5: Discovery
Chapter 5 of 18
Fawkes_07Research and investigation pay off on several fronts.
ReviewedBy the last day of the fall term at Hogwarts, Snape had read every credible article about the Atra Fulminis curse. There weren't many, and it took him considerable time to locate them. Pendragon had been in Peru when she was struck down twelve years ago, and the story was kept largely under wraps by more than one news agency.
Severus Snape, however, was nothing if not meticulous, and he had uncovered the pieces slowly. She was a citizen of Hong Kong, an Auror of some kind, in pursuit of a stolen artifact. She had trailed the unknown offender to the opposite side of the world and cornered him in the Andes mountains. By that time, he had found the keystone to the Atra curse within some Incan ruins and was eager to test it out. A bit too eager, as the act of casting it made him explode into many, many small pieces, most of which were recovered by the Peruvian magical authorities.
Apparently the act of disintegrating threw off his aim, and the curse barely grazed her right shoulder. It melted a tunnel into the mountain behind her that extended some thirty meters deep and left behind no trace of her arm. She was lucky, however, because either the heat of the curse or the vestiges of it that sunk into her flesh somehow cauterized the wound. She not only survived the amputation of her arm, but was able to stumble her way down the mountain to the Urubamba River, where she flagged down a boat full of Wizard tourists heading to Machu Picchu.
Both the Peruvian and Hong Kong governments were hardly eager to release details of either the criminal or the Atra curse, and in fact most of the information on the incident had been penned by the tourists. The last of their personal accounts had arrived by owl that morning, and had added very little to the picture.
But Snape was not seeking the name of the culprit, nor the secrets of constructing the curse. He already had that information. He knew it must be Peter Pettigrew, since Snape himself was in Azkaban when his research with Wormtail was finally completed, and only that imbecile would take forty years to solve the puzzle.
Snape smiled bitterly. Abandoning the research on Black Lightning had been part of Albus's plan. Dumbledore obviously did not predict that Wormtail would actually manage to work out the rest of the spell on his own, nor have the requisite power to cast it.
Snape was cleaning his laboratory for the last time that term when he knocked a knife from the granite countertop. Foolishly, he tried to catch it and closed his hand on the blade. He was unable to Heal the laceration himself as it was on his wand hand, so he had to visit the Hospital Wing. He had not ascended above the main floor since his interview with McGonagall, but, unable to even wrap a decent bandage left-handed, he had little choice in the matter.
The infirmary was empty, and the ligation spells took only a few moments before Snape was on his way back to the dungeons. As he passed the Charms classroom, however, he heard something both unusual and beautiful. Music of some sort, something he was certain he had heard a very long time ago. Furrowing his brow with curiosity, Snape stepped into the empty classroom to investigate.
He knew of the hidden staircase at the back of the room, having served several detentions in the Charms professor's office back in his own school days. As he climbed the narrow stairs, the music grew louder. The door at the upper landing was closed, however, and though he longed to open it, he dared not disrupt the flow of the music.
The memory poured through him all of a sudden. The house in which he grew up shared a wall with a church--his bedroom wall, in fact. He had heard this melody many times. It was impossibly high for his vocal range, not that he wanted to hear himself sing, but the compulsion to accompany the solo piano was too strong. Closing his eyes, he let only a hint of breath through his throat, barely making enough sound to carry to his own ears.
Ave Maria gratia plenaSnape had loved to listen to the Muggle music through the wall of his room, and he recognized the language of magic in the lyrics. For years he had suspected there were spells woven through the music, but he'd never been able to uncover one that he could recognize.Dominus tecum benedicta tu
The music came to an abrupt and discordant halt, which was followed by a bit of vehement swearing, then the piece began anew. It was being performed live on a real Muggle piano, as far as he could tell. Snape rested his forehead against the door, mouthing the words and feeling the basso vibrate the wood. This time the pianist completed the piece, but apparantly was still not satisfied. Snape jumped back as a loud clunk and the scraping of a chair on the stone floor hinted that the recital had ended.
