New Chapter for You Could Be Mine
You Could Be Mine
Southern_Witch_6939 Reviews | 5.79/10 (39 Ratings, 0 Likes, 53 Favorites )
Severus and Hermione have finished a potion that will enable trips into the future. Snape tests it. What does he see? Add a little Lucius Malfoy into the mix, and things get interesting. This was written for Shiv5468 in hopes of temporarily sating her need for SS/HG/LM.
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I adore the world of HP.
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Reviews for You Could Be Mine
Glad Severus got his hearts desire, although he had to go to the future to realise what he really wanted. Poor Lucius lol
Thanks have read this before so leaving a review this time around.
Holy threesome!action, Batman! *fans self*
Hee! Trust Severus to make full use of his foreknowledge. I really can't say I blame him for turning Lucius down.
Here-via-rec-from-madeleone-at-one_bad_man.And-why-the-frilly-heck-has-my-space-bar-suddenly-stopped-working?
Oh, I saw this mentioned on Potter_Place and can to see. I'm glad I did. I'm sure I read it before, but even for a second time around it was most enjoyable. Hugs, doll.bea~
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of You Could Be Mine)
Cool! Glad to hear it, mate. xooxox
Poor Luci, left out in the cold. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of You Could Be Mine)
Mmhmm. Haha :) I wonder if Karelia can find a way to warm him up. LOL
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
Now, why should she have all the fun?
Loved it - It was great how back in time he got all possessive and denied Lucius from coming to stay with him - great little story with an interesting plot.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of You Could Be Mine)
Thanks! Uh-huh, he didn't want to share~ hehe
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of You Could Be Mine)
Thanks! Uh-huh, he didn't want to share~ hehe
AWWWW! Caveman Severus is yum! >.<
While this story was smutty in it's own way, the actual plot was impressive. It is hard to develop a plot and the characters to the length you did in a short story, but I was impressed nonetheless. Wonderful!
Well done as usual my dear. I liked how you wrapped it all up and addressed all the loose ends. I never pictured Snape as one who would share.
I love it! And, I especially love the ending that Severus is not ready to share her! BRILLIANT!!!
OOOOh just delicious!!! I actually like the amount of detail you made it. Not so "graphically detailed" (nice way of putting it, might I add) but definitely detailed enough. Everyone is true to character and just so lovingly taken care of. Fantastic job - but then, we've all come to expect nothing less from you.
Loved it Southern... Especially the end. Bravo! Love, Sonia
Ooh, smart Severus!!!! Lucky Hermione! And clever SW, for the twist...
(PS - if I had Severus to myself, I wouldn't share either!)
I'm not shiv, but I really liked it.What a great way to spend a morning one should be working...Thanks!
Awww! I liked this!
My favorite bit was when he came back and saw his own interaction with Hermione from an outside pov and how it put things in perspective for him. That was a really nice touch.
I also liked, as much as I like Lucius/Hermione, that he chose not to share her with him. I don't know... I guess if he had been willing to do that after only being with her for such a short time it would sort of seem like she was only a temporary thing and that it didn't really matter, if you know what I mean. Now that he chose not to share her, it seems much more like he's hoping to share the rest of his life with her. I liked that.
Beautifully done. Classic "Show Don't Tell". And delicious to boot!
Ah! That was simply lovely! It's a seriously feel-good one-shot!
I like the tension where both of them desire each other but are too restrained to push forward. Very much like the academics, thinking too much.
You do write nice porn, eg Dances, I could do with some more.
I am also glad he didn't choose to share. I'm not a HG/LM fan usually, but if that's what it takes to get HG/SS together, so be it. Great work as always, SW, love it!
Ah, very nice. Definitely a bit shocking for Severus to just suddenly come upon that. Poor guy. :)
I'm amused that he didn't want to share her yet. Very cute.
Oooh, you can't cheat the inexorable workings of fate like that. They are ZOMG meant to be, and you know it. ;-)
Snerfle.
Hot and sweet. I'm so glad he came to his senses and made himself act upon his desires.
I loved this! My favourite 3some. I especially liked how Severus gets her in the end.
Lovely *sighs*. I quite like that he chose not to "share" her. He never really striked me as a man who would willingly share what he considered to be his. Having said that I can certainly see what Hermione is missing out on - hopefully she will never know!!!
Lovely *sighs*. I quite like that he chose not to "share" her. He never really striked me as a man who would willingly share what he considered to be his. Having said that I can certainly see what Hermione is missing out on - hopefully she will never know!!!