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You Could Be Mine
Southern_Witch_6939 Reviews | 5.79/10 (39 Ratings, 0 Likes, 53 Favorites )
Severus and Hermione have finished a potion that will enable trips into the future. Snape tests it. What does he see? Add a little Lucius Malfoy into the mix, and things get interesting. This was written for Shiv5468 in hopes of temporarily sating her need for SS/HG/LM.
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I adore the world of HP.
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Reviews for You Could Be Mine
I love a possessing Severus!
You always seem to capture Severus' voice so perfectly perfect. My fave is when he is sexy-snarky, which you do the best, IMHO.~thanks for all your stellar work~
Lovely story. I liked how Severus smirked and then wrote back to Lucius to say he would be busy..though the scene with Severus/Lucius/and Hermione was brilliant. It's wonderful to read your stories again.
Oh, very nice. Such a lovely turn of events and very Slytherin of Severus to shut Lucius out after what he saw.
I really liked this, Sun! Threesomes are fun and all, but I love it when Severus gets all possesive and wants Hermione all for himself. In this story I get both the sharing and the not-sharing! Brilliant! :)
Very nice, I love the fact that Snape did not want to share Hermione with Lucius.
What a great story. Obvious Hermione and Clueless Severus usually make for great writing
That one was great... and I really like the ending the way it is. Threesomes can be hot, but I'm always thinking in the back of my mind that real life just doesn't work that way, outside of the bed. :O) And I'm not a sharer.
I liked this a lot. The end especially. Severus doesn't strike me as one who would share--willingly.
Oh, that was HOT! I could see his snarky self replying that way too! teehee! Loved it!
Oh I do enjoy a Possessive Severus! :D
a time traveller -story. always big fun.
Severus was washed away just to the perfect spot of his near future. jsut the kick in the ass he needed to get ahead with his girl.
I found it clever, to let him decide to gently manipulate the future by sending a different letter.
sometimes it IS nice to know how things might end, and if I don't like it, easily change it.
ahh, where was that potion agian?
or the laboratory?...
I do happen to like that triple pairing. :) Very nice, SW. As always.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of You Could Be Mine)
Thank you!
Good job, I found it enjoyable, and... entertaining. Here Here, my fellow writer, and good luck with what creations may be posted in the future.