He should have bolted down the stairs immediately, but he was still a bit overcome by the intensity of his reverie. He stood there, undoubtedly gaping like a cow in a pasture, when the door flew open to reveal Professor Pendragon. She leapt backwards and had her wand in hand before Snape had grasped the handle of his own wand in his pocket.
"What are you doing here?" she spat, pressing the tip of it into the hollow of his throat.
"I heard... something." He hated being caught off guard, and he hated saying foolish things even more, but there was nothing for it. Sentimentality had foiled him once again.
She pulled her wand back a hand's breadth, but her eyes burned into him angrily. "And what's that supposed to mean?"
What do you mean, 'what does that mean?' "It means nothing. I heard music and I... was curious." He berated himself internally for the weakness in his voice, but perhaps it was all for the best, as she seemed to accept that he meant no harm. She scrutinized him a moment longer, then lowered her wand.
"The music's over," she said coldly. "Now get away from my door."
Snape was not one to give in to such demands, but he took a step back before he even realized what he was doing. "But..."
"But what?" Her impatience drove the words through him like a nail, and yet he couldn't think of anything to say.
Mother of Merlin, you're making a fool of yourself! "I wanted to inquire... that is, your scars. Are they painful?" Snape would have gladly ripped his own tongue from its moorings to take back the entire conversation. He could normally improvise very well, but the circumstances had apparently drained his intellect.
She studied him warily, raising her wand again. "Constantly."
"Perhaps there is something I can brew that would help you."
"I would drink nothing offered from your hand, Snape. Get out of my way."
As he watched, blue threads spread over her skin like a drop of heavy tincture through water, widening and branching with alarming speed to her forehead and her left collarbone. A tendril appeared on the left side of her throat, and Snape realized with a sickening lurch in his abdomen that it had come from behind her neck, wrapping around her like a vine. "Very good, Professor," he said, and darted down the stairs, not caring that he looked and acted like a terrified child, for that was precisely how he felt.
He charged down the marble stairs to the first floor and burst into Potter's classroom. The first-years were having their last lesson of the term, but Snape ignored them completely, bellowing to Potter as though the room were empty.
"You must look in on Professor Pendragon. She is... worse today."
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Latest 25 Reviews for Private Lessons
93 Reviews | 7.99/10 Average
I love this fic! I hope it's not abandoned.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
No, it's just on the back burner with many other things.
Response from darkavatar (Reviewer)
yay! good to hear it's still on a burner somewhere.
Here I sit on my toadstool waiting and waiting to be fed just a few bites of this story. (let's pretend this is a toadstool,shall we?)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
awww... I will get to it eventually, I promise.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
awww... I will get to it eventually, I promise.
More please.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
I think I know how this one will end, at last--so this'll probably be my next endeavor once I wrap up Heirs.
ahh, a lovely Harry-free chapter!! (sits back to listen to music) my cousin was a piano teacher for years, and then had a stroke and could only use one hand. but she plays beautifully - music for one-hand, of course. I'm hoping Pen realizes the beauty of the music, especially if/when she discovers that Severus is paying for it himself on his teensy salary, making this a very valuable gift. thanks for updating! (more, please?)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
I have a few chapters left which I hope to write and post as soon as I can...sadly, I am She Of Too Many Unfinished Fics.
excellent to find an update of this great story.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Thanks! It only has a couple more chapters to go, but I don't know when I can get to it again. But I will, promise.
Response from Bettina (Reviewer)
Hi, please rememer us poor sods who're waiting for an update of this great story!
I am so glad you updated. Just in time for my birthday again. But please don't feel you need to wait a year again. Seriously, I am really glad this has not been abandoned. This is one of my favorite stories. I love the way you have created both characters and the situation you have created. It feels so real and plausible. I look forward to reading the rest.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Thanks! Happy B-day! I know, I'm behind on all my updates--RL has a way of interfering with my fanfics.
Glad to see an update! Hope we don't have to wait so long for the next! Greedy bunch of readers, aren't we? Thanks for your work!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
LOL, well, it's nice to be wanted.
Oh, I'm so glad you updated, I have been waiting for this one!
I'm glad he managed to calm her about the music, it will be wonderful for her to get back into doing it properly.
Thank you for updating, and please don't leave it so long next time!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Thanks--trying. Lots of stuff to write.
FINALLY!!!!!!! I had almost given up hope...
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
I always finish things. Eventually...
I've thoroughly enjoyed reading all 18 chapters. I can understand the medthod he uses to calm her, My god son's middle child, a boy, has the Asperger's Syndrome form of autism and his parents use the same methods with him. He couldn't stand to have people around or the sound of their voices and and got very upset if anyone tried to touch him. When anyone came to see the family he went into a shell and totally ignored everything.
He has shown quite a bit of improvement in the last few years. His great grandmother told me that last year he actually kissed her when she came to visit and kissed her goodbye when she left. When I saw her during the holidays she told me that it's become routine now for him to do that when she visits.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
good for him! They do grow out of it to some extent, but it can take a very long time. Have to believe in a little dragon magic, I guess.
I should have reviewed when i started reading this about 11 PM, but I got so enthralled I couldn't stop until now. It's just about 4 AM and i should go to bed, but I will have to finish all the chapters you have posted first.
Leon Fleisher must have been your inspiration for this story, or at least this chapter. When he lost the use of his right hand at the peak of his career it was thought to be a tragedy, but he had the fortitude to forge on ahead and have a great career performing music written for the left handed repertoire. The miracle that resrored his right hand had to be some kind of Muggle magic. I live in Maryland and studied voice at Peabody Prep many years ago, so i am familiar with Fleisher and very pleased that he can once again play with both hands.
I am, or more accurately, was, a dramatic soprano and I used to sing the Bach Ave Maria until I lost my control of the top notes as i grew older. It's been nearly 10 years since I done any singing. I could probably sing the mezzo repertoire with no problem if i got back with my voice teacher, but she was 15 years older than me and no longer teaching. I don't want to have to start with someone new and have to learn new methods and techniques as they familiarize themselves with my voice. That would take too long and now that I'm older there are too many other things I put aside when i was younger that I want to see and do now before it's too late.
I'm still listening to the recording of the Third Movement of the Moonlight Sonata. I'm going back to the story now with that as accompanment to my reading. Thanks for the links to the recordings, it add so much to the story.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Wow! What a wonderful review! Thanks! My gosh, I don't know whether to natter a bit about not giving up on your voice, or to congratulate you on doing new things! I'm a bit of a "move on to the new" sort myself, so I guess have to stick with the latter.
Find the Glenn Gould version of Moonlight if you can. That's what I really had in mind for Pen to be playing. I don't think I found a link for that (or did I?).
Hey, thanks for updating. I was worried it was abandoned, but so happy it's not. I like the story very much.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Nope, just busy with other stuff.
That was really touching. Excellent chapter, but I can't help noticing that it isn't Heirs. I thought you were leaving your other WIPs until Heirs was finsihed. Not that I mind, I was just wondering if Fair Exchanges was getting an update soo too, cause that would just be fabulous!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
I needed a break from Heirs today. 43 is a tough chapter. I might try to update Fair ex too, although that is a very research-oriented fic for me, trying to keep it in Canon. We'll see.
Response from helshez (Reviewer)
Well, whatever you can give us, I'm grateful for. It's always a pleasure to read one of your fics, whichever one it is.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
awwwwwww... *blush*
Seriously, though--one of my RL acquaintances just told me to go back to my hobbit hole and get a life, so it's really nice to hear that this silly stuff I do is appreciated.
Response from helshez (Reviewer)
For what it's worth, your talent is definately appreciated by me (and probably by others, but I can't speak for them) and I think it would be a damn shame if you packed it in. <3
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
I needed a break from Heirs today. 43 is a tough chapter. I might try to update Fair ex too, although that is a very research-oriented fic for me, trying to keep it in Canon. We'll see.
Response from helshez (Reviewer)
Well, whatever you can give us, I'm grateful for. It's always a pleasure to read one of your fics, whichever one it is.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
awwwwwww... *blush*
Seriously, though--one of my RL acquaintances just told me to go back to my hobbit hole and get a life, so it's really nice to hear that this silly stuff I do is appreciated.
Response from helshez (Reviewer)
For what it's worth, your talent is definately appreciated by me (and probably by others, but I can't speak for them) and I think it would be a damn shame if you packed it in. <3
It's been so long I was afraid you've dropped this fic. I'm glad you haven't cause I really love it. Can I hope for more in a close future?
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Thanks! Probably not soon, but it's only a few chapters away from being finished.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Thanks! Probably not soon, but it's only a few chapters away from being finished.
Get on with it...PLEASE!!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Argh, I know... just a little more patience. I've got the next chapter going in my head, just need to flesh it out and write it down...
Response from Bindi (Reviewer)
There had better be pletty of lemons ahead to make up for this.
Response from Bindi (Reviewer)
Put me out of my misery...please.Pretty,pretty please.
WHAT... it isn't going further than that?
A great story, splendidly written.
Snape can indeed develop that way in 50 years Azkaban. Nice ideas of all and sundry books appearing and he actually using them to enormous benefit. So like him. To send prisoners off with nothing at all fits to the medieval style of JKR's wizarding world in general.
Those lightnings are a unique thing, and even if you need to describe a terrible outcome, you do it very well and without voyeurism at all. Do you have personal knowledge on (Muggle)autism?
The idea that Snape was to die but did not, might be a little far from HBP, and I admit that I didn't try hard to understand all. It is not too far fetched to let it pass--and it is certainly your unique approach.
Will we see some pupils eventually? We're at a school after all.
Besides my curiosity over Harry's and old-Snape's style, it might be good to see Pendragon teach.
Please go on writing, and let Harry develop a little more. He still needs it--which is also no surprise.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Thanks! What a nice review! I hope to work some more on this story when I finish Heirs of Slytherin--it'll be good to get back to it.
Please hurry with the rest, I love this story!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Gotta finish some other stuff first...
ahem... any chance of an update soon?
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Siiiiiigh...I have all the ideas worked out, I just have been so busy on Fair Ex and Heirs! It WILL end, and I think the ending will be worth it, but I have to run with whatever muse is working best at the moment!
Get busy! I'm starving to death here.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Sorry! My muse has been feeding me Heirs of Slytherin lately--you can go read that, it'll tide you over a while...!
More please. I'm in withdrawal. I really want to read what happens next.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Argh, I know. I want to finish it--there's just so much to write!
Ah! Well done, again. I'm glad Snape is finally warm at least. (I need music for fat people - I'm serious - the fat seems to impair my dexterity - I've heard that PDQ Bach wrote some, hahaha)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Hmmm...vigorous piano playing as a form of aerobic exercise? Now there's an idea that needs marketing! Any kind of exercise I can do sitting down at a keyboard would make me happy... ;)
It's interesting having a hungry, freezing, poverty-stricken Snape - and good job showing the story, not just telling it.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Thanks! That's certainly something I strive for, never quite sure how well it's working.
Oh Dear...I don't think anyone was expecting that! What a fasinating story line this is...thank you
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
*snerk* A few people had asked about romance, but it was generally between Harry and Pen (or Harry and Snape ). There's still a twist or two left in the story, though...
Hmmm .... interesting development. Although, it isn't un-anticipated, but it still suprising when you really write it down. So, I will wait again, just like last week, with a more and more curiosity what our beloved Harry reaction to this and to what path you drive this story ends (darn you Fawkes, you really know how to make your reader feels edgy). While the nice compliment of "where .... leads, million readers will follow" is written to address another particular legal thriller novel writer by a certain reviewer, I certainly do not have any objection if you fill the blank with the title of this fanfic or your name and replace the word "million readers" with my name.Keep the good work, Mate.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Private Lessons)
Awwwwwwwwwww...*blush* What a sweet compliment! Thanks!