I will have to finish all the chapters you have posted first.
Leon Fleisher must have been your inspiration for this story, or at least this chapter. When he lost the use of his right hand at the peak of his career it was thought to be a tragedy, but he had the fortitude to forge on ahead and have a great career performing music written for the left handed repertoire. The miracle that resrored his right hand had to be some kind of Muggle magic. I live in Maryland and studied voice at Peabody Prep many years ago, so i am familiar with Fleisher and very pleased that he can once again play with both hands.
I am, or more accurately, was, a dramatic soprano and I used to sing the Bach Ave Maria until I lost my control of the top notes as i grew older. It's been nearly 10 years since I done any singing. I could probably sing the mezzo repertoire with no problem if i got back with my voice teacher, but she was 15 years older than me and no longer teaching. I don't want to have to start with someone new and have to learn new methods and techniques as they familiarize themselves with my voice. That would take too long and now that I'm older there are too many other things I put aside when i was younger that I want to see and do now before it's too late.
I'm still listening to the recording of the Third Movement of the Moonlight Sonata. I'm going back to the story now with that as accompanment to my reading. Thanks for the links to the recordings, it add so much to the story.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Wow! What a wonderful review! Thanks! My gosh, I don't know whether to natter a bit about not giving up on your voice, or to congratulate you on doing new things! I'm a bit of a "move on to the new" sort myself, so I guess have to stick with the latter.
Find the Glenn Gould version of Moonlight if you can. That's what I really had in mind for Pen to be playing. I don't think I found a link for that (or did I?).
Hey, thanks for updating. I was worried it was abandoned, but so happy it's not. I like the story very much.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Nope, just busy with other stuff.
That was really touching. Excellent chapter, but I can't help noticing that it isn't Heirs. I thought you were leaving your other WIPs until Heirs was finsihed. Not that I mind, I was just wondering if Fair Exchanges was getting an update soo too, cause that would just be fabulous!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
I needed a break from Heirs today. 43 is a tough chapter. I might try to update Fair ex too, although that is a very research-oriented fic for me, trying to keep it in Canon. We'll see.
Response from helshez (Reviewer)
Well, whatever you can give us, I'm grateful for. It's always a pleasure to read one of your fics, whichever one it is.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
awwwwwww... *blush*
Seriously, though--one of my RL acquaintances just told me to go back to my hobbit hole and get a life, so it's really nice to hear that this silly stuff I do is appreciated.
Response from helshez (Reviewer)
For what it's worth, your talent is definately appreciated by me (and probably by others, but I can't speak for them) and I think it would be a damn shame if you packed it in. <3
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
I needed a break from Heirs today. 43 is a tough chapter. I might try to update Fair ex too, although that is a very research-oriented fic for me, trying to keep it in Canon. We'll see.
Response from helshez (Reviewer)
Well, whatever you can give us, I'm grateful for. It's always a pleasure to read one of your fics, whichever one it is.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
awwwwwww... *blush*
Seriously, though--one of my RL acquaintances just told me to go back to my hobbit hole and get a life, so it's really nice to hear that this silly stuff I do is appreciated.
Response from helshez (Reviewer)
For what it's worth, your talent is definately appreciated by me (and probably by others, but I can't speak for them) and I think it would be a damn shame if you packed it in. <3
It's been so long I was afraid you've dropped this fic. I'm glad you haven't cause I really love it. Can I hope for more in a close future?
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Thanks! Probably not soon, but it's only a few chapters away from being finished.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Thanks! Probably not soon, but it's only a few chapters away from being finished.
Get on with it...PLEASE!!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Argh, I know... just a little more patience. I've got the next chapter going in my head, just need to flesh it out and write it down...
Response from Bindi (Reviewer)
There had better be pletty of lemons ahead to make up for this.
Response from Bindi (Reviewer)
Put me out of my misery...please.Pretty,pretty please.
WHAT... it isn't going further than that?
A great story, splendidly written.
Snape can indeed develop that way in 50 years Azkaban. Nice ideas of all and sundry books appearing and he actually using them to enormous benefit. So like him. To send prisoners off with nothing at all fits to the medieval style of JKR's wizarding world in general.
Those lightnings are a unique thing, and even if you need to describe a terrible outcome, you do it very well and without voyeurism at all. Do you have personal knowledge on (Muggle)autism?
The idea that Snape was to die but did not, might be a little far from HBP, and I admit that I didn't try hard to understand all. It is not too far fetched to let it pass--and it is certainly your unique approach.
Will we see some pupils eventually? We're at a school after all.
Besides my curiosity over Harry's and old-Snape's style, it might be good to see Pendragon teach.
Please go on writing, and let Harry develop a little more. He still needs it--which is also no surprise.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Thanks! What a nice review! I hope to work some more on this story when I finish Heirs of Slytherin--it'll be good to get back to it.
Please hurry with the rest, I love this story!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Gotta finish some other stuff first...
ahem... any chance of an update soon?
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Siiiiiigh...I have all the ideas worked out, I just have been so busy on Fair Ex and Heirs! It WILL end, and I think the ending will be worth it, but I have to run with whatever muse is working best at the moment!
Get busy! I'm starving to death here.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Sorry! My muse has been feeding me Heirs of Slytherin lately--you can go read that, it'll tide you over a while...!
More please. I'm in withdrawal. I really want to read what happens next.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Argh, I know. I want to finish it--there's just so much to write!
Ah! Well done, again. I'm glad Snape is finally warm at least. (I need music for fat people - I'm serious - the fat seems to impair my dexterity - I've heard that PDQ Bach wrote some, hahaha)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Hmmm...vigorous piano playing as a form of aerobic exercise? Now there's an idea that needs marketing! Any kind of exercise I can do sitting down at a keyboard would make me happy... ;)
It's interesting having a hungry, freezing, poverty-stricken Snape - and good job showing the story, not just telling it.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Thanks! That's certainly something I strive for, never quite sure how well it's working.
Oh Dear...I don't think anyone was expecting that! What a fasinating story line this is...thank you
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
*snerk* A few people had asked about romance, but it was generally between Harry and Pen (or Harry and Snape ). There's still a twist or two left in the story, though...
Hmmm .... interesting development. Although, it isn't un-anticipated, but it still suprising when you really write it down. So, I will wait again, just like last week, with a more and more curiosity what our beloved Harry reaction to this and to what path you drive this story ends (darn you Fawkes, you really know how to make your reader feels edgy). While the nice compliment of "where .... leads, million readers will follow" is written to address another particular legal thriller novel writer by a certain reviewer, I certainly do not have any objection if you fill the blank with the title of this fanfic or your name and replace the word "million readers" with my name.Keep the good work, Mate.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Awwwwwwwwwww...*blush* What a sweet compliment! Thanks